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Penname: Andromeda171 [Contact]
Real name: Jaylan
Status: Member
Member Since: 20/05/07
Website: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1360095/Andromeda171
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I just hate it when it comes to writing anything about me cuz I think am hard to describe, to sum it all am an intelligent 20-year-old poet who loves writing to death. My passion is to write till I reach the seventh sky or dive in the middle of the Atlantic, who knows maybe one day I'll win Pulitzer Prize & maybe I'll publish one of my many stories & you could get to read it. Family matters to me a lot & I love my few friendz to death even though my shitty mood usually puts me in trouble with them, I love joking & talking to funny ppl & I love the night with all its glory & all the poetry demons that visit you when the clock strikes midnight. Scary movies interest me & I wish I could write a successful scary psychological thriller( my current project, lol). I love Alexandria, it has always been an inspiration to me, the Sea is my friend, I love long walks by the beach in the afternoon, Autumn, music, dancing, meeting new ppl & movies esp. crazy inventions by Scorsese, Tarantino & my life-long guide for the world of Zombies, Romero. My inspirations are Francisco Goya, Astrology, Vlad the Emapler, Alaa El Aswani, Che Guevara, Farouk Gewaida, Dr House, Christopher Lee & Joe Satriani. I'd like to meet people who love discussions, who look for the hidden meaning behind the given sentence, who love solving sudoku & finding the missing piece of the jigsaw, it's also great to meet artists & in any field, cuz Art is a holy thing & I love knowing someone who appreciates Art for what it is, even if he/she didn't completely agree with its message.  If you think you got the guts & ready for a decent conversation then welcome aboard, but if you're not then that's not the place for ya.

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Reviews by Andromeda171
 
Summary:

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Dean wakes up in a hospital without any recollection of who he is. Instead of an ID in his pocket, there are packets of salt; and the only thing he can remember is yellow eyes.


Categories: General, Romance Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 40974
[Report This] Published: 14/08/07 Updated: 08/10/07


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 9: Up the Garden Path

Gr8 job!

Waiting for next chapter

This is getting very interesting



Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it.

 
Ice Cold by Vallana Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary: The brothers are being hunted by a new predator, but who is hunting them all?  Spoilers up to Season2 Nightshifter
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 75151
[Report This] Published: 29/08/07 Updated: 23/07/08


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed
Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome story left me wanting more

Plz update soon

I love Vicky!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you liked the story so far and that you like Vicky.  She is fun to write!

 
Summary:

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It was a demon John wasn't expecting, a hunt that he didn't count on going down exactly how it did. All he knew is that this demon got into his mind, twisted his thoughts around into a pile so dark that he couldn't even remember his own sons. This demon who somehow managed to take away everything he held dear, to make him lash out against his oldest son. It was this demon who changed his youngest son's opinion of his father forever.


Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: The Dark Horse Series
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 13027
[Report This] Published: 30/09/07 Updated: 26/11/07


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Lamb to the Slaughter

I'm very impressed, Seriously Sam

I love Grazed Knees but this one blew me, can't wait for an update

You're very talented, keep the good work



Author's Response: I'm glad that I could impress you. :) If this one blew you away, I wonder what my next story will do. Hmm... I don't want to think about keep topping myself each time, because there will be dissappointments surely. Thank you for the compliment.

 
Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Saigon Moment

WOW!

I wanna know how did John hurt Dean!

Please update, this is amazing



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are liking it. You'll find out about John hurting Dean in the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed
Date: 11/03/08 Title: Chapter 4: Twisted Hierarchy

Wow! Pretty creepy

Hungry for more, keep up the good work



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I hope you continue to enjoy the stories in TDH series.

 
Summary:

What started out as a slanging match, grew into something more for all of them. Dean is sure he hates her, but not so sure he doesn't love her too.

Pre season 1

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Categories: General, Romance, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Bruised. Not Broken
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 15695
[Report This] Published: 18/10/07 Updated: 11/11/07


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne.

Hey baby that was the most amazing story ever!
I fell in love with Camyll


The romance was amazing and touching, I cried when Camyll was hit by a car and I hate mean adults, always interfering with young innocent lovers
 
God you have such a thing with emotions Schelir and this is what draws me to your writing most
Keep up the good work
Lots of love,
Jaylan



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks sweetie. Always music to my ears, reviews. I can't get enough, I'm a cancerian so that might explain the overload of emotions. Lol.

Thanks Jay!

 
Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Remembering when...

Can I be Camyll so I can get to spend the night in the Winchesters bedroom?!

God that was amazing, great chemistry between the boys and Camyll, something rare to find in a Het story

Keep up the good work



Author's Response:

LOL!!!

Thanks Jay, glad you think it's amazing, music to my ears coming from you.

Schelz 

 
Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Background

Hey very interesting introduction

Isaac is pissing me off and the story has a Romeo & Juliet theme that I LOVE!

Heading to read more!



Author's Response:

Y'know, my sister's have read this and have said the exact same thing. Isaac pissed them right off!

Glad you like.

Schelz

 
Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne.

Mean ol' John!

I'm feeling very sorry for Camyll, I wish later on when they grow up I'd see a steamy scene between them, Dean and Camyll are just amazing together

Keep up the success, baby



Author's Response:

Thanks hun,

I agree, I think Camyll and Dean are great together too.

I really love rough, tom boy girls...and Dean hasn't had that, a girl as strong as him or as mouthy would be hard for him to accept.

Schelz

 
Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself

Well girl you made me cry, too

Amazing but poor Dean! I wanna give him a hug

Keep up the good work and hurry with chapter 5



Author's Response:

Aww hun, sorry I made you cry, I wanted to hug Dean too:(

Thanks babe

Schelz

 
Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- In The Smokey Mountains

I'm flying in a blue dream now

Amazing chappy and the scene between Camyll and Dean was so wonderful and warm, the action was also well represented here and I was biting my nails as I went along

Please update soon hunni *pleads*



Author's Response:

Thanks sweet,

I am truly stunned now, this is like the 3rd or 4th time someone has said it's action. I didn't think I was too clever at action, thanks for that.

Glad you found this chap amazing, and I think that you and everyone else who has reviwed, is double time awesome!!!

Schelz

 
Summary:

Beware!!!  No-one knows what really lurks in the dark. And No-one walks alone at night.

But what if it didn't hide in the dark? What if it was right behind you the whole time? Waiting, wanting, needing to hurt someone, to hurt you. What if that evil was part of you? Nothing but a mere shadow. Your shadow.

Watch your back!!!

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 2723
[Report This] Published: 13/11/07 Updated: 02/12/07


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstar
Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Watch your back!!!

Very good, please update more

A very interesting story



Author's Response:

Thank you Andromeda, I will update as soon as I can.

Sharky

 
Summary:

The days have closed in on Sam and Dean and they only have one more day together. What big brother Dean doesn't realize is when the deal is over so is his kid brothers life.  Thanks for AWESOME banner Floetry (bullet) Nominated for people's choice!!!

 

If I lost you --lou


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4098
[Report This] Published: 29/11/07 Updated: 29/11/07


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- If I lost you

I can't hate you Schelir, you're my best friend, but Im gonna hate you for making me cry! For making me love this beautiful short epic of sadness. Oh Dean!

You gripped the moment very smartly & skillfully & put me in the mood, I was left eyes puffy & nose runny after I finished reading it three times. They can't do that to Dean, they can't send him to hell not after what he's done for his family, they can't do this to us; poor viewers & you can't do this to me, pretty lady! Promise me something wild & funny in the near future

A+ story, you're improving day by day, lovie, keep writing

Loveeeeeeee



Author's Response:

Aww hun that's good to know;) you're defo one of my best friends!!! Sorry I made you cry, kinda...thanks for calling this a beautiful short epic of sadness;)

Niiice, gripped you and put you in the mood, only to leave you all puffy eyed and runny nosed ;) I shouldn't be happy you cried, just proud such a personal favorite could pull such emotions from you!

I hope they don't do that to Dean, I'm pretty sure they won't...

I have something already ...it's pretty funny and very wild (Whatever yo do. Don't flush!) I warn you, actually you already know how weird and freaky I am!

Thanks for the grade and stars! and for noticing inprovement in my work;)

Schelir x x

 
UNRULY by fantasycatcher Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Missouri enlists the boys help for an unusal job. This story is for my newphews - Jahlil and Jaylarni, being in their terrible two's I was greatly inspired by my diamond boys: love you!

Unruly


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5688
[Report This] Published: 02/02/08 Updated: 03/02/08


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean

Couldn't resist reading it & when I read it, couldn't stop laughing!

I loved Dean & Josh, God it was like I could see them  really infront of me & I so love Dean with kids, you made my night!



Author's Response:

Jaylan, I'm glad you couldn't resist because it means so much to me that you're a loyal fan of my work and I love your work just as much. I'm glad you found it funny and liked Dean and Josh together, makes my head swell to know that you could see them. I love Dean with kids too, thanks for this lovely review and stars.

 

 
Summary:

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Dean and Sam are in another car crash and Jamie, a doctor there, has a secret that she can't hold onto for long. The past haunts her and soon starts to haunt the brothers. Can they stop what is in store for Jamie? Or can they barely hold thenselves together?

Lots of Flashbacks, markings to show. Anyways, enjoy! Major Thanks to Jmel for the poster!!
-H


Categories: General, Romance, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: If Only My Time Could Stand Still With You
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 33921
[Report This] Published: 24/02/08 Updated: 10/04/09


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed
Date: 25/06/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow a really good chapter

please update more :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for that comment. I'm working on the next chapter as much as I can.

-H

 
Summary:

Someone from the past comes back for the Winchester brothers, and this time he has a little help. Sequel to Unhinged.

 


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 38546
[Report This] Published: 19/03/08 Updated: 28/07/08


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/06/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You can't do this!!

This is so wicked good

Hoping for a next update ;) soooooooooon

 
Summary:

Prank war challenge. Hope you get a giggle! Sam and Dean are back to school soon and Sam has a new game he wants Dean to play. (13&16)

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Categories: Wee!chester, UnGen Challenges, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3920
[Report This] Published: 13/04/08 Updated: 14/04/08


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - I double dare you

At last I got to read,

extremely funny babe, couldn't stop giggling

an A+ made me remember my hilarious Sammy & Dean after the painful finale

Keep up the good work :)



Author's Response:

Ahh hun, glad you found it funny. Thanks for the grade A+ I'm glad it helped ease the finale! God knows we need a lift after that...

Thanks again, hun.

 

 
Summary:

It's Not Over SeriesSam and Chloe become an item in this story. Chloe gets invited to move into the Winchester household by Sam. But will the others be so happy about it? Or will things grow complicated? Also, Chloe gets a job at the Daily Courier a newspaper in the small town Sam lives in. And on the side helps the Winchester boys as a sidekick. Co-written with Goldenwolf88.

 Disclaimer: We do not own any of the Original Supernatural Characters. Or any of the Smallville ones. Lupine and the Winchester kids are completely made up.

 


Categories: General, Crossovers, Romance, Wee!chester, Action, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: It's not Over Series Sam & Lana With Special guest: Chloe Sullivan .
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 26436
[Report This] Published: 15/04/08 Updated: 09/01/09


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstar
Date: 25/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Visiting the Winchesters

This is a cool story

Good job 

 
Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 25/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chloe's stair accident

Another good chappy

Looks like it's getting better & better 

 
Salvation by birdie Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

This is a tag to the season three finale. There are spoilers for the final episode so please don't enter if you don't wanna know.

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This is my homage to Cookie's wonderful story "The Long Hard Road Out Of Hell". I bow to your talent, Petra. And for those of our family in pain or afraid at the moment, I wish for peace and comfort.

Thank you to Lou and Kirsty for their ever present support and to Lou for another sweet, sweet banner.  Heart Beat 


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 764
[Report This] Published: 28/05/08 Updated: 28/05/08


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow I loved it

Sam is truly Dean's only salvation

I liked the way it was written, very unique

Keep it up :) 



Author's Response:

Hey Jaylan (cool name hun!)

Thanks so much for the review, and I hope very much to keep writing..you too.  Just read your poem - very cool!  Bev xx

 
Summary:

Set at the end of Simon Says, Dean and Sam en route to Harvelles’ Roadhouse, in answer to Ellens’ phone call summons, hole up in a quiet backwater motel, hoping for an uneventful day to catch up on their sleep and laundry. 

 

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Some days however, it's not just the Supernatural that's out to get you! 

Hurt/angsty Dean, Protective Sam 

Spoilers throughout Season one and up to and including Simon Says 

A huge Thank You to Bulletbabe  for the real pretty banner. 

My undying gratitude goes out to Bulletbabe and Birdie, for the never-ending support, advice and encouragement on this, my first ever attempt at fanfic and for the wonderful beta job. 

I'd a never done it without ya!! 

Disclaimer:  It all belongs to Kripke, I've just had some fun playing with his toys.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 17968
[Report This] Published: 30/05/08 Updated: 10/06/08


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow just wow

When is the next update? 



Author's Response:

Hey Andromeda,

Thank you for stopping by and reading/commenting and for the shiny sparkly stars.

Next/last chapter just submitted, so hopefully up soon. x Jane x

 

 
Summary:

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There was a rustle, a bang, a crunch of leaves. They were noises that made John go outside with a gun. What he didn't think about was what was outside was trying to get in to his two sleeping boys.


Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: The Dark Horse Series
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 8070
[Report This] Published: 05/06/08 Updated: 27/12/11


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Smoke and Mirrors

Wow that was pure awesomness

 This story kicks ass

Please update soooooooooon 

 
After Death by Dona300 Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Sam tries to cope wiht the events of the Season 3 finale with help from some old friends.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1604
[Report This] Published: 27/06/08 Updated: 27/06/08


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I so loved it P

So sad & so touching

Keep it up :) 

 
Summary:

Through the eyes of someone who loves Dean! Won't take a genius to figure out who...and yay!!! I made the banner myself ;)

His eyes resized banner


Categories: General, Drabbles Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 104
[Report This] Published: 12/09/08 Updated: 12/09/08


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- What did you see in my heart?

Hey it's very different from your previous stories, hun

But I like it a lot, though

Keep it up ;) 



Author's Response: Hey hun, yeah it is different! Since my muse woke up, my style feels a little different but I hope it's still good! Glad you liked it ;)

 
Summary:

 Banner by m8 Rae666

Inside the disorient mind of Sam just after Dean's death!  Awesome banner by Rae ;)

 


Categories: One Shots, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2593
[Report This] Published: 16/09/08 Updated: 16/09/08


Reviewer: Andromeda171 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Save Him

WOW! All those episode quotes left me in tears

What a teaser till the season opener, hun

Great as usual

10 stars 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the stars hun ;) I'm glad the episode quotes worked out well in this story! It's a nice compliment calling this a teaser for the season premiere.