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Penname: supernatfem76 [Contact]
Real name: Marlana
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Member Since: 28/05/07
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I live in Pennsylvania. I enjoy yoga, reading, walking, rollerblading and cycling. I like all kinds of music except for country. My favorite shows are SPN and Blood Ties. Other shows that I watch include Moonlight, Kyle XY, ER, and Brothers & Sisters. My past favorite shows include the X-files, BTVS, Angel, Highlander, Kindred: The Embraced and Roswell.I have really never considered myself creative so writing fanfiction is definitely a new experience for me but it is one that I have enjoyed so far.

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Summary: When Dean is injured on a hunt and loses all of his personal memories, it is up to Sam to help him through it.
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34792
[Report This] Published: 19/02/07 Updated: 13/04/08


Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a good start to this story.  It flows really well.  I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

 
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Date: 07/06/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I liked Chapter 2.  It flows well and I like Elizabeth.

 
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Date: 08/07/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I liked all the angst, I like your writing style and I liked the cliffhanger.  I can't wait until the next chapter

 
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Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am so glad that you updated this story.  This chapter was definitely worth the wait.  I liked that you featured the Boogeyman in this chapter since that is a supernatural creature that most people are familiar with. I can't wait until the next chapter even if I have to wait two weeks.

 
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He was surely dying. You could not be feeling this and not be dying. He had to be dying. Please, let me be dying! This was too much to live with, Sam wanted it to end, needed it to end. Oh god it hurt so much, so bad, oh god make it stop, make it stop, make it STOP! He couldn’t speak, couldn’t do anything but scream in total anguish, not knowing where his body began or ended, feeling, hearing, seeing nothing but the pain being afflicted on his being. It was pain beyond pain, and he welcomed unconsciousness as his body reached its limit.

NOW COMPLETED!!!


Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None
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Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 16344
[Report This] Published: 26/03/07 Updated: 26/11/07


Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was an excellent beginning to this story.  It grabbed my attention from the time I read the first word to the time I read the last word. 

 
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Date: 31/08/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

First of all thanks for updating.  I love your word choice.  It is so descriptive.  This chapter was written as if I was there.  I could really feel the emotions of both Sam and Dean.  I can't wait until the next chapter.

Author's Response: im glad you liked! i try to be descriptive without being too wordy and biring, so im glad you think im doing well.

 
Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26/11/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thank you for completing this story. I did like the ending.  Having Dean experience a little bit of what Sam went through was a good way for him to relate to what Sam had went through.  I liked how you had Sam face the witch so he could conquer his fear.  The only suggestion I do have is if there is a long break between chapters, could you do a little summary of what happened so far or in the last chapter at the beginning of the chapter.  I had to go back a couple of chapters to refresh my memory.  

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked, and I totally her what you're saying - thanks for the suggestion, I'll keep that in mind when I update my other stories.

Thanks for reading!

 
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Categories: Orphan Characters: None
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Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed
Date: 06/06/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Another excellent chapter in an excellent story.  This chapter was just as exciting as the previous chapters.  I like your writing style.  It is written in a way that allows me to picture everthing that is going on.  I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response: awww...so glad you liked it!! i'm so thrilled you like my writing style as i am always worried about how badly it might suck!! thanks so much for reading and the awesome compliments!!! bambers;)

 
Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a good start to this story.  I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: so glad you are liking the story so far...hope you enjoy what's to come!! thanks for reading, bambers;)

 
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Date: 05/06/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This chapter had me wincing because the way it was written I could actually picture all the torture that was inflicted on Frankie

Author's Response: yeah, poor frankie never stood a chance against Charlie!! poor guy!! thanks for sticking with the story!! bambers;)

 
Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed
Date: 05/06/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This chapter was brutal.  Was this inspired from Hostel?

Author's Response: lol...truthfully, i never watch movies with extreme violence, i just can't stomach it...so God only knows why i was able to write about Charlie!! cause as you said, this is a kind of brutal story...thanks for reading, bambers;)

 
Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed
Date: 05/06/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This chapter was even more gruesome than the last.  Poor Sammy!  I found myself wincing more than I did for the previous chapter.  I am just wondering how the Winchesters are going to get out of this one?  Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: uh, yeah, it was pretty bad!! i was cringing writing it!! my poor Sammy!! so glad you are still liking the story!! thanks for reading, bambers;)

 
Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/06/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This chapter was definitely worth the wait.  It is very well written and it kept me on the edge of my seat.  I can't wait until the next chapter.  Keep up the good work.


Author's Response: awwwww....thanks so much!! so glad you liked it and thought it was well written!! it means a lot to hear that!! will try and update soon!! bambers;)

 
Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/06/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I liked how you used Dr Lee from Croatoan.  I definitely did not see the twist of this story coming.  I liked twists.  It will be interesting to see how Sam and Dean will deal with Two-finger Charlie when he returns in six months.  That's if he doesn't pay Sam in the hospital before that.

Author's Response:

oh, so glad you liked the twist!! Charlie is just too darn evil to just die!! hopefully next time around Dean and Sam will kill him in a more permanent manner!! thanks for reading!! so glad you are enjoying!! bambers;)

 
Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/06/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This was a very emotional chapter.  I could really feel the emotions of Sam and Dean.  You said that you are not good at emotional angst.  I have to disagree with you on that.  I feel that this chapter was just as good as those that involved torture.  Keep up the good work. 



Author's Response: awww...thanks!! so glad you thought so!! it really had me worried!! so glad you liked it!! hope you like the rest as well!! hopefully i can manage to have somewhat of a happy ending for the boys!! thanks again for reading!! bambers;)

 
Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20/06/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Another good installment to a story that I have enjoyed reading so far.   I can't wait to see what Dean's plan is.

Author's Response:

hey, thanks!! glad you enjoyed!! hopefully, you'll enjoy the rest as well!! thanks for reading!! bambers;)

 
Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/06/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I liked this chapter.  I liked the way you used Diana from the episode "The Usual Suspects" to help Sam and Dean avoid the police.  This is another well written chapter.  I can't wait to see you how you finish up this excellent story.

Author's Response: awww...so glad you liked it!! thanks for saying you liked my using Diana to help the boys out!! hope you enjoy the rest as well!! so glad to have you as a reader!! thanks again, bambers;)

 
Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/06/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

 This chapter had a lot of heartfelt moments.  I liked the cliffhanger at the end of the chapter.  I like cliffhangers.  I have really enjoyed reading this story.  I have been reading this story along with two books and your story captivated more than those.  I can't wait until the sequel.

Author's Response: oh, so very awesome that you liked the cliffie ending!! awww...i'm so blushing that you would my story more captivating then two books you are reading!! awesome compliment!! thanks for reading, and hopefully you will like the sequel as well!! bambers;)

 
Summary: After a near fatal accident at the end of a hunt, Sam loses his memory of their recent hunt. Dean has to put the pieces back together for his half conscious brohter while still trying to figure it out himself.
Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None
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Series: Never a Winchester
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 9336
[Report This] Published: 21/05/07 Updated: 05/09/07


Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Aftermath

I liked the second part of this story.  It flows well and I can really feel the emotions of the characters by the way it is written.  I hope you write more chapters for this story.  I would like to read more.

 
Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/06/07 Title: Chapter 6: Back to the beginning

I am not feeling this chapter.  It does not flow well from the previous chapter.  I will stick with your story.  I like it so far.

 
Lycanthrope by Rae666 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

If your brother had a vision about a werewolf attacking him, would you go chasing after it? Even though you knew he was still hiding something? Possible spoilers and brotherly angst. Plus Dean… well, just read and find out.

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Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 19280
[Report This] Published: 31/05/07 Updated: 03/06/07


Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/06/07 Title: Chapter 12: Caged

The only problem I have with this story is that Dean's eyes are green not hazel.  Other than that the rest of the story is excellent.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! :D

I'm always iffy about both the boys eye colours. I never write Sam's colour because I don't want to chance it. But Dean's... I normally try to say hazely green (though I don't think I did that with this story) 'cause his eyes are startingly green in some shots and pictures - I mean, wow but in some others, there is the slight hint of brown, just near the centre - I think it has something to do with his surroundings and the lighting used.

Mind you - I can't even figure out my  own eye colour... neither can any of my friends either like.

That's my excuse anyway. Please forgive me! And thanks again for the review :)

 
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Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story had me cracking up.  All the various things things fans said about the Winchesters and their fantasies about shower scenes were so descriptive.  I have to admit I like those shower scenes too but I like the other aspects of the show as well. I can't wait to see what you come up with for a second chapter.

Author's Response: oooh...so glad you liked it!! and thrilled i could make you laugh!! i just really love knowing i could in some way make people smile!! thanks for reading!! bambers;)

 
Fever Dreams by kwater Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

Unable to offer any other relief, she smiled slightly   "You're going to be okay." - A woman works to save a man she's been dreaming about.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 12765
[Report This] Published: 27/06/07 Updated: 11/07/07


Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/07/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Your story has me on the edge of my seat.  I can't wait until the next chapter.


Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying and thanks for the review.. It really means a lot - K

 
Summary:

(Takes place after Heart in Season 2 - spoiler info included for episodes previous to that point)

Dean and Sam head off to Dallas after hearing about a rash of murders that sound too much like those they investigated in California a month or so before. Dean isn't sure Sam is ready to cope, as he still hasn;t dealt with what happened back then.


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Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 28135
[Report This] Published: 12/07/07 Updated: 18/07/07


Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/07/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I really enjoyed this story.  It was interesting and definitely a page turner.

 
Summary:

**Spoilers for AHBL 1 and 2**

What happened when Dean was forced to carry his brother one last time.

Now including Sam's POV.

It was a oneshot but now expanding.


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Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 9092
[Report This] Published: 15/07/07 Updated: 22/09/08


Reviewer: supernatfem76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Do Not Go Gentle

This was a really emotional one shot.  I liked your choice of words. I almost felt like crying reading this.  I could picture everything that was happening vividly.

Author's Response: It was pretty emotional, I had an interesting time writing it.  I tend to lean towards humor, so this was a nice change for me.  I always love hearing that a reader could visualize what I did while I was writing, if that makes sense lol.  So thank you!! :)