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Penname: deansangel462 [Contact]
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Real name: Tara Status: Member Member Since: 22/11/10 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by deansangel462 Summary:
When Dean disappears, Sam is plunged into a desperate race to find his brother before he pays the price in a deathly game with a long forgotten past. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: House of Cards Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 21460 [Report This] Published: 06/12/08 Updated: 08/01/09
Reviewer: deansangel462 Signed
 Date: 25/11/10 Title: Chapter 3: Touch the Other Side You are over describing things and making the Winchesters sound like cry babies!! I don't like it, I tried to keep reading, thought maybe some sort of action or actual story line would come about but it never did!! It only kept losing my interest, and confusing me!! I am sorry but next time don't use so many adjectives and use more fighting scenes! You have them all crying more in this story than fighting!! It's just not beleivable!! I'm sorry you feel that way - there is an element of action in this story, but it simply was never going to be the focus for the tale. Some of the most striking scenes in the show are emotional, reflective ones, and that was something that fit the storyline more than fighting. Thank you for the feedback. Summary:
The girl name Sasha Bernett who has been possessed for three years and since she came to Ohio, she firstly met Samuel Winchester who befriends her and realised she's a demon. Categories: Action, General, AU, Scripts Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 3342 [Report This] Published: 08/02/10 Updated: 11/02/10
Reviewer: deansangel462 Signed
Date: 23/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nothing You Can Do You need to re-read your writing and edit it. The sentences don;t make any sense, and you have words that need to be cut out of them all together. I did not like it.. It made me very confused! i don't think I will be reading your work anytime in the future. It is HORRIBLE!!! Summary:
Spoilers up to 6.08 T for language if the title didn't give it away. Dean gets a frantic phone call from Lisa, Ben is missing. Dean and Sam set out to find the boy before he gets himself killed. For anyone that reads my Ben stories, this is not my Ben and none of the parameters of that AU apply here. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 19284 [Report This] Published: 19/11/10 Updated: 24/11/10
Reviewer: deansangel462 Signed
 Date: 23/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I like it....it mingles good with the new season. On to the next chapter.... Hope you continue to enjoy. Thanks for reading and reviewing. lostatc
Reviewer: deansangel462 Signed
Date: 23/11/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Really good!! This should be made into one of their episodes!! It kept my attention !!! Well done. That's about as high a compliment as I could receive. Thank you. lostatc |
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