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Bruising Red Sky by penmin Rated: K+ [Reviews - 4]
Summary: He tried to cry out, shout out who's there? But his throat was as dry as his eyes had been and it came out as a guttural croak. Stage three was a failure then, try to communicate with the enemy, he mentally sighed and mentally added a fail cross on his things to do list, this was going to be a game of patience, and so far he was losing.

Small Spoilers in Part 1 for Lucifer Rising, small Spoilers in Part 2 for The Real Ghostbusters.

One of the Brothers has been taken, but this enemy may not be what they think...


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4800
[Report This] Published: 20/11/09 Updated: 24/11/09


Reviewer: shmrck14 Signed
Date: 24/11/09 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2

I really like this!  Great twist, Henrikson's notes get preserved.

I wanted to see some follow-up from 5.03 with someone forcing Sam into a situtation where he had to exorcise demons.  I was thinking hunters, but this works too! 

I wouldn't mind seeing more stories with the Feds lending whatever support they can to Sam and Dean.



Author's Response:

Many thanks for leaving a review, I have so often wondered why the authorities didn't get more involved, they must know whats going on, I have a sudden urge to write a CSI/Supernatural crossover, imagine what Grissom would have made of a Shifter!

I still think at some point Sam may be able to use his powers, even if its just to save Dean's life again.

Thank you again

Jacq

 
What Lies Beneath by cherry Rated: K+ [Reviews - 2]
Summary: What if in When the levee breaks Sam’s funky mojo didn’t work on Alastair? This is the cause of to much thinking on my part.

Categories: General, AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 9053
[Report This] Published: 01/12/09 Updated: 07/12/09


Reviewer: shmrck14 Signed
Date: 03/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great stsart, and the logic in your note makes perfect sense to me.  It  was odd that Alastair appeared first to Sam.  I'm looking forward to see where this story goes.

Author's Response: Good I thought every one would think I was loony. Phew. Thanx Charity