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Penname: leslie92708 [Contact]
Real name: Leslie Burnette
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Member Since: 23/12/10
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Summary: A shortcut through the woods leaves the boys lost, seperated and hunted. 
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: Shadow Stalker
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 46418
[Report This] Published: 01/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07


Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 23/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm new here and just started reading fics.  I have to say so far you"ve got the boys rhythm down great! love the banter!

 
Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 23/12/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

The Mystery is unfolding!!  I'm intrigued!

 
Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 25/12/10 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ohhhh...getting really good.  

On a side note....a vial is a small container. like a vial of blood.

 

To state something as evil---it is spelled vile.  

 

fyi 

 
Summary:

On The Wings Of Angels

The brothers finally confront the demon. But will one of them fall?


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 7947
[Report This] Published: 28/01/07 Updated: 30/01/07


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Date: 15/01/11 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue

awww...this was wondeful..how Ironic knowing how the story has gone thru seasons 4, 5 and 6.  How appropriate!  I love the line about the seer and the warrrior.  And what Missouri said about Sam being the key and Dean being Sam's..  I can't remember exactly...but it was a perfect pairing of how and why they compliment each other.  There was another one...the warrior saint and Sam was like quiet with a fighters heart.  or something!  really awesome for your first!

 
Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15/01/11 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue

awww...this was wondeful..how Ironic knowing how the story has gone thru seasons 4, 5 and 6.  How appropriate!  I love the line about the seer and the warrrior.  And what Missouri said about Sam being the key and Dean being Sam's..  I can't remember exactly...but it was a perfect pairing of how and why they compliment each other.  There was another one...the warrior saint and Sam was like quiet with a fighters heart.  or something!  really awesome for your first!

 
I Wish by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

I Wish 

Take one peeved off gypsy, one arrogant big brother and one chance remark, mix them together and what have you got? Well, if your name's Sam Winchester, you've got a whole pile of trouble. Sam becomes big brother to his big brother as he desperately tries to break a gypsy curse before he's driven completely insane.

Be careful what you wish for...


Categories: Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 15086
[Report This] Published: 01/02/07 Updated: 02/02/07


Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 16/01/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OMG!!!  I love the "parenting" of Dean by Sam.  Fabulous!!!    Also LOVE ANGRY Sam!  Both barrells--fuming..  Mean old lady!  I'm so proud of Sam!

Author's Response:

Oh my gosh! You're going through my early stuff. I don't know whether to duck for cover or be touched that you've gone back that far!

Thank you. I've learned a lot since I first started - well, at least I hope I have - but it really is lovely to know that even my first attempts at fanfiction are being enjoyed.

Jules

 
Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 16/01/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

avenging angel!  hee!  I love angry protective sam!

Author's Response:

Thanks for that, Leslie.

Oh, gosh...I've gotten a lot more wordier since my early days. My first story is shorter than some of the one-shots I write now, three years down the track. 

I'm really thrilled, though, that you are enjoying the early stuff. 

Thanks again.

Jules

 
Leipreachan by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

Leipreachan

A spate of disappearances leads the boys to a small community, where they find the locals less than helpful. What is out in the woods that the townspeople are hiding? And will it take one of the Winchester boys as its next victim?


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 23898
[Report This] Published: 24/02/07 Updated: 14/03/07


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Date: 17/01/11 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

this was great! I love that the leprechaun saw how much the bros care for each other.

Author's Response:

Thank you, to be sure, to be sure, to be sure.....

Hope you're not too disappointed with the old stuff. I can go back and see all the mistakes, but I've been told I'm not allowed to fix them, as it's a reflection of my journey. 

Still....I'm tempted.....

Thanks, Leslie - I've answered this one, because for some strange reason the site has doubled up your review.

Jules

 
Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17/01/11 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

this was great! I love that the leprechaun saw how much the bros care for each other.

 
Summary:

Demons I get

A simple shopping trip turns into something much more difficult to deal with...


Categories: Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1448
[Report This] Published: 06/03/07 Updated: 06/03/07


Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 17/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

bwahahahaha!!!!!

Author's Response:

This one whacked your funny bone, eh?

LOL!

I had fun with this one. I do some strange things when I'm spaced out.....perhaps I shouldn't mention that...*looks worried*

Anyway, so glad you got a laugh out of this one.

Jules

 
Summary:

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A fresh start, a new life - or is it? Evil stalks them still, and all is not what it seems.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 58838
[Report This] Published: 31/03/07 Updated: 23/04/07


Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 18/01/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

so funny! those two!  really good!  the romance part was sweet!

Author's Response:

Uh-oh, you're on this one.....I always get nervous whenever anyone reads this one. I had a whole swag of readers stop reading and reviewing after the final chapter on this went up. 

In my defense, all I can say is that I didn't write myself into a corner and take the easy way out as someone very (not) politely suggested (accused). The ending had been planned right from the moment I typed the first line. I just never expected the story to get so long.

Anyway...*takes deep breath*....hope you do enjoy it.

*bites nails*

Jules

 
Summary:

 

In Dreams

What if the dream - wasn't a dream? What do you do when dreams become a reality?

Sequel to Class Dismissed.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 127081
[Report This] Published: 09/09/07 Updated: 07/12/07


Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 20/01/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

*GASP*  OH NO!!

Author's Response:

Ah, you found the sequel, eh? Hope that you enjoyed Class Dismissed.

Oh, no indeed. Both little brothers snatched by the demons. But don't worry, there are two awesome big brothers not too far away. 

And of course, a demon waiting outside for them.......

Jules

 

 
Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 20/01/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

yes...I figured it was Au Sam..Just don't know how he's going to pull it together.

Author's Response:

You're right, Lelie, it's Au-Sam who's the secret weapon.

And the switch....will be thrown in the next chapter. 

Hope you're enjoying the double trouble so far.

Jules

 
Broken Images by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

 Broken Images new

Who was the handsome stranger brought to the mental institution in the dead of night - and what terrible tragedy from his past had reduced him to a broken, empty shell?

People's Choice Winner

Awards 2008 Best Future fic

2008 UnGen Awards Best Sam


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 29830
[Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 11/01/08


Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 27/12/10 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

wow.

Author's Response:

LOL!

Hello, and welcome to Supernaturalville, better known to the residents as UnGen. I hope you have many happy hours here trolling through all the great stories that are on our files. 

And thank you for stopping by this little one and letting me know what you thought. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Hope you had a great Christmas.

Jules 

 
Summary:

Sam goes missing, again, and Dean has to find him. Too bad for Dean something's after him too, and it's not necessarily supernatural either.

Huge thanks to bulletbabe for another awesome banner, she is totally awesome!!

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Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 103980
[Report This] Published: 28/12/07 Updated: 14/09/08


Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 26/12/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I thought you did Bobby great!  I still picture him in an old muscle car too.  well...I guess a truck like Uncle Jesse had in "The Dukes of Hazzard"! lol

 
Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 26/12/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

the story is getting real interesting.  What did John and Bobby Hunt 10 years ago?  Revenge ?  Why only Dean? Crossroad deal?  What does the eclipse have to do with it?  A ritual?  a  spell?

 
Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 26/12/10 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ahhh...the Plan finally revealed!

 
Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 26/12/10 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh my Gosh!!

 
Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 26/12/10 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

..at least I'm breathing again...I think I was holding it in!

 
Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 26/12/10 Title: Chapter 27: The End

*sigh*  That was good! happy they all lived and Sophia too!  YAY!!   Thanks!  So glad it wasn't a "death fic"  Not sure I could handle one of those!

 
Summary:

 

Big Brothers story banner 

Sam is plagued by multiple visions of Dean burning alive, leading the brothers into a dangerous hunt that could have dire repercussions for the young psychic.

Set just before the Season 2 episode Roadkill

Awards 2008 Best Horror/Demon


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 53967
[Report This] Published: 18/01/08 Updated: 24/02/08


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Date: 24/01/11 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

I liked it!  nice reference to the Leprechaun story!!  I'm having fun catching up!

Author's Response:

I am so glad you are! LOL. 

This story actually started life as a sort of missing scene to Born Under A Bad Sign, and just grew. Well, it sat in my folder about 95% completed for months, then when I finally got around to blowing the cyber-cobwebs off it, I realised I could actually turn it into a multi-chapter story with a bit of tweaking.

The original one-shot is still in there, with very little tweaking, actually. It's the scene by the side of the road when Sam first runs off, then falls and breaks down over the fact that he'd killed Geoffrey. 

Thanks so much for reading!

Jules

 
Fractured by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Fractured new

Dean's time is up...

Prequel to Broken Images


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8675
[Report This] Published: 13/02/08 Updated: 13/02/08


Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 23/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awww...I've read broken images.. I really like it. quite the mystery and twist. probably one of the first ones.  I liked this one too!  nice prequel.  explains alot!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Leslie.

There wouldn't have been a prequel, actually, if one of the readers hadn't asked me for it. I hadn't planned on it. But still, hopefully it wasn't giving too much away to read it out of sequence. Broken Images was, after all, written and posted first. 

So glad you liked this. 

Jules

 
It's a Choice by PropGal Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Dean has only ever made one choice to help control the chaos of his world.

Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 473
[Report This] Published: 31/03/08 Updated: 01/04/08


Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 01/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: It's a Choice

ooohhhh...good phrase!  "...to live for his brother instead of die for him"....very nice phrase indeed!

 
Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 01/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: It's a Choice

ooohhhh...good phrase!  "...to live for his brother instead of die for him"....very nice phrase indeed!

Author's Response:

Thank you.   and thanks for reading

 
Summary: Past Featured StoryThe things they carry are determined by necessity, by field specialty, and even superstition. but they always carry it together
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1265
[Report This] Published: 18/04/08 Updated: 19/04/08


Reviewer: leslie92708 Signed
Date: 01/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awww...I'm really missing this bond between them now.  It seems so long since we've seen it. I hope S6 will bring them back together again soon.  i need some bro bonding!