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Penname: eye4u [Contact]
Real name: Carmina
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Member Since: 22/05/07
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Accountant by profession, started to follow supernatural last 2006. 
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Ice Cold by Vallana Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary: The brothers are being hunted by a new predator, but who is hunting them all?  Spoilers up to Season2 Nightshifter
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 75151
[Report This] Published: 29/08/07 Updated: 23/07/08


Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hanging!  Can't wait for more.  Write soon please!

Thanks!



Author's Response: Ooo don't mean to keep you hanging but glad you are in suspense!  Hope to relieve your stress soon.  Thanks for the review!

 
Summary: Dean was woken as he usually was by his little brother, once again in the midst of a nightmare. Or that's what Dean thought, until he saw the rips in Sam's pjs and the blood on his skin
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 5856
[Report This] Published: 29/08/07 Updated: 10/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Poor Sammy! Can't sleep! 

Nice story!  Hope you add soon!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Poor Sammy indeed I don't think I could stay awake!!

 
Summary:

Dean' s shadow, his brother, his purpose, his reason for living.  Dean's driving Sam nuts after a hunt goes bad and Sam suffers a concussion.  


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 30139
[Report This] Published: 31/08/07 Updated: 01/10/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

A sweet surprise for Sam, discovering his Dad watched him in the Xmas pageant.

Good one.

 
Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ah!  Nice ending!

The punchline!!! You are always my shadow.  NICE!!!

Kudos! Good writing!!!

 

 
Summary:

Everything has a story - every scar, every tear, every weapon, every amulet... So when the boys come across a new hunt with a familiar M.O. a valuable piece of jewellery might be needed to protect an innocent life once again. Set in the past and the present.

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Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 32284
[Report This] Published: 31/08/07 Updated: 27/08/08


Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Halloway

Hanger!  Waiting for your next post!

Thanks for writing!



Author's Response: Thanks :D Glad to have you reading!

 
Summary: Dean's dying, somehow mortally wounded during a simple hunt. Even if they find the cause is a cure possible? Not death fic
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 19498
[Report This] Published: 01/09/07 Updated: 01/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Nice Story! Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

 
Bring Me to Life by Lia76 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary:

Sequel to my story Burden. Dean helps Sam makes a painful journey down memory lane in order to find the answer to the question that Sam has been struggling with for so long...Is he good or is he evil? The aftermath is not easy to handle for either brother. Check out the third and final story in this series Mind Games (in progress).


Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 23274
[Report This] Published: 01/09/07 Updated: 03/05/08


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Small Victory

Poor Sammy!  A lot to go through!

Waiting for the next one!

 



Author's Response: I always put Sammy through a lot, huh? Unfortunately for him, there's more to come! But don't worry, Dean's by his side! :)

 
Summary: All Sam wants are a few easy hunts to keep Dean occupied.  It does start out that way, but if you take two Winchesters, add two young ladies, stir in an old, old threat, and add a pinch of visions, what sifts out isn't going to be sugar cookies.  Now it will take help for both to survive, and asking for help just isn't easy...     Spoilers through the end of season 2.
Categories: General, Romance, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 31550
[Report This] Published: 01/09/07 Updated: 08/10/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Accused

The story got better and better at each chapter!!!

More please!

 



Author's Response: Glad the medical mumbo didn't ruin it - havea little of that in chap 8 so I can get Sam functional again

 
Priorities by Ridley James Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Sometimes in the scramble of everyday life we forget the most important things.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5867
[Report This] Published: 01/09/07 Updated: 01/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstar
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's really nice to read some stories about characters that is not seen really much in the TV series, and their relationship with the Winchesters.

Thanks for writing this!

 
Summary: What happens when gym class turns into Sam's worst nightmare? Will he tell his family or continue to suffer?

Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 15890
[Report This] Published: 02/09/07 Updated: 15/10/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nice start!  More please!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 19/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Poor Sammy, always being picked upon by Coach Becker.  That rascal!

Wait for your next chapters!

 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/10/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Good ending!

 Nice story plot to play in, and also a nice connect to prepilot, when you let Joe meet Sam again.

It is a nice idea to do a sequel that you are thinking about.

This is a refreshing story (hehe in a sense) wherein the Winchesters to not always kick demon ass!

Cheers! 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Valuables by Ridley James Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Sam gets a surprise visit at Stanford and learns that the most precious gifts rarely come wrapped in shiny paper and ribbons.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3898
[Report This] Published: 04/09/07 Updated: 04/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstar
Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice Story!!! Thanks!

 
Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Could not help myself to reread it!

I really like this story!!!

 
Summary: After a hard assignment at school, Dean realizes that some things can't be touched or taken away by death.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4252
[Report This] Published: 05/09/07 Updated: 05/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gee, that's sweet! I really liked the way you presented the gifts their Mom gave Dean, from basic, to the best!

Thanks for writing this!

 
Summary: Set during Season 2, in the present Dean's point of view of a hunt in Pittsburgh about missing objects from a church.  In the past, from teen Sam's point of view of a much earlier hunt in the Pittsburgh area and what happened afterwards.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 17442
[Report This] Published: 06/09/07 Updated: 30/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 07/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice start, am curious on how the story would play out....

Can't imagine Dean being a sports buff, following exercise steps in front of the TV, even with a hot bod to follow, watching maybe!!! Funny pic running in my mind! lol!



Author's Response:

We all need our fun<G> and I think every once in awhile Dean does something to keep in shape.  Thank you for the review

 

Tidia



Author's Response:

We all need our fun<G> and I think every once in awhile Dean does something to keep in shape.  Thank you for the review

 

Tidia

 
Bad Company by busigt_81 Rated: K+ starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Dean's middle name could be trouble, really. Because he don't have to work hard to get in trouble, it just finds him were ever he goes.
Categories: Action, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8409
[Report This] Published: 08/09/07 Updated: 08/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful Winchester family adventure!  Dean always is the strong one!

"But I always save your asses anyway"  Haha How so true!!

Now I am confused, I'm getting to be more of a DeanGirl than a SammyGirl! lol!

Thank you for writing this!

 
Summary: There are things Dean's not saying, maybe an old friend can help.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3737
[Report This] Published: 08/09/07 Updated: 10/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I approve, Missouri is a good choice!

Missouri seemed to be able to meet Dean earliest, even before Bobby, coz, this would be weeks after Mary's death, and John is not a hunter yet!

Going to wait for your update!



Author's Response: Glad you approve. I hope you like the final part.

 
Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I so like the ending!

A very nice interaction between Dean and Missouri! Who more can read him better than her!

And excellently done! You were able to write the various feelings of Dean! The angst, fear, weakness, then the sudden absence of it all, by just simply grinning while Sam pouts! Awesome!

And nice one having Missouri whacking him with a spoon!  No speaking of that topic in that house! hahaha!

Grand Canyon!  They really like this place!!!

Good one!!!

 



Author's Response: Thankyou for the great review, glad you liked it.

 
Summary:

 

In Dreams

What if the dream - wasn't a dream? What do you do when dreams become a reality?

Sequel to Class Dismissed.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 127081
[Report This] Published: 09/09/07 Updated: 07/12/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This story is SOOOOOO GOOOOD!

You were able to write in grit detail on how the story I felt should play out!  Its really so nice!! Makes me feel cuddly all over whenever the twins of each sibling interact!!!

I would definitely stay tune on this story!!!! Please write soon!

Cheers!



Author's Response: Thank you for that - there is definitely more twin sibling interaction in the next few chapters. I'm very pleased you like it - it's a bit hard sometimes writing the two Sams, remembering that one is broken. Hopefully I will continue to deliver for you...Jules

 
Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16/10/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oooo!  Can't wait for more!

Clap! Clap! Clap!

Nice brothers and twins action!

Both saying bitch! heeheehee Sooo wrong!

I liked the premise that the Sammy's are helping each other!  Same goes for the Dean twins as well!

Kudos to you!  Would await your next update!!!



Author's Response: Thank you for that. Yes, the two sets of twins are learning from each other - and maybe doing a little bit of healing too...Jules

 
Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/10/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oooo!  Good pace!

 Keep it goin'

Cheers!



Author's Response: Thank you for that. Hope you enjoy the next chapter. The action starts with a bang...Jules

 
Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstar
Date: 16/11/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh! No killing of any Winchester, please!!! 2 Pairs of each is just fine with me!!!

Nice part! Please write again soon!



Author's Response: No death fics, trust me - can't stand them, will never write them. Oops - have probably just given away a plot there, but what the hey....Jules

 
Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/12/07 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue

What a nice ending to your very good written story!!!

Bravo!!! clap clap clap!!!

You are right! This is the longest story!!! But it is worth it!!

Kudos!



Author's Response: Thank you very much! I couldn't believe how long this one got. I kept asking my wonderful friend and beta if it was too long, and she bluntly told me to stay away from the delete key! Thank you so much for going the distance with it...Jules

 
Worth It by Irishgirl Rated: K starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Takes place right after Children Should Play with Dead Things.  Dean's reached a low point, feeling both guilty and worthless.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1349
[Report This] Published: 09/09/07 Updated: 09/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Worth It

Oh! Thank you for writing that part! Such angst!
Shows the very strong connection between father and son, and with the Mary's wishful assistance.

Kudos

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!