|
|
Penname: mtee [Contact]
[Report This]
Real name: M. Blubaugh Status: Member Member Since: 03/01/07 Website: Beta-reader: I'm a reader, not a writer. Which makes me so envious of those great writers who can make me "hear" the boys in my head. Reviews by mtee Summary:
When Dean loses his leg in a terrible hunting accident the brother's are forced to reevaluate their priorities. Can Dean still hunt? And is it really still worth the risk? Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 152934 [Report This] Published: 20/02/07 Updated: 18/05/07
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 22/02/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 This is a very intense story. I was holding my breath for most of this chapter. I can't wait for more. I hope you give us an in-depth story. Please? Make this as long as you want!!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, and I promise to be as indepth as I'm capable of being. I've got 19 chapters written so far with no end in sight, so you can pretty much guarantee it will be detailed. Hope you continue to enjoy! Thanks a bunch.
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 27/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Well, you handled that scene so well. It wasn't over the top, Dean wasn't being some super strong person or totally freaking out. The anger and yelling at Sam was great. It seemed realistic. I can see it happening. Dean is a head on kind of guy - so yes he would want to see the actual leg. His realization that 'it's gone" was so poignant.
Great chapter Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really try hard to capture their personalities and mannerisms, and it is so encouraging when other people feel it's an accurate portrayal. Makes my day to know I'm doing okay! Much thanks!
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 02/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I love this story so much. I like when an author tries a different subject. Usually the situation can be remedied -- temporarily blind etc. But you've opted for a permanent problem. I think it will be inspiring. I am wondering if you are giving us "true" Phantom Pain" or something a little supernatural???? I will just wait and see. I may be reading too much into everything. Keep it up -- I check everyday during lunch for "my next chapter"
Author's Response: I'm really glad you're enjoying this. I try so hard to make my stories original. Unfortunately, there are so many good stories out there filtering around that it's getting more and more difficult to find topics that haven't been done. This was one of them - I just hope I can continue to do the boys justice despite the permanent limitations. As for the phantom pain - FYI it is a real affliction that occurs for people who have lost limbs. I may refer to it supernaturally at times, but the symptoms are real. Thanks a bunch!
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 06/03/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 This continues to be a great story. Dean has finally let it go. Whew. Can't wait for the fireworks now!!
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 09/03/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 That was a fabulous chapter. I don't know why but I want Missouri to quit taking Sam's side - always being so sympathetic to him. I want someone to let him have it. It's not about him -- he really blew it and he should feel bad. Childish of me. But I always got miffed at Missouri and her attitude toward Dean. She favors Sam so much. Even in the actual show -- she is so much tougher on Dean. This is just a great story and I eagerly await every chapter. Just wonderful!!
Author's Response: You know what - you're abseolutely right. Here I am writing this exactly how I think Missouri would be treating each of the boys and I never even gave that attitude much thought. I had already planned a chapter where Sam finally breaks down, but I may have to incorporate some criticism toward Sam to start that. Won't be for a while, though. HOpe you can wait that long. THanks for the idea charger. So glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 12/03/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Now that's kind of sad -- how can they afford two? I like that you had Sam see some desparate hope in Dean - he really wants both -- but he's so use to not having what he wants - and truly those things must be expensive. Every chapter is great -- you never disappoint.
Author's Response: I have such a tough time giving the Winchester boys a break. Just when they think their life is finally back on track, they get thrown for a loop. I just hope that you will be fully satisfied with the outcome once we arrive at it - which probably won't be for a good several chapters yet. Hope you can hang in that long. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 13/03/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Take as long as you like - I'm loving every minute. Ok - my leg feels weird!!! You've made it so clear in my mind. I truly felt strange standing up -- evil you! Now what's the plan? hmmmm.
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 22/03/07 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 ok, I am really excited to see what happens now. He has to be ok, mentally!! This was an interesting turn. Great job.
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 27/03/07 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Sshhhh Dean - yes you CAN -- take it.
Still loving this story. Summary:
During a hunt concerning missing people who actually reappear, Dean ends up being kidnapped and awakens tied to what looks like a medical table, when Sam tracks him down will that be the end of it, or is the dark force in play determined to finish what it started?
Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes Word count: 72396 [Report This] Published: 21/04/07 Updated: 25/09/07
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 02/08/07 Title: Chapter 15: Getting out of town Nice chapter, One thing though, after being stabbed, I doubt Dean would suddenly sit up without feeling some pain. Even a couple days latger A stomach wound would be painful and sitting would not be good. You have to use stomach muscles to sit up. That just jumped out at me. Otherwise I really like this story.
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading. I wanna explain it away saying it was a freak adrenaline thing but nope, it's a mistake on my part and when I get back to going through the chapters I'll try and rectify it 'cause you're right... there was far too little emphasis on the pain he'd be going through. Thanks for pointing that out... and I'm glad you like the story inspite of it :D Summary:
NOW COMPLETE - Sam and Dean have always been freaks, Sam found out when he was twenty two just how much of a freak he was. It wasn’t until the boys are trapped once again by the demon that they find out Dean’s little secret that none of them knew about.
 Once a quick one shot that wouldn't leave me alone, this is now starting to expand into a story. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 65131 [Report This] Published: 23/04/07 Updated: 20/05/09
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 10/06/08 Title: Chapter 29: Firefly Yes that is an evil way to end. Wow -- this is getting really good. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Very evil, I know... I'm sorry :D He he. Thanks for reading, hope you enjoy the rest of the story when it comes!
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 26/08/08 Title: Chapter 34: Fox on the run Great chapter --Dean honey, you are in trouble big time!! Summary:
Tragedy strikes the boys once again, and it's going to take everything they have to get through the latest turn of events. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 87324 [Report This] Published: 19/05/07 Updated: 22/10/07
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 21/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great story -- you certainly do like to whump Dean and I certainly do LOVE to read all about it!! Summary:
After millennia of evil deeds, a fallen angel is given a second chance and is reborn as a mortal. 28 years later and he’s gotten himself into a spot of bother. Spoilers throughout Season 1 & 2 and this is ending up as an AU. Categories: General, AU, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: Shadows of a Morning Star Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 61077 [Report This] Published: 24/05/07 Updated: 24/06/08
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 24/08/07 Title: Chapter 18: Blood and Salt This is such a great story!! It's so different -- Dean is Lucifer! Love the dog -- Dean should have a trusty dog by his side when hunting. Thanks Author's Response: Thank you! Doggies are a must have when hunting, lol. That's what we need in the show, a hunter with a dog to make an appearance... a blind hunter with a dog... sorry, getting off topic, besides, Bobby has a dog doesn't he?. :D Check list - Rock salt, gun, holy water, brother, hellhound... Check!
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 05/12/07 Title: Chapter 25: A devil by any other name would be just as evil… So glad to read this -- I love this. Summary: Life..... after the fallout.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: Shadow Stalker Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 40813 [Report This] Published: 16/06/07 Updated: 17/02/08
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 06/07/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 That was a great chapter!! John finally realizing what Dean was all about. And of course Dean knows Sam is behind the storm and in trouble.
Wonderful Summary:
 It was just a little scar on Dean's shoulder. But it was about to turn Sam's whole world upside down.Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 15565 [Report This] Published: 16/07/07 Updated: 02/08/07
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 02/08/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Empath That was a wonderful story. I loved very chapter. Thank you. Author's Response: Thank you very much mtee! Summary: Nothing is ever easy for the Winchester boys. Dean is trapped and Sam must race against time to save him before it's too late.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 19104 [Report This] Published: 22/07/07 Updated: 17/09/07
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 25/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Under Pressure That was so funny. As I was reading this, I thought, hey that's like Big Valley! And then farther on, you mention that exact episode. I figured I would be telling my age if I mentioned it in a review! Definately a great ep and I'm glad you brought it up. Good story, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! As I was writing, I was actually a little worried that noone would remember The Big Valley... turns out a lot of us were fans! More to come soon - but Bruce Dern won't be showing up to help I'm afraid....
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 31/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: Leaving Home Ain't Easy I love that last lines -- the nails. Good touch.
Great story. Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked my little cliffie!
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 02/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: The Night Comes Down Very good chapter!! I hope you post soon. You've got all kinds of things going on -- we need to know what's happening. Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and for sticking with me! Lots more goings on to come....
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 08/08/07 Title: Chapter 5: I Want to Break Free That was a wonderful chapter!!
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 14/08/07 Title: Chapter 6: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure Great chapter. I love this story!!!! Thanks for the review! I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story...
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 21/09/07 Title: Chapter 8: We Will Rock You Great chapter!! Love this story so much Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 24/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is very good. Asylum was the first episode I ever watched! I picked a good one to get hooked on didn't I!! Very good concept - you've got me hooked, I need to read more.
Reviewer: mtee Signed
Date: 03/08/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Great chapter! Very gripping. Author's Response: hey, thanks for reading!! so glad you liked the chapter!! hope you like the rest as well!! bambers;) |
||
Supernatural is ©2006 The CW Television Network. Other content is copyright the original owners. Original content is ©2006 Supernaturaville.net |
||
