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Penname: StrigoiVii [Contact]
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Real name: Helen Status: Member Member Since: 01/06/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
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Reviews by StrigoiVii Summary: Sam and Dean are on the trail of some strange animal-like attacks.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 5175 [Report This] Published: 03/04/08 Updated: 06/04/08
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 Date: 03/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 OH NO, poor Sammy's going back! Great start to what sounds like a very interesting story. Loved the obstacle course of children's toys and patio furniture, I can actually see that. I will be looking forward to reading more of this!
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Date: 05/04/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Supernatural vigilante dog, totally loving the thought of that! Is there any signifigance to Sam shouting 'Bingo'? Just curious. Thanks for posting quick too! Summary:
This is my first story!! I wrote it for the prank challenge Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2246 [Report This] Published: 12/04/08 Updated: 12/04/08
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Date: 13/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sam and Dean Prank Wars Nicely done for a first fic! I hope you continue to write. Great job. Summary: My entry for the UnGen April Fool's Day Prank War challenge. Sam and Dean are amidst another wildly entertaining battle in the periodic and ongoing Winchester prank wars.
Categories: Humor, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1222 [Report This] Published: 12/04/08 Updated: 12/04/08
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Date: 13/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sam? What Did You Do? I think it's totally awesome you messed with the car, and I loved this story (as I always love your stories!) Sam ruled that one and totally won that round of warfare for sure!! Author's Response: Thank you, Helen. Your kind words about this story mean a lot to me. The prank with the man in the bar grabbing Sam's butt was in the starting inspiration behind this story (and was based on a true story though I embellished it to suit my needs), but as I built the story around that prank, I just knew I had to do something to the Impala. Something to scare the pants off Dean for just a few minutes. (Not that the hamster didn't do just that. hahaha) Thanks again! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Summary: My entry for the April First Challenge, hope it makes ya giggle a bit. And big congrats to Helen - very worthy challenge winner.
Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3671 [Report This] Published: 12/04/08 Updated: 12/04/08
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Date: 13/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh Bev...just finally found time to read and let me say that I totally loved that! The banter was almost audible in my ears as the boys argued back and forth and the vision of Dean's rock hard abs...ahh, to die for!! Loved it, loved it!!! Author's Response: Helen. Hey knocked out that you came to read it, and content that it was a proud runner up to a fabulous winner, I laughed my socks of Hunny! Your stories rock! Bev xxxx Summary:
Prank war challenge, Hope you enjoy!
Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2832 [Report This] Published: 12/04/08 Updated: 12/04/08
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Date: 14/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Family Matters Loved it Louy! I gotta say, somehow I knew it was John that put the salt in the sugar. Great pranks they played on one another and I'd love to see put up a second chapter with the boys pulling a whopper on dear old dad! It's gonna happen Helen, lol. Sequel is under construction but we'll see if the boys can come up with something worthy...hehe. Somehow I think they might. Thanks for the great review and stars and I think Tree picked the best story to win...absolutely fantastic...cant wait till you post on your page so I can review it properly. Well done mate! Summary:
Prank war challenge. Hope you get a giggle! Sam and Dean are back to school soon and Sam has a new game he wants Dean to play. (13&16)
Categories: Wee!chester, UnGen Challenges, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3920 [Report This] Published: 13/04/08 Updated: 14/04/08
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Date: 15/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - I double dare you OMG, I was crying by the time I finished reading that! The tampon thing was hilarious and I couldn't figure out what would top that, but the pregnancy test...well, that was the ultimate!! Loved every minute of that read and I look forward to the continuation!! Author's Response: The stars are a huge compliment coming from the winner of this great challenge;) "I was crying by the time I finished reading that!" I am lost for words Helen, so glad you found it hilarious and loved every minute. Nice to know you look forward to the continuation;) THANKS Summary: A power outage gives the boys a few laughs.
Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 263 [Report This] Published: 15/04/08 Updated: 15/04/08
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Date: 15/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Force of habit That was really cute! I loved it. Summary:
It seemed like he could never be good enough for his father. It was always about Sam Winchester. He wasn’t even that important! Why was some human better than him? Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3620 [Report This] Published: 15/04/08 Updated: 15/04/08
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Date: 15/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Demè Loved it and would totally love one for Meg too! Nice job!! Summary:
Simple pranks, evil pranks and an all around twist to keep you guessing. So who do you think will win the prank war in the end? Categories: One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2138 [Report This] Published: 17/04/08 Updated: 17/04/08
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Date: 18/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I liked the idea of Bobby pranking them both...somehow I think they deserved it. I also think the story was worthy of a post, so stop worrying! Nicely done. Summary: A mistaken identity. A hunt gone wrong. How far will a father go to get his son back?
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 14144 [Report This] Published: 23/04/08 Updated: 03/05/08
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Date: 24/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Well, I think it's a good start at a first attempt and I am looking forward to more...oh, hey, I can click next! Yeah!! Author's Response: :D Thanks, StrigoiVii! Hope you stick with us!
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Date: 24/04/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 And begin it has! Can't wait to see what's in store for 'Jake'! Nice job so far! Summary:
He'd promised to watch out for his brother. He'd promised to save him. Trying to keep his promise might just kill them both when an unexpected and unwanted hunt drags them both over the edge.
Incredible banner by Bulletbabe - thanks hun, it gives me the creeps every time I see it! Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 42384 [Report This] Published: 26/04/08 Updated: 21/06/08
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Date: 26/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Picture of Blood and Shadow It sounds like an interesting start and I will keep my eye out for it. Since I suck at giving chapters a title mysellf, I have no suggestions for you. Summary: Happy Birthday, Sam Winchester. A little oneshot in celebration of our favorite little brother's birthday. Two hot guys and a Lemon Almond Cake with Champagne Mousse filling. What more can anyone ask for?
Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2173 [Report This] Published: 02/05/08 Updated: 02/05/08
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Date: 02/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Balloons and Crepe-Paper Streamers Aw Vanessa, I did love it. The 'shotgun picks the music coupon' was the best of them all and for some crazy reason, I can hear Dean's helium filled voice mocking John in my head! Nicely done!! Thank you, Helen! I'm very happy to hear you liked the story. Yeah, oddly enough, I could hear Dean's squeaky voice imitating John in my head too. Made me giggle madly. Thanks for all the pretty stars too. Summary: A look at Sam's birthdays over the years. Some Weechesters fluff and of course, a huge serving of angst.
Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1610 [Report This] Published: 06/05/08 Updated: 06/05/08
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Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot Wow, let me be the first to say that was absolutely an amazing piece of work! I am speechless...and that obviously doesn't happen very often!! Summary: A little missing scene from "Time is on My Side". Written for sUnKiSsT, who thought a missing scene with the sex dolls would be funny. I hope this lives up to your expectations. Reviews, as always, are much appreciated. Rated K+ for a bit of swearing.
Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 930 [Report This] Published: 09/05/08 Updated: 09/05/08
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Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Bi-Bro Orgy? Oh Vanessa, I can not thank you enough for that wonderful story because I has a really...and I mean REALLY hard time believing that our wonderful heroes would have had those latex sexpots readily on hand! Thanks for making me feel a whole lot better about that one!! Oh, and after the last 2 weeks I've had, I really needed something to laugh at too...so many thanks again!! Author's Response: I certainly hope you got a few laughs out of this story. I had such an incredibly good time writing it. I certainly giggled enough while brainstorming it and writing it. I hope things start to get better for you soon, Helen. We all miss you so much. Thank you, thank you for taking the time to read and review this little missing scene. Summary: After a difficult hunt, Sam makes a startling discovery about his brother and the promises he makes.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5813 [Report This] Published: 09/05/08 Updated: 13/05/08
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Date: 13/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was sweet. I, for one, can't remember a damn thing from when I was four. Wish I had a notebook to remind me. Nicely done and thank you. Summary:
Dean Winchester gets a little more than he bargained for during a trip to the hospital, and Sam's NOT a happy camper. Part of my "Hospital Horrors" series.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: HOSPITAL HORRORS Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 21255 [Report This] Published: 16/05/08 Updated: 24/02/09
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Date: 16/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Open Your Eyes I seriously needed one too Vanessa, so thanks so much!! Bloody Dean is one of my most favorite things. I will wait anxiously for an update!! Okay, so we'll feed each others addictions then. Deal? 'Cause your stories are addiction ambrosia. I'm very happy to hear you liked this first chapter. There IS just something special about bloody Dean, isn't there?
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Date: 25/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: A Multitude of Restraints That, my friend, in no way, shape, or form even came close to boring me. I loved every word you wrote! My stomach still has butterflies in it. LOVED IT! (Thanks for the fix, I was kinda jonesing there) Ooh, ooh, ooh--I gave you butterflies???? I can't tell you how much that pleases me!! I've certainly experienced my fair share while reading your wonderful stories, so I take this as THE highest compliment! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, Helen. It brings a huge smile to my face.
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Date: 02/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Twenty Stitches in Time So, as I'm reading this and laughing at Sam's crack at the muscle car lovers and him thoroughly wishing his brother would get a room with the damn car all I can think about is poor Dean getting stitched up in the other room, still unconscious and needing x-rays. I sure hope you're going to tell that part of the story really soon!! Please...pretty please...with sugar on top...(groveling now, I'm so pathetic, aren't i?) Oh yeah, and let me just say too that's a really good thing Dean can't see where that security guards foot is because if he did, it would have been forcibly removed from it's leg and promptly shoved somewhere it really doesn't belong...if you know what I mean. Thanks Ness...Not slow, not boring!! Author's Response: Oh dear, the pressure's on now. hehe I will do my level best to fulfill your wish, Helen. And, yeah, Dean would NOT be pleased if he could see the security guard. But I think Sam will handily take care of 'im. Thank you very, very much for the lovely review and the beautiful stars.
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Date: 22/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: War Path Chocolate and spam... yuck!! Great comparison though. I love the thought of poor Dean with a skull fracture... but that probably doesn't surprise you, does it? Love it, like I love all your stuff Vanessa, keep it coming please!! Author's Response: Maybe I should share the little story behind the chocolate and Spam comparison?! lol Everybody's liking it so much. Somehow I DID know that you might like seeing Dean in this condition. I don't think I hold a candle to your doses of afflictions to him but I'm trying very hard to improve in that area. lol I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
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Date: 29/07/08 Title: Chapter 5: Do You Know Where You Are? Oh Vanessa, nauseated, agonized Dean!! One of my favorite things in the whole world. That and now he's going to be in a, shall we say, questionable room? The anticipation is almost too much... moving on the the next chapter!! Did you do a good job with the nausea and agony??? hehe As you are quite aware, it is one of my absolute favorite things in the world too. I'm very, very happy to see your lovely review. Author's Response: NOTE TO SELF: Never answer reviews when your tired. I MEANT "Did I do a good job with the nausea and agony?" Sheesh. I guess I better go get some sleep. Sorry about that, Helen.
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Date: 29/07/08 Title: Chapter 6: Weight of the World Vanessa, I am hoping and praying that shit will hit the fan by the time Sam comes back in the morning... please...pretty please with sugar on top (no pressure, huh?) Ok, all kidding aside... I seem to enjoy this story even more the further along it goes. Love it and keep writingit please!! Author's Response: Ahhhh, yeah, no worries--shit will be hitting the fan--in one form or another--in the next chapter (at least that's where my brain is heading). I can't even tell you how tickled I was to read that you're enjoying the story even more as it goes along. I was beginning to worry about it a bit. Thank you for taking the time to read it and leave such kind reviews. Summary:
Dean’s deal is at hand. But the course of soul collection never did run smooth. A very long one-shot, really, that grew and grew. And (more) proof that I can do something Mr Kripke and his team of writers didn’t! Rated T for language. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 9514 [Report This] Published: 17/05/08 Updated: 22/05/08
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Date: 18/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The conversation between the brothers was beautiful...I could almost see it and hear it in my mind. I'll look forward to reading more, thank you. Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Hope I don't disappoint with the next bit... Summary: Tag to No Rest for the Wicked
Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 200 [Report This] Published: 17/05/08 Updated: 19/05/08
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Date: 23/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Beautifully done! I enjoyed that very much! Thanks for tossing Bobby in there, he needs his closure too. |
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