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Penname: naughtyafro [Contact]
Real name: Becki Groves
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Summary: What happens when gym class turns into Sam's worst nightmare? Will he tell his family or continue to suffer?

Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 15890
[Report This] Published: 02/09/07 Updated: 15/10/07


Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Amazing Writing!

Grr! The man makes my blood boil!

 He Better Be Getting A Comeupence! :D

 

 
Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Amazing Writing!

Grr! The man makes my blood boil!

 He Better Be Getting A Comeupence! :D

 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

o/

Yeah! Finally the Arsehole Will Get Whats Coming!

Great Writing!



Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15/10/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow! Amazing Ending ... Becker Got His Just Desserts and we find out about Sam and Joe, :) Brill writing! Well Done!

 



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Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

John struggles to deal with the aftermath when both Sam and Dean are injured on a hunt. Gen Wee!Chester, Dean is 12, Sam is 8.


Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3243
[Report This] Published: 08/09/07 Updated: 08/09/07


Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! That was gorgeous!

My Eyes were swelling up when john and sam were about to cry.... Oh God im such a wuss!

fantastic writing!



Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm glad you enjoyed.  *passes tissues*

 
Faults by Starliteyes17 Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Stanford AU. For decades, scientists have been saying it is a matter of when, not if, the San Andreas Fault will falter again. When it does, California will lie in ruins, millions of lives will be lost, and chaos will prevail. In 2004, their predictions came true.

Categories: AU, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 25866
[Report This] Published: 17/09/07 Updated: 24/09/07


Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Wow! Amazing! I Love It!

Great Job! :D

 
Damnations by ThePasserby Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

[SEQUEL TO DIMENSIONS]

Sam tried to tell himself it was nothing at first, just his imagination; but more often than not Dean was shutting the laptop when he entered the room, taking off to undisclosed areas of the library during research lulls, and staring off into space in deep thought when he thought Sam wasn't paying attention. Sam was no idiot; Dean was hiding something.

After Anna's death in April, Dean is more than messed up. But what if death is only one-dimensionsal? Can Dean fight the curses that seem to follow him and the ones he loves, or will he learn too late that all of them are meant to be damned?


Categories: General, Romance, Action, Misc Characters: None
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Series: Through The Dimensions
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 19129
[Report This] Published: 22/09/07 Updated: 02/01/08


Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

HooooZah!

 Fianlly Yes! You Bring Me Back Anna! Well I've Been Waiting A While and Yay! The Time Has Come For More Of Her!

 You Know I Absolutly LOVED The First Story So I Can't Ruddy Wait For You To Bring Me Some More!

Brillant Opening!

((I ve Got Chills :P ))



Author's Response: gosh, I always love review from YOU in particular, because you're so darn enthusiastic! You make me feel so good! I'm glad you liked, and I hope you're prepared for ALOT of Anna and Dean in this one - Sam is only in the very beginning and the last fourth of the story.

 
Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

YAY! You Kept To The Deadline! ;)

 *Does Happy Dance*

Was Counting Down The Days!

Caww Blimey Raw Emotion Or What!

Absolutly Love It.. Yeah Angst!

Keep Bringin' Me More! :D :D

~Your Enthustatic Friend Becki :)

 
Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Oh My Good God!

Dean's More Screwed Up Than I Thought .... Poor Bugger!

I Will Miss Sam But Caww Blimey I Need To Know What The Bloody Hell's Going On! Lol! Bring The next Chapter Quick!

Seriously, Great Writing, Intresting Research On The Numerology and i really hope the next 2 weeks fly by!

Amazing Job Yet Again, Keep Up The Fantastic Work!

 ~ Becki  

 
Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

OMG! Tear Jerker!

 Awesome emotive writing!

~ Becki

 
Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Mindblowing!

 Brillant Writing, Im Hooked and want to know more!

Patience? Dont think i have any!

 
Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17/12/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Gosh Babe! That was some Freakin' Writer's Block!

That was Brillant i love the little 'stepbackandadmirethescenerio' moments, Its awesome!

 Cant Wait For The Next Chapter .. Woop! Extra Long? *PumpsFists*

 Best Keep That Promise! Keep Bringing Us More x

 
Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Reassure you?

Only that this was awesome!,, Gosh i miss Sam but good things come to those who wait i guess.. New character? Interesting!

Keep Writing, You doing a brillant and complusive story!

 
Summary:

 Sam has an admirer. And Dean has a hater. How far will she, or it, go to have him, and keep him? Spoilers for pilot (Like we all haven't seen that before, right?) Spoilers for Asylum too. (We've all seen that one more then once too, right?)

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Great artwork.  Thanks to everyone, and congrats to Mizpah for taking 1st.  I'd also like to send my deepest thanks to Vanessa for nominating it! That was the biggest compliment anyone could give!

For all those that don't particularly care for romance, it's my version of romance, meaning it's dark and twisted, not loving and caring.

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Big huge thanks to bulletbabe for the banner, it is so totally awesome and I thank her a million!


Categories: General, Romance, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 83389
[Report This] Published: 13/10/07 Updated: 21/03/08


Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh! Intresting!

 Bring Some More! Fab Writing :)



Author's Response:

thanks, try to

 
Summary:

Sam started the downward spiral right after the events in Cold Oak.  What happened as Sam tried to stay in control and the panic that threatens to overcome him.

 


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3808
[Report This] Published: 29/10/07 Updated: 01/11/07


Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow!

Amazing, Beautiful Writing!

Please, Keep Writing, The Story Sounds Intresting!

~Becki

 
Summary:

NOMINATED FOR THE SENSUE PEOPLE'S CHOICE AWARDS! VOTE FOR ME AT THE FOLLOWING LINK!!!

http://sensue.net/snfa/voting/index.php

For the first time, I wonder what'll happen if they don't find me. My mind starts to stumble over itself as I allow the possibility of dying alone in this place to register, and I suddenly feel like all of my insides are constricting, because this can't be happening, I can't be dying, I'm only nine years old, my family needs me...

I doubt anyone else has ever spent a New Year's Eve that was worse than this one.


Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Worse Than This One
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1585
[Report This] Published: 15/12/07 Updated: 15/12/07


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Date: 17/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: New Year's Evil

Wow!

Amazing! So FastPaced towards the end, I'm guessing the other views will be the events leading up to the kidnapping?

 

 
Summary:

I wonder if I’m a monster; not the kind we hunt, but the kind that people read about or see in a movie and wonder how a person could be so wrong. I think that maybe I’m the kind of father that children grow up determined not to be, that daughters are frightened of and sons are shut down by and wives are ashamed of. I keep my eyes facing forward as I search intently for the black van I know carries my youngest son, and I wonder how my oldest can stand to know my blood runs in his veins.

I wonder how either of my boys can bear to love me....

I doubt anyone has ever had a New Year's Eve worse than this one.


Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Worse Than This One
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2316
[Report This] Published: 15/12/07 Updated: 15/12/07


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Date: 17/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: New Year's Resolution

OMG!

That was heartwrenching! "My resolution is to start lying to Sam"

*Is stunned*

 

 
Summary:

(spoilers for AHBL 1)

Aeternus Eternus: eternal, never ending.

Bobby stopped as his brain tried to comprehend what his heart already knew. "Jesus." It wasn't a prayer. Prayers held hope, however slim. The scene before him held none.

 


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4186
[Report This] Published: 15/12/07 Updated: 19/12/07


Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Without

My Eyes Are Glassy, wow that blew me away... the heart beating extract, caww that was beautiful!

Author's Response: *bhg* Thank you! *dances*

 
Summary:

Dean sat on his own bed and stared at the wall for hours, then put his face in his hands and sat like that for the rest of the night. Sam thought he heard him crying for a long time.

Sam hated that he couldn't get over his fear. He hated that he had nightmares. He hated that he was scaring Dean.

Sam hated himself for his weakness.


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 14340
[Report This] Published: 03/01/08 Updated: 06/10/08


Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow!,, This story is amazing! You're doing such a brill job, going through Sam's fear... Makes it feel so real

Can't wait for chapter 4!

 
Summary:

 

"It voids the contract, see? Looks like you'll have to give him back. Sorry. Except, I'm not."


Categories: Drabbles, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Snapshots
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 385
[Report This] Published: 04/01/08 Updated: 04/01/08


Reviewer: naughtyafro Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, That was really aweinspring especially the last lines .. Great Job!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! Glad you liked it.