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Penname: Slystir [Contact]
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Real name: Sly Stir Status: Member Member Since: 02/11/10 Website: Beta-reader: Uh, I just like to read it. Reviews by Slystir Summary:
Dean takes out a cookie and hands it to Sam, and after a moment’s hesitation, takes one for himself. After all, today is a special day. Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3832 [Report This] Published: 08/08/09 Updated: 08/08/09
Summary:
Set mid season 4. Mild spoilers, but nothing specific. In 1987, John has a bad case of zombies - perhaps his hardest yet. Meanwhile, in 2009, his boys discover that while some witches do no harm, objects in the rear view memory may appear hazier than they are. And they carry shovels. Rated T for language. Categories: General, Romance, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 61073 [Report This] Published: 09/08/09 Updated: 13/10/09
Reviewer: Slystir Signed
Date: 27/09/11 Title: Chapter 22: Hearts vs Heads (Away Game) I just read this whole thing and I gotta say, I loved it! I liked the case, the flashbacks, Chief Frost and everything.
Nicely done.
Sly Summary:
Since the fire so much had changed. Mary gone, Dean silent. Little Sammy cried for his mom, wailed and wailed with only Dean able to comfort him. John drinks for escape until his son’s eyes reflect how much he’s failed his children. Angst & regrets. Wee!chesters
Another awesome banner by highvoltagerock! Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2355 [Report This] Published: 28/06/11 Updated: 28/06/11
Reviewer: Slystir Signed
Date: 23/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 An excellent story. Well written and well paced. I normally don't go in for straight descriptive stories. I prefer the more conversational style where the characters' feelings are portrayed by the words they speak. The dialog style I guess, but I was temped to read this and it was very good. Nice descriptive text, non repetative and actually thought provoking. How many times have I stood at a funeral and seen that the spouse it thought to be MORE bereaved than the children. This really brings Dean's silent grief to the fore by describing John's feelings when he looks into his child's eyes.
Lovely Thank you for posting. Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. It's funny, because I love writing dialogue, but with the gist of this story, Dean not talking, it does become more an internal monologue of what John is feeling when he looks in those silent eyes. I'm always looking to get inside the characters' heads, so glad this one worked. Take care, B.J. |
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