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Penname: bulletbabe [Contact]
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Real name: louy Status: Member Member Since: 01/04/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
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Reviews by bulletbabe Summary:
After millennia of evil deeds, a fallen angel is given a second chance and is reborn as a mortal. 28 years later and he’s gotten himself into a spot of bother. Spoilers throughout Season 1 & 2 and this is ending up as an AU. Categories: General, AU, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: Shadows of a Morning Star Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 61077 [Report This] Published: 24/05/07 Updated: 24/06/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 11/02/08 Title: Chapter 18: Blood and Salt Knew that Ashlyn was big trouble, and now Bobby and Missouri may be in it up to their necks too...great stuff...
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 11/02/08 Title: Chapter 19: Destination Unknown I can just see that dog moving it's head from side to side, watching them both bicker...lol great image...moving on... I love the way dogs do that... listen to you and they make you so sure that they can really understand you. Thanks!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 11/02/08 Title: Chapter 20: Wrath OMG Where are you going with this..worried but have to move on...this story is way too compulsive for my health...
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 11/02/08 Title: Chapter 21: Don't say sorry... I'd love to see Missouri wield that spoon for real on the show...glad you didn't turn Dean completely evil, well, just yet anyway... The threat is always there, lol... I loved that spoon comment in the show :D And nah... not just yet >:)
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 11/02/08 Title: Chapter 22: Don't play with fire Go Bobby, he WILL save the day - that's what he's for...and damned creepy ending to this chapter...moving on.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 11/02/08 Title: Chapter 23: Nobody's Listening Great cliffhanger and good place to stop till tomorrow, will be back and hopefully get up to date in the morning...great so far!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 14/02/08 Title: Chapter 24: Forbidden Fruit Dont you just hate it when the real world gets in the way of reading a great story? But back now with a vengeance...and another great chapter. I felt for Ellen but thank God for Bobby, that man is a one horse cavalry isn't he! The real world is evil... it gets in the way of sooo much :D And gotta have some Bobby - yays for Bobby, he is one of the best non-Winchester characters.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 14/02/08 Title: Chapter 25: A devil by any other name would be just as evil… Loved this line, absolute poetry...Memories from a life that was long forgotten flooded his mind. He could hear cries and screams and could feel fire and ice. He could see the beginning of time and he could see the end, he could see the stars forming and the earth turning as it grew until it eventually stopped, fire racing across every piece of detail. The memories rested and he breathed again. Great chapter, moving on... Author's Response: Thank you! Every now and then I'll get a moment of inspiration so I'l glad you like that bit!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 14/02/08 Title: Chapter 26: Cat and Mouse Damn, I knew I was going to hate it when there were no more next buttons... This is a great story Rae and very well written. It's quite addictive and I am quite sad there's nowhere to go right now...don't take too long to update cos I know you have a lot of fans out there...and I am one! Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for reading. I'm working on an update, I promise. Don't know when it'll be up but I'm hoping by the end of next week at least. :) Thanks loads! It means so much.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 27: The Sky is Over Damn, you really picked up the pace with this chapter, and Dean killing Becky, wow...Can't wait to see how you plan to round up this plot, but I do trust you - you have the imagination to make it work... Author's Response: I decided it was time to get down to the evil part >:) It's hard but I've got it planned out, thank God, or else I think I'd be worrying. Thank you so much! :)
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 10/03/08 Title: Chapter 28: “I’ll see you on the dark side of the moon” Wow, powerful chapter, that is one nasty being inhabiting Dean's body at the moment (no matter what he says about having been there all the time) and if that is all Lucifer, where the hell is Dean? We need to know! Great update Rae, and keep it coming... Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot. Yep - one nasty dude! He's in there somewhere... waiting for the right moment. :P Or is he...? Thank again!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 02/04/08 Title: Chapter 29: Into the Night So Becky's pretty screwed then, oh man..you are having way too much fun with this one... ...loved the whole party and the 'suggestions' to 'drink themselves to death' of to 'jump in the fire'...really nasty (but in a good way) lol Great work Rae, still enjoying this a lot! Author's Response: *shifty eyes* Whatever makes you think I'm having fun? >:D Okay, yeah... I am. I think the party and the suggestions came from my brain mixing Simon Said and Magnificent Seven together :D He he! Thank you loads! I'm really glad you still like this - means a lot from you!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 07/05/08 Title: Chapter 30: Raining Blood Man, I love Ripper, and I have a seriously bad feeling for Sarah...and Dean really is in a pickle isn't he? Not sure how you're gonna be getting him out of this one but wow it's a blast finding out...Great work mate...post update soon please! Summary:
The boys are in for more than they bargained for when the hunt for a spirit brings them face to face with the elusive FTRA, and something else they weren't expecting.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 33093 [Report This] Published: 03/06/07 Updated: 05/11/07
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 24/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 How did I miss this gem! Yet again you've got the voices just right, so many classic lines, there's just not enough space to quote them. Nice to see your work getting the stars it deserves.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 24/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I love the 'Dean as a natural nomad' it's such an accurate description. So do people actually do this in America????
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 24/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I NEED to hear Dean singing that song! Please forward this story to kripke now, maybe he can film it for season 4. Another great one Maggie.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 24/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 OOh Love it when the plot suddenly thickens like that! Great banter.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 24/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Great suspense in this chap. Great monster, Great dialogue. As always, will catch up on next five chaps tomorrow. Been a great ride so far though!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 25/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Love the Raven character, great description has made her very real. Great plot move making Dean almost immune to the creature. Moving on.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 25/09/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Argh, great time to end the chapter! I really wanted to review every chapter, but got so caught up with the story, I completely forgot, just kept pressing the next button. This is a great mix of fast paced and beautifully described that it's compulsive reading. Awesome as ever Maggie.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 05/10/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Great update - glad the boys are getting back together, they don't seem to do to good by themselves! Keep it comming!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 You got that right - Childhood was definately twisted!! Another great chapter. This reads so well it could be an episode. And the 'in the tunnel' description had me wondering when was the last time you were on a train cos you can sit inside you know! Way too real. lol Great job! Louy
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 17/10/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Great update - and good to see such a well thought out plot. I love stories that push the SPN mythology, invent new supernatural threats etc... and thats one of many skills you excell at! Fantastic!!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 25/10/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Tension overdrive!!!! Great chapter - fantastic description of the house and Dean's quips are right on the nose. Gotta hand it to you, I love this story, hope it's not ending anytime soon!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 06/11/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Sad that this is over but elated at how good this story was. Everything came together nicely at the end and you've still left me wanting to read more - which is a good thing as I'll be watching out for your next story. This one was a great ride Maggie, as always! Thanks for entertaining us all with it!
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