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Penname: Armaita [Contact]
Real name: Armaita
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Member Since: 23/04/07
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I am a college sophomore who has what some might label an unhealthy obsession with these characters. Please keep in mind, this is my first venture into the cyberworld of fanfic, so please be kind!
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Implicated by Come2Me Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

 

Best-selling short story author Dean West had a seemingly normal life until a story came out that changed it forever. His father, John, was accused of the murder of his mother, Mary Campbell-Winchester, in a terrible fire that until then had been considered an accident. Suddenly Dean’s life became complicated and mysterious as he was forced to doubt everything he knew and dredge up old, forgotten memories to tell the world the truth about what really happened on the night Mary Winchester was killed.

 

“You can’t believe the crap you hear in newspapers,” Dean explained when asked why he wrote this tell-all story down and published it. “‘A source close to whoever- I mean where do they get this stuff? The only people who know anything are me and Sam and my dad. You want answers, you ask us, not some hokey ‘witness’. I just want people to know the truth and not some half-assed version with half the details screwed up.”

 

So Dean ditched his usual short stories in favor of writing a novel-length book of what he calls ‘The only version that isn’t a load of bull.’  “You can’t fit this in a short story,” he said. “Short stories have to be cut down, most of the story taken out besides the major details. This story really happened and I’m not gonna start cutting stuff.”

 

The confessional he penned is titled 'Implicated' and will be available in stores this March.

 


Categories: Wee!chester, AU, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 7515
[Report This] Published: 12/10/09 Updated: 06/11/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

At first, I had a difficult time picturing Dean as a writer, but at the line 'the pen makes me their god,' I accepted Dean-as-a-writer instead of Dean-as-a-Hunter. Also, I agree with your statement that people can be worse than monsters sometimes (there is a song by Voltaire that has the same moral).

 
Long Story by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Dean explains why he changed his mind.

Tag to 5.04 The End, and contains spoilers for Season 5 up to and including that episode

Long Story


Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2606
[Report This] Published: 16/10/09 Updated: 16/10/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you for this great look into Dean Winchester! I've got to admit, the part when Dean held out Rubv's knife to Sam had me wondering too. Also, I liked the way you interjected Lucifer's arrogant gloating and Dean's witty replies. Finally, great comparison of Sam and Dean's characters...how Sam assumes that Dean only wants to study him and prevent him from saying 'the big yes' while Dean simultaneously fears becoming something less than human (the perfect soldier). Thanks again, and keep writing!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. 

I saw that little flinch, and my heart just broke for Sammy. He was so ill-at-ease, wondering why Dean had changed his mind and what was going to happen. 

But I do think that they did talk, and that Dean would have revealed what happened, just so they could both make sure that it doesn't become their future. And I think it really gave Dean a nasty shock seeing himself and what he became without Sam to balance him. They've always been each other's true north - and I hold out hope that they will be again. 

Jules

 
Summary:

Amazing banner by PhoenixFlame @ TDA!! 

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Sam and Dean thought it was just going to be a typical gig; find out what killed the people and then kill the thing. What they didn’t count on was running into two Aurors.

Crossover with Harry Potter. Spoilers for book seven. Starts post 4x10 Heaven and Hell.


Categories: Crossovers, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 7268
[Report This] Published: 17/10/09 Updated: 05/08/10


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/01/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Sam and Dean both have issues they would rather never see the light of day (or the inside of a wizard's mind, for that matter)...but I'm guessing Riley will respect their privacy once he knows the Winchesters can be trusted. Great job combining the two societies!

Author's Response: Boy is that the truth. :P But yeah, Riley will. It's not something that he abuses. He only uses that skill when he has to. Thanks and thank you so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21/11/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I hope the Aurors haven't set any magical traps to catch killers returning to the scene...that would be awkward for Dean and Sam. Also, great to see the brothers confounded by another strange community. Thanks for updating!



Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see. XD I'm glad you liked it. And thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a great idea for a fanfic. I can't wait to see how Dean reacts to meeting Aurors and finding out that some witches/wizards aren't evil.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the idea! Hehe, yeah. His reaction is gonna be interesting.

Thanks for reviewing!

 
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Date: 07/04/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good to see the Winchesters agreeing to work with Riley and Caitlyn...even if two of the four don't like the idea! Now to track down Lilith and stop the killing spree, right? Keep up the great work.

 
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Date: 29/08/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh no, the story killed Captain Kirk!

That's okay, I'll keep reading anyway, if only to hope that Caitlyn get justice for her fiance's death. Keep up the great writing!

 
Summary: Time traveling via angel express is hard on the body. Dean's still having some...issues. And it all leads to a trip to the hospital. An expanded version of my E/O challenge drabble from Sunday, October 18.  Rated K Plus for some swearing.

Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1532
[Report This] Published: 20/10/09 Updated: 20/10/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice thought, but I doubt Zachariah will care much about impacted bowels. (After all, this is the same angel who gave Dean stomach cancer and removed Sam's lungs.) Though it would be interesting to see Sam try...maybe they could copy some of that angel-proofing from 'Death takes a holiday'...? Thanks for this backstory to Dean's protests regarding the 'Angel Express'!

Author's Response:

Oh, I absolutely know that Zachariah wouldn't care much about impacted bowels.  I do believe that Dean's words were simple snark and no more.

Thanks for giving it a read.

 
Summary:

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Spoilers for episode 4x22.

Sam needs to come to terms with all that has transpired in the last few years, culminating in his greatest mistake. With Dean seemingly more distant than ever, perhaps it's time that Sam learns the true meaning of Hallowe'en.

Rated K+ through sheer lack of blood, gore, salty language or fisticuffs.


Categories: Humor, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 9480
[Report This] Published: 21/10/09 Updated: 01/11/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed
Date: 08/11/09 Title: Chapter 3: Parte the Thirde: aurais-du-vu

Nice Star Trek TNG reference, but I don't think Sam is doing as well as Picard did.

 
Summary: Sam and Dean discover a way to get Bela out of her deal.
Categories: General, Misc Characters: None
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Series: Snapshots
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 322
[Report This] Published: 03/11/09 Updated: 03/11/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great loophole...that really reinforces how evil deal-making demons are. The only downside I can think of is that Bela might not learn from this, since she didn't have to suffer the consequences. thanks for this wonderful look at Bela's Deal.

 
The Quiet Ones by tajjas Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

One brother’s slightly convoluted musings on another. 

Set after 5.08/Changing Channels.


Categories: Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1548
[Report This] Published: 11/11/09 Updated: 11/11/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's fine that you added the Dean's invitation at the end of 'Changing Channels', considering that Castiel doesn't exactly have a great track record when it comes to fighting archangels.

Also, I loved Dean's middle name and Gabriel's confusion about Cas' motives. It seems that, despite living among--and messing with--humans for centuries, Gabriel is still unable to grasp the idea of angels having loyalty to humans, or hope for a better end than the inevitable apocalypse.

Thanks for this analysis of Gabriel's psyche. I was too confused by the revelation of the Trickster's identity to think this through, but it all sounds exactly right!

 
Summary:

What if the 'Master Plan' was made up as they went along? What if God really couldn't see into the future any more than you or I? What if He had no idea how bad it could all end up?

No spoilers.


Categories: General, Scripts, One Shots, AU Characters: None
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Series: A Higher Point Of View
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2428
[Report This] Published: 20/11/09 Updated: 20/11/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/06/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Liked the line about all religions using the 'better safe than sorry motto. Also, the lack of omnicience and differenciation between 'need to know' and 'nice to know' was great!

Author's Response: Thank you SO mcu for all the praise! Yeah I feel that angels on the show are shown as powerful creatures who don't really know what's going on. That idea was supported when I read a book called Discovery of Heaven. Very smart book, very funny and I'd suggest you read it if that kinda thing appeals to you. But that book was pretty much my main inspiration with the addition of a few of my own ideas and thoughts. Thanks for the compliment. :)

 
Summary: Sam's observations on Dean and Bela's relationship.
Categories: Romance, General Characters: None
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Series: Snapshots
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 931
[Report This] Published: 01/12/09 Updated: 02/12/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Dean deserves happiness, and Bela is just as unconventional as he is. Plus, it would be fun if being around Dean made Bela into a more moral person.

 
Dear Mr. Claus by Micaiah Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Castiel writes a letter to Santa

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Thanks to Chasidern for the lovely banner!


Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 309
[Report This] Published: 08/12/09 Updated: 09/12/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can picture Dean laughing at Cas if Castiel explained why he'd been talking to children, and his earnest, desperate tone in this letter is a perfect mix of child-like belief but very adult concerns about the apocalypse. Very well done!

Author's Response:

Can you imagine Cas trying to talk to children?  Those skeptical adults would think the guy in the trenchcoat was a weirdo.  Ah, Cas you've got to love him.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

 
Summary:

Written for the Santa letter challenge.

I admit, I played fast and loose with the challenge rules, but Krampus is the Anti-Santa, so I figured it'd still count.

Serious Spoilers up to S2 finale, Potential spoilers up to S4 finale.


Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 279
[Report This] Published: 08/12/09 Updated: 09/12/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've never considered what the ideal Christmas would be for Meg. Thanks for writing this, but I hope 'Krampus baby' decides not to deliver!

Author's Response:

Christmas in Hell, hmmm.

Jack Frost roasting on an openfire,

Chipmunks biting off your nose...

 
Summary: WATCH OUT SANTA!  Sammy's really, really worried this year...

Sammy's only wittle and his spellinks not that good!

Letter to Santa - Christmas challenge - no spoilers

Ammended 10/12/09  Was giving Santa a mince pie but in the US I guess he'd prefer cookies with his milk!


Categories: Wee!chester, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 302
[Report This] Published: 09/12/09 Updated: 09/12/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very cute, but does Sam realize that would be undermining Dean's test of Santa?

Author's Response:

Thank you and for the stars :) , I am putting them all onto my Christmas tree!

Don't worry Dean swaps the milk and cookies back after Sammy's gone to sleep , but Santa does read the letter and stays away so he's quite safe. 

Jacq

 
Summary:

My version of a Letter from Bobby. This story is for the "Letters to Santa" Challendge. Hope you enjoy it! Merry Christmas guys!


Categories: Drabbles, One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 328
[Report This] Published: 09/12/09 Updated: 09/12/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wait...Bobby knows where Santa lives, and he's wanted a normal Christmas for the boys ever since they were children...and you're telling me he never broke into the workshop to lift a few toys for them? Thanks for this great fic, and good luck getting Cass drunk on eggnog!

 
Summary: Letters to Santa challenge - and what would Lucifer wish for, I wonder?

Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 182
[Report This] Published: 10/12/09 Updated: 10/12/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Letter to Santa

Lucifer is one of the few characters I can imagine delivering an ultimatum to Santa...instead of a wish-list. Thanks for this amusing little fic!



Author's Response: Thanks!  I couldn't imagine him asking, only demanding!

 
Summary:

Sam needs Dean to write his letter.

Letters for Santa challenge.

 


Categories: General, One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 197
[Report This] Published: 10/12/09 Updated: 10/12/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: If You Want It Done Right....

I like that Dean insists he doesn't believe in Santa, but then hedges his bet by mentioning the 'tricked-out pistol'. Also, nice touch comparing the existence of Santa to God and angels.



Author's Response:

Hey there

I liked that too, so kid like, you're not real but just in case I'm wrong....lol.

Had to mention the angels!

Thanks, Merry Xmas, Mary xx

 
Summary: Written for the 'Letters to Santa' challenge. John only ever wrote one letter to Santa for the boys... he blames Missouri for that!

Categories: General, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1632
[Report This] Published: 10/12/09 Updated: 10/12/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a heartwrenching fic, but a good one. It was nice to see a resolution between when Mary was killed and the pilot episoe, that turning point where John decides to be a father and a Hunter. Also, really funny how you had Missouri surprising John the same way she deals with Dean! =)

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. So glad you liked it, I love the Missouri character and would imagine that she is the type of person John would have had to have taken notice of. Can you imagine that conversation where Missori discussed what was behind the curtin? (I sidestepped it -LOL, it would have made my dark little CHRISTMAS fic positively bleak I think!!! ) Thanks for reading. Abi

 
Ouch, Santa! by birdie Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: UnGen Christmas Challenge letter to Santa. Dean's in the dark composing his wish list...
Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 592
[Report This] Published: 10/12/09 Updated: 10/12/09


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome one-shot...but I just got this painful picture in my head of Lucifer trying to kick off the apocalypse and then being dragged away by Santa--kicking and screaming, of course--for being a bad boy, lol.

Author's Response:

Hey Bettina.

Haha now all I can see is that little red-suited dude smacking Lucifers butt! Thanks for making me giggle and for reviewing. Much appreciated.

Bev xx

 
Summary: Coda to episode 5.13 with a couple of 5.10 spoilers thrown in the midst. Sam wants to be prepared in case something like this happens again. And in between the pretty lights and the octopus, Dean's distracted.


Categories: Missing Scenes, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2530
[Report This] Published: 30/01/10 Updated: 30/01/10


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great one-shot, but they still haven't decided on a codeword...I think it should be 'asthma', lol. Thanks for resolving their disagreements from this episode.

 
Summary:

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SPOILERS for characters and episodes from season 5.

Drabble concerning how season five COULD end. But won't. 


Categories: General, Drabbles, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 83
[Report This] Published: 13/03/10 Updated: 13/03/10


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: End...?

This made me sad b/c Michael isn't evil--he's just the angelic version of Season 1's Dean...always following orders no matter how little sense thy might make. Still, cool to see Gabriel stand up for himself. Also makes sense that Gabriel wouldn't like 'Luci'. They both cause trouble, but Gabriel's is more for amusement than for pure and simple destruction. Nice drabble!

Author's Response: Yeah - but sh*t happens I guess, even between THAT family, LOL. I kind of like Michael - as you say, very s1 Dean - but all's fair in love and war. :) Thanks for reading - and the stars! 

 
Damage Control by Nachuma Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Random thoughts....


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 1776
[Report This] Published: 15/03/10 Updated: 15/03/10


Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: Dean

Leave it to Dean to turn a simple workout (doing either pull-ups or pushups?) into a guilt trip about stopping the apocolypse completely by himself. =) Very Dean, even if I think he stands a better chance by working with Sam instead of always trying to protect him.

 
Reviewer: Armaita Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15/03/10 Title: Chapter 2: Sam

If Sam can avoid sounding like he's discussing feelings, then begging Dean to tone down the workout regimen might work. Good to see Sammy's caring side, rather than the demon blood-driven one!

Author's Response: Thanks for both your reviews.  If only the boys understood themselves as well as we do....