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Penname: saber [Contact]
Real name: judy vroom
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Summary:

This is a collection of drabbles I've written for the E/O Drabble challenge on FF.net.  Each week we're supplied with a word and sometimes a specific challenge.  Each chapter will be a different drabble.  Drabbles are 100 words each according to MS word and because of my OCDness I have actually hand counted quite a few of them. :)

Any drabble containing spoilers will be labeled.

Extra points to anyone who understands where I got my title for the collection. :)

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Categories: Drabbles Characters: None
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Chapters: 64 Completed: No Word count: 6230
[Report This] Published: 29/01/10 Updated: 16/10/11


Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 17/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: A Child's Belief

I just finished reading all the drabbles. I enjoyed them very much. Two made me tear up a bit though. The first, when Sam wanted to learn to pray so he could ask God to keep his family safe. The second, when Sam thought if only Dean had let him stay dead. That's good writing for you. Keep it coming :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking time to read them all!  :)  I'm glad you liked them.  I enjoy writing drabbles a lot because I tend to over explain things and drabbles are a very good exercise in editing for me!  Thanks again!

 
Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 03/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: A Child's Belief

In the drabble Name of the Game you have Soulless Sam spot on. Hopefully soon you can write about how Sam feels to have his soul back.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  I am enjoying soulless Sam but I want our boy to get his soul back in the not too distant future.  :)

 
Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 14/12/10 Title: Chapter 48: The Gambler

That was so much like Bobby I could hear him saying it.

Well done! 



Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much!  Bobby is a little outside my comfort zone so I'm glad you liked it and thought it sounded like him.

 
Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 05/01/11 Title: Chapter 49: Merry Freaking Christmas

Hee! Happy New Year, Macaiah. Here's a resolution for you from me. Keep writing and posting so I can enjoy your works.

Author's Response:

I don't normally make resolutions but you know what?  I think that's one I can keep because I plan on writing as long as I can. :)  Thanks for the support and Happy New Year to you!!

 
Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 13/05/11 Title: Chapter 54: Rock Band Research

I'm still reading and enjoying them. I'll continue to read them too. Are you working on a new story? *crosses fingers*

Author's Response:

Oh, thanks! The last few I posted haven't gotten any reviews so I wasn't really sure.

New story? How I wish!  I've just had too much personal stuff going on to write lately. I actually had a little down time today at lunch and that's why I posted the drabble.  I still have a few of those I haven't posted here.  I have some fic ideas and I actually had an idea for a tag to last week's episode but just don't know if I'll have time to write it before the finale.  I'm hoping that things will calm down soon and I can get back to writing.  I miss it. Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 19/07/11 Title: Chapter 56: In the Middle of BFE

Yeah! You're back. I loved this: "It's the kind of belt I need. Chop, chop, Sammy. You're burning daylight." 



Author's Response:

Some of that early seasons brotherly banter that we all loved so much. :) 

Yeah, I'm kinda back. I posted a one-shot a couple of weeks ago.  Don't know if you saw it or not.  I've just not had a great year and I realized the other day I've not written hardly anything this year. I'm hoping for a calmer 2012. :)

Thanks for reading and taking time to comment!

 
Summary:

When the boys agree to help Bobby on a hunt they are drawn into a dark mystery, and a cold mountain may become their final stand.   

 

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 23041
[Report This] Published: 16/02/10 Updated: 28/12/10


Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 20/10/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Congratulations! Hope you and your husband have a happy life together. 

I am enjoying this story and hope to find out what is next to come for our boys. 

 
Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 30/12/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Glad to be able to read more. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

 

 
Addictions by MarquessaS Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 251]
Summary:

 Sometimes it was best to lay low.  But boredom is a hungry affliction,  and Dean Winchester had to feed his need for distraction.  He had no choice.

No spoilers.  Set in an earlier, simpler timeframe.


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 118383
[Report This] Published: 12/07/10 Updated: 08/08/11


Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 30/12/10 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Just a silent reader here to tell you I am reading and enjoying this story. Thanks for submitting it.

Author's Response: Thanks for breaking your silence ;)  Always love seeing new readers--ml

 
Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 07/04/11 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Just wanted to say I'm reading and enjoying this story. Thank you so much for sticking with it. I hope Dean can snap out of his funk. Can't wait to see if Sam will be successful.  

Author's Response: Thanks Saber,  really good to hear.  Second last post here,  won't leave you waiting too long,  Mal

 
Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 27/04/11 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Keep writing. I'm reading and enjoying. 

Author's Response: Will do,  and thanks!

 
Summary:  

Some days are just.....hell...

Set in Season 4, just after episode 4.11 Family Remains

Seven Days of Hell

Best Humour


Categories: General, Humor Characters: None
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Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 25624
[Report This] Published: 21/08/10 Updated: 01/10/10


Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 04/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: Day One - Comfort Food

I really, really loved this story and waited anxiously for each new chapter. Chapter two was my favorite! I laughed so hard I felt like an idiot. Dean and the gas problem. What a blast! No pun intended. 

Please keep the stories coming! You really know how to keep Sam and Dean in character. You write as well (and in some cases) better than the actual writers.

 Thanks for the awesome job. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much, Judy. That's the highest compliment a writer can be paid. I try very hard to keep them in character, so it's always a thrill to know that I got it right (and a relief - lol)

Ah, chapter two - yes, I completely cracked up my banner-maker on that one, and I think my beta was giggling uncontrollably all through the chapter when she got it to correct. What a blast, indeed....actually, several...ROFL!

And no worries about keeping the stories coming. There are around twenty or so in my unfinished stories folder - it's just getting the time to sit down and complete each one. Anyone got a money tree they can give me so I can stay home and write full-time? No? Oh, well - worth an ask.

So glad you enjoyed it.

Jules

 
Hey, Jude by Nachuma Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 23]
Summary: Angsty Dean and Sam trying to help.  Because even heroes need a little help now and then.

Takes place before and after 5.11, Sam, Interrupted.  Angst/comfort more than h/c, with some schmoop and lots of season 5 spoilers.

 

 
Categories: General Characters: None
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Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 14477
[Report This] Published: 14/09/10 Updated: 02/10/10


Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 03/10/10 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I loved your story from start to finish. The boys needed this and so did I. Thanks for sharing your gift of writing.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  I think, after all the angst of last season (and the start of this one) we all need a little schmoop.

Nancy

 
We Rock by MuffyMorrigan Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: When Dean is badly hurt on a hunt, Sam realises that sometimes the best cure isn't medical. More H/C Schmoop!
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2685
[Report This] Published: 03/10/10 Updated: 03/10/10


Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 04/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Muffy,

I have read all your stories and have enjoyed every one 

You have such a good sense of the boys. I hate hospitals and can also smell the fear. Great description.

I hope you continue to write about Sam and Dean because if you keep writing, I'll keep reading. 



Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I promise I will keep writing, in fact, as you can see this season is inspiring me to write like a madwoman!

 
Second Chance by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:  

He'd always had a better relationship with Dean

Bobby POV - 5.22 Swan Song coda - contains spoilers for seasons five and six

Second Chance

Thanks of course to Chasidern for another awesome banner!


Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3736
[Report This] Published: 08/10/10 Updated: 08/10/10


Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 12/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What can I say? You wrote Sam exactly as I see him. I'm more of a Dean fan but I also love Sam. Your writing and Sam's plight makes me bleed for him. Keep up the wonderful writing. 

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm the same as you - a Dean girl who's always had a huge soft spot for Sam. I've always understood Sam...well, apart from the beginning of Season 4....and I try to dissect Sam's motives where possible. 

And Bobby's point of view on Sam's motives was something I just had to delve into after the startling scene in 6.01 when he took Sam's side against Dean. And this was the end result. 

So glad you enjoyed it. And don't worry, I'll keep writing. It's going slow at the moment due to real life commitments, but I will be back. 

Jules

 
Summary: The Winchesters can't even stop for a simple meal without troubled spirits, and trouble in general finding them. Maybe a little Hurt Dean, too. 
Categories: General, Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 794
[Report This] Published: 19/10/10 Updated: 19/10/10


Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 19/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah!!! A story by Muffy!

I could just picture the sly smile on Dean's face as he and Sam fought over the volume of the music.  I am hooked on this story already. Even though what happened to Dean was terribly serious, this line was funny. "Old Man Thomas done gone and chucked one of his trees at you," one of the men supplied. 

Hee! Hee! I can't wait to read more! 

 
Summary:


A series of 100 ficlets, one for almost all the episodes aired, from season 1 to 6.


Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None
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Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 20085
[Report This] Published: 23/10/10 Updated: 23/10/10


Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 25/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: Season 1

Awesome. Thoughtful, tender, funny, sad. Even though I enjoyed them all my favorite was Sam Interrupted. Sad but so true to Dean's life. Great writing done by you! Such insight!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is very sweet of you to say :)

 
Summary:

"As if staying in the same room with him before didn't make his skin crawl, the thought of Robo-Sam was just as unsettling, maybe even more so."

Tag to Family Matters, episode 6.07.

Dean has some issues to sort through.

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Categories: One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1571
[Report This] Published: 09/11/10 Updated: 09/11/10


Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 10/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your tag. Right now the bromance fans are feeling pretty sad. Great job of writing about Dean's conflicted feelings about Sam. I hope Dean finds this kind of realization on the show soon.

Keep writing you are really good! 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I definitely plan to keep on writing.  I'm enjoying it way too much to quit!  It's something I always wanted to do and then let RL get in the way but thanks to SPN I got back into it and I plan to stick with it as long as I have ideas! 

I'm glad you enjoyed the tag.  I'm feeling pretty sad about the boy's relationship too but I always have to pick out the little things that give me hope and the fact that Dean stays with Sam at all is reason for hope.  He's not going to give up on his little brother.  And even though Sam may be soulless, there have still been little things he has done to give me hope that he's not totally lost.

Thanks again!

 
Summary: Immediately after 6.09, Sam faces it all and decides it is time to finally talk to his brother. A sliver of hope for Thanksgiving. Happy Thanksgiving all
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1122
[Report This] Published: 23/11/10 Updated: 23/11/10


Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 24/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm looking forward to the day when Sam is the Sam who can hug his big brother again and mean it. Thanks for this.

I am anxiously waiting for more of Bad Day at Big Pines. 

 
Summary:

"Sam made a list. Every year at Thanksgiving, even before he was old enough to write, he made a list of things he was thankful for."

Inspired by events from Dark Side of the Moon. Wee/Teenchester. Sam's first real Thanksgiving.

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Categories: One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1640
[Report This] Published: 24/11/10 Updated: 24/11/10


Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 24/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks for this entertaining story. I'M missing the brotherly love. Happy Thanksgiving!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  I think we're all missing the brotherly love but I have faith it will be back.  Happy Thanksgiving to you as well!

 
Summary: When a hunt goes wrong, Sam might get something for Christmas that he never wished for. Hurt Dean
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 32001
[Report This] Published: 01/12/10 Updated: 08/01/11


Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 01/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Drifting Flakes

Glad to find this. Dean can melt metal. And I would like one Deansicle under my Christmas tree, please. I'll be looking forward to reading more and hope only good things come your way. 

 
Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 03/12/10 Title: Chapter 2: Frozen Rivers and Lost Brothers

Uh Oh! You left the boys in a bad situation. Can't wait for the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 05/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Drifting Flakes

Oh no. Another Wendigo. It looks like they are not out of the woods yet? I'm enjoying this. I'll be back for more.

 
Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 08/12/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Write faster Muffy! Write! Write! Write! I'm loving this. Excitement galore.

Author's Response: I'm writing I'm writing, my poor bleeding fingers, worked to the bone (are you weeping for me yet? *grins*) move very soon!

 
Reviewer: saber Signed
Date: 09/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Drifting Flakes

I'll weep for you later. Although I do feel bad about your bleeding fingers. :) Right now poor Dean gets all my sympathy. Use band-aids and keep on writing. Seriously, I rushed home from the dentist because I hoped to find another chapter. You didn't disappoint. Great job.

 



Author's Response: If I had know you were going to the dentist *rubs own teeth removed jaw in sympathy* I would have done something extra special