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Penname: eye4u [Contact]
Real name: Carmina
Status: Member
Member Since: 22/05/07
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Accountant by profession, started to follow supernatural last 2006. 
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Reviews by eye4u
 
Summary: This was my entry in the SFTCOLARS August Ultimate Limpage contest. Screams rip through the night, and the Winchester brothers find themselves in a desperate situation with lives on the line.

Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2345
[Report This] Published: 10/09/07 Updated: 10/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 11/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Mr. Clean! hahaha

Don't you dare touch Sam's hair! lol

Good one! To connect with the fire in the pilot story.

 

 
Apartment 63B by bayre Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Sam finds a bomb...Dean has to take it away.

 

banner by Maygin


Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4613
[Report This] Published: 10/09/07 Updated: 10/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 11/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa! Whew!

Same thinking, on how a ghost can attach Sam with bombs!!! lol! At least they are not winchester sushi!!

Nice story!! 



Author's Response: Thanks.

 
Trapped by SeparateDear Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Kayla woke up frozen and soaked in cold sweat. The same dream. All over again. She'd been having it since she was four – she was sixteen now - , and it still scared the Hell out of her. Sam has a vision of a girl he can't save.

Hiatus - I was recently attacked by the immagination sucking bug


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 411
[Report This] Published: 13/09/07 Updated: 13/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Continue!!!

It's a nice start, please do!!



Author's Response: ok, I will

 
Faults by Starliteyes17 Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Stanford AU. For decades, scientists have been saying it is a matter of when, not if, the San Andreas Fault will falter again. When it does, California will lie in ruins, millions of lives will be lost, and chaos will prevail. In 2004, their predictions came true.

Categories: AU, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 25866
[Report This] Published: 17/09/07 Updated: 24/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue

Wow!  Putting that earthquake story as part of the Pilot!!! Nice job!!!

clap! clap! clap!

Just read it right now, I was not able to leave my PC, even if I had to take a pee!  That is unusual even for me!!!

Good one!!!

 

 
Summary: When Dean gets a call that Sam has been seriously injured how far will Dean go to get to his brother in time?
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 15825
[Report This] Published: 22/09/07 Updated: 23/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Impala

Lisa and Jason are bitches!  Good thing Dean sized them up even just one time!!!

Just darn lucky Sam faked fainting, if not Jason might leave the room with only his tongue unharmed! heh heh!!!

Nice story!!!

Kudos!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

 
Summary: ONESHOT.  Dean's eating habits have always bugged Sam a little.  But, this dinner drives him right over the edge.  Just having a little devious fun with poor Sammy.  Reviews are like chocolate!
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 869
[Report This] Published: 23/09/07 Updated: 23/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstar
Date: 24/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: One Hell of a Dinner

Poor Sammy!  What was he on? heh heh heh

Good one!

 
Chocolates by bjxmas Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Dean reflects on what he's made of and what lies deep within.  An extremely short examination of this fascinating man named Dean Winchester. 


Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: Dean W.
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 598
[Report This] Published: 23/09/07 Updated: 23/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 24/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hahaha Nice one!

I do hope it isn't marshmallow or a maraschino cherry! Correct!!!

Kudos!



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.  I'm sure that it's not.  Dean most definitely has something substantial at his core, even if he isn't sure of that.  Take care, B.J.

 
The List by lam Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 42]
Summary: Sam finds something he never expected to in Dean's pocket.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1665
[Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 03/10/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How heartwarming..... I really looooove the brotherly love!!!

Make a new list...... a statement full of hope!!!

Nice one!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and the stars! Gotta love me some brolove! We have to believe that Sam will make that new list happen...

 
Summary: Sam has a vision about a dog. Has his freaky brain finally blown a fuse?

Categories: General, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3563
[Report This] Published: 06/10/07 Updated: 17/10/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That is why a dog is considered to be Man's Best Friend.

 Kudos to you for writing this story! It is very good!

You are correct, the last chapter is definitely a kleenex moment.

Cheers!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I was thinking of taking the story a bit further but i wanted to keep to keep it to three to follow the title.

Glad you liked it. 

 
Summary: ONESHOT. The boys have an unexpected visitor on Halloween night.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 943
[Report This] Published: 09/10/07 Updated: 09/10/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Pardon Me

Hahahahaha!

Invisible man! What a visitor!

Heeehaaahaaa!

Nice one!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, eye4u.  I'm really glad to know that you enjoyed it.  :-)

 
Summary: Unsure what to do when Sam gets hurt at school, Jess decides to make a call....
Categories: General, Romance Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 17920
[Report This] Published: 11/10/07 Updated: 30/10/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstar
Date: 30/10/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Epilogue

Hey!  Nice connect! You stood true to the pilot! 

Kudos!



Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted to stay with established version of the pilot, glad it worked

 
Cave In by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 36]
Summary:

Cave In

Trapped in total darkness, both hurt, one seriously - but which one....


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3874
[Report This] Published: 27/10/07 Updated: 27/10/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gee!  When I realized that Dean was the one whose leg was pinned, after finishing reading the story, I had to reread it again!!!

Funny me, for every dialog, I chant to myself the brothers' names!  'Ok, this is Sam's dialogue, ok, Dean.... Sam..... Dean.....' lol

Good one!



Author's Response: LOL - thanks for that - and thanks for the review. While writing that dialogue, I could hear their voices in my head - probably not a good thing to admit, having voices in my head, even if they are Dean and Sammy...hmm....think I'll just stop right there...lol...Jules

 
Summary: What happened that Sam and Dean didn't speak for 2 years?
Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Nikki's Stories
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2882
[Report This] Published: 31/10/07 Updated: 31/10/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starhalf-star
Date: 31/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's a nice take on what happened in pre series!

Though, I can't.... well let me revise it.... I don't like to see Sam being the hot headed one! Starting the fight! lol

Though I would not be surprised Dean giving Sam an apartment for his birthday. But furnished?  Heh heh, I guess that's is where Nikki comes in.

Good one!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm not much for Sam starting fights either but I figured he had to do something pretty bad for him and Dean not to talk and this is what I came up with. Glad you liked.

 
I Will Hurt You by Lia76 Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 100]
Summary: When unexplained injuries start happening to Sam, can he and Dean find the supernatural cause before it's too late? Takes place during season two before the finale.
Categories: General, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 23484
[Report This] Published: 08/11/07 Updated: 18/02/08


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starhalf-star
Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: So Much Fear

Yap! It's getting to be good!

Update soon!

 
Summary: Dean is strangely reluctant to join a hunt.

Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 379
[Report This] Published: 09/11/07 Updated: 10/11/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed star
Date: 10/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hahaha!  Meow!

 



Author's Response: ;-) Thanks for reading and commenting!

 
Summary:

POST TKAA- A year later, Sam goes back to someone.


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1489
[Report This] Published: 16/11/07 Updated: 17/11/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starhalf-star
Date: 17/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Future in Cicero

This is a nice ending, though I REALLY do not want this to be the actual ending of the series!!!

What I wish though, is that the possible truth that Ben is Dean's actual son, and he is still alive to enjoy it!!!

Thanks for writing this!



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reading and reviewing for my story! But, yeah, this isn't my first story. Not even my first 'Supernatural'. But thank you nevertheless!

 

~*~Stacee Phelps~*~



Author's Response:

Please disregard the first message/response. I'm just figuring out this site. ^_^ But, thank you for the comments! And, the whole time I was watching the episode TKAA, I really wanted Ben to be Dean's son. That is the FIRST TIME EVER that I wanted that and was disappointed when it turned out he (supposedly) wasn't. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

 

~*~Stacee Phelps~*~

 
Summary:

 

When it comes to trusting people, Dean's the cautious one. Just not with Deacon.


Categories: Drabbles, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Snapshots
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 265
[Report This] Published: 01/12/07 Updated: 01/12/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstar
Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this snippet, thanks!


Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know!

 
Summary:

This is a reflection of Sam and Dean's feelings for each other and also my homage to a lovely old movie, 'It's A Wonderful Life'

I don't own the boys or anything to do with them, Kripke does. Lucky guy!

Thanks to Lout, Crystal, Merrie and all you others guys for inspiration and motivation and especially to Kirsty-Birdy my shotgun!


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3345
[Report This] Published: 01/12/07 Updated: 01/12/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Its a nice story!!! This is the 2nd time (I think) that I came upon the name "Clarence" in Christmas related stories, about angels getting their wings! One is already in the Supernatural.tv forum christmas stories! Don't worry, your story is actually difference from the other one!

I think I really need to look for the movie to clear me up! 

Thank you!!



Author's Response: Carmina.  Thanks so much for reviewing, it's my first FanFic so I need the encouragement!  Yeah-go find the movie-it's a gem!  Merry Christmas to you.  Bev x

 
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Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
Options: [Edit] [Delete]
[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstar
Date: 22/12/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

whooo!  What an unexpected turn!

Run Dean!

Please update again soon!

Merry Christmas!!!

 
Zodiac! by fantasycatcher Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

 Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket

Awesome banner by my awesome m8 Lou. Thanks hun;) 

In a Bar, Dean spots a busty blond and decides to throw Sam in the fire, thinking he's doing his little brother a favor. But things don't go as planned.

 


Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2189
[Report This] Published: 07/12/07 Updated: 07/12/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstar
Date: 08/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Zodiac

Ahahaha!  Funny story!!!

Dean's desperation on getting Sam laid almost put them to their misery! hahaha!

Thanks for writing this!

Kudos! 



Author's Response:

Thanks alot eye4u, glad you found it funny and thanks for reading.

Schelz

 
by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
Options: [Edit] [Delete]
[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 10/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice! Santa Claus Bobby! It would definitely be a memorable moment, once Sam or Dean shows it off to friends like Ellen! Hahaha

Merry Christmas!!!

Cheers!

 
Summary:

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For the first time, I wonder what'll happen if they don't find me. My mind starts to stumble over itself as I allow the possibility of dying alone in this place to register, and I suddenly feel like all of my insides are constricting, because this can't be happening, I can't be dying, I'm only nine years old, my family needs me...

I doubt anyone else has ever spent a New Year's Eve that was worse than this one.


Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Worse Than This One
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1585
[Report This] Published: 15/12/07 Updated: 15/12/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: New Year's Evil

Nice Sam's POV! Can't wait for Dean's!!!

Cheers!

 
Summary:

I wonder if I’m a monster; not the kind we hunt, but the kind that people read about or see in a movie and wonder how a person could be so wrong. I think that maybe I’m the kind of father that children grow up determined not to be, that daughters are frightened of and sons are shut down by and wives are ashamed of. I keep my eyes facing forward as I search intently for the black van I know carries my youngest son, and I wonder how my oldest can stand to know my blood runs in his veins.

I wonder how either of my boys can bear to love me....

I doubt anyone has ever had a New Year's Eve worse than this one.


Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Worse Than This One
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2316
[Report This] Published: 15/12/07 Updated: 15/12/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: New Year's Resolution

Nice Story!!! Await your next one!

Cheers!

 
Summary:

Photobucket

Banner by the incredible Chasidern

Dean is dying after an attack by an unknown assailant. While Sam desperately searches for a cure for his dying brother, Dean makes plans of his own. Plans that might get him out of a one way tip to hell.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 34820
[Report This] Published: 30/01/08 Updated: 02/03/08


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: Where Night's Black Bird Her Sad Infamy Sings

Oh wow, only now I read this one.  It is definitely a nice follow up on your fanfic "Waxing and Waning".

Hope you are hatching another follow up on this one. One maybe for the fight with the wight, and maybe another one to end this set.

Thank you for writing this!!! 

Cheers!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I do plan to write the wight hunt and then another at Bryn's. Look for that in the near future.

 
Prank Wars by birdie Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary: My entry for the April First Challenge, hope it makes ya giggle a bit. And big congrats to Helen - very worthy challenge winner.
Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3671
[Report This] Published: 12/04/08 Updated: 12/04/08


Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 14/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice story! I like the style you did, starting from near the end of the story then telling on how it happened!!

I like how you made the brothers squirm in front of Bobby! hahaha

Hilarious! Cheers!



Author's Response:

Hey Carmina (beautiful name)

Thanks hun, glad it floated ya boats and thanks for your kind words. 

bev xx