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Real name: Rae M Status: Member Member Since: 07/04/07 Website: http://ray-morgan.blogspot.com/ Beta-reader: No
Reviews by Rae666 Summary:
Sam's 15 and sick of being called Sammy, sick of being told what to do and sick of being punished for not wanting the life forced on him. After disobeying again and being punished again, Sam defies John's final word and instead rushes into the woods only to find trouble.
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: Bruised. Not Broken Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 13536 [Report This] Published: 13/07/09 Updated: 17/09/09
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 Date: 30/07/09 Title: Chapter 5: Guilt Scheeelz!!! Awesome chapter but you're killing me! Poor Sam!!! I just wanna hug him. Camyll really is awesome, I'm so totally loving her and her relationship with both boys. Hehe, and Sam the eternal geek boy. Very awesome. Loved the way you wrote him this chapter - all his thoughts, his guilt and the nightmares, his wanting to stop fighting but not knowing how. Seriously - you're rocking this freestyling! Author's Response: Woo! So many stars, thanks so much Rae, I'm really glad you're still enjoying this story. Aww, I know, Sammy does need a hug, but I will try my best to help him out. lol duude! I'm so excited to know that you find Camyll awesome and love her relationships with the boys, she doesn't see Sam and Dean Winchester, she sees two boys she likes hanging out with. Of course, her realtionship with Dean is a little different as she gets on with Sam 90% of the time. rofl I know, right? Trust Sam to know these things, I'm just beaming because it means a lot that you loved the way I wrote him. yay! I rock freestyling. Thanks. Much appreciated <3
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Date: 17/08/09 Title: Chapter 6: Fear Awwww! So damn cute!!! I love the relationship you have forged between Bobby and Camyll. It's so believable for Bobby to be like that, so damn Bobby :D And his little backstory there was heartwrenching... *sigh* We never didn't get to experience HIS downward spiral on the show after his wife... Awesome, awesome chapter but then I expect nothing less from you :D Can't wait for more. Author's Response: So many stars! Aww Rae I love hearing from you, heehe so glad you liked the 'how' Bobby and Camyll developed a relationship, none of them are saying it aloud but they see each other as father and daughter. It's a relief to know you found Bobby's growing attachment to Camyll believable. I really did want to know a bit more of Bobby's backstory, especially how he dealt with losing his wife, so I'm glad this worked for you. *facemelt* Nothing less? Thank you! I'll try not to cock up the rest eh...LOL <3
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Date: 02/09/09 Title: Chapter 7: Confessions AWESOME!!!! How did I miss thsi before? :D Tis awesome! I love that Camyll knows a little secret about Dean and the fact that he likes reading - it's so cute and I can so picture it. Poor Sammy and Camyll though! Still stuck down there. I love how Sam tells her to go ahead and search but she doesn't wanna leave him alone. *sigh* Big hugs all around. Brilliant chapter ^_^ Author's Response: Duuude! I always have the biggest smile when I read your reviews! :D Thanks for liking Camyll's little confession about knowing Dean's secret, I'm glad you can picture Dean reading!!! Aww I know *hugs all* I love Sam and Camyll relationship, they're fun to write. Thanks again hon, muchly appreciated! <3
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Date: 02/09/09 Title: Chapter 8: Resentment YEY! He found them!!! He found them!! :D I loved her plan to through her shoes up, very very clever of her and it worked :D woo! The Dean and John scene was heartbreaking, Dean getting it all out there and John being John. Poor guys, and with Bobby stuck in the middle. Awww! Major guilt and angst for the lot of them. But he found them!!! YEY! I can't wait for the next angstful chapter :D Author's Response: YEY!! Finally Dean found them, I'm so glad you liked Camyll's idea to throw her shoes :D Poor Bobby being in the middle of those two, it wasn't until I finished writing and read it back that I was like, awwww Dean! But yes, now he's found them lets hope nothing goes wrong eh, problem with freestyle is that it all just happens as I write it. lol <3
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Date: 18/09/09 Title: Chapter 9: Sacrifice AWWWW! Love! I love the Dean and Sam exchange, both saying how they were wrong and the other was right. Nothing like a bit of life threatening drama to make people see sense, lol. Also love how Sam wasn't willing to leave Camyll but she's so strong! She an awesome character ^_^ He'd hold on to that thought. Totally loved this line and how it echoed the title :D So much trust Sam puts in Dean to save him. Awesome. Awesome chapter as always :D Author's Response: You floor me with your reviews, I LOVE that you loved Dean and Sam's little exchange, I wondered if it was too short but I'm glad I left it as is. I know, right? A little life threatening and people spill it! LOL I coudn't be more chuffed that you like Camyll, I'm glad you think she's awesome and strong! - Sam's quite attached to her hehe, plus it's like you said, Sam trusts Dean with his life and that's what motivated him to be brave enough to let go. Yay! I'm glad you liked that line, thanks for giving me a boost as always, muchly appreciated hon! <3 Summary:
4th July Hilton Drabble Challenge. Check out the other entries! (And nag them if they haven't posted yet!) Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 95 [Report This] Published: 13/07/09 Updated: 13/07/09
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Date: 13/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Awww! So short but so powerful. The repetition was just so perfect. ^_^ Great work! Summary:
They all saw the flames. They all stood around while the firemen did their work. They all wished there was something that they could do. Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1822 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Awww! That was so sad and heartbreaking. It's nice when communities come together in times of tragedy in order to help. And I really liked how you showed how opinions can change and actions from before or after an event such as this - like with Helen Weeks and her caring for Dean. Awesome piece of work! Author's Response: I actually planned for the story to be funny. It clearly didn't go the way I expected! I'm so glad you liked the story! Thank you so much! Summary:
Entry for the Fire Challenge 2009. And then the world stops.
Thanks again for all the kind words about my artworks. I really, really appreciate them! I am proud to be a part of this great community! And thanks, Tree, for offering us such a great challenge! *smishes ya* I am such a crappy friend. I forgot the most important bit here. Cal, please accept my eternal thanks. I could have never done any of these things without your constant support. You challenge me to give my best, you help me up when I stumble. Thanks for that. I am so glad to have met you. You are a true friend and an awesome beta! Miss ya! This one is for you Cal-Kiddo! Can't wait to give you an overdue hug. You deserve it and will have to endure it! No matter what. Hey, I don't do chick-flick either, so what?! Categories: General, UnGen Challenges, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: Glimpses Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 852 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: She Awww! So sad!! Poor Mary! Totally loved the style you wrote this in, it worked really nicely. Rae Congrats again! Loved the story! Thanks for reading and reviewing mine! Oh and the stars, too! Mary was the easiest POV for me. I could relate to her very well. John was very difficult to do. I understand him but I could never write him as well as you did. He is as complex as his sons but then again so different... Anyways, glad you liked it! That's an honor! Hugs, Ilka
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Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 2: He That was awesome! I love how it follows on from Mary's and the imagery is so perfect. Awesome job, And loving the format ;) There you are again! YAY, one review for each chappie,THANKS! I tried to put some chronology into the chappies as the format and the style would maybe be hard to read. Thank god it worked for you. Loving the format as well, by the way. Ilka
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Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: It Ooo, niice! Love it. He he. And I love how you did the formatting, not weird at all. The YED jammed into the centre, almost kind of seperating John and Mary. Great!! Isn't it just great being a writer and getting to say/write nasty, mean and terrible things? And then it gets even better. You get reviews praising you for being a mean SOB! LOL. Life is funny. And YAY! You picked up on the YED stnding in between them! *yells vindictively* It worked! I thought about putting John in the middle first but felt it better if Azazel stepped between them, the intruder and destroyer... YAY again. Thanks for leaving 3 (!!) reviews. Very much appreciated! Hugs and congrats once more on winning and scoring a feature to boot! Ilka Summary:
For the UnGen Summer Fire Challenge 2009. A demon, a child and a psychic. And one night that changed the lives of the Winchester family forever. “What do you remember of that night?” “I remember the fire... the heat.”Disclaimer: It all started from here, and it still belongs to Mr K.
Categories: General, One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 2896 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: YED, Kansas, 1983 Awesome POV! I love how the YED reflects upon the past and what Dean said to him. So very awesome indeed :D Love it! HI Rae Yeah he had to have a little look see at Dean, didn't he? It means a lot that you liked this, thanks, Mary xx
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Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 2: Dean Winchester, Kansas, 2005 Awww! Awesome, very awesome. I love how ever at that age, Dean took it to be his responsibility to look after Sam and that he wouldn't let anyone else have him - so perfect. Hi again I wanted to show that this is were it started, Dean's need to protect and shelter his little brother, glad you liked, Mary x
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Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Missouri Moseley, Kansas, November 1983 Awesome choice of a POV! And the loop? poor Mary. Great descriptive :D Loved it. Hi I had to put the death loop in, I couldn't resist Missouri seeing that the trauma had left Mary stuck, especially as she was still there years later when the boys came back to help Jenny. Thanks, Mary x Summary:
It started with fire... UnGen summer challenge. Spoilers for seasons 1-4. Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 411 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: (not) Sam Way awesome! Short but so perfect. Totally loved this when I got a glimpse before and totally love it still now.I just love who you chose for the POVS!
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Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 2: (not) Dean Sweet! Totally love it. Defo one of my favourite episodes still so it's great to read this snippet. I love how the skinwalker is taunting him, so perfect.. ^_^
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Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: (not) Kate Milligan Love this idea for a POV and that she knew how broken John had been about Mary. I wondered if she'd known about her or the way she died, so I really like the idea that she did know. So damn awesome!!! Summary:
Ungen Fire Challenge story, three points of view about that pivotal night in the Winchester family history. Huge thanks to Chasidern for the amazing banner, I've been sitting on it for weeks, anxiously waiting for the signal to post!
Categories: General, UnGen Challenges, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3265 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 22/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Ring of Fire Great entry!! I totally loved how you had Mary's old hunter knowledge showing through, I never really thought about it before, but it would make so much sense! But poor Mary, having to witness that. And John fixing Jenny's new door, niice. ^_^ Makes you wonder what else he did while he was in Lawrence. But poor Dean not feeling strong enough. Bless him. Poor little kid, I can believe that of him. Great job. Author's Response: Hi Rae, Thanks for the detailed review, glad you liked my entry. I thought the wedding photo on the wall looked too old-fashioned to be of John & Mary, so I decided it was Mary's parents, and that got me thinking about In the Beginning. I thought, I can use this! so I worked Mary's prior life into her scene; it felt right. I had to find some way of getting John back to the house, and since we know he's in Lawrence at the end of Home, that worked as a starting place. Besides, I wanted to try writing a little Missouri; she's a feisty lady and one of the few people who can order John around. I would really love to see a John and Bobby scene on air, maybe a flashback is at least a possibility? Dean's POV was the hardest, but I went back to what he told Lucas in Dead in the Water, "I *try* to be brave", as if he thought he hadn't been brave or brave enough during the fire, poor baby. Again, thanks for reviewing! Sue Summary:
My entry for the UnGen Summer Fire Challenge. Mary's view... Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1396 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 22/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh God, that was so beautiful and heartbreaking! I loved all of Mary's thoughts in the italics - nicely done! Awesome job! Summary:
 My entry for the Summer Challenge - It started with fire. Three different people had three different outlooks on the fire.Categories: General, One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1990 [Report This] Published: 21/07/09 Updated: 21/07/09
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Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Congrats again! Man, that was awesome. I loved the way you wrote Azazel, like he was playing some kind of game and only he knew the rules, so twisted and evil, but so perfect. "Always had a smile on her face and sunshine in her eyes" Such a gorgeous description ^_^ Mr Barnes view totally broke my heart, especially with the description at the end. And Man, Mary's view? I love how you did that! Such an amazing job. Seriously, awesome work!! Author's Response: Thank you Rae. I really tried hard with this one and it paid off! Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 :D I don't care what you say, it doesn't suck. I love it. The wording, the rhymes, the beat, hehe, love it all. ^_^ And it's so perfect for Sam. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I love it!! Awesome Bambers :D And so damn hilarious. I lurved Sammy's responses but this is still my favourite line "God, I'm starving, what's for lunch." Hehe, don't worry, no one will come hunting you down. Summary: Dean loses the toss, jumps into the hole, takes off his shirt...
Drabble word: Sweat...as in perspire to be polite. Enjoy... Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 24/07/09 Updated: 24/07/09
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Date: 24/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hehe, niice. Teasing us dirty minded. Yummy, gotta love the sweat on those guys. Now perhaps, a droolble oops Drabble for Sam too lol I was sooo hot today, just had to have them Hot too, well they are Hot anyway but... Thanks for the review Jacq x Summary: Ramblings of an old teacher, after she is forced out of the quietness of her house in Jefferson, Missouri on a false fire alarm. Featuring weeDean. Set in season 1 ‘Devil’s trap’.
Categories: Missing Scenes, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1590 [Report This] Published: 25/07/09 Updated: 25/07/09
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Date: 26/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That is so sweet! ^_^ I really enjoyed this. I'm a big lover of sweet weechester stories and really loved this one. Summary:
This cannot possibly be legal. Drabble! Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 108 [Report This] Published: 27/07/09 Updated: 28/07/09
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Date: 28/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 He he, I love reading the brotherly teasing between these two. And this is made even stranger by the fact I was telling my brother yesterday that summer pink is definitely his colour :D Awesome drabble! LOL Awesome! I love when art and life intersect! \o/ Thanks for the awesome review! :D M
Summary: Dean groaned and sank onto his bed. “All I wanted to do is to see the largest frying pan in the world. That’s all! A bit of downtime! Is that too much to ask!?”
Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1595 [Report This] Published: 10/09/09 Updated: 11/09/09
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Date: 11/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Go Fly a Kite, Please LMAO! Awesome crack fic. It was a fun read and definitely something different - which is always a good thing. ^_^ Hi Rae Thanks for the review! I wasn't sure if anyone understands the story. I wasn't sure if *I* understand the story myself! LOL Yeah, something different is always a good thing, although not many people might have caught it! Thanks again! |
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