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Penname: Soennelchen [Contact]
Real name: Dagmar
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Member Since: 18/04/07
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Summary:

**Spoilers for AHBL 1 and 2**

What happened when Dean was forced to carry his brother one last time.

Now including Sam's POV.

It was a oneshot but now expanding.


Categories: Missing Scenes Characters: None
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Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 9092
[Report This] Published: 15/07/07 Updated: 22/09/08


Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Live for Me

This is so heartwrechning and touching. There are many stories dealing with AHBL 1 +2 but there is probably none that has touched me like that. You have done an incredible job describing in a very sensitive way the basic line of these episodes: the never dying brother love. The last line made me swallow hard and I had tear come to my eyes (again)....“Live for me...live for you...live for us.” Awesome... thank you! 

Happy Holidays! 



Author's Response:

Your review is touching!  :)  That is my favorite part of the series, is the awesome and very complicated chemistry between the brothers.  I enjoy bringing tears to people's eyes (not because I made them cry, oh Lord no) haha but because I have done my job and drawn you in.

Thank you again for the awesome review and I hope you enjoy the next part just as much.  :)

Loves!

 
Empath by ciel4 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 201]
Summary: Past Featured StoryIt was just a little scar on Dean's shoulder. But it was about to turn Sam's whole world upside down.

Categories: General Characters: None
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Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 15565
[Report This] Published: 16/07/07 Updated: 02/08/07


Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed
Date: 25/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Confession

Oh... this is a great story! I love how you blend in the past. Poor Dean, always takes the burden. Please update soon! Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, update soon!

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/07/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Promises

Oh, I love this story! This was such an emotional chapter... snif.... Love how you let us share Bobby's memories and feelings. And poor Dean, always has taken the burden and always will. Very well written. Thank you - and please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you're enjoying it. Next update soon....

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Full Circle

Another great chapter! I love Bobby in the story but I agree that it should be Sam going to "talk" to the bad guy. He was there as a child, even if not as an eye-witness. Dean always gives everything for his little brother, now Sam wants to be the protector. I love this story. Thanks for the great work ciel!

Author's Response: I must admit that this whole story came out of my rabid desire to see Sam be protective towards Dean ... since we so often see it the other way around! Glad you agreed that it should be Sam rather than Bobby who got to right the wrong.

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed
Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Empath

Just finished the last chapter. I absolutely loved this story. Thanks for sharing this with us :)


Author's Response: Thanks Soennelchen, twice!

 
Summary: Sam survives a car accident but is haunted by the other driver who did not. Set early S2. General S2 spoilers.
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 29586
[Report This] Published: 17/07/07 Updated: 06/09/07


Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17/08/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh dear, the tension is building up! How can you leave us here? Is Dean ok and what happened to Sam? I like this more and more and look forward to the next chapter!

 
Summary: Sometimes the most innocent of things can get you into a world of trouble. 
Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None
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Series: Something Lost
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 32473
[Report This] Published: 17/07/07 Updated: 29/12/07


Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh, this is becoming more and more interesting! I love how you show Dean's memories of the past and how much Jake resembles little Sam. Great work so far. Looking forward to the next update.

 
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Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great update. Now did you have to leave us with such a cliffhanger? Dean's feeling about Kerri being in danger was right. I really hope he and Sam get back to her house in time... please! Looking forward to the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great story Maggie! So little Jake is special... hm, I wonder where you will take us from here. Love the way Dean deals with the baby - it's just like he's got little Sammy to take care of all over again. I'm looking forward to more. Thanks :)

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/12/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great update devonshire! You have me at the edge of my seat now. I'm afraid the three of them will wake up to more nightmares to come. Looking forward to the next chapter - thanks!

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/12/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Maggie, another of your wonderful stories comes to an end and I absolutely enjoyed it! Very well written.

I have to admit I was stunned when I read your chapter end notes that you have decided to leave this page. I am sad and absolutely not happy about it and I take the liberty to say that I assume lots of others will feel the same way. If this has to do with the recent "house cleaning" issues I do not think that you should in any way let that affect you as you are one of the authors who updated frequently and whose creativity I/we love and treasure! But this is just my opinion and of course I do respect your desicion for whatever reason you made it. I would love to read more of your stories but I am not sure that I will become a regular visitor of the other page. I have checked into it a couple of times already and was frustrated to see that there are a lot of un-beta'ed and often not very clever written stories.  Sorry... but I'm just being honest ..... and you will be missed! Thank you for sharing your genius with us so far. Take care and happy New Year, Dagmar

 
Summary: Nothing is ever easy for the Winchester boys. Dean is trapped and Sam must race against time to save him before it's too late.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 19104
[Report This] Published: 22/07/07 Updated: 17/09/07


Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed
Date: 25/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Under Pressure

Oh dear, this sounds bad. I'm on the edge of my seat now. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks Iam!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Things may actually get a bit worse before they get better, I'm afraid... Hope to have the next chap up in a couple of days....

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: Leaving Home Ain't Easy

Great chapter, full of brother love and angst. The "don't want to pee" remark is so funny yet so sad. Dean really seems to be pretty bad off. You can keep him under the house a little longer (altough the suspense is killing me) but please get him out of there eventually - and of course alive and in decent shape... please??? Otherwise no chocolate cookies for you - lol! 

Author's Response:

Chocolate cookies are right up there with reviews.... so Dean will be getting out - eventually - maybe soonish? Don't worry too much - Dean is tough, and I love him too much to do any really permanent damage....

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: The Night Comes Down

Holy sh.... how can you do this to Dean? Have to agree with ciel - I immediately thought of water torture - yikes! Poor boy, just when you thought it couldn't get worse... Remember what I wrote about those chocolate cookies - lol. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks!           


Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and especially the stars! Next update should be soon... Don't worry - really, I love Dean too.

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/08/07 Title: Chapter 5: I Want to Break Free

Oh Iam, how can you do this to us? I mean, first thanks for treating us with a long chapter :) But then again, did it have to end like this? Had to grin about the "Winchester luck" remarks. Very well written chapter. Dean seems to be bad off and he is not out of the woods yet - literally... More please soon!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review - and stars!!! I'm afraid that Winchester luck only runs one way... unless you're the Impala...Next update hopefully soon but may be a bit short....

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/08/07 Title: Chapter 6: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

Great! I love the dialogues. So Sam got the "fucking cabin" off his brother and he was able to patch him up somewhat. Huh, so at least some relief for both of them. Pins and needles... oh, poor Dean, that sucks :)  But now the figure on the roof is back and I was wondering when you would get back to that. Winchester luck again, nothings goes easy for our boys. Awesome chapter, love how you build up the tension. More please... SOON! Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely, long review and stars!! Much more of the mysterious figure to come - sorry the update is taking so long....

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/08/07 Title: Chapter 7: You Take My Breath Away

Aw, great update! Love the lines. Hell, even hurt Dean is just a crack up.  And Sam worring about bleaching his hair -hilarious! Can't wait how the "creepy-rooftop-dude" will step up his game. Oh, and please take care of the Impala - wouldn't want to leave "her" unattended for too long :)  Thanks for the great read!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the awesome review. Gotta love Dean...So glad that you are enjoying it. I promise that even though I've left the boys and the Impala unattended for too long, there should be an update soon...

 
Summary:

A bad moon rises over the Winchesters when a stop for coffee and a meal turns into a hunt that threatens the brother's existence. Will Sam save his wounded brother, or will Dean's belief that what's dead should stay dead drive him to risk it all? Co-written by Freyja529 and Gaelicspirit.

Banner by Sojourner84


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 32930
[Report This] Published: 23/07/07 Updated: 02/08/07


Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Move Swift

You guys really know how to keep up the suspense. Oh dear, Dean weak and Sam trapped. But knowing Dean he will struggle to keep his brother safe no matter at what cost. Can't wait for the next chapter! 

Author's Response:

You got it! Dean can't NOT protect his brother, no matter what condition he's in... even if it's simply through words and defiance. Sigh. Love that man.

Thanks for the review and for reading! We hope you like the next parts!

GS and Freyja

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: Shape Shift

Ahhhh, thanks so much for this amazing chapter. Very well wriitten.  Wonderful how you show us the brother love and Dean's thoughts about "the job". How far will Dean go for Sam? Can he protect him at all? You two really make a great team of writers. Can't wait for the update :)


Author's Response:

*grin*

Thanks for your comments!

We kinda chew around the edges of answers to your questions in the last chapter -- personally, I think Dean would go all the way for same (as evidenced by AHBL 2), but I also don't think he can always protect him.

Hope you like how this story rolls along -- and we look forward to hearing your comments!

Best -- GS and Freyja

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed
Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: Earth's Gift

Great ending! You guys did an awesome job, this was an amazing story! Thank you, you should team up more often :)


Author's Response:

*grin*

Thanks so much for the review and for reading the story! We really appreciate it and are so glad you enjoyed the ride.

Best -- GS and Freyja

 
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Categories: Orphan Characters: None
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Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed
Date: 24/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, interesting start! Poor Dean, what's going on with him? It sounds like Alzheimer, but knowing you I'm tempted to say you are taking us on a different road :)    Asylum was an amazing episode so I can't wait for the connection to Dean's mental state. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed
Date: 26/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh bambers, do you have to give us such a hard time? You go camping and leave us in a desperate need for an update to this amazing story ... lol! Wonderful description of Dean's feelings. I am deeply touched by the "just in case" moment.  Have a great time off  and then hurry with the update.... pleeeeaaase  :)  Thanks, Dagmar



Author's Response: lol...it is killing me to go away...actually just snuck in a little extra time!! glad you liked the "just in case" moment!! have a great weekend!! bambers;)

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed
Date: 30/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hey bambers, good to have you back :)  Ohhh, this is getting better and better! Yep, definately another great cliffhanger. So sad how Sam made Dean write down the motel information. What's happening to Dean now? And poor Sam, being torn apart by the guilt of having missed something important. Wonderfully written! More soon pleeeaase, really SOON...??... lol! Thanks, Dagmar

Author's Response: aww...thanks, so glad to be back!! glad you liked the cliffie!! yeah, poor Dean having to write down the motel address, it must've killed him to have to do it!! thanks for reading!! so glad you are enjoying!! bambers;)

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed
Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Amazing! Thrilling! All of your stories are great but this one is so intensive. Dean is losing it and Sam is desperate. I love how you let us take a look inside of Dean's brain and how you share Sam's feelings with us. It almost makes me cry. You are absolutely talented. You make the reader want to reach out so bad and help the boys no matter what.  I can easily see why this is your favorite story. You are completely putting your heart into it. I love it! Thank you bambers!  

Author's Response: awww...i'm so blushing here!! so awesome that you like the insights into Sam and Dean and how they are handling the situation!! it's really hard not to feel bad for them both in this situation cause they are each dealing with a different kind of torment...thanks so much for the awesome review!! it made my day!! bambers;)

 
Reviewer: Soennelchen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Reading fast... catching up on chapters as I was away for a while. Another amazing update full of angst and brother love. Dean's moments of normality are so touching. I can't wait where you are taking us next bambers. Thank you!

Author's Response: aawww...thanks!! so thrilled you are liking the story so far asi ti s my fav!! glad you think the moments of Dean's clarity are touching!! that is so awesome!! thanks again for reading!! bambers;)