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Real name: Nilah Status: Member Member Since: 04/01/07 Website: Beta-reader: 42 year old living in Trinidad (that's in the Caribbean). Love reading. Do some dabbling at writing and can't get enough of Dean and SUPERNATURAL. Reviews by Nilah Summary: Kazcon Auction story for Nana56, hope you like it. Multi-chapter. Rising floodwaters trap Sam and an injured (of course) Dean in a house with a kindly woman keeping watch for her long lost son. If you're familiar with my stuff you know what to expect. If you're not, welcome to the world thru my eyes.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 35658 [Report This] Published: 31/10/07 Updated: 01/05/08
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
This just goes to show how awful I am with reviews. I reviewed CHP 6 and then remembered that i had jotted something down for 5 (I hope). Forgive me if it is the wrong chapter. That seizure scene was well done. You had my body all tensed up, muscles bunching in places I didn’t even know existed until it thankfully ended, for Dean that is. Woman, if it’s not one cliffhanger, it’s a next. I’m old and I am not sure that my heart can take it. Really loving this story!
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Date: 29/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sharper Than A Serpent Are you kidding? That was a great way to end the chapter. And what could be better than waiting for Bobby to arrive to save the day? Really enjoying the story. Summary:
Sequel to 'Bearer of all light'
The book is buried, and the brothers are on the road again. But nothing is ever simple for the Winchesters. With Dean's ever increasingly strange behaviour and Bobby's news of a new and very human threat, Sam must strive to save his brother from more than just the supernatural. Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sanctified Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 39189 [Report This] Published: 05/11/07 Updated: 29/01/08
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Date: 30/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - It begins WOW! This is shaping up to be even better than Bearer. Love that title. Think it’s apropos regards Dean.
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 29/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - It begins “that deeply hidden spark that was innate Dean Winchester had found its tinder once again” Very nicely put.This chapter was awesome. Can’t wait to see your resolution. I can only hope that it involves more hurt and comfort, the brothers’ bond, and the innate Dean Winchester (?). Well strange you should say that...lol This story is finished now and I'm planning on posting in the next day or so...more H/C than you can shake a stick at...lol Thanks for the review Nilah and hope you enjoy the finish...
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - It begins Great story. I’ll be looking forward to sequel, but I’ll be keeping my eye out for your other stuff. I really loved the image of the four year old “urchin” Dean you drew for us. Brought a smile to my lips. Summary:
 The clock is ticking.... Dean is trying to use his time wisely, in the aftermath of AHBL, he tries to cope with events. After all, how can he make Sammy see the Deal made sence if, behind the mask, Dean himself was still breaking. In true Winchester style, he is making use of the only spare time he has.... the moments before a hunt. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1737 [Report This] Published: 08/11/07 Updated: 08/11/07
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 18/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 First try? This was great! Well done. Definitely will be looking out for your stuff. Author's Response: Definitely first try - sweaty palms, dry mouth and ALL!!! I am really pleased you found this and enjoyed it, it is kind of special to me because it was the first thing I ever had the guts to share and everyone was so awesome in their response to it. (Just like you !!!) Please feel free to let me know your thoughts on any of the rest of my stuff, I find it hugely helpful to hear what works and what doesn't. Thanks for taking the time. Abi. Author's Response: Definitely first try - sweaty palms, dry mouth and ALL!!! I am really pleased you found this and enjoyed it, it is kind of special to me because it was the first thing I ever had the guts to share and everyone was so awesome in their response to it. (Just like you !!!) Please feel free to let me know your thoughts on any of the rest of my stuff, I find it hugely helpful to hear what works and what doesn't. Thanks for taking the time. Abi. Summary:
An once-imprisoned evil now threatens to push the Winchesters over the edge...
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 58105 [Report This] Published: 13/11/07 Updated: 18/01/09
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: You Can't Stop Yourself From Falling
That was awesome. What a cliffy! That was awful of you to leave us hanging like that. It’s edge of your seat good. Everything that can be crossed is crossed and eagerly awaiting your next post!
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: You Can't Stop Yourself From Falling Oooohh!!! With that summary, I didn't expect a car crash to take down my boy, Dean. That's gotta hurt. Loved the phrasing. With such a great opening, I can hardly wait for the rest. Please keep it coming. I am guessing it will since VS is on break. That was also one great story too. Nilah- the wreck is gonna be the LEAST of Dean and Sam's problems, Trust us, you know how evil Steph and I can be....and nothing can ever be so simple as just a car wreck. Summary:
While investigating Santa-nappings at the mall the Winchesters make the ultimate sacrifice. Dean is an elf, John is Santa and that’s not even the weird part. Come along on a strange joyride because Xmas was never this whacked out before. And Sam thought he was going to have an average, normal Christmas his first year at Stanford! Preseries. Available in the zine Salt 'N' Burn Volume 2 This story is dedicated to my two favorite elves, Zachary and Logan. Zach, you were robbed; you absolutely had the best calves in your senior class, but like Dean, with all your other fine attributes, it is so hard to focus on just one. Lo, you still have the chance to take that honor and your calves are every bit as awesome as your brother’s. Go for it, dude!
Categories: Crossovers, Wee!chester, AU, Humor Characters: Dean W., John W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 50326 [Report This] Published: 15/11/07 Updated: 01/12/07
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 30/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Santa Claus is Coming to Town As the mom walked past Dean, he looked her directly in the eyes with his most menacing glare. His voice was clear and concise, "G.I. Joe Artic Adventure playset. And Mom, it better be under the tree, we clear on that? Or Uncle Vito is going be paying you a visit? Capice?" Oh my, I just cracked up at that image, and couldn't stop laughing. Elf Dean.....hmmm, those bells and that hat would probably really be something to see! Author's Response: Oh, my, wouldn't we all love to see Elf!Dean? But hopefully the visual image I presented gives us a good idea. Jensen is so amazing and thru his wonderful acting and presence as Dean I can picture this all happening in my head. Actually, that's how I write... I just see it in my head and try to keep up with my keyboard! I hope you continue to enjoy my little story. Thanks for reviewing, B.J. Summary:
Dean has a near death experience, but he doesn't come back from it entirely alone. Once again, many thanks to Vanessa for the great banner...you took the pics from my fave epi! Awesome job, I love it!
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 113257 [Report This] Published: 17/11/07 Updated: 04/10/08
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 30/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Intersting. I am really enjoying so far. Summary:
Dean decides to, well, turn over a new leaf and live the time he has left to him differently. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6072 [Report This] Published: 24/11/07 Updated: 25/11/07
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Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was great. I really enjoyed you exploring that avenue. The “I love you” had me chuckling, and the back massage was priceless. Very entertaining. Summary: Dean discovers MySpace, with an unforseen consequence. Crossroad Blues Tag and BUABS. Ridley's Brotherhood Characters will make an appearance
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 23858 [Report This] Published: 27/11/07 Updated: 27/11/07
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Date: 30/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: My Space Real change—it was an illusion. You might change the outside of something—but the inside will always be the same. That was an intriguing way to end. Great story. I absolutely adored it. Caleb and Mac were exceptional. This was great. Your summary so didn't do it justice, but I am glad I took the chance to read. I actually passed it by on FF.Author's Response: Yeah, I know, I'm pretty bad at summaries. Sometimes, the stories don't end up the way I start them. thanks for reviewing! Summary:
Vamp bites can't be good even if they don't turn you. Missing scene to Fresh Blood. The boys continue their conversation. Categories: Missing Scenes, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5478 [Report This] Published: 02/12/07 Updated: 02/12/07
Summary:
Sam Dean and Jo (Harvelle) are relaxing after a successful but tough poltergeist hunt, when Dean is abducted by a brutal daemon intent on bringing destruction down on mankind.
Sam and Jo must find a way to save Dean, and the whole of mankind. Will Dean be strong enough to withstand the daemon whilst they search and who are the strangers who might offer a solution? Thanks so much to Lout for my lovely banner and to Kirsty my GeekGirl shotgun and all you other daemon hunter girls for your encouragement. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 29542 [Report This] Published: 06/12/07 Updated: 16/01/08
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries That was excellent. I think you outdid yourself with that chapter. We had the angst, the snark, the story, Dean, Sam, Dean. Did I mention Dean? I can hardly wait. Hurry up and post your dear heart out!Author's Response: Hey Hun Well thanks for that lovely review and glad it rang your bells. Just finishing chapter nine so will post it soon. And Dean? yup you mentioned him and boy is he worth mentioning! Beautiful huh? Bev xx
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries That was great. Would love to see the return of the angels. I don't too fancy the Jo / Dean pairing, but it wasn't too bad. The angst and hurt were great though.Looking forward to your next foray.There were some spelling and grammar errors which you could possibly pay more attention to, but it did not detract from my enjoyment of the story. Author's Response: Well thanks, sorry you didn't like Dean and Jo but the angels may well be back some time soon. Bev Summary:
The boys are back and ready to kick demon ass, but when Bobby is violently attacked the boys focus their attention on finding his attacker Banner rocks Lou!!! Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 10709 [Report This] Published: 13/12/07 Updated: 20/02/08
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Date: 22/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Brain Damage!?! Really enjoying the story. Duh, duh, duh, duh! Who could it be?I can hardly wait. Thank you Nilah, always happy to see a new reader interested in my stories. Glad you are enjoying, a few twists and turns coming and I hope you continue to enjoy it. (Nice name by the way hun) Schelz Summary:
Who was the handsome stranger brought to the mental institution in the dead of night - and what terrible tragedy from his past had reduced him to a broken, empty shell?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 29830 [Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 11/01/08
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 23/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I am really enjoying this story. Like the first person commentary. And that beard shaving scene was nicely done, throwing in cleft chin, and sensuous lips and all. Nice touch. And DID John was an unexpected surprise. Can’t wait for more updates. Author's Response: Thank you for that - and thanks for taking the time to review. John makes more appearances in chapter 4, much to Kayla's disgust...Jules Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 I totally agree. John returning at the end of the last chapter was great. Now, John and Bobby to the rescue. You definitely need to get into the angsty recovery mode. I am all dfor that and totally loving this story. Yeah!!! 3 chapters to read. Great! Off to drool, ahm, read now.
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 I totally agree. John returning at the end of the last chapter was great. Now, John and Bobby to the rescue. You definitely need to get into the angsty recovery mode. I am all dfor that and totally loving this story. Yeah!!! 3 chapters to read. Great! Off to drool, ahm, read now.
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 29/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ooooh! The tension is becoming almost unbearable. You are definitely good at that. I can’t wait for Papa John and Uncle Bobby to burst in and save the day. I can hardly wait for ghost girl to make her reappearance.
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 22/03/08 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 I bow to a master. You excel at creating just the right mood. I truly feel for both Dean and Sam. You have trulyt messed with their psyche and I do not envy John his coming days. The way you have built the tension up to this moment had me in awe. I really cannot wait for your next installments. Hurry and update please!
Nilah.
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 20/05/08 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Yaay! Update. Really can't tell you how much I am enjoying this story. And I do hope you take enough time to capably deal with the boys' recovery.
Summary:
The brothers are in Oregon on the hunt for an unknown beast responsible for the disappearances of 37 people in the Ochoco State Forest. When both of them are wounded by The Beast With No Name the hunt becomes a battle for survival. Set in season 2.
Categories: General, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 50611 [Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 12/03/08
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 05/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was intense. The pace was exhilarating. I needed it. A story with a speedy resolution. Hope that the next chapter comes quickly. My fingernails were really feeling it when Dean was fighting to stay on the mountain top. Happy New Year! .Author's Response: Hi Nilah Thankyou for your first review, I'm pleased you are enjoying the pace of the story, I will try to keep it moving along. Please keep reading and reviewing. Silvertayl Summary:
Sam refuses to spend one normal christmas with Dean Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1079 [Report This] Published: 19/12/07 Updated: 19/12/07
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 23/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 It was a good first fic. Keep writing away. You really need to check your spelling. It could turn some people off. Not too mushy, so it was like the boys - true to character. Summary: Dean is taken by an old enemy and will never be the same again. Spoilers for Season 3 and mature content.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 35457 [Report This] Published: 21/12/07 Updated: 14/01/08
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 22/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Okay then, great start. I really hope you're into happy endigs. Love the title, although it seems to not bode well for a happy ending. |
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