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Penname: eye4u [Contact]
Real name: Carmina
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Member Since: 22/05/07
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Accountant by profession, started to follow supernatural last 2006. 
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The Feather by bayre Rated: K+ starstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

All his life Sam hears things he shouldn't and keeps finding feathers.  Some S1 & S2 spoilers, more like references.

Runner up Whatever Man category (round 8) Supernatural Fan Fiction Awards


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2972
[Report This] Published: 08/01/07 Updated: 08/01/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 14/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Angel? Dean?  Nice thought!!!

Author's Response: THanks for reading!

 
Summary:

On The Wings Of Angels

The brothers finally confront the demon. But will one of them fall?


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 7947
[Report This] Published: 28/01/07 Updated: 30/01/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18/06/07 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue

A nice, different ending.

Thanks for writing it!

 
Mind Games by mizpah Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Mind Games

Sam plays a deadly game of cat and mouse with a hunter who is determined to succeed where Gordon Walker failed - to kill Sam. With Dean held hostage, who can Sam trust as he desperately tries to stay one step ahead of the hunters and rescue his brother.

 


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 14612
[Report This] Published: 04/02/07 Updated: 11/02/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 18/06/07 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

Nice one!!!

 

 
Car Trouble by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Car Trouble

Dean gets more than he bargains for when a poltergeist hunt goes wrong and the victim is his beloved Impala.


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 10986
[Report This] Published: 17/02/07 Updated: 19/02/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18/06/07 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue

Hahaha!  "How about which friggin tree you decided to roost in, for starters!'  Haha priceless!

Hope Kripke consider this as one of the standalone humor episodes in Season 3!

I actually liked the participation of the Impala, being valuable to Dean and all!

Thanks for writing this story!

 
Leipreachan by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

Leipreachan

A spate of disappearances leads the boys to a small community, where they find the locals less than helpful. What is out in the woods that the townspeople are hiding? And will it take one of the Winchester boys as its next victim?


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 23898
[Report This] Published: 24/02/07 Updated: 14/03/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18/06/07 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

Oh!  I really like your story, I could not help myself smiling while reading! 

Won't really hurt if this can stand as an individual episode for the next season!! heh heh Like a special for Saint Patrick's Day! lol

Thanks for sharing it!



Author's Response: Thank you for that. I actually have Irish ancestry, so it was fun to delve into that background. And a St Pat's day special - that would be cool. Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it. ...Julie

 
Fate by gaelicspirit Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 26]
Summary: In the space between the life they have and the life they wish for, exists the life they are meant to lead. Dean's sacrifice as told through Sam's eyes...
Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9246
[Report This] Published: 07/05/07 Updated: 07/05/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstar
Date: 23/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: As brothers

Whew!  Nice!

Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

 GS

 
Summary: Dean and Sam take a break from their usual gig in order to visit their estranged sister, who they find out, has many secrets. But she's not the only one; apparently, one of the brothers has been keeping a secret of his own.
Categories: Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 6910
[Report This] Published: 08/05/07 Updated: 01/07/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstar
Date: 18/06/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Carley? Winchester? Nice! It's kinda new for me to think that the Winchester brothers have a sister, and reading your fanfic, it actually also have a wee!chester part!

Gonna wait for the next part, am really curious on who the guy in Carley's house is.  Husband? Or a guy similar to second father Bobby Singer?

Hope you can update soon!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :)

 
Summary: Ficlet, 3000 words. John’s been gone on a hunt for too long, and the boys need food, so Dean breaks the rules and takes Sam out to buy some. But this isn’t really their story. It’s the story of one woman whose life they unintentionally change forever. Original character pov, wee!winchesters, brotherly love and some angst. Written for the supernatural.tv First Impressions fan fic challenge.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2866
[Report This] Published: 16/05/07 Updated: 16/05/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstar
Date: 21/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Ripple Effect

Nice story.  I like it! Nice of you to write a story about people being affected by the brothers, not only because they were saved by them, but just because of being themselves!

Please write more.... please! :)

Cheers!

 
Summary:

 All their lives, Sam and Dean Winchester have hunted for the Demon that killed their parents. But as the final battle draws near, a new evil arises, an evil more powerful than anything the brothers have faced before: The Djinni.

 Trapped inside an ancient ring, the Djinni wants nothing less than freedom so that he can rule the world like he did 7000 years ago!

 Can Sam and Dean stop this new menace? Will they be able to avenge their mother's death? Only time will tell...

 

 


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 23495
[Report This] Published: 19/05/07 Updated: 12/08/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 20/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Can't stop reading!  More please!

Author's Response:  I should update soon. Don't worry!

 
Summary:

Three weeks after the fire.  Where were the angels?  Spoilers for What Is and What Should Never Be.


Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3314
[Report This] Published: 22/05/07 Updated: 23/05/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 23/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's really nice to read 'in between' stories behind existing episodes.  It helps you connect them altogether!

 



Author's Response: Thanks!  It was fun doing one like this.  I've had another one in the works for a while about Sam at Stanford, but it's been slow going.

 
Lucifer by Rae666 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 506]
Summary:

After millennia of evil deeds, a fallen angel is given a second chance and is reborn as a mortal. 28 years later and he’s gotten himself into a spot of bother. Spoilers throughout Season 1 & 2 and this is ending up as an AU.

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Categories: General, AU, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Shadows of a Morning Star
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 61077
[Report This] Published: 24/05/07 Updated: 24/06/08


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstar
Date: 20/06/07 Title: Chapter 11: Lost and Found

I like it! I LIKE it!

Continue please!!!!



Author's Response: More very soon! :) Thanks

 
Summary:

One year after the end of AHBL Sam makes his deal with the demon.

 
Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7223
[Report This] Published: 27/05/07 Updated: 28/05/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 18/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

brrrr!  Creepy!  I could not place it, but the reliving part of John reminds me of a Greek myth (I think!)

Nice story though!  I quite understand the part when the wedding ring was not part of the new John, having Sam recreate him, if it was Dean who did it, the ring would definitely be in new John's finger!

 

 
Summary: First Sam gets hurt by something neither Sam nor Dean can see. then Sam and Dean both get attacked, by something they can. the only problem is, they arent sure what it is. LIMPSAM! PROTECTIVE, LIMPDEAN!
Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 2335
[Report This] Published: 28/05/07 Updated: 19/06/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 19/06/07 Title: Chapter 3: actual friends

The limp sam and limp Dean are good, however, I felt that the story lacks something.  Like how Meg got out?

Maybe you can make this as a following after AHBL2, wherein there were a lot of the Demon's children who got out of the devil's gate.  This would include Meg, and she was just trying to get back to the boys.   Then try to connect Meg with the recent deaths. 

Then kick her ass back to hell.

Ciao!

 
Summary: In his final moments John could not be more proud of his sons. The epic battle with the Yellow-Eyed Demon was finally over and now he could finally rest. John's POV during his final moments of "AHBL Part 2"
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2151
[Report This] Published: 30/05/07 Updated: 31/05/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 14/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's really a nice story to read after watching the season 2 end episode!!!  It really clears one part of the story up.... the relationship of John and his sons!

 Nice one.  Thanks so much for writing this!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much :D I've never written a story from this point of view before so im so happy you liked it ... thank you for reading and reveiwing :D

Tara x0x

 
The Chosen by kwater Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 74]
Summary: The war is quickly approaching and Sam, Dean and Catherine begin preparing for the final battle - This is the third part of the Coming War Series
Categories: General, Romance, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: The Coming War
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 24697
[Report This] Published: 04/06/07 Updated: 03/07/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 16/06/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

nice!  Ever since I came accross on your series, I made sure I try to read all your works! 

It's really a nice storyline you got there, you really moved the fiction of Supernatural to another level.

I am actually enjoying reading a different "what could be" after following the actual Series on TV.

Thanks so much!



Author's Response: Yeah, it's rough trying to write an alternate ending.  The season finale was so good I find myself trying so hard not to copy it...LOL  Thanks for reading.. Glad you're enjoying..

 
Summary: What would have happened to Sam and Dean if their father died during a hunt back when they were still kids? Would they have a chance at a normal life?
Categories: General, Wee!chester, AU, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 6594
[Report This] Published: 14/06/07 Updated: 21/06/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstar
Date: 21/06/07 Title: Chapter 3: Fugitives

Nice!  I like it!  Though it saddens me a bit that John is not part of this story, Adam and Carol is.

Hope you can continue this story, Sam and Dean growing up with Adam and Carol.

Cheers!

 
Fractures by PurplePosie Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

It’s the noise that wakes him; loud, screeching, curling under his door and filling his room, tearing him from sleep.



Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1832
[Report This] Published: 19/06/07 Updated: 19/06/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 19/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Fractures

aaaah!  Don't please!!!!

I don't like to think about this!  Its so darksided.  Though you followed it through.

 



Author's Response:

If it helps, I don't think it would actually happen that way...

 Thanks for reading, even if it was dark.  :o)

 
Summary: Past Featured StoryJust a little (very little) something that was kicking around in my head....
Categories: One Shots, Drabbles Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 212
[Report This] Published: 19/06/07 Updated: 19/06/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 20/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Man's Home is His Castle

King Sammy!

Nice touch on the story!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yep. Sam all the way~

 
by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25/06/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am still trying to remember the story of Oz, for me to catch up.  A bit familiar though, and I am quite enjoying the characters!  It is really humorous, could not stop smiling while reading!

 Nice one!



Author's Response: so glad you are enjoying the story so far...thrilled you found it humorous!! thanks for reading!! bambers;)

 
Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Nice ending!!!

Hahaha, payback is really a bitch!

Kudos!

 
Snowbound by kwater Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 171]
Summary:

Dean smiled at the young girl and said, "My name's Dean.  It's going to be alright you know, we'll get you to town safely." 


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 40568
[Report This] Published: 24/06/07 Updated: 09/09/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Nice nice nice!!!!

Icky spiders!!! eeeww! I don't really like them!!!

Dean riding a helicopter! Nice!

And Jen's family taking care of them!!! Super!

Nice work!!!



Author's Response: Hey so glad you enjoyed, and thanks for letting me know.  Reviews are not only appreciated but needed... I live or die, by what you guys think...lol.  Thanks for taking the time - K

 
by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
Options: [Edit] [Delete]
[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hahahahaha!

Nice one!



Author's Response: so glad you liked it and it made you  laugh!! thanks for reading!! bambers;)

 
Summary:

“What am I supposed to do Sam?!” he asked through the door.

“I DON’T CARE! FEED A SQUIRREL, PAINT A HOUSE! BUY A FRIGGIN’ BOARD GAME!”

So he did.

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Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1496
[Report This] Published: 03/07/07 Updated: 03/07/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstar
Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Big brother revenge!  Time geeky brother gets a beating in his own court!

Nice one!

 
Summary:

  Resort Banner

 

The boys win a holiday at a luxury resort - but is it really the holiday of a lifetime, or the stuff of nightmares?


Categories: General, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 55218
[Report This] Published: 09/07/07 Updated: 25/08/07


Reviewer: eye4u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue

Oh my! Its only now that I read this in full!  Good story!

A nice follow up after their first experience with the trickster!  It was definitely obvious that the trickster really can do this to them!

Not really knowledgeable in Gaelic, I never anticipated that this would be how the story would go.

Kudos!



Author's Response: Thanks for that - wow, I successfully misled you! *pats self on head*. Thank you for reading - I'm glad you enjoyed it....Jules

 
Reviewer: eye4u Signed
Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue

Oh, need to add this as well!!

Nice connect to AHBL1!!! Good choice to put this in!



Author's Response: Thanks - I just wanted the boys to have a bit of fun before the really heavy stuff started. And it did bug me why Sam had that fuel receipt....Jules