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Penname: bulletbabe [Contact]
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Real name: louy Status: Member Member Since: 01/04/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
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Reviews by bulletbabe Summary: What happens when you can't remember who you are or what you've done? Just maybe, its better that way!
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 25295 [Report This] Published: 24/12/06 Updated: 24/12/06
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 Date: 11/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 First time I read this I was'nt a member so didn't review but need to put that right. This is a thrill, so well described, I love Jim, and the whole memory loss plot. Although I'v read a few ML it's rarely done this well. Great story, pleased to add to my favourites. Author's Response: Bullet- thanks very much- that's very kind of you. Yes- there are a bunch of ML's done now- not so many when Blank first came out. But I'm glad you liked it enough to be a favorite. Thanks much for taking the time to come back- that was extra special! Summary:
 Never leave a wounded predator alive! It might come back later when you least expect and rip out your heart!Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 20780 [Report This] Published: 25/12/06 Updated: 12/01/07
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Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Premeditation Read this before I was member, back in the old days - lol, so didn't review but decided to put that right mainly because I love this story. From the very first paragraph you had me hooked, the description of the knife and whetstone - just hyptnotic.
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Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Motivation The clock is ticking...cranking up the tension by degrees. ...prey and bait. Gordon is the best bad guy - wish this had been an episode!
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Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Hide and Seek It's a real skill to get the reader to see everything you want them to, and yet still allow them to have enough imagination to fill in the blanks for themselves - and you have that balance perfectly. This chapter had me on the edge of my seat all the way.
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Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 -- Blood and Orchids You are the cliffy queen - I'm remembering the first time I read this - it's just as frustrating but at least I can go straight to next chap. this time.
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Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 --- Taunts and Tactics Great fight sequence - it's the part of most action that often can be disappointing but not from you. I can see the fight just as surely as if I were standing in that greenhouse.
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Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 --- Rescues and Revenge This was one of my favourite bits - the way you twinned Dean and Gordon, by reverting back to the first chapter. They're almost two halves of the same being, and without Sam, Dean would be Gordon. Incredible that this was only your second story!! I am extreemly impressed. Summary: Dean is haunted by the flashback from a hunt that took place while Sam was at Stanford. He can't remember the details but what he can't recall can hurt him.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 26504 [Report This] Published: 29/12/06 Updated: 11/02/07
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Date: 22/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Fallen Angels I love this start, the banter is so believable between the two brothers and when Sam asks Dean if he wanted to have kids, funny and sad at the same time. I love this
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Date: 22/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Memory Rush WOW hurt Dean, and I have feeling theres more to follow, Brilliant!
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Date: 22/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 It Didn't Stop Turning These flashbacks are so intense, I love this story! Moving on to next chap.
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Date: 22/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 A Few Wrong Words Adictive story, I need to know how this will end!
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Date: 22/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Another great chapter, you use artistic licence beautifully, refering back to your other stories, makes the whole thing more real. Moving on to next chap.
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Date: 22/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Stumbling To The Light Flashbacks between Dean and John are heartbreaking, this is still a fantastic, and I'm still completely adicted.
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Date: 22/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Great to see lots of Caleb, he's not used anywhere near enough. Moving on to next chap.
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Date: 22/09/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 In A Stranger's Hands OMG Poor Dean, raced through this chap, may have to read it again later in case I missed anything but I just have to know how this ends!!!.
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Date: 22/09/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 One More Time, With Feeling Beautifully writen as always, hearwrenching stuff. Need to move on.
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Date: 22/09/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Hunt Part One: Eyewitness Accounts Jackasses is right. There just cut from the same cloth those two. Another great chap, must keep reading.
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Date: 22/09/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Hunt Part 2: Perception of Reality God this was a wild ride. I loved this story, read the whole thing in one go and would happily read it all again. Well done Terry this is great Summary: Helping Dean get through the nights when it just becomes too much to handle.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2060 [Report This] Published: 30/12/06 Updated: 30/12/06
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Date: 09/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 New reader - I gotta say I love your stuff, Keep it coming.
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Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 OMG Only just read this and if ever a one shot decerved a sequel its this. What are the chances you may get inspired to elaborate on this and turn it into a full story?
Author's Response: How funny. I think I get more requests for a sequel or something to this story than any other and I'm not adverse to it I just can't think where to go with it. I'm glad you liked it to much! Summary:
When I look at Dean Wichester, this is what I see. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 545 [Report This] Published: 30/12/06 Updated: 30/12/06
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Date: 09/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This just shows exactly where your talent lies, you are at your best describing emotion and character. This is beautiful - hard to believe you started here. I hope youv got a lot more in you. Summary: Dean POV. Lost in the dark nothingness. Angst. Dean’s thoughts, my thoughts. Everyone else has done it so, what the hell….
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 2652 [Report This] Published: 30/12/06 Updated: 30/12/06
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Date: 09/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 You are a poet! Came across your stuff by accident and I just cant stop reading it at the moment, I must just be an angstkitten, cos I am completely addicted. POST MORE!! Author's Response: hey again! Glad you like it! Until i started posting this stuff I really didn't know that angst was what i was writing and what i wanted to read. Summary:
banner created by Kira Reed When a hunt goes sideways, the brothers are hurt and lost in the northern Minnesota woods. They have only each other and their skills to get them out...and they aren't alone. They are being tracked by the 'perfect hunter'. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 67711 [Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06
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Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 When I read Abe, I always pictured Graham Greene, (Kicking Bird from Dances with wolves) in the role, he is such a real character to me. And all those little clues to the boys lives that you've scattered throughout the chapter make it even more so. As the reader I'm right there with him thinking ' What kind of lives thave these boys been subject to?' The small flashbacks from existing episodes serve to show just how befuddled Dean really is, mistaking Abe for his dad aside. And his unwavering self-sacrifice for his brother... I love this chapter with a passion - Heartwrenching. Author's Response: Ha! One of the stories I wrote for the VS Season 2, Unseen Heros, had an Native American character and we used Graham Greene as the "actor" for him. *grin* I think he'd also be perfect for Abe... I'll have to think about that when I ask, or, um, *cough* beg *cough* someone to make a banner for me for In the Light... I'd originally pictured him as Wes Studi (from Last of the Mohicans) but I think Graham works much better. :) This was a hard chapter for me -- not to write. The words felt like they poured out of me, but to feel. Taking Dean to such a place and having him need John so badly just tore at me. Does that sound weird? I mean I did it to him... anyway. Thanks for your continued reviews. You are making my day. :) GS
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Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Rock on Abe, I do love him! Although this chapter starts with some fantastic action, I've always seen it as a very personal piece of writing...the boys reminiscences prepares them both for the inevitable. And it's so rare to see them both in this position, ending up relying on a perfect stranger. And the other high point for me was the continuation of the Shtriga incident. Extreemly real, both in how Jim would try to cope with the wounds he sees in front of him, and how Dean would assume he'd failed. Always wondered just how much that one incident went to form Dean's adult character? Author's Response: I'm so glad you called out the flashback with Jim after the shtriga -- I really liked writing that part, having never really written any other person in their past before. I thought a lot about how that incident shaped Dean, how he might have reacted then and now... thanks for calling that out. :) I'm glad, too, that the end of the chapter worked for you because entering Abe into the picture was a chance I took and was so very pleased that it worked out okay. GS
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Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 And so..you get comfy, put your feet up and get ready for a mammoth reading session...and the RW decides to invade. But back now!! The flashbacks in this chapter are second to none, I've always thought they would hold their own as posted one shots. And the dialogue concerning the boys relationship with John is so touching and makes later on when Dean thinks his dad has finally come for them so much more poignant...but I'm jumping the gun... I particularly liked the link to 'Asylum', one of my favourit episodes... Author's Response: Darn that RW anyway! Doesn't it realize you need reading time?! You know what's funny is that you're making me want to go back and read my own story... I planned on doing so anyway so that I could make sure to keep Abe true to form since it had been awhile since I wrote him, but your comments are so... well, I thank you for them. And Asylum was one of my favorites also.:) Thanks again for reading! GS |
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