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Penname: VBEDELL [Contact]
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Real name: Vikki BeDell Status: Member Member Since: 06/02/11 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by VBEDELL Summary:
What is a father supposed to do when he hears whispers that his fifteen-year-old son is tainted by the very thing that killed the love of his life? John Winchester uncovers the terrifying truth about his youngest son's cruel destiny and will stop at nothing to protect him from the truth. Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Dark Horse Series Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 35473 [Report This] Published: 25/01/08 Updated: 07/07/08
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Date: 09/03/12 Title: Chapter 6: Anomaly Love seeing John's dad! This was fantastic! You have such great ideas. I really like how you've treated John. I think he did the best he could with the boys in his situation. Thanks for not portraying him as a monster! Vikki Author's Response: I am glad you like my portrayal of John! I always thought the writers and a majority of fans were a bit harsh on him. Thank you for the wonderful review! :) Summary:
 The boys are investigating mysterious disappearances in logging country. Is there something supernatural in the woods? Is that what’s taken Dean? Set sometime before Season 4. New chapters added by request.
Categories: General, One Shots, Drabbles, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 5804 [Report This] Published: 18/05/09 Updated: 19/07/12
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Date: 30/01/12 Title: Chapter 25: Not so drunk as you think I am I've just discovered this story and I am really enjoying it. I sure hope you continue writing. Looking forward to more. Vikki Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you'll keep reading and letting me know what you think!
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Date: 06/02/12 Title: Chapter 26: Meanwhile, back at the ranch... I'm really loving this story! I just wanted you to know that I'm looking forward to more. My guess on the "prize" Dean was after...his cell phone. Am I right? Thanks for sharing your wonderful story. Vikki Author's Response: Thanks, Vikki, that means a lot! Nope, not the cell phone--but the answer is up in the chapter I just posted. Enjoy! Summary:
An ancient witch poisons Sam and Dean during a confrontation. One of them barely makes it out unchanged, but for the other trouble will only keep multiplying. Read to find out which one. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 15568 [Report This] Published: 20/09/10 Updated: 10/10/10
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Date: 19/05/11 Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue one word? love Author's Response: Add a 'you' at the end of that and you're where I am right now ;) Summary:
Dean arrives at Lisa's an exhausted and emotional wreck. Set immediately after "Swan Song" Categories: General, One Shots, Romance, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4199 [Report This] Published: 11/10/10 Updated: 11/10/10
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Date: 28/04/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Absolutely loved it! I think you captured the agony Dean is feeling really well. It was a very enjoyable read! Vikki Summary: What happened when Sam left for Stanford? How did John and Dean cope with Sam's absence, and how did Sam adjust to his new normal life while his brother and father were out hunting the evil he'd run away from? Pre-series. No spoilers. (Rated for language)
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 36161 [Report This] Published: 29/11/10 Updated: 29/11/10
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Date: 05/05/11 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Disemboweled Wow this was great. I think you've captured the voices and emotions very well. I look forward to the rest of the story! Summary:
After a hunt the boys have to go to the Roadhouse for help. Set after 'No Exit' and 'Born Under A Bad Sign' and part of the h/c challenge on OhSam! This is based on a prompt by newspapertaxis Banner made by the awesome Chasidern
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 13726 [Report This] Published: 29/12/10 Updated: 02/01/11
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 Date: 09/04/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Just have to say that I thought you did a great job capturing Ellen's voice. I really enjoyed the story and look forward to reading more. Summary: 2nd in Fight the Good Fight series but can be read alone. My version of what happened between Bobby and John the last time they spoke to one another and their fight that ended with Bobby threatening John.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1748 [Report This] Published: 12/02/11 Updated: 13/02/11
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 Date: 05/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I'm relatively new to Supernatural, but I really enjoyed this story. I think it easily explains the fight between Bobby and John. You did an excellent job of bringing it all to life. Thanks! Summary:
"He came here because he made a promise, not because it's what he really wants." Missing scene from Dean's year without Sam. Rated M for adult themes but not explicit.
Thanks to Chasidern for another amazing banner. Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 935 [Report This] Published: 17/03/11 Updated: 17/03/11
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Date: 25/12/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Really enjoyed this look into Dean's year. I've thought a lot about what he must have gone through, especially at first. Thanks for putting it to words! Vikki Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I think even in death, Sam was the one thing that kept Dean going. If not for his promise to Sam, he would have never made it. I would like to have seen more of the year without Sam on the show but I think it's too late for that now. I still have a few fic ideas floating around in my head though. :) Thanks again! Summary: A quick little one-shot. Outsider’s view of 6.1, Exile on Main Street. I’m not sure how to explain this. There are no real spoilers but it assumes you already know the ep. Slightly revised from my original post.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1532 [Report This] Published: 05/04/11 Updated: 05/04/11
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Date: 13/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This was a great story! What an unusual pov. I really liked the different views of spotting Dean around town and how he just didn't seem to be comfortable there. I think you've captured both Dean's angst and the djinn's feelings too. This was fantastic, thanks for sharing such a interesting story. Vikki Summary: Sam's a good student, popular with his teachers and friends. All he wants is to learn and fit in. Somehow, that just isn't enough for some people.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 12729 [Report This] Published: 05/04/11 Updated: 04/05/11
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Date: 27/08/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Absolutely loved this! I really liked the fact that you didn't make John out to be a jerk. I thought Sam's revenge was just sweet! Thanks for such a great story. Vikki Summary:
Pre-series. Dean is in Palo Alto checking up on Sam when Jess accidentally hits him with her car in the middle of a torrential rain storm. Much Hurt/Sick Dean and Caring!Sam. Categories: Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 2905 [Report This] Published: 06/06/11 Updated: 09/06/11
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Date: 29/03/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 This is a great beginning to a fun story. I'm looking forward to more! Just anticipating Sam's reaction is great. Can't wait to see what you do with it. Waiting for more! Summary:
 Sometimes silence speaks louder than words. A series of brotherly moments, wee!Chester through early Season 4. Previously published in the Blood Brothers 3 fanzine.Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, Action, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: Dean W., John W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5616 [Report This] Published: 31/08/11 Updated: 31/08/11
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Date: 04/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: More than Words I love this story. You described the silences so well! Have you thought of continuing this through seasons 5 & 6? They would be great! Hey there! Thanks for the review and the stars, I appreciate them! Actually, I have a whole list of other pre-series through Season 4 moments I'd love to do, but I hadn't thought of Seasons 5&6...mostly because I haven't watched them yet. *ashamed* I just bought Season 5 on DVD, though, so maybe inspiration will hit as I go through it. If you liked this story, you might like another I have up, "Touched by Fire." I'd love to hear what you think of it, if you check it out--or any of my other stories. Thanks again! Hope to see you around! Summary:
Sam and Dean investigate the brutal murders of young virgins, and Dean is arrested under suspicion of being the murderer. Can Sam get him out before the police discover who the brothers really are... and before Dean dies in custody? Challenge to write strong!Sam and a Sam heavy story, warnings for occasional bad language and for season 5 spoilers.... Also extreme hurt!Dean... Categories: General Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 47044 [Report This] Published: 15/10/11 Updated: 19/11/11
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Date: 20/11/11 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 That was absolutely wonderful! Not only did I like the chicken, but the potatoes and veggies were great too! And dessert was fantastic! Seriously, I really enjoyed this story and am so looking forward to the next one! Thanks so much for sharing with all of us. You're great! Vikki Author's Response: OMG, thank you, I'm blushing...it's people like you that make this all the more worthwhile!!!
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Date: 15/10/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I loved this chapter. The premise looks very interesting, I look forward to more! Vikki
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Date: 20/10/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Just a quick note...I liked the chicken!
Eagerly anticipating more! Vikki
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you!!!! Next chapter soon...
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Date: 28/10/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 WOW! I can't wait for more! I'm anxious to see how Sam saves him! Thanks for such a fun ride! Vikki Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review, it really does mean so much to me!
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Date: 06/11/11 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 All I can say is I want more! MORE MORE MORE PLEASE! Thanks, Vikki Author's Response: Okay! Next chapter tomorrow!!! Or the next day.... Summary:
Dean has always wanted a family, the whole nine yards, and now he finally has the chance. But when Michael plans to steal that family from him and Lucifer comes for Sam, can Dean protect the life he's always wanted from the brother he will always love? Spoilers for the whole series x Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 6045 [Report This] Published: 18/11/11 Updated: 29/11/11
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Date: 21/11/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Family is everything Great so far! Of course the obvious name for her would be Mary, but you could also go with Ellen or Jo too. I look forward to more! Vikki Summary:
Every 22 years something crawls from the bowels of the Earth to wreak havoc and death. This time, it is back early, and it's escalating. Bobby joins the Winchesters in this hunt. Hurt!Dean, angst, Hurt!Sam. AU Set season 6, roughly around Ep 12 This story is written as a gift, to the wonderful Tree66 for hosting this site, for making a place for us, and for giving me kick ass reviews!!!
Categories: General Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 67392 [Report This] Published: 19/11/11 Updated: 19/01/12
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Date: 18/12/11 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 This story is getting better and better. I'm really looking forward to more! Eagerly anticpating more! Thanks, Vikki Author's Response: Poor, sick Dean...I'm not giving a thing away...you'll have to wait!!!
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Date: 20/11/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 2 I am loving this story! I think the way you opened it in Chapter one with the animals in the snow scene was fantastic! So creative! I'm looking forward to more! Thanks. Vikki Author's Response: Tahnk you for taking the time to leave me some words, I love it! Well, off to torture our boys!!!
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Date: 22/11/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 WOW ! I got chills with the cave scene. I can't wait for more! thanks again! Vikki Author's Response: Thank you so much!! More soon, hopefuly later today... all going well..
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Date: 01/12/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Am still loving it. Keep it coming! Thanks, Vikki Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!!! I am wrinting anothother chapter right now...I hope you like hurt!boys....
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Date: 15/12/11 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 I am still loving this story. Sorry I haven't written a review lately, but I only get to read at work and it's been crazy lately. I really liked the description of the snowy "hell" (which is my opinion of winter too). I agree with Tree and would love to curl up with Dean in a cabin in front of the fire! wink wink, Thanks again and I look forward to more. Vikki Author's Response: Vikki, thank you! This time of year it's hard to find the time to read, so I really appreciate you taking the time to do that, as well as review...
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Date: 21/12/11 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Another great chapter. You know I just love a hurt Dean! Anyway I'm looking forward to more! Vikki Author's Response: Thank you so much...I really appreciate every time you review, and I can't believe how lucky I am to have such generous readers...and tolerant.... |
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