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Damnations by ThePasserby Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

[SEQUEL TO DIMENSIONS]

Sam tried to tell himself it was nothing at first, just his imagination; but more often than not Dean was shutting the laptop when he entered the room, taking off to undisclosed areas of the library during research lulls, and staring off into space in deep thought when he thought Sam wasn't paying attention. Sam was no idiot; Dean was hiding something.

After Anna's death in April, Dean is more than messed up. But what if death is only one-dimensionsal? Can Dean fight the curses that seem to follow him and the ones he loves, or will he learn too late that all of them are meant to be damned?


Categories: General, Romance, Action, Misc Characters: None
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Series: Through The Dimensions
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 19129
[Report This] Published: 22/09/07 Updated: 02/01/08


Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

PASS,

OOOH....GREAT CHAPTER!

THIS GIRL HAS REALLY GOTTEN UNDER DEAN'S SKIN.  SO MUCH SO, THAT DEAN WILL LEAVE SAMMY TO GET HER BACK?  INTERESTING STUDY OF A SIDE OF DEAN WE VERY RARELY GET TO SEE.

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.

 CARRY ON WAYWARD AUTHOR,

POOK



Author's Response: omg, I just LOVE it when you call me that! Yay!

 
The Game by bayre Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 444]
Summary:

The meek shall inherit nothing....

 


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52023
[Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 27/04/08


Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

BAYRE,

AFTER READING THE FIRST CHAPTER , I WAS FEELING A LITTLE "SKEEVED", BUT ONCE I MOVED INTO THE SECOND CHAPTER - NOW I'M COMPLETELY "SKEEVED".

I HAVE YHE FEELING THIS STORY IS GOING TO BE AN UNSETTLING ONE TO SAY THE LEAST!

GREAT BEGINNING, LOOKING FOWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTERS.

CARRY ON AS ALWAYS,

POOK 

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much.

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

BAYRE,

FIRST AND FOREMOST - CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN!!!!!!

THIS STORY IS DISTURBING AT THE LEAST, BUT YET I FEEL COMPELLED TO CONTINUE READING.  I GUESS IT'S ALONG THE SAME LINES OF WHY PEOPLE SLOW DOWN AT CAR WRECKS OR BREATH IN DEEPER WHEN THEY SEE A DEAD SKUNK ON THE SIDE OF THE ROAD!  VERY DISTURBING.

THIS IS TURNING OUT TO BE THE MOST DANGEROUS PICKLE YOU HAVE EVER PUT SAM AND DEAN IN. I DON'T KNOW WHAT'S WORSE - THE EMOTIONAL TORTURE OR THE PHYSICAL TORTURE.

WELL --- I WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER BUT FEEL I SHOULD TAKE A CLEANSING SHOWER!

GREAT STORY, GREAT WRITING - AS ALWAYS!

CARRY ON

POOK

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the congrats and for reading this chapter.  Yes, parts are a bit disburbing, and based on research I did on concentration camp/prison societies.  Which are scary places.

Thanks agian.

Laura

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/11/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

BAYRE,

NOW THAT'S MORE LIKE IT!  THE BOYS ARE PISSED AND FOCUSED.  BET MARLIN'S GOT A FIGHT IN HIS FUTURE!

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.

CARRY ON,

POOK



Author's Response:

They'll give Marlin a run for his money, is for sure!

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Laura

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

bayre,

I love the tranformation you're making within Sam.  It leaves the reader not knowing whether Sam's actions/reactions stem from his need to keep Dean safe from additional harm or to keep himself free of additional abuse.  I think its a combination of both.

Love the way you captures the true essence of Dean's character within this story:  bleeding skin, injured wrist, elbow, shoulder and hand, all around beat to hell - yet no complaints just utter and complete worry for and allegiance to Sam.

Carry on,

Pook

 



Author's Response:

For Sam it's a combination of both, and they both acheive the same end really.

I'm glad you like this, and how they are portrayed in it.

Thanks so much!

Laura

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

BAYRE,

JUST A QUICKEE REVIEW.  I FOUND IT COMPELLING HOW THIS STORY PRIES INTO DEAN'S PSYCHE WITH REGARD TO HOW DEEPLY HIS "LOSING" HAS IMPACTED BOTH HE AND SAM.  DEAN BELIEVING HE LET SAM'S "FORTRESS OF SAFETY" IN RUINS AND SAM DESPARATELY WANTING DEAN TO UNDERSTAND THAT HIS SAFETY AND SECURITY  WILL ALWAYS BE DEAN -- THE MAN, THE BROTHER.  LOVE THE STRENGTH THE BROTHERS TAKE FROM ONE ANOTHER THROUGH WORDS, LOOKS, THROUGH A SIMPLE TOUCH.  ALL WHICH CAN TURN A LOSING BATTLE INTO A WINCHESTER VICTORY.  BAYRE, YOU'VE MASTERED THEIR RELATIONSHIP.

 GOOD LUCK WITH VS AND CARRY ON,

POOK

 

 



Author's Response:

What a kind thing to say! Thanks so much.

Laura

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12/12/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

BAYRE,

THIS WAS BRUTAL TO READ!  NOW MORE THAN EVER I NEED TO CLEANSE IN THE SHOWER AND MAYBE GO TO CONFESSION!   JEEZ....

THE PSYCHOLOGICAL TORMENT MARLIN IS PUTTING SAM THROUGH IS PURE EVIL.

AND YEAH, DOES MARLIN REALLY THINK THAT HE COULD TAKE DEAN THE SAME WAY AS ALL THE OTHERS.  HE DOESN'T KNOW THE WINCHESTERS DOES HE!

NOW THAT GORDON IS GONE FROM THE SCENE --- I THINK I HATE MARLIN THE MOST!  I HOPE HE GETS WHAT IS COMING TO HIM, BIGTIME.

GREAT WRITING AND DEFINITELY UN-NERVING!

CARRY ON WAYWARD AUTHOR,

POOK



Author's Response: Marlin is going to learn for sure the Winchesters aren't what he expected.  Thanks so much for reading and for all your comments.

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

bayre,

Great chapter, wonderfully portrays the difference between the Winchesters and other men:  conscience, values, the understanding between right and wrong, the inability to rationalize the choosing of evil.  the ending is great - giving us a glimmer of hope - Winchester style.

Also, thanks for Bumbles - the 24th was my birthday and coupled with much running around when I finally got a chance to relax, your story had me laughing out loud.

Thanks for all the great writings of this past year. 

Happy New Year and God Bless,

Pook 



Author's Response:

HAPPY BIRTHDAY---late!  Hehhehee  I'm so very glad you enjoyed both this chapter and Bumbles.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Laura

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/01/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Bayre,

Such a perfect description of Dean, Sam and the brother's pure devotion to one another.  Sam truly is Dean's foundation and motivation - nothing they wouldn't do for each other.  It's together they live or together they will die.

The writing in this chapter is so full of imagery, each syllable building upon the next. Each layer building those disturbing questions within Dean's mind about Sam.  The filth of Sam's condition and surroundings, Sam's not wanting Dean to touch him- to become "unclean", the disturbing decription of Sam's bruising and Sam's denials.  Those words brutally yet simplistically pace out Dean's agony. 

Yet we are brought back - Dean's calming "Its OK Kiddo", "It'll All Washoff" - Dean's strength and bond with Sam emanating from the words "Not a thing you can't tell me, we can't talk about, work through"  ...... But always together.

Great chapter!

Now is Marlin's turn!  hehe

Carry on,

Pook

 

 



Author's Response:

I always so look forward to your comments.  Thanks so much Pook.

Laura 

 

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24/01/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

BAYRE,

SUCH A HORRID LITTLE CHAPTER. THE BOYS WILL GIVE THEIR ALL FOR EACH OTHER.  SAM WILLING TO "TAKE ONE FOR THE TEAM"! GOD HELP US!

I ALWAYS LOVE READING YOUR WORK.  THROUGH YOUR WORDS ONE CAN ACTUALLY SEE, FEEL DEAN - HIS ANGER, HIS STRENGTH, HIS POWER.

A GIFTED AUTHOR IS ABLE TO TRANSPORT HER READERS TO WITHIN HER WRITING ---- SOMETHING YOU DO FLAWLESSLY.

CARRY ON,

POOK



Author's Response:

LOL...only you can make the word horrid into a compliment.  You have me smiling ear to ear.  Thanks so much Pook.

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/02/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

BAYRE,

THE SINGLE LINE IN THIS EXPLOSIVE CHAPTER THAT IS SO SIMPLE YET SPEAKS VOLUMES ..."SAM WAS A GOOD SON, JUST NOT JOHN WINCHESTER'S".  THIS LINE SUMS UP SAM & DEAN'S RELATIONSHIP - THE PARENT WILLING TO DIE FOR , WILLING TO KILL FOR HIS CHILD.  'EVERYTHING SAM LEARNED AND NEEDED WAS FROM DEAN AND ALL THE GOODNESS HE HAD FLOWED FROM DEAN'.  YOU CAPUTURED THE ESSENCE OF WHAT MAKES THE WINCHESTER SAGA SO VERY AMAZING.

MAGNIFICENT,

GOD BLESS AND CARRYON,

POOKEE/JANET 



Author's Response:

As always Janet, you are far too kind to me...and I very much appreciate it.

Thanks! 

Laura 

 

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/05/08 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bayre,

Life has kept me from reviewing the last few chapters, but she has now seen fit to give me a few fleeting free moments.  The ending - this chapter - captures so many feelings and nuances of the boys relationship that it breaks your heart at times and at times makes you smile.  Dean's overprotectiveness of Sam - his unwillingness to leave Sam in the car alone was spot on to Dean's character.  The boys understanding between each other, no secrets, no blame for what happened at the "pen", Sam's reassurance to Dean that he did nothing wrong, his and Sam's self-preservation and Sam's reassurance to Dean that his abouse at the hands of his caputres was all psychological and physical but not sexual abuse.  These reassurances the boys needed to verbalize, to wrap themselves around, to heal.

Beautiful finish to the story, the Winchesters again saving lives, enabling those saved to start a new life of hope.

Your writing is truly a gift.

Pook



Author's Response:

Pook,

 

So glad to see you back, you've been missed!

Thanks so very much for your kind words.

Laura

 
Summary:

The Winchester brothers fight to keep safe the only family they've ever known. - This story is a sequal to Thank You, featuring Sara Powers.


Categories: General, Romance, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Sara's Stories
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 40890
[Report This] Published: 17/10/07 Updated: 14/12/07


Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

K,

I'VE ALWAYS LOVED YOUR STORIES WITH SARA. THE INTERACTION BETWEEN THE BOYS AND THE KIDS HAS ALWAYS PULLED ON MY HEARTSTRINGS AND DEAN'S RELATIONSHIP WITH SARA IS PURE GOLD.

THIS STORY IS SETTING UP TO BE A NAIL-BITER. 

GORDON MUST BE VENTILATED!!!!

CARRY ON WAYWARD AUTHOR,

POOK

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much, that's a great compliment.  So glad you liked it and Yeah I agree for messing with this little family Gordon is so done...lol.  thanks for the review and the stars - K

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

K,

THIS CHAPTER IS FULL OF HEAD GAMES, FROM GORDON'S HEAD GAMES WITH SARA AND BRIAN FEELINGS FOR HER TO GORDON'S HEAD GAMES WITH DEAN AS FAR AS HOW MUCH GORDON HAS SEEN OF HER BODY.  WE ALL KNOW THAT COMMENT SIGNED GORDON'S DEATH WARRANT!

ALSO LOVE THE STRENGTH THAT YOU GIVE SARA IN YOUR WRITING - DEAN WINCHESTER WOULD LIKE NOTHING LESS -- ALSO LOVE THE UNSPOKEN CONNECTION BETWEEN SARA AND DEAN, VERY SIMILAR TO THE ONE DEAN HAS WITH SAM.

GREAT.

CARRY ON,

POOK



Author's Response: Thanks so much Pook, so glad you're digging this one.  I always like Dean with strong woman, he doesn't seem the wilting miss type.  And I figured we have to make Gordon as hated as possible..lol.   I want no regrets in getting rid of the bastard...lol.  thanks for reading - K

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

K,

THIS CHAPTER TAKES THE READER ON SUCH A DIFFERENT PATH.  ALTHOUGH THE DRAMA AND SUCH REMAIN, IT TAKES A BACK SEAT TO "DEAN'S FAMILY".  AGAIN, THE LEVEL OF TRUST BETWEEN DEAN AND SARA IS IMPECABLY VOCALIZED THROUGH THE SILENCE OF MOVEMENTS AND GLANCES.  GREAT WRITING.

THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN DEAN AND THE CHILDREN IS SO ENDEARING.  ONE WOULD EXPECT DEAN NOT TO RELATE TO CHILDREN - HIS HARDENED EXTERIOR AND LONG HIDDEN CHILDLIKE QUALTIES --- BUT "HIS CHILDREN" ARE NO DIFFERENT THAN SAMMY, HIS CHARGE.  ON SCREEN THE VIEWERS GET FEW CHANCES TO SEE THIS SIDE OF DEAN, HIS FATHERING ETC, HERE IN SARA'S WORLD THOSE WONDERFUL CHARACTERISTICS SHINE.

CARRY ON WAYWARD AUTHOR,

POOK



Author's Response: Pook, thanks so much for the support.  I 'm just glad that people (other than myself) enjoy seeing a bit of a softer side to Dean.  Of course that'll only last as long as the kids are around, after that it'll be no holds barred, kick ass Dean. Personally I can't decide which I like better...lol.  Guess that's why I"m writing a story with both.  Thanks for reading and reviewing - Kel

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

K,

TWO THINGS STAND OUT IN THIS CHAPTER  - ONE FUNNY, ONE NOT.

THE BEST LINE TO SUM UP DEAN'S RELATIONSHIP WITH THIS FAMILY - "WHEN HAD HIS LIFE TURNED INTO SOME KIND OF WARPED VERSION OF FAMILY CIRCLE" - PRICELESS.

THE DISTURBING PART OF THIS CHAPTER IS FORMULATED IN A FEW LINES - GORDON NEEDED TO DIE - THE MEN SHE CARED FOR COULD NOT BE THE ONES TO DO IT - IF YOU WANT SOMETHING DONE, DO IT YOURSELF..... FOR THOSE YOU LOVE.

GREAT AS USUAL.

CARRY ON

POOK 

 

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks Pook so glad you're enjoying.. Glad you liked the Family circle wasn't sure if that would play.  And as to what Sara's willing to do to keep her family safe, we'll just have to see - K

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

KEL,

NONONONO!!!!!  IN THE WORDS OF BOBBY SINGER - "YOU'RE BREAKIN' MY HEART".  WHEN WILL DEAN EVER ALLOW HIMSELF TO BE HAPPY  AND SARA'S A SMART WOMAN - SHE'S GOT TO SEE THROUGH DEAN'S HARSH WORDS.  SHE WILL ..... RIGHT KEL???  RIGHT KEL???? LOL

I LOVE DEAN'S REMEMBRANCE OF HIS "KITCHEN TIME" WITH SARA IN THE LAST CHAPTER AND WITH SARA'S REMEMBRANCE OF THE FIRST TIME SHE MET AND CARED FOR DEAN IN THIS CHAPTER.  THESE FEW LINES SO VERY SO CAPTURE THE BOND AND LOVE THE TWO FEEL FOR ONE ANOTHER.  THESE CHARACTERS WHEN TOGETHER SUPERBLY BRING OUT THE BEST IN YOUR ALREADY TALENTED WRITING.

P.S.  HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!  MINE WILL BE HERE BEFORE DECEMBER'S END.  I THINK I'D LIKE THE SAME PRESENT AS YOURS!!!!!!

CARRY ON TALENTED AUTHOR,

POOK



Author's Response: Dean happy what show do you watch Pook? lol.  A happy Dean would cause a rift in the time/space continum...lol.  Glad you're enjoying and as for Happy Birthday's I'll see what I can manage - Kel

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

KEL,

THIS CHAPTER IS A TRUE EXAMINATION OF DEAN'S AND SARA'S INNER TURMOIL WITH THEMSELVES.  ALTHOUGH DEAN CAN PUT HIS WALLS UP ABOUT WHAT HE THINKS IS BEST FOR SARA AND HER FAMILY, HIS BODY PHYSICALLY CANNOT ACCEPTED HIS EMOTIONAL LIES.  HE CANNOT HANDLE LOSING HER.  HOW SWEET.

INTERESTING HOW SARA INTERPRETS DEAN'S HARSH WORDS TO LEAVE AS TELLING HER "TO GO" ON TWO LEVELS:  LEAVE THE PROPERTY AND HIS LIFE, WHILE DEAN SEES SARA FREEING HIM ON TWO LEVELS ALSO: FREEING HIM FROM THE KITCHEN AND FROM HER LIFE.

GOD, THESE TWO ARE MADE FOR EACH OTHER.  HOPEFULLY BOBBY WILL STEP IN AND KICK BOTH THEIR BUTTS INTO CLARITY.

YOU ARE THE MASTER OF WRITING THE "MONOGAMOUS DEAN"!!

GREAT WRITING,

CARRY ON WAYWARD AUTHOR,

POOK 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Well, Dean is nothing if not self-sacrificing and Sara's got her own issues with doing the best for those she loves regardless of her own wishes.. Match made in heaven right...lol.

As for Monogamous Dean.. well yum, it's not hard to put your own fantasies to paper...lol.  Thanks so much and I'm glad you're diggin this one - K

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12/12/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

KEL,

WHY DO I HAVE THE FEELING THAT SARA HAD MORE TO DO WITH THE GUNSHOT THAN SAM.  I THINK DEAN'S LUST FOR VENGEANCE GOT THE BEST OF HIM THIS TIME.  YOU GAVE US ENOUGH IN THIS CHAPTER JUST TO TORMENT THE READER!

GREAT AS ALWAYS,

CARRY ON, POOK



Author's Response:

Yeah Pookee, Dean lost control a bit.  Sorry for the torment but I gotta make sure you all stick around till the end.  Thanks for reading - K

 

 
Summary:

Sam and Dean try John's patience.


Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 524
[Report This] Published: 21/10/07 Updated: 21/10/07


Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

POOKA,

POOKEE IS VERY PROUD OF YOU.

CARRY ON MY TALENTED WRITER,

POOK



Author's Response:

Thank you Mom! Happy you enjoyed helping with writing so don't give me all the credit.

Love ya Mom,

Pooka :)

 
Summary: Kazcon Auction story for Nana56, hope you like it. Multi-chapter. Rising floodwaters trap Sam and an injured (of course) Dean in a house with a kindly woman keeping watch for her long lost son. If you're familiar with my stuff you know what to expect. If you're not, welcome to the world thru my eyes.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 35658
[Report This] Published: 31/10/07 Updated: 01/05/08


Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Lost In The Memories

Terry,

Been reading "Candle" since you first posted but, alas, haven't reviewed!  My name is Pookee and I am a lurker!!  I have a tendency not to review the stories written by the administrators, except one and she knows who she is.  I guess I feel not worthy of reviewing the works of such talented storytellers.

Well, you called the lurkers out, so here is goes.  I sincerely enjoy the vividness of your descriptions in which you always seem to enjoy providing to the reader with ghoulish pictures and situations.  The knashing of teeth on Dean's arm due to a disembodied head - priceless.  I sat reading that part with mouth hanging open.  The truly memorable writings of this site always capture the chemistry between the boys -- the foul mouthed, smart ass, lady loving Dean or the sensible, caring and recently bad assed Sam.  This chemistry, you always seem to caputure perfectly, being it traveling up a mountain road in Moon Star or in the flood waters of Candle!

Carry On Wayward Author,

Pook

 



Author's Response:

Well to start with I'm terribly flattered that you stpped out for me and secondly, it is the writers who should should be thanking the readers for taking the time to read and review the stories. I am always thrilled that ANYONE reads my drivel let alone takes the time to comment on it. There's no point in writing if no one is reading and even a simple "good story" is priceless. I appreciate the fact that you considered me worthy of your  time and words and I hope I hear more from you in the future and you feel comfortable in sharing your comments with other writers as well, whose work you enjoyed. We're a fairly insecure lot.

Ta so much!!!

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

TERRY,

AGAIN, I LOVE THE WONDERFUL DESCRIPTIONS YOUR WRITINGS ALWAYS PAINT - STOMACH LURCHINGS AND BLOOD SPRAYING -- ALWAYS COLORFUL!!

THE STORY IS GREAT SO FAR BUT I MUST TELL OF A FEW OBSERVATIONS:

1)  GLAD TO KNOW THAT I'M NOT THE ONLY PURVEYOR OF SUPERNATURAL SMUT!  2) DEAN IS DEFINITELY CONFUSED - ISN'T PRIESTLY BLUE HAIRED AND BUYING TAMPONS?  3)  NO DIGNITY CAN BE SAVED BY WEARING SOPPING WET UNDERWEAR UNDERNEATH DRY CLOTHES (THE WORST)  4)  WHILE READING THIS STORY, I KEPT LOOKING OVER MY SHOULDER FOR KATHY BATES!!!

CARRY ON,

POOK                            

 



Author's Response: The priestly thing was actually an accident, Gaelic pointed it out to me. I was just looking for a P word to use instead of Preston.I must have done it subconsciously.

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/12/07 Title: Chapter 6: The Price

TERRY,

I REALLY CAN'T DECIDE WHAT I LIKE THE MOST ABOUT YOUR WRITINGS:  THE AUTHOR'S CHAPTER NOTES OR THE ACTUAL STORY!  I ALWAYS ENJOY THE "UNSPOKEN DIALOG" BETWEEN THE BOYS THAT YOU INCORPORATE INTO YOUR WRITINGS. EXPERTLY EXECUTED.

EMMA IS STARTING TO MAKE ME FEEL A LITTLE UNEASY.  I HAVE A FEELING SHE'S NOTE GOING TO LET SAM LEAVE "AGAIN" WITHOUT A FIGHT.  EMMA MAY BE SHOWING A LITTLE JEALOUSY REGARDING SAM'S ATTENTION TO DEAN.   DEAN NEEDS ATTENTION....EMMA SEEMS TO NEED ATTENTION.  AS I SAID BEFORE, WHERE IS KATHY BATES ... MISERY DOES LOVE COMPANY.

YEAH AND THANKS FOR THE LAST LINE, I HAVE THE SUDDEN URGE TO CALL MY FEMA FLOOD DAMGE INSPECTOR AGAIN!

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

POOK 



Author's Response: Theer's a littler more to Emma than meets the eye but I'm not sure what yet. Time will tell!

 
Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/02/08 Title: Chapter 8: Coming Down

TERRY,

I REALLY WOULD LIKE TO KNOW WHAT MEDS EMMA'S BEEN ON, 'CAUSE I DEFINITELY NEED SOME OF THEM!  JEEZ, WHEN MY HOME HAS THE DELAWARE RIVER INVADING IT I'M A 100% BASKET CASE.  PLEASE SEND HER MEDS TO ME ASAP!!!!!

TRULY LOVE THE STORY, IT HITS A LITTLE TO CLOSE TO HOME THOUGH - THANKS FOR THE TORTURE.

SAM SEEMS TO BE FIGHTING A MULTIPLE FRONT WAR DOESN'T HE - FLOODS, LONG LOST SONS, SEIZURES, COLD --- HE'S REALLY GONNA NEED A TRIP TO DISNEY WORLD AFTER THIS ADVENTURE.

CARRY ON,

POOKEE

 
Summary: While cleaning out the Impala, Dean finds something that makes him remember a strange Halloween from years ago that involved a certain teddy bear...
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Categories: UnGen Challenges, One Shots, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2006
[Report This] Published: 31/10/07 Updated: 31/10/07


Reviewer: POOKEE Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Untitled

Rae,

I have a teddy bear on my bed which was given to me the day I was born.  I will never look at it again in the same way!!!

Thanks alot!!!! LOL

Love the story,

Carry On.

Pook

 



Author's Response:

Heya!  Thanks for reading! I didn't mean to turn everyone against teddies, lol - or maybe that was my plan... get everyone to turn against their teddies so I could steal them all!!! Sorry... I love cuddly toys. Again, thank you!