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Penname: supernaturaldh [Contact]
Real name: Denise
Status: Member
Member Since: 29/03/07
Website: http://writersguild101.bravehost.com/supernaturaldh.htm
Beta-reader: Yes

Hello everyone.  I am in my late 40's and forgot my high school passion, writing stories.  Life, marriage, kids all got in the way.  Now I am finally back to me again and I found this wonderful site.  I read stories for a year before I jumped in and decided to give wrting another try.  WOW...it is a blast.  I have just found my secret passion, writing fan fiction.  I love this web site and Supernatural.

If you like my stories, please review. 


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Happy Birthday by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 126]
Summary:

Tension mounts between the brothers - is it just Dean's deal or is something more sinister at work...

Happy Birthday

SN.tv 2009 Best Ghost


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 54038
[Report This] Published: 27/06/08 Updated: 08/08/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it.  Poor Sammy, rocking in the corner, lost in his own little world.  I can't wait for more.  Keep it coming girl!!

Denise



Author's Response: Hey, Denise! Great to have you along. Yes, the thought form did mess up his head a little, poor boy. And I'm going to mess it up even more - *grins*....Jules

 
Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OMG...Dean would not have left Sammy.  He must have that part wrong!!  I am so loving this story.  Keep it coming Jules. 

 Denise



Author's Response: Hey, Denise - so you think Sam might have missed something? Perhaps Dean hiding in a corner? Or perhaps he's just ducked out for coffee....or something has grabbed him (namely Fredo and me)...LOL. Explanation - and more twists - to follow soon....Jules

 
Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Awe poor Sammy, sleeping pills.  Dean is now on big brother duty until he figures out what is wrong.  Great chapter.

Denise



Author's Response: Hey Denise! Yes, Dean's still on big brother duty, despite his little brother's unreasonable spikes of anger. And don't worry - Dean's getting closer to working it out...Jules

 
Summary:

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Banner by the ever-amazing Rae666

 

While investigating a rash of mysterious deaths, Dean finds a new distraction. As they look into the case, Dean’s distraction might prove fatal.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 18744
[Report This] Published: 27/06/08 Updated: 08/08/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start, can't wait for more. 

Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! I'll have more later this week, promise!

Hugs, Muffy

 
Summary:

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Banner by the wonderful Chasidern

It's never easy being Dean Winchester, but after he's injured on a hunt, Dean realizes some days just seem a lot harder than others.


Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3937
[Report This] Published: 04/07/08 Updated: 04/07/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful little story...Love Dean's insistance that it was 'his toe' and the keychain at the end.  Priceless.

 Denise



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! The keychain just happened. I love it when they do that, just decide to take action on their own! Thank you again for reading and reviewing!

Hugs
Muffy

 
Summary:

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Banner by the amazing Chasidern

On the day Sam would have graduated, Dean shows his brother what he means to Dean and that even an insensitive jerk can had a chick flick moment now and then.


Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2229
[Report This] Published: 14/07/08 Updated: 14/07/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was just excellent.  I love the fact that Dean remembered.  Sam thought he was all alone in his thoughts about his 'almost graduation' day, but alas, Dean is always the big brother.  Always putting Sammy first.  Love it.

 



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! Dean remembering felt so right, as did Sam's feeling of isolation. WE all keep track of special days, som remembered by others some not. This felt lkike the two of them. And for Dean, as you say, Sam is always first. Thank you again!

Hugs
Muffy

 
Remember me? by IHeartSam Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

A vampire hunt set after Heart could have dire repercussions for one of the Winchester brothers...

I, alas own nothing! Rated T to be safe.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 25339
[Report This] Published: 25/07/08 Updated: 07/07/09


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Excellent.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: hi-thankyou so much for your review :) glad you're liking it so far...more soon -Aliyssa x

 
Terror Town, USA by bayre Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

The next installment of the War With No Front series, created by Sojourner84 and Bayre, this fic written by Bayre.

Trapped in a small town, cut off from the rest of the world, Dean struggles to save their tiny corner of the world and Sam struggles to hang onto reality while events threaten to push him straight over the edge and into insanity.


In a war with no front, enemies are not always obvious, reality maybe nothing but illusion.

No real spoilers, though there are references to events in the entire show, all seasons. 

 


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: A War with No Front
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 50831
[Report This] Published: 13/09/08 Updated: 29/11/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was great.  I am totally hooked.  What is wrong with Sam?  Awesome...can't wait for the next chatper.  Denise

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading...what is wrong with Sam...the big question..hehehe

Laura

 
Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/10/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You have me so intrigued.  Where is this going?  Poor Sam, acting like he was five years old, and Dean, the every protective big brother.

 I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next post.

 Denise



Author's Response:

Hehehe...thanks so much..I'm glad you're liking it.

Laura 

 

 
One Second... by calUK Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary:

She asked for it, she got it! Birdie's birthday fic at last - Ghosts, goats and yodelling...

 

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Categories: Action, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 15311
[Report This] Published: 18/09/08 Updated: 15/10/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Only Child

Okay, this was too cute.  Waiting for next part patiently. 

Author's Response: glad you liked it - next chappie up next thurs! (ish...)

 
Cliffhanger by Merisha Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 136]
Summary: When a hunt goes completely wrong, a distraught John has to come to the rescue of his boys.   
Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 36769
[Report This] Published: 19/09/08 Updated: 03/12/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/09/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Awesome story.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  Hurry please.

 

 



Author's Response:

LOL, thanks supernaturaldh ;) - glad to see you here ... thanks for the review, next chapter soon!

Hugs
Mish :)

 
Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/10/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love the different points of views, the angst, and the little twist with Sam having a 'future vision'.  This story rocks!

Author's Response:

Oh thanks hun :) - I'm so pleased you're enjoying the POV's ... and Sammy's pre-vision ROFL ;)

Thanks for the awesome review!
Hugs

Mish :)

 
Lovely by kwater Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary: John's on a hunt and calls on twenty-year old Dean, and sixteen-year old Sam for help.  When things don't go as planned, Sam finds himself having to come to the rescue.
Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Brothers
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 58168
[Report This] Published: 30/09/08 Updated: 16/01/09


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed
Date: 26/01/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I just finished this story, and I loved it.  Great job!!

Denise



Author's Response: Thanks, Denise, so glad you enjoyed ;) Kel

 
Summary: Another in my Ben Winchester stories.  Please be aware that the title tells you what occurs within the story.  Dean, Sam, and Ben are in trouble when they are taken by a man who has an agenda and he's using torture to get his answers.
Categories: AU, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Ben Braeden Winchester
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 33776
[Report This] Published: 14/10/08 Updated: 07/01/09


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/11/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wickedly good...I love it.  More please.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I'll get you more as soon as I am able, fighting the flu at the moment.

 

 
Metamorphosis by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

"Everybody got into hunting somehow." Bobby Singer - Dream A Little Dream Of Me

Pilot episode tag - Dean deals with the aftermath of the fire

Metamorphosis

SN.tv 2009 Everyday Winchesters


Categories: General, Action, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 38346
[Report This] Published: 23/10/08 Updated: 28/11/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/11/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love the whole premise of this story, Sam's grief is overwhelming, it just breaks my heart.  And Dean, the every protective big brother, not really sure what to do or how to do it.

Waiting anxiously for the funeral and Sam's pending breakdown!

Denise



Author's Response:

Hey, Denise! Yes, your boy is just gutted, and struggling to keep that Winchester stiff upper lip in place. But it's not working - cracks are starting to appear. And poor Dean, out of his depth with that level of grief - well, out of his depth as an adult, anyway. He's seen this sort of devastation before, but he was only a little boy at the time, and he had a baby to care for.

But this week is going to bring a few of Dean's nightmares roaring back as well....Jules

 
Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/11/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I was enthralled with this chapter, the detail was wonderful.  The mounting grief that is overtaking Sammy is just so descriptive and real. Loved it all, and waiting excitedly for the next updated.

Denise



Author's Response: Thank you so much, Denise. Some of Sam's anger is starting to make another appearance in the next chapter. But that meltdown's coming - this is the calm before the storm...Jules

 
Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed
Date: 22/11/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Another awesome chapter.  Sam is breaking my heart.  You added so much to the pilot, it is wonderful.  Bringing tears to my eyes. 

 Denise



Author's Response: Thanks, Denise. He's a heartbreaker, that's for sure. He's not Sam the Hunter yet - he's still Sam the young college student barely out of his teens and ripped apart by grief. Hope you enjoy the epilogue, hon...Jules

 
Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/11/08 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

Believe me, justice was done.  This was an excellent story that filled in alot of blanks for the reader.  Great job... again. 

 Denise



Author's Response: Denise, thank you so much. This one took a lot out of me, and I am so damned glad I got it right. It had the potential to go horribly wrong. (or tits-up, as my wonderful beta would say) I'm stoked that you loved it so much....Jules

 
Summary:

“Hey, Winchester, isn't that your brother?” one of the guys, Pete Something-or-other, asked as he watched Dean's relentless approach straight to them.

Sam's Adam's apple bobbed nervously and that was answer enough.

Teen!chester.


Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1151
[Report This] Published: 15/11/08 Updated: 16/11/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Smoke 'Em If Ya Got 'Em!

Awesome little ficlet, I loved it.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Always love to hear it was enjoyable!

Thanks for the review! :D

-M

 
Summary: Post 4X10 Heaven and Hell, Sam can only deal with the next few hours and that will have to do.

Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 976
[Report This] Published: 24/11/08 Updated: 24/11/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent

 
Summary:

Even downtime has its dangers...

Set in Season 3, some time after the episode Dream A Little Dream Of Me.

One Day In Your Life


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 20149
[Report This] Published: 12/12/08 Updated: 02/01/09


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/01/09 Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue

Another awesome story Jules.  Great job.  Don't take too long of a break, we will miss our excellence on this site.

Denise



Author's Response: Awww, Denise - you're making me blush, my friend. Thanks for that. And no, it won't be a long break, but a much-needed one....Jules

 
Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, this is excellent...as usual.  I loved the goat, the stinky Dean, and awe the clowns.  Love Sammy's reaction.  Totally wonderful. 

 Can't wait for more.

 

 



Author's Response: Hey, Denise! Thanks for that. The idea for stinky Dean actually came about earlier in the year when I was cleaning out my fish pond in the back yard. By the time I finished, I reeked, and my mind just wandered while I was scrubbing madly in the shower trying to get the smell of stagnant water off my skin. So when Fredo spoke to me about her request, it was a perfect match to work it into the story. ....Jules

 
Summary:

Dean silently wished he could feel so blissed out, that he could forget his time in Hell and actually enjoy Christmas with Sammy.  He wanted to bury his thoughts and take a real break, suddenly wanting to make this holiday special for his brother just like Sam had done for him last year.  Each it seems hadn’t felt like celebrating at the time, but for their brother they were willing to bury their own hurts and make it happen.   

He could do this… for Sammy. 

Minor S4 spoilers. 

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Banner by dreamalittledreamofsam - Thank you! 

2008 Christmas Challenge Winner


Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6711
[Report This] Published: 21/12/08 Updated: 21/12/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Christmas story, made me feel all fuzzy and warm.  Loved it.  Congrats on your win!!  You deserved it with this gem!!

Denise



Author's Response:

Thanks, Denise,

I do love my Christmas stories, especially the happy ones.  Happy New Year! B.J.

 
Summary:

 While Shepherds Watch

Shepherds come in all shapes and sizes...

Contains some spoilers for Season 4


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9800
[Report This] Published: 26/12/08 Updated: 26/12/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Jules- this was a great story, and off the cuff too!!  I loved the Sammy and Gracie reference, amazing how older brothers give names to their little brothers or sisters.  I know since I am a little sis myself, with my own special nickname!!   Loved it.

Denise



Author's Response:

It was, Denise. I was on my way home from work, and I had a couple of hours before heading off back down the highway for the traditional Christmas Eve baked dinner with the family, and this thing bit me on the arse. So the keyboard got pounded instead of the house being cleaned in those spare few hours.

Aww, you liked Sammy and Gracie? I did, too. And I thought that Dean as a big brother would be sure to recognise the signs of a younger sibling. Ah - you're a little sis? I'm actually a big sis, but I don't see my sisters, so I'm little niece to Christine.

Thanks so much, hon.....Jules

 
Rewound by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

Rewound

Best Sam Ungen 2009

"You, my brother, are a figment of my imagination..."

A hunt for a poltergeist leaves Sam doubting his brother's very existence

Set in Season 4, after the episode Heaven And Hell, and contains spoilers up to and including that episode


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 32715
[Report This] Published: 23/01/09 Updated: 20/02/09


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/02/09 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue

Excellent, as always!!  Loved it.

Denise



Author's Response:

Hey, Denise! Thank you for that. Glad you enjoyed it. And I have to catch up on your latest too - I've been a bit of a hermit this week with one thing and another...

Jules