I liked how you mentioned the part of the brain that deals with emotion.  Being a person that likes science I found this part fascinating.  I am confused are Dr Sanford and Dr Ellicott the same person?  I liked the ending of Chapter 12 with Dean standing there with a knife.  Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: so glad you liked the part about the emotions and the brain~!! Sanford is Ellicotts first name...so glad you enjoyed!! bambers;)

Thanks for the update. This was another good chapter.  I can't want to see how you tie this story up in light of what happened at the end of this chapter. 

This was a good start to what I think is going to be an interesting story to follow.  The hospital scene was fine.  This chapter kept me on the edge of my seat.  I can't wait until the next chapter.

Author's Response:

I'm glad the hospital scene was ok - I've never felt that I was very good when it came to medical terminology or characterization of doctors and such, so that's mainly why I tend to avoid sending the boys tot the hospital, but this was just itching to get out in a story, so I gave it a go.

I'm glad you approve.

All I can say is wow!  This was an excellent update. It was exciting.  I liked the cliffhanger at the end.   I can't wait to see what you come up with in Chapter 4.

I liked Dean's monologue while he was in the hospital.

Author's Response: Yay. I often say I believe people think in run-on sentences and dramatic conclusions. Dean is the apex of this in my writing.

Thank you for the update.  I liked Chapter 4.  I liked how you used Sam and Dean running into Mike's sister to help Sam understand why Dean made the deal to bring him back.


Author's Response: Thanks so much, I just figured it was a good spot to deal with it, after all you know Sam would have done something similar to keep Dean.. - K

This chapter was really long but despite that I enjoyed it.  I liked how you included lines from various episodes in your story.  You must know Latin pretty well because your use in your story suggests that.  I can't wait to see how Sam and Dean got separated and how Dean ended up with Sophie.

Author's Response:

I have a habit of going a tad long in my chapters -- which is one of the main reasons I decided to break this story up into three parts. Each chapter is just about as long as this, with the 3rd being the longest.

I hope that doesn't deter you from enjoying the rest -- and I thank you for taking the time to read and review!

I put an a/n in the next part to explain the Latin, but I'll tell you also, there is a nifty translator tool online that a friend showed me once. I'm better at Gaelic than Latin, so I was glad to have that tool to fall back on.

Thanks again!!

GS

I like how you chose to tell this story from the perspective of the victim.  You have me hooked already.  I am curious to find out why the narrator was attacked.

I liked chapter 4.  It was exciting. I liked the insight into Dean.  I also liked the flashback into Robbie's past that explained why he wants to get rid of Sam and have Dean as his new older brother.

Author's Response:

Thanks supernat!

I'm so happy you thought the chapter was exciting! And I am also happy you loved the flashback...I wanted to give Robbie some humanity to make you understand why he is the way he is.

Thanks again!

This was another good chapter.  I cant' wait to see what Robbie has in story for Sam.

Author's Response:

Thanks supernat!

Robbie begins his plans in the next chapter!

I loved the flashback to the first time that Robbie replaced his brother James.  Poor Matthew.  I can't wait to see what happens when Robbie goes to see Dean and how Sam is going to get away.  Don't wait too long to update.

Author's Response:

Thanks supernat!

I am so happy you loved the flashback. Matthew did get the short end of the stick, but at the same time this was something new for Robbie.

We're going to Dean in the next chapter and it's coming as soon as I can get it up!

I liked Chapter 11.  I like Matchbox Twenty music too.  Thank you for the update.  This has been an interesting story so far.  I liked how this chapter ended.  From the sound of that last line,  I think Robbie is going to be up to no good in the next chapter.  Can't wait to find out.  Post soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks supernat!

I'm so happy you liked this chapter! Robbie is definitely going to be up to no good...those poor brothers!

Next update coming as soon as I can get it out!

This was a excellent ending to an excellent story.  I definitely didn't see the ending coming.  I can't wait for the sequel.

Author's Response:

Thanks supernat!

So happy you liked this story and glad you didn't see my ending coming. That was what I was going for!