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Reviews by POOKEE Summary:
 John in Hell knew exactly what was happening in Cold Oak. In fact he had known what was happening to his boys the whole time since he made the deal. Now he had the front row seat to Sam’s death and Dean’s deal. And just how did he know?? The demons in Hell made sure he knew, that’s how… And how did he get out??
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With heartfelt thanks you whoever nominated my fic for Round 14 of SNFA over at Sensue Domain, and all those of you who voted. I am humbled and stoked.
Winner Worst Nighmare Category (Horror)
Runner Up Best Story from overall category winners and then... To win both the UnGen 08 categories this fic was nominated in is exciting and humbling. Thank you from the bottom of my heart to everyone who voted. A special hug to whoever nominated me, I am simply blown away.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 26003 [Report This] Published: 05/01/08 Updated: 08/04/08
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
 Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 COOKIE, THIS PIECE IS A BRIGHT INTELLIGENT TAKE ON SOMETHING WE HAVE ALL WONDERED ABOUT AND SHUDDERED AT THE THOUGHT --- HELL. YOU SO BEAUTIFULLY AND AT THE SAME TIME, "TERRIFYINGLY" EXAMINED JOHN'S RELATIONSHIP WITH HIS BOYS. WE HAVE ALL QUESTIONED JOHN'S SOMETIMES PUTTING HIS QUEST FOR THE DEMON BEFORE HIS SONS, BUT THIS FIRST CHAPTER REVEALS THAT, YES JOHN MAY HAVE BEEN MISGUIDED IN HIS QUEST AT TIMES BUT HIS BOYS WITHOUT A DOUBT ARE HIS LOVES - HIS LIFEFORCE, HIS INNER STRENGTH. AFTER READING THIS CHAPTER, THE FINAL SCENE BETWEEN DEAN AND JOHN IN AHBL2 MAKES PERFECT SENSE. THROUGH JOHN AND DEAN'S EYES AND EXPRESSIONS - THE FATHER IS SO PROUD OF HIS SONS AND SO LOVES THEM AND WITH A SIMPLE NOD GIVES DEAN ALL A FATHER COULD EVER GIVE BACK - LOVE. YOU HAVE CAPTURED THIS COMPLETELY. CARRY ON - GREAT WRITING. POOK Author's Response: Thank-you so much Pookee, what a wonderful review! John's love has been fierce if not conventional, a fact no one-one on Team Winchester would ever dispute. I'm stoked that you liked this in my work. "Beautiful and terrifiying" such high praise - I'm glowing!!
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Set after BUABS. There is no rest for the weary. An old friend and a new hunt pits Dean against the elements and Sam against himself as the brothers fight for each other and for survival. T for language and themes. Banner by bulletbabe. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 99433 [Report This] Published: 29/01/08 Updated: 04/05/08
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
 Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Watch GAELIC, THE PREMISE OF THIS STORY IS MESMERIZING. BUABS WAS TRULY HAUNTING AND VERY DIFFICULT TO WATCH ON SO MANY LEVELS - MURDER BY SAM'S HANDS, SAM'S MANHANDLING OF JO, DEAN'S BEATING AND SHOOTING AND THE LINE THAT TRULY TORE AT MY HEARTS ..."I'D RATHER DIE". YOUR LOOK INTO WHAT WENT ON WITHIN THE PSYCHE OF THE WINCHESTER BROTHERS WILL PROVE (ONCE AGAIN WITH YOUR EXTRAORDINARY TALENT) TO BE PROVACATIVE, EMOTIONAL AND INSPIRING AT THE LEAST. THE RESPECT THAT DEAN AND ABE GIVE TO EACH OTHER THROUGH THE SMALLEST OF WORDS AND EXPRESSIONS SPEAKS WONDERS. ABE'S SILENTLY ASKING PERMISSION TO HELP DEAN UP, HIS USE OD DEAN'S FULL NAME. THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN THE TWO TAKES ON A FATHER / SON QUALITY WITHOUT THE "SOLDIER'S DUTY" THAT DEAN IS SO USED TO. AS A READER, BEING A FLY ON THE WALL, SEEING ABE'S UNDERSTANDING OF THE INTERACTIONS THAT TAKE PLACE BETWEEN THE BROTHERS - THE "LIFETIME OF LOYALTY" BETWEEN THEM AND ABE'S TOTAL UNDERSTANDING OF THE INTENSE LEVELS OF PAIN BOTH ARE IN TRULY SETS THE STAGE FOR A WONDERFULLY ENGAGING STORY TO COME. GOD BLESS AND CARRY ON, POOK Author's Response: POOK!!! I did a little dance when I saw you. Good thing I work from home or people may have stared. This episode dug into me and I couldn't let it go -- and I didn't have just a one shot in me, so... In the Light was born. I created Abe before I found myself nicely attached to Bobby, so I want his relationship with Dean--and Sam to an extent--to be just what you've said. I hope you enjoy the next part and the ones to come after. Thank you as always for your kind words and the time you spend with me. Slainte, Gaelic
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: See Gaelic, My apologies for not reviewing sooner. This is my busy season and time slips by too quickly. I always feel like I'm on a scavenger hunt when I read your work - so many little nuances to find and digest! It 's so amazing to view the many layers of the Winchesters: Dean, the ultimate guardian reverting to a boyish quality while playing with "his dog" ; the need for Sam to hear from Dean that he is upset and haunted by what happened with and by Sam and that Dean forgives him; the need for Dean to hear from Sam that Dean let him down, abandoned him, failed to keep him safe and the hear Sam's forgiving words. So simple yet so difficult for these brothers. The interaction between Maggie and Dean (please be kind to her and those "who may have age similarities"). Maggie seems to embrace the same qualities as Dean - heartache, pain, loyalty, respect. Their interaction is definitely a character study or a "study of characters". I find the relationship between Abe and Dean enduring. Finally, (pre Bobby) someone who can ground Dean with unique guidance and deep respect - something found in a father/son relationship. Oddly, Abe seems to have a similar relationship with Sam that Sam had with his father. Abe sees all the god given qualities in Sam that he sees in Dean, yet he protects his relationship with Sam. Never truly trusting - not yet. Abe is honored to see into the foundations of the Winchesters: Dean, John's Warrior Sam, John's Gift. Great... as always! God Bless & Keep You, Pookee/Janet
Author's Response: Hi Pookee! Thanks so much for this and I apologize for not replying sooner. I missed it. Bad Gaelic. But I see it now, and that's what matters! You really get to the crux of the message I work to put out with the characters in the chapter -- thank you for that. I will be kind to Maggie, no worries. She's inspired by one of my good friends, a truly amazing woman. I only hope I do her justice. I am pleased that you see the nuances between Dean and Abe and Sam and Abe -- I hope the "why" becomes clear to you as you read on. Thanks again -- and keep your chin up through this busy season. I look forward to seeing you when you have time to read again. Best always,
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 02/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Look Gaelic, This chapter amazingly captures the relationship between the brothers. Their ability to think and feel as one; to know each other's needs, to feel each other's fears. As these men were raised "in each other's pockets" it would only be fitting to have a relationship and connection such as they do. Your depiction of Sam's sensation that Dean was near and of Dean's images of Sam's life with him were so touching: scraped knees, training wheels, homework, holding on and surviving are words that bring such emotion to the reader. Abe seems to bring out Sam's raw emotions throughout this chapter but yet seems to inject Sam with calming effects as well. Love the subtle way Sam keeps his guard with Abe - unable to look him in the eyes, fearful of what they may tell Abe. The symbolism you present between the wolf, dog and Dean is masterful. The wolf cries for lost spirits to return to earth - both men seem to cry out to each other to keep them grounded --- human. The wolf(Dean), devoted to family, expert hunter and guardian. So touching, so true. The brothers relationship is so dynamic in your writings and this chapter continues that - Dean's need to hear Sam's not going anywhere, the depth of their relationship - the intertwining of their hearts you sybolized in the brothers physical closeness throughout the night, Sam's warmth injecting life back into Dean and into his own self. My heart breaks as you present a chance for Sam's needed abolution from Dean, yet he is denied these words so many times --- each brother needing this absolution as much as the other. Words come so hard to the Winchester's it seems. I enjoyed so much the descriptions of Abe's ancestry, his ties to the past and the earth. We as a people need to learn from these proud, special people, you love and deep respect of these Americans are reflected in your words and heart Gaelic. God Bless, Keep You and Carryon Talented Author, Pookee/Janet
Author's Response: Aw, Pook how I've missed you! I'm go glad life released you long enough to read this chapter. :) I am touched by the time you take to offer me such fantastic feedback and so happy you've enjoyed the story. I am in awe of the Native American people and see any culture rich in tradition (like the Irish Celtic culture which is ingrained in me) to be something that should be respected. I hope that subsequent chapters I write and you read don't let you down. Thank you for spending time with me. Gaelic
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 18/03/08 Title: Chapter 4: Appear Gaelic, This story is a unique look at the men of Winchester, although battling the physical demon at hand, the story excels at its autopsy of the battle both these men have been waging against their own inner demons. Your simplistic words signify the bond between the brothers, however disfunctional the bond evolved, it still provides the foundations for their lives and the demons within. The simple question of "Dean?" followed by "I'm here" speaks of the strength of their bond. The men's need for physical closeness solidifies the bond but also quells a need in them to feel that very bond - to regain the comfort with one another - to trust one another again. One can see through Dean's thoughts, the deep cuts his father inflicted on his sons - duties assessed well beyond their years - Dean watch out for Sammy. Abe mimicks John's authoritativeness through his orders to Dean - "Dean stick with your brother, don't let him out of your sight". Dean again is called upon to be the soldier his father had cultivated, snaps to attention and into focus - Sammy. Again, through all the pain and disappointment these men have been through, their overpowering sense of family and devotion will ride them through the healing process. Sam has memorized Dean's smell, his exact movements, his inner soul extracted from the stories held in Dean's eyes. The healing begins with the men through the simple utterance of "Sorry" and "You don't have to be" - these phrases spoken and heard on a whole different plain than the one they were uttered in. The walls between the two brothers begin to crumble as Dean admits "I'm barely hanging on" and Sam's determination to be his strength. How fitting that the entity they search is a symbol of a childhood lost, innocence destroyed, duty before freedom. The very things these men seek to find, to rebuild, to come to terms with. Abe so dearly achieves what John never could with Sam - civility. He physically reassures Sam that healing will come to those who will let it, that it is possible to forgive without forgetting - and yet not affecting the men's need of each other's love - not to forget in darkness what we learn in the light. Beautiful Gaelic, God Bless and Keep You, Janet
Author's Response: You're gonna make me cry. Not that that's too hard these days, but, I thank you for this. Sincerely. Your reviews are always treasured, Pook. They come from you heart and I know when I read them that you've not only ready my story -- which on it's most basic level is meant to entertain -- but you've also read *me*. And there are elements of each writer in every story, yeah? The childhood lost is something I can relate to -- but you see right through to what I'm intended to tell... the ikiryoh isn't simple the result of an evil spell... it's a symbol of something both Sam and Dean have to come to grips with. And I hope that as I weave the final two chapters, I can bring the paths of this story together to form a journey that was worth your time. Best to you always, Gaelic
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 03/04/08 Title: Chapter 5: Stare Gaelic, I must apologize again for the lateness of the review and for its quality even before I start. Fatigue is beginning to set in and my creativity is waning. Forgive me. This chapter continually examines and force feeds the boys relationship with the reader. The responsibility that Dean must bear - although willingly - now and since Sam was four is heartbreaking. Responsibility levied on Dean as a parental figure yet similiar in age of his charge. This responsibility given to and accepted by Dean - the lifetime of promises made to Sam overwhlems Dean but never beats him. Dean desperately needs someone to take care of him, to guide him and he finds this more and more from Abe. We all have been given roles to perform in life but no matter how strong the will is to bring those roles to fruition, we all physically and mentally stumble, needing help getting to our feet. Dean is no different. The reader can see this as Dean sobs over Sam's pain and allows Abe to help if but for a brief moment, then the soldier returns to complete his mission - protecting Sam. The phrase that Dean relates to "the emptiness felt when you know you are the last in order of importance to someone most important to him" - a child , grown or not, should never have to feel that way, yet many do and never come to terms with it. Dean's fortress seems to be fading - allowing some feeling and needed healing to creep in. The mere act of telling Abe "I need your help" is a great turning point for Dean. Ironic that Dean asks Abe for help - a loner ver similiar to Dean. Dean will hopefully realize he is so important in the lives of many who consider him a parent - Sammy and a son - Bob and Abe. He needs to let himself feel again not just exist. Both Sam and Dean need to forgive themselves before they can truly forgive each other. Hopefully the strength of the people around them will allow for it to happen. This chapter of lost innocence for Claire, for Sam, for Dean begins a new trail as Sam reveals his belief of his responsibility for Dean's pain, Mary's death and John recruitment of Dean ..... and with Dean's plea to Sam to forgive himself. Powerful. God Bless and Keep You, Pook/Janet
Author's Response: Pook, I swear to God every time I get one of your reviews I end up with a lump in my throat. You have the uncanny ability to read between my lines. I write what I write, but there are thoughts and feelings inside that don't always make it to the paper -- yet you pick up on them anyway. Wow. Just. Yeah, thank you. Thank you for seeing power in my attempt at imagry. Take your time reading and reviewing -- anytime I get a review from you I smile because I know that means you've gotten a break and I'm happy for that. :) I will respond to your thoughtful email from earlier this week soon. I'm trying to work my way through emails while Rowan sleeps on a Saturday morn... *Gaelic scrambles* Best to you, GS
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 25/04/08 Title: Chapter 6: Glimpse Gaelic, As usual, I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and again your writing exceeds the mere story, your words evoking a deeper meaning - a deeper focus. You have set within the chapter the Winchesters' standard of loyalty and love. This standard both men will need to remember in order to mend - to feel whole again. The subtle nuances of things remembered by the men strengthen the foundations of their relationship - the loyalty, the love. Sam's remembrance of Dean's pledge to keep him safe to save him is so important in the path to healing. The brothers are truly "each others heartbeat". Their need of each other's touch- both physical and mental - in order to bring them through this ordeal, to feel safe and grounded is staggering. So many people, so many things have been ripped from their lives that each man does not want the other to let go for fear of losing one another. Sam's flashback to when Dean cared for him seems to solidify the foundation of the men's life even more. Almost a complete cycle of life is occurring - the parent rearing the child, allowing the child to mature, to live and finally the child caring for the parent when duty calls. Remembering Dean as the "absolute strength and constant presence" Sam realizes it is his time to return the love and respect that his brother bestowed on him. One can see a metamorphosis within Sam as he finally comes to understand that Dean and John never were far from him. Their frequent clandestined visits to California, his knowledge of John singing to him as a baby. The symbolism of Sam's view of Dean's hands versus his own is so poignant. Sam's are graceful/scarless due to the workings of Dean's sturdy and scarred hands. Sam realizes that his hands, his life has been nothing like Dean's by one reason alone - because of Dean - his love his protection. Your writing allows the reader to see an inner darkness leave Sam as he lets go of the pent up anger he has harbored for so many days, months, years. He doesn't blame Dean, he believes in Dean's words again - believes in his brtoher, totally. The brothers begin a dialog between each other, the stories they need to share - the road back to brotherhood and trust. Wonderful writing, and as usual, piece of your heart embedded in each word. God Bless and Keep You, Janet Author's Response: Pookee, thank you so much for this. As you know, I've been struggling to get back to normal after that unexpected surgery, and have been working on Chapter 8 of this story. Seeing your reaction to this chapter encourages me to push on and write the end as I'd always planned. Thank you for your constant reviews and gracious words. I'm honored that you take time for me -- even before May 1st!! Best to you, Gaelic Summary: Tag For Dream A Little Dream. I don't do a lot of tags but I HAD to do this one, Dean's dream so hit home with me.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1837 [Report This] Published: 12/02/08 Updated: 12/02/08
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 19/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 TERRY, BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING. IT CAPTURES THE REASON OF WHY I AM MESMERIZED BY THESE CHARACTERS. THE SCENE WITH DEAN AND BOBBY IN THE JUNK YARD HAS ALWAYS BEEN ON THE TOP OF MY LIST -- SO MUCH EMOTION AND PAIN - BOBBY'S MOVE TO THE FOREFRONT AS A FATHER FIGURE FOR DEAN. THE SCENE WITH DEAN FIGHTING HIMSELF IS GOLD - IT BLEEDS OF ALL THE PAIN DEAN HAS ENDURED DURING HIS SHORT LIFE. YOUR VIEW AND INSIGHT INTO THESE PIVITAL SCENES (AS WELL AS OTHERS) AND INSIGHT INTO DEAN'S MIND ARE SO POIGNANT AND MASTERFULLY WRITTEN. CARRY ON, POOKEE/JANET Summary:
en·rap·ture (ĕn-răp'chər)
This is the next installment in the Sara Powers storyline, for all of you that have begged and pleaded to hear more about Sara and her family I hope you enjoy. Happy Valentines Day to you all. Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sara's Stories Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 80815 [Report This] Published: 14/02/08 Updated: 01/06/08
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 19/02/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 K, I'VE YET TO FORGIVE YOU FOR THE ENDING OF THE LAST SARA SAGA! :) BUT, I FINALLY BROKE DOWN AND CREPT UP ON THE FIRST THREE CHAPTERS OF THIS STORY. YOUR STORIES ALWAYS SEEM TO TRAP ME AND DRAP ME INTO THEM - ESPECIALLY THESE CHARACTERS. THIS STORY IS NO DIFFERENT. PLEEEASE LET THIS STORY HAVE A HAPPY ENDING. CARRY ON, POOKEE/JANET
Author's Response: Ah...Janet, now you're making me feel bad.. :( I'll just have to make sure I make it up to you in this story ;) Then again, I might not....lol. Hope you continue to enjoy - Kel
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Kel, I've finally figured it out! You enjoy slowing tormenting your readers with Sara's and Dean's pain. ...You do this to a perfection!....:) Great chapter. The depth of the characters in these stories are weaved so beautifully one never wants the chapters to end. Carry on talented author, Pookee/Janet ***Look. Mom, no typo's*** Yeah!
Author's Response: Me...torment, never ;)
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 02/03/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Kel, You finally did it, I'm completely sucked into another Sara story. I hope I don't get hurt again!!!! lol I truly enjoy your writing, so true to life, using such little simple things in life to evoke deep emotions within the characters and your readers as well. Carry on, Pookee/Janet Author's Response: Aw, Janet thanks, that's so sweet. I'm happy I've got you back in my clutches and just remember I'm basically a nice person so you should be safe ;) ...
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 19/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Kel, Great last two chapters! The relationships between the Winchesters, Sara and her family are so endearing and at the same time heartbreaking. The tenderness and love you reflect in these relationships can only be an outgrowth of what is reflected inside your home. Perfect as usual, Pook
Author's Response: What a nice think to say Pook, I gotta say that Sara's house does reflect my own in a lot of ways, though I'm not lucky enough to have Sam and Dean living in my spare room...*sigh* oh, well gotta leave something for the fantasies ;) Glad you're diggin this one - Kel
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 31/05/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 KEL, FREDO'S SPOT ON ... THE DETAILS OF THE COUPLE'S RELATIONSHIP, THE LITTLE STOLEN MOMENTS BETWEEN THEM, THE RAW EMOTION BOTH CHARACTERS EMIT ARE WHAT DRAWS THE READERS TO YOUR WORK. I CERTAINLY ENJOY THE SLOW PACE OF THE STORY. I COMPARE IT TO A LITTLE "FOREPLAY" BEFORE "CONSUMATION" LOL. LOVE THE CHAPTER AS IT SUBTLY SLAPS DEAN INTO REALITY - ALLOWING HIM TO SEE HOW MANY PEOPLE TRULY CARE FOR AND ABOUT HIM AND HIS RELATIONSHIP WITH SARA. HE TRULY HAS AN EXTENDED FAMILY - FROM SARA'S BROTHER TOM - THE SWIFT HUG, PROVIDING FOOD AND COFFEE - THE NURSE BRINGING HIM A CHANGE OF CLEAN CLOTHES, SAMMY'S TELEPHONE CALL TO WORRIED FAMILY MEMBERS - TRULY DEAN DOES HAVE A FAMILY. I CERTAINLY LOVE TOM'S DESCRIPTION OF JACK - LOYAL, BRAVE, STUBBORN - WAS HE TALKING ABOUT JACK OR DEAN? YOU ALWAYS CAPTURE THE ESSENCE OF SHARING YOUR HEART WITH SOMEONE BY MERE TOUCHES, THE SOUND OF THEIR VOICE, THE INABILITY TO DENY THEM ANYTHING. YOUR WRITING OF THESE LOVERS TRULY MUST BE AN EXTENSION OF YOUR OWN RELATIONSHIP AND AS A WOMAN WHO HAS BEEN MARRIED FOR TWENTY THREE YEARS AND STILL MY HUSBAND AND I LAUGH AND LOVE AS WE DID ON OUR HONEYMOON - I CAN SAY YOU ARE TRULY BLESSED. BEAUTIFUL WRITING AS USUAL, POOK
Author's Response: Guh, Pook, I just about cried when I first read this review.. that's just the sweetest thing just about anyone's ever said about my writing. As a woman that's been married to her highschool sweetheart for the last 14 years I guess I'm all about comittment. So glad you enjoyed and thank you again for the lovely, lovely review.
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 14/06/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Kel, I felt a little voyeuristic when reading this chapter. Your writing has the reader feeling they are not an outsider looking in but as if they are there in the lovers heads. This couple is truly meant for each other - Dean's constant presence and strength, always there for Sara, always drawing her into his "safety". In one paragraph about Sara, you discribed her lines about her sparkling eyes in such a way that I thought my husband wrote those words. So many times as I have stated "I look like the crypt keeper!", my husband will reply with love those exact words. Your writing masters the artform - delicately turning up the "heat" of the couples intimate moments without stepping over the line into more graphic territory, leaving your readers a little breathless and always wanting more. Beautiful, Pook Author's Response: Pook, I LOVE your reviews, they always make me feel so warm and tingly ;) Glad you enjoyed Sara and Dean, I always have so much fun writing the two of them together. And as you've probably realized I don't do graphic....lol. I'm just one that likes to let the readers imagination fill in the details ;) Catch you on the next one - Kel ;)
Summary:
Dean's been to Hell and back, now it's time to get Sam back too...
Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: A War with No Front Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3113 [Report This] Published: 01/06/08 Updated: 01/06/08
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 06/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Bayre, What a wonderful take on Dean's "Resurrection". You've nailed so many of the nuances of Dean's character - his ability/his need to "lean" on Bobby, telling Sam he sent him "Home" and his never ending need to see and feel Sam. You present an interesting thought with regard to Dean's torture and duration in Hell - time spent while only a week in Hell seemed like decades for Dean. Also compelling is the effects of the torture on Dean while in Hell - something Dean will push to the background and move Sam to the foreground. You've presented an interesting question - although Hell definitely put Dean through torturous pain and loneliness, Hell's angels unwittingly may have given Dean more power and weapons to wage the Winchester War. Dean seems to have a new sixth sense about him, an unspoken knowledge of things surrounding him, of things Hell has given up to him and Dean seems to have a renewed energy to defend "what is his Sam and so much more." I love the fact that Dean's body vanished after death -- makes his return that much more conceivable. Also love his response to Ruby's question of being one of them now. Great. Always enjoy your truly talented work. Carry On, Pook Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind, and well thought out comments. Laura Summary:
It seems that lately, wherever Sam goes… Dean knows where he is… Crack!Fic (My attempt at humour). Set in Season 3 Categories: Humor, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 817 [Report This] Published: 06/06/08 Updated: 06/06/08
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 09/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Untitled RAE, HOW MUCH SUGAR HAVE YOU BEEN CONSUMING?! I THINK I MIGHT HAVE HAD TOO MUCH SUGAR AS WELL BECAUSE IN MY SICK WARPED MIND ALL I COULD IMAGINE WAS DEAN TAKING SAM TO THE VETERINARY CLINIC FOR THE IMPLANT! ALWAYS LOVE YOU WIT! POOK
Author's Response: Not enough :P I still need more! I love sugar! It's weird you should mention taking Sam to a vet... 'cause I kept thinking how I should have combined it with one of those ID chips that dogs have! :D Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it. Summary:
Mary's been dead for five years and John's no closer to finding the Yellow Eyed Demon but may have to face a demon of his own. Rated M for mature subject matter and language. Categories: Wee!chester, Romance, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 39170 [Report This] Published: 14/08/08 Updated: 30/09/08
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 10/09/08 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Girl, I must fess up, I'm a lurker and a freeloader! I've been reading "Daddy's" religiously but not a review to be written! I truly am enjoying the story. Your faithful writing of the character's personalities are so true to the show. The relationship between Dean and Jewels just slays me, the thoughts that John has of himself as a man, to be loved, to be wanted breaks my heart, but the words that truly touched me were those relating to Dean's looking up at the Cross on the alter and praying for his Dad. Truly enjoy your talents as an author, Pook Author's Response: Hey Pook! So glad you stopped by and thanks for the kind review. Sometimes I think my erotic thoughts and my potty mouth keep people from admitting they read my stuff. So glad you’re enjoying this one. Hope to have it finished up in the next little while, then it’s off to post one about Sam and a truly “wicked” witch. Take care and thanks again. Wayward Author
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 23/09/08 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Girl, God, I'm stupid. I knew what supernatural being Mari is but the stupid truck just hit me as to who she is!!! LOL Great writing as usual - love the dynamic between Dean and Jewels. Carry on wayward author, Pook Author's Response: Pook!
Thanks! I was wondering if anyone would recognize her name or her modus operandi. You not stupid, you smart.
Summary: Spoilers for Season 4. Dean finds his saving grace only to lose her.
Jewels Downey is an OFC from 'Daddy's Gone a Hunting' Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 34525 [Report This] Published: 24/11/08 Updated: 27/02/09
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 24/01/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 GIRL, YOU GOT ME HOOKED FROM THE FIRST CHAPTER, AGAIN! AND AGAIN I'VE BEEN READING FOR FREE! **HANGS HEAD AND PLEADS FOR FORGIVENESS**. GREAT WRITING AS ALWAYS. POOK Author's Response: Pook!!!! You know you'll always get a pass from me. Thanks for reviewing again. I appreciate all the reviews on this site because if it wasn't for the read count, it would just be me and the crickets at ff.net. Summary:
Winchesters always needed protecting, from themselves as much as anything else – so maybe it was no surprise that Mama added all that thyme and basil and oregano into spaghetti sauce every time a Winchester crossed their doorstep. Categories: General, One Shots, Romance, Wee!chester, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 40335 [Report This] Published: 04/12/08 Updated: 09/11/09
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 24/11/09 Title: Chapter 6: Against the chill that finds the bone Hey, I have been a lurker, shucking my responsibilities as a reviewer and as such, I am merely a lowly moocher! Your writings always bring a smile to my face and sometimes a blush or two! I shall say a prayer for both of us, that we may continue to celebrate life as it comes to us! Pook Author's Response: No worries. I've not been a good author and responding to comments in a timely fashion. ;) Thank you so much for your kind words about my writing. It always makes me happy to know that people are enjoying my work, despite the blush or two... ;) And I shall say a prayer for both of us as well! Summary:
What happened before, during and after Flagstaff. A tag to Dark Side of the Moon and my own story A Happy Remembrance. Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 61564 [Report This] Published: 20/06/11 Updated: 05/01/13
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed
Date: 04/08/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Haven't reviewed in a long time, but this story definitely intrigues the h*ll out of me. The subject of Dean's having to provide for Sam when John was gone for lengths of time always left a dark question in my mind. You have intelligently wandered in as a fly on the wall and peeled back John and Dean's layers of hurt and guilt for all of us to see. Wonderful and insightful writing. Pook Author's Response: Hi Sorry for the delay in replying, glad that you stopped and reviewed my little story and that you are enjoying this. Mary x |
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