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Penname: Impala [Contact]
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Real name: Bex Status: Member Member Since: 23/05/07 Website: http://www.youtube.com/profile?user=whitetongan Beta-reader:
Reviews by Impala Summary: Time is up, and debts are to be paid. Will this be the end of the road or do the brothers have a chance in beating the odds?
Spoilers for AHBL pt. 1 & 2 Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 4208 [Report This] Published: 18/10/07 Updated: 14/11/07
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 Date: 14/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Yes much happier and I have to take the time to commend you for a couple of great one liners! 1)“Dude, the chicks dig the puppies, not the dogs.” 2)“Love doesn’t wait Sammy,” 3)“I wanna eat a goddamn cheeseburger.” oh and this little beauty..“Every woman looks familiar to you.” Not to mention the touching moment of Bobby talking to John talk about heart wrenching. Looking forward to another great update Jen! -Bex Author's Response: What can I? I love the one liners! I enjoyed the thought of Bobby looking for John's help so that was a somewhat fun scene to write.(Haha, sad things are fun now?) I'll be working on the next chapter soon! Thanks for the review Bex! Summary:
Dean's POV - over a glass or three.
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sanctified Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1353 [Report This] Published: 22/10/07 Updated: 22/10/07
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Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 My friend Jack Oh I really liked this, very well done! Summary: Drabble/tag to AHBL2. Samcentric.
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 896 [Report This] Published: 25/10/07 Updated: 25/10/07
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Date: 25/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Woah this is amazing and amazingly sad..I love the whole take on the finality of Dean's deal. So perfect one of my fav lines "because dean was stille dean and dean was an ass" Great! -Bex Summary: Sam and Dean are hurt on a hunt, they get help from a old childhood friend, but she has changed. where will her loyalties lie?
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 36125 [Report This] Published: 25/10/07 Updated: 19/02/08
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Date: 25/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Secrets This is very good and interesting..I thoroughly enjoyed reading this chapter! Awesome! -Bex Summary:
In the early dawn, Sam and Dean find themselves out of luck and out of time. Their final goodbye is painful and grief-stricken, but strangely peaceful. Caution; Character death is IMPLIED. Categories: One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1168 [Report This] Published: 28/10/07 Updated: 29/10/07
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Date: 31/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh my...woah. This was so moving, so touching...so unimaginably sad and final. You just captured the complete sadness of the whole situation! Great job, this was without a doubt amazing! -Bex Summary:
What would take for Dean to walk away from Sam and not come back? He's never leave Sam as long as he lives..... Not a deathfic, my Halloween tale Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1358 [Report This] Published: 30/10/07 Updated: 30/10/07
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Date: 30/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh woah, this is such a clever idea...what a good twist! I really like this and I hope there's more! Great job! -Bex Author's Response: there wasn't more to start with, but I'll try to brainstorm something. Thank you so much for the positive review as this is a bit out there... Summary: On Halloween night Dean and Sam end a witch's reign of terror but not before she utters a curse that may put an end to Sam.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1981 [Report This] Published: 30/10/07 Updated: 30/10/07
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Date: 31/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice Oh Jude, this was amazing I'm totally sad it was a one shot!...creepy as hell, man I'm sitting with my family watching creepy movies for Halloween and now I've read you're story I'm doubly freaked! Great Job! -Bex Author's Response: Bex, Thank you sooo very much for your delightful comments......and those yummy 5 stars !!! I would have liked to have been able to lengthen it as well..........Somehow think after the terror and tension calmed down Sam would have tossed some comment about "In the Impala?! What were you thinking? Who would have cleaned that up ?!" Seems they always joke to keep from crying....!!!! Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh woah, this is gunna be good. The highest level Demon, sheesh pulled out all the stops Bambers :) I'm very excited to see where this one is gunna take us..but the whole Dean having to remain 'dead' to Sam. harsh and heartbreaking, man you really know how to make situations tough! Great job as always! -Bex Author's Response: hey bex!! thanks so much for reading!! yeah, it's gonna be really tough on both boys which will hopefully up the angst!! hope you will enjoy what's to come with this story and the ones to come!! thanks again, bambers;) Summary: When unexplained injuries start happening to Sam, can he and Dean find the supernatural cause before it's too late? Takes place during season two before the finale.
Categories: General, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 23484 [Report This] Published: 08/11/07 Updated: 18/02/08
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Date: 09/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Bizarre Abstract Painting Really really good, the humour is great, and I love how you managed to weasel in both brothers being topless, lol, (sorry please excuse my fangirl-ness). A very original story line, can't wait for more! Five stars from me, it kept me thoroughly entertained! -Bex Summary:
Banner by the amazing Chasidern
After Sam is critically injured, Dean looks ahead to a life alone as he has to face decisions that might lead to a future without his brother. NOT DEATH FIC. Winner Round 11 SNFA Chick FLick Moments Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 42509 [Report This] Published: 12/11/07 Updated: 25/11/07
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Date: 16/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Holy mother of pearl..so I've just finished reading this story and now I'm gunna review. This chapter is great, light hearted (mostly) and humourous with a nice cliff hanger at the end! -Bex Author's Response: Thank you, I wanted to give it a feeling like the show--let the story build slowly.
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Date: 16/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 This chapter really got to me..the description and having Susanna die just like that. It's such a sad chapter to read, but excellently written all the same! I'm really enjoying this story, simple, sad and dramatic a great mix! -Bex Author's Response: Thank you so much, there's more to come. I'll update very soon!
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Date: 16/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 *grabs kleenex*...the last chapter was sad but this one takes the cake, what with the flash back and mirroring it to the present..woah, very well done. The end words, cruel to leave us with "Your brother is dying"..I can't wait to find out where you'll take this, it's safe to say I'm hooked! -Bex Author's Response: Thank you so much! *sends tissues* I'll get them out of it! But it might be a rough ride for a little longer!
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Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Please, Dean, please let me go....Oh this is so sad, man, you're killing me here! The past memory was amazing, portraying how John finally broke down was just so sad! Great job, lol even if I am slightly depressed after reading this! -Bex Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hopefully you won't be too depressed when it is all over and done! Summary:
 A short poem about Sam's denial of Dean's impending fate...  Categories: One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 111 [Report This] Published: 13/11/07 Updated: 13/11/07
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Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Untitled Oh woah this is heartbreaking....its so lovely and simple and really emanates the pain...I can't begin to tell you how in awe I am of this poem, its beautiful! -Bex Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! Your review means so much to me, I'm really happy about the response to this poem, so thank you! Summary:
Sam and Dean investigate several deaths in a small Wisconsin town, apparently the work of a werewolf. But when they meet Evie and thhe strange Evans twins, they begin to doubt that werewolves are the real culprits...
This story is now in the process of being re-written because it was so rubbish. I will hopefully post the new and much improved version sometime soon :) Categories: General, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 5396 [Report This] Published: 15/11/07 Updated: 15/12/07
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Date: 15/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Holy Crap! This is A-W-E-S-O-M-E!!!. I have to commend you for that little beauty of a line, about Dean and the 'sex crazy' demon...totally Dean. Also the whole banter about them sharing beds, great, poor Sam I could just see the lanky kid curled up on a small sofa! Everything about this story is interesting, I am very excited for more! p.s The credit card name, hilarious! -Bex Author's Response: Thanks for the great comments! Yeah I wrote that line and instantly saw Dean saying it. I will hopefully have more up soon.
Summary:
A little christmas ramble in poem form - hope you all enjoy.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 698 [Report This] Published: 20/11/07 Updated: 20/11/07
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Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: A little Christmas chill thrill Aww lou this was great. I'm not really one for poems but man, this was entertaining and will written. It flowed with the utmost perfection and I found myself captured by the meaning of it. Well done, another great job to put under your belt! -Bex Author's Response: Believe it or not I'm not one for poems either - not really sure where this one came from. Thanks for the R&R Bex Summary:
The days have closed in on Sam and Dean and they only have one more day together. What big brother Dean doesn't realize is when the deal is over so is his kid brothers life. Thanks for AWESOME banner Floetry (bullet) Nominated for people's choice!!!
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4098 [Report This] Published: 29/11/07 Updated: 29/11/07
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Date: 29/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- If I lost you Holy Winchester...man I am so speechless after reading this Schelz so completely original and very sad. The dialogue between brothers was at times very funny and then very heartfelt and emotional..which made this story all the more special! I loved the twist at the end! :) -Bex Author's Response:
Summary:
Sam Dean and Jo (Harvelle) are relaxing after a successful but tough poltergeist hunt, when Dean is abducted by a brutal daemon intent on bringing destruction down on mankind.
Sam and Jo must find a way to save Dean, and the whole of mankind. Will Dean be strong enough to withstand the daemon whilst they search and who are the strangers who might offer a solution? Thanks so much to Lout for my lovely banner and to Kirsty my GeekGirl shotgun and all you other daemon hunter girls for your encouragement. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 29542 [Report This] Published: 06/12/07 Updated: 16/01/08
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Date: 08/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries WOAH..this is so interesting. I loved the moment betweem Jo and Dean, when she was inspecting his wound, very touching.AND..the fact that Sam was drunk through out this whole chapter was pretty darn funny! All around a very good chapter. Well done :) -Bex Author's Response: Thanks you, thank you! I always thought Dean and Jo could have a real interesting relationship - volatile and feisty you know! And I thought the notion of Sam drunk was just so sweet - how do you deal with that great tall thing when it can't even stand!! More to come soon. Bev xxx PS: Impala = cool penname!
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Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Michael Woah, Bev. Poor Dean you're really gunna make him sing for his supper, so to speak lol. This is a very good (well good for my sake, maybe not for Dean's) story line you've embarked on m'dear. How far is Dean going to suffer in order to save Sammy?! Wonderous! 10/10! -Bex Author's Response: Bex! Well hun I've just posted the last chapter (10) so you've got a ways to go yet and all I'll say is there's a lot worse to come! Poor Dean is really gonna scream before you get to the end, but none of it is my fault! It's the daemon - he's bad! Heehee, Bev x
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Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives Bev, excuse me for saying but Mikey is a nasty piece of work! Although he is amazingly written, which of course is due to your talents. I'm morbidly fascinated with how dark this story is going, its fantastic lol. If it were a novel I'd call it a definate page turner! -Bex Author's Response: Awh Bex that's so kind of ya to say that! And yeah Mikey's a bad bad boy, but he does have a certain style dont'ya think!! Stick with him there's more to come yet! bev xxx
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Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5. The Power of One I'm intrigued by these new comers, and also strangely relieved somehow, as if I know there's gunna be reinforcements to save Dean! You're story is truly amazing Bev, and the little note of Dean thinking about a burger...hilarious! -Bex Author's Response: Ah the new guys!! Yup they are intriguing aren't they read on and I'll tell ya who they are! And yeah even when he's been brutalised his stomach calls to him!! He's so sweet! Bev xx
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Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 "My Tartarus" Oh woah what a revelation, Angels..woah you've really pulled out the cavalry for Dean, I must say :) Another amazing chapter m'dear. I find myself simply enjoying each line written..and the relationship between Sam and Jo is very touching! -Bex Author's Response: Haha! you've found out!! Yeah Angels!! Nothing but the best devine beings for my beautiful boy!! Bev xx
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Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Angels and Daemons. Holy moses! talk about a deadline. And also a turn for the worst..Dean really does have the worst luck in the world. I love this story Bev, it is so original and has such amazing twists and turns. Although I am finding Mikey's obsessions with Dean kinda creepy haha :) -Bex Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying it Bex, and yeah Dean's not having the easiest or best visit with Mikey is he?? I kinda like NOT being predictable hence the changes in direction! And Mikey! Well hell Hunny he just fancies the pants of Dean! Bit like the rest of us do!! Heehee he's a BAD boy! Bev xx
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Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry! Oh thank god (mind the pun) he's saved. You had me worried there Bev. I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story, it is perfectly written and every character (except Mikey) is likeable and well written (although Mikey is fabulously written). You're doing a super duper job! -Bex Author's Response: Saved Huh?? now that might be predictable mightn't it? Mikey's still got a bit of fight left in him! Hang in there Hunny you're doing a fab job of reviewing and I'm loving it! Bev xx
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Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Redemption or Destruction? Ok I'd like to play nurse haha. Woah this could be dubbed only as an extremely EPIC chapter. I loved the parallel (sp?) storyline of the angels trying to save their own brother as well as Dean, and then it all coming together so that saving one would ultimately save the other. Very well done, I might add. splendid as usual! -Bex Author's Response: Now Hun do you have your own suturing kit or do you want to use Sammy's?? And feel free to wear your Nurses outfit if you like (NO-I think the less saucy one is more appropriate! After all he's sore and hurting!) Glad you got the parallels, wanted to use them to bond the Angels to Sam and Dean. It's so cool that you've reviwed the whole thing, thanks so much Hun! Bev xx |
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