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Real name: Nilah Status: Member Member Since: 04/01/07 Website: Beta-reader: 42 year old living in Trinidad (that's in the Caribbean). Love reading. Do some dabbling at writing and can't get enough of Dean and SUPERNATURAL. Reviews by Nilah Summary:
 Never leave a wounded predator alive! It might come back later when you least expect and rip out your heart!Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 20780 [Report This] Published: 25/12/06 Updated: 12/01/07
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 10/01/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 --- Taunts and Tactics I found your story yesterday and couldn't stop reading until I'd gotten to your cliffhanger (and you do them so well) Gosh, poor babies. They've got bruises upon bruises, but hey, anything for each other. I like your Dean speak. Think you've gotten it down pat. Okay, I'll be biting my nails until I see your next post. Poor me, with no fingernails. Summary:
Making a deal with a Demon can be an unseemly business. Especially when you discover that the deal you've made has endangered your sons in ways you hadn't foreseen. Now they've grown up apart and unaware and things need to be set right. General AU oddness.
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 44413 [Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 07/03/07
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 19/01/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 This is great. Love where it's at. Can't wait to see where it's going. And my boy, still with the wisecracks. Gotta love him! Author's Response: I toyed with the idea of Darkside!Dean, but to be honest he's so much more fun the way he is...!
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Date: 14/02/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 You are a very wicked woman. Has anybody ever told you that? I hope the next chapter comes up soon.
Author's Response: Yep, that's me with the Yellow Eyes... I hope the next chapter's up soon too... Apologies for the wicked case of writers block... Summary:
Sam has a deadly vision of his brother. Meanwhile, Dean is keeping secrets again. Banner by Sweetie0704 Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 72116 [Report This] Published: 19/02/07 Updated: 15/12/07
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Glimpse of the Future
If I haven’t said it before (but I think I did) this story was fantastic. That demon was awesome, but the brother story was even better. The epilogue was a nice way to round it off. Can’t wait for your next offering. “but in all fairness….felt more like eavesdropping. Dean had been broken, the vulnerability forced rather than given.” You have an excellent way of turning a phrase. “as they talked, they recognized themselves in each other, sameness of self and yet…not.” Yet again, this line spoke to me. You worried about your “scene”, but it was tastefully done, and I could see Dean. It definitely added to the story, IMHO. Author's Response: Oh, thank you! That's so nice of you to say. You've really brightened my day with this review and I thank you from the bottom of my heart! I'm really glad you liked it and enjoyed reading it and I hope you enjoy the next one. Sorry it took me so long to get to this, I've been a little busy and then I totally couldn't get logged in. Take care, Nicole
Summary: Sam and Dean find themselves in small town America on a hunt to stop people from dissapearing.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 31863 [Report This] Published: 28/05/07 Updated: 07/06/07
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Date: 29/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The opening piece in your first chapter describing Dean prone on the car! What a sight that must have been to behold! Very engaging.That “best pie in the state” scene where Dean is coaching Sam only to fall prey to the same gesture was hilarious. You always manage to introduce just the right touch of humour- Sam and Dean style of course. I look forward to these shots. Summary:
Sam and Dean run into a wave of bad luck and receive help from a friend. This story re-introduces the Character Sara Powers from Thank You and Goodnight Milton.
Categories: Romance, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sara's Stories Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 25877 [Report This] Published: 08/06/07 Updated: 22/06/07
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 30/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I’ve just read all six chapters in one go.I don't know how I let it get away. Well kinda... was hanging onto Awake in The Dark which I totally love. Just a little one for correction- he actually felt better, not great, but defiantly improved. It should read definitely Author's Response: Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed, as for the correction I'm heading over to fix it now... thanks K Summary: Nothing is ever easy for the Winchester boys. Dean is trapped and Sam must race against time to save him before it's too late.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 19104 [Report This] Published: 22/07/07 Updated: 17/09/07
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 Date: 11/08/07 Title: Chapter 5: I Want to Break Free I really look forward to updates on this story. I love it. Then, of course, I especially love hurt Dean. There's just something about him. And c'mon, a house. He really had to have pissed off someone. Can't wait for the spookiness to start. Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know how you are enjoying the story so far! There really is just something about hurt Dean....*sigh* Lots more of that and a little spookiness thrown in too!
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 13/08/07 Title: Chapter 6: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure Ooooh!!! You are so not nice...to leave us hanging like that. I really am enjoying this story. Sam is getting a chance to take care of big brother. My poor Dean! Down for now, but I am sure not out. Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! And for the stars!!! I'm glad that you are enjoying the story so far. I'm afraid that I've developed a taste for the cliffie...
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Date: 17/09/07 Title: Chapter 8: We Will Rock You I loved your Creepy-roof-dude, and I have to admit that Freaky-forest-dudette is wonderful. I can just hear Dean reeling off those words. "Dean had his tells..." Nice work. Loved the way you handled that turn of phrase. Cannot wait for the next installment. Don't worry, I am not going anywhere. I love it when I see an update for your story.
Author's Response: Thank you soo much for the review - and the stars!!! I was so happy that you liked the little "tells" metaphor! Creepy was getting lonely.... I'm going to try to update as quickly as I can, but I know that I'm swamped at the moment.... I am eager to get on with the story too though - bit frustrating....
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Date: 22/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Thunder and Lightening: Very, Very Frightening Hellooooo! Is anybody out there? Or did creepy forest dude get you? It's been forever and while I have countlessly finished the story in my head, I much prefer reading your ending. Hope real life is not too stressful and that it is just a matter of getting a fire under you. If it is, consider the fire lit! Summary: This was my first Supernatural fanfic! The boys wanted one day, one day, of relaxation. Something out there has other, more sinister, plans.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 10391 [Report This] Published: 07/08/07 Updated: 11/08/07
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Date: 11/08/07 Title: Chapter 13: Stitches in Time Glad I read it! sigh! If only... This tale put so many pictures in my head. Glad I found it when I could read straight through. Summary: ONESHOT Dean is hurting and all Sam can do is . . . pick on him a little bit. Contains some minor swearing.
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 602 [Report This] Published: 15/08/07 Updated: 15/08/07
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Date: 15/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Well, I'm glad that your charley horse was good for something. Cute, and I can so see Sam doing that. Brothers! Summary:
One little word can make a big difference. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 871 [Report This] Published: 19/08/07 Updated: 19/08/07
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Date: 07/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great story! If only we could all have a big brother like Dean. Thank you. Summary: The brothers are being hunted by a new predator, but who is hunting them all? Spoilers up to Season2 Nightshifter
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 75151 [Report This] Published: 29/08/07 Updated: 23/07/08
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Date: 26/10/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 I am really enjoying this. At first Viky had me really intrigued, now I just want to find out what those darned ice wraiths are doing to my boy Dean. Come on, Sam, don't dawdle! Please update soonest! Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you are liking it so far. Well I don't think Sam shall be dawdling for too much longer. Summary:
After an ordinary hunt, Sam and Dean will find out about the danger that lurks in the woods... or just inside your own mind..?
Thanks to Nessa (GloomyAngel) for this very beautiful banner. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 12532 [Report This] Published: 09/09/07 Updated: 15/10/07
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Date: 17/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Cold As Ice Good first story. Can't wait to find out where it goes. Poor Dean! You got to get him some help soon... or not LOL! Summary:
Dean reflects on what he's made of and what lies deep within. An extremely short examination of this fascinating man named Dean Winchester. Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: Dean W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 598 [Report This] Published: 23/09/07 Updated: 23/09/07
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I definitely couldn't pass this morsel by. Sinfully delicious, and I can absolutely see Dean coming up with this. Summary: Dean's year is drawing to a close. How might it be affecting him...?
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1237 [Report This] Published: 24/09/07 Updated: 24/09/07
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I liked it. Hauntingly sad. Summary:
Post AHBL 2. Sam is no close to finding a way to break the deal and with the deadline drawing near he wonders if it’s finally time to visit the Grand Canyon. Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2274 [Report This] Published: 25/09/07 Updated: 25/09/07
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Beautiful. I loved their conversation at the end. Author's Response: Thank you! :) Summary:
Letters from a brother to a brother
The picture really has nothing to do with the story, I just love the way it looks!
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2177 [Report This] Published: 07/10/07 Updated: 08/10/07
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Date: 30/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: 365 Peanut M&Ms “Dean, sometimes I wonder if all the shots you’ve taken to the head have turned you into Rain Man, minus the savant half. Always with the jokes. I loved this piece. I hope it does not come down to that, but if it were to, this would be a good way to end. Beautifully done! sniff!! Author's Response: It won't, it can't, but we can only wait and see. Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it. Summary:
Sam has an admirer. And Dean has a hater. How far will she, or it, go to have him, and keep him? Spoilers for pilot (Like we all haven't seen that before, right?) Spoilers for Asylum too. (We've all seen that one more then once too, right?)
Great artwork. Thanks to everyone, and congrats to Mizpah for taking 1st. I'd also like to send my deepest thanks to Vanessa for nominating it! That was the biggest compliment anyone could give! For all those that don't particularly care for romance, it's my version of romance, meaning it's dark and twisted, not loving and caring.
Big huge thanks to bulletbabe for the banner, it is so totally awesome and I thank her a million! Categories: General, Romance, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 83389 [Report This] Published: 13/10/07 Updated: 21/03/08
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Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 NO NEED TO BE NERVOUS. THIS STORY HAS REALLY BEEN WILD. I ENJOYED IT IMMENSELY, AND TO THINK I HAD BYPASSED IT. IT DIDN'T SOUND VERY EXCITING, AND I'M A DEAN GIRL MYSELF, AND WASN'T UP TO A SAMCENTRIC STORY. (Sorry for the caps) Boy was I wrong! The title fooled me. As a Dean hurt / angst / comfort fanatic, I can truly say that your story had it all. Definitely NOT a letdown. Can't wait for your next story! Thanks you so much, I am glad you didn't bypass it either. I'm not very good at those story summaries so that's partially my fault. I am obviously a Dean anything girl, just love the guy (You'd never know it by the way I treat him though) I am really glad you liked the story, and just to let you know, Dean is always hurt or sick in just about everything I write. Summary:
The Winchester brothers fight to keep safe the only family they've ever known. - This story is a sequal to Thank You, featuring Sara Powers. Categories: General, Romance, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sara's Stories Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 40890 [Report This] Published: 17/10/07 Updated: 14/12/07
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 17/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hurry up and post gal. I love Sara and her family. Can't wait for the story. And Gordon is an added incentive. Does that mean we get a little hurt Dean thrown in? Summary: 3.02 TKAA tag. Brothers need to talk about the important events in their lives... like when Dean thinks he might be a dad with an eight-year old son, maybe Sam would like to know about it.
The pain in his gut deepened as Sam faced more of Dean's sacrifice and self-denial. Once again Dean wanted for Sam what he refused to acknowledge he deserved for himself. Sam didn't know what to say to ease Dean's pain so he offered his brother the only truth he knew.
Banner by the awesome dreamalittledreamofsam Thank you again! Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: Ben Braeden, Dean W., Lisa Braeden, Sam W. Challenges: Series: Life, Love, Loss and other Wonders of the Universe Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7868 [Report This] Published: 17/10/07 Updated: 17/10/07
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 17/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was so beautiful. You had me in tears at the end. Just goes to show how much we need tags. Always enjoy reading your work. You seem to stuff so much of what the boys are feeling into such short pieces. Bravo! Author's Response: Thank you, Nilah. That review was wonderful to read. I always hope to capture the boys and the depth of their emotions. Yes, I love SN, but I'm feeling like this season so far really needs some tags to delve deeper into issues the show just doesn't have time to cover. Thanks again, B.J. Summary: All signs point to a night out, but under close look, the truth begins to unravel and a Winchester has their days numbered. But who??
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 4974 [Report This] Published: 28/10/07 Updated: 03/02/08
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Date: 22/12/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Enjoying the story so far. I find that the conversation is a little stilted so you may want to pay a little attention to it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Summary: Kazcon Auction story for Nana56, hope you like it. Multi-chapter. Rising floodwaters trap Sam and an injured (of course) Dean in a house with a kindly woman keeping watch for her long lost son. If you're familiar with my stuff you know what to expect. If you're not, welcome to the world thru my eyes.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 35658 [Report This] Published: 31/10/07 Updated: 01/05/08
Reviewer: Nilah Signed
Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sharper Than A Serpent
That chapter was great! Doggedly, our Dean marches on. I cannot wait for your next chapter, but you just got to hurry as those flood waters are rising rapidly! We can’t have the boys washed away. Or can we? Hmmmm! |
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