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Penname: supernaturaldh [Contact]
Real name: Denise
Status: Member
Member Since: 29/03/07
Website: http://writersguild101.bravehost.com/supernaturaldh.htm
Beta-reader: Yes

Hello everyone.  I am in my late 40's and forgot my high school passion, writing stories.  Life, marriage, kids all got in the way.  Now I am finally back to me again and I found this wonderful site.  I read stories for a year before I jumped in and decided to give wrting another try.  WOW...it is a blast.  I have just found my secret passion, writing fan fiction.  I love this web site and Supernatural.

If you like my stories, please review. 


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Reviews by supernaturaldh
 
Summary:

 NOMINATED FOR THE SENSUE PEOPLE'S CHOICE AWARDS! VOTE FOR ME AT THE LINK BELOW!!! http://sensue.net/snfa/voting/index.php

He was surely dying. You could not be feeling this and not be dying. He had to be dying. Please, let me be dying! This was too much to live with, Sam wanted it to end, needed it to end. Oh god it hurt so much, so bad, oh god make it stop, make it stop, make it STOP! He couldn’t speak, couldn’t do anything but scream in total anguish, not knowing where his body began or ended, feeling, hearing, seeing nothing but the pain being afflicted on his being. It was pain beyond pain, and he welcomed unconsciousness as his body reached its limit.

NOW COMPLETED!!!


Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 16344
[Report This] Published: 26/03/07 Updated: 26/11/07


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed
Date: 12/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great story...poor Sammy.  I love the big brother taking care of the little brother... Want more!!!

 
Fever Dreams by kwater Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

Unable to offer any other relief, she smiled slightly   "You're going to be okay." - A woman works to save a man she's been dreaming about.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 12765
[Report This] Published: 27/06/07 Updated: 11/07/07


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed
Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awsome .... can't wait to see what happens.. Keep it comin!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, this will be my next update, hopefully tomorrow or Friday thanks for reading and taking the time to review..

 
Summary: Sometimes the most innocent of things can get you into a world of trouble. 
Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None
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Series: Something Lost
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 32473
[Report This] Published: 17/07/07 Updated: 29/12/07


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/12/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

As always...your story rocks.  You never let us down. 

supernaturaldh

 
Burden by Lia76 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Summary: Sam is obsessed with saving Dean from his deadly fate, but it soon appears that he may be the one who needs saving first … or else. My version of the beginning of Season Three. Now Complete. Check out part two: Bring Me to Life the third and final part: Mind Games (still in progress).
Categories: General, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 35685
[Report This] Published: 19/07/07 Updated: 28/08/07


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed
Date: 23/07/07 Title: Chapter 15: Crossroads

Awsome story..keep it coming

 
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It’s been three weeks since the all-important events of AHBL2, and three weeks since the brothers have been on a hunt. Dean is ready to get back to work, but Sam has something to say to him, and Dean is not going to like what he realizes about himself and what he did for Sam. The truth hurts: especially when it’s told to us by someone we love. Ficlet, 3500 words, coda to "All Hell Breaks Loose 2."


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3657
[Report This] Published: 04/09/07 Updated: 04/09/07


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed
Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Truth Hurts

Excellent

 
The Game by bayre Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 444]
Summary:

The meek shall inherit nothing....

 


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Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52023
[Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 27/04/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This story absolutely rocks.  You are the master. 



Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Quake by ThePasserby Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Trapped in a the rundown remains of a school after a sudden earthquake, Dean races desperately to find Sam before his little brother's time runs out, but Sam may not have enough time, or blood, to spare.


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 9398
[Report This] Published: 15/10/07 Updated: 12/03/09


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/03/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This was wickedly good.  I am a limp Sam girl myself, so I love to read it.  Awesome job!!

 
Cave In by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 36]
Summary:

Cave In

Trapped in total darkness, both hurt, one seriously - but which one....


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3874
[Report This] Published: 27/10/07 Updated: 27/10/07


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed
Date: 27/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Another awesome story.  I love your stuff. You inspired me to give it a shot!! 

I too had a passion from my childhood, but got busy living life, raising kids.  Putting my passion on the back burner.  Then I found this website and loved the stories.  I  decided to take a chance and here I am.  Now, I am loving this, reading them and writing them!!   

supernaturaldh



Author's Response:

That would have to be one of the nicest compliments anyone has ever paid me. I am so touched by your words. Thank you.

I too, was inspired by another author to give writing a go again after so many years of putting it aside. I read one of her stories over on sn.tv, fell in love with her writing style, and thought, if I could write half as good as she can, I'd be happy. I gave it a try, got some nice feedback, posted a second fic, and the thing just steamrolled. Cave In is my 14th story. And that author that inspired me is now a good friend of mine - Windyfontaine.

Hang on to your dreams. It may take quite some time before they come to fruition, but don't lose them - they're precious. I'm so glad your dream to write came true, just as mine did......Jules

 
Summary: Kazcon Auction story for Nana56, hope you like it. Multi-chapter. Rising floodwaters trap Sam and an injured (of course) Dean in a house with a kindly woman keeping watch for her long lost son. If you're familiar with my stuff you know what to expect. If you're not, welcome to the world thru my eyes.
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 35658
[Report This] Published: 31/10/07 Updated: 01/05/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Nowhere Left To Go

You are very wicked indeed.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

supernaturaldh



Author's Response:

I am I am wicked..

 hangs head in mock shame...

to hide smile

 
Summary:

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  A series of bizarre and brutal murders lure the Winchester brothers into their next hunt.  Only this time, in the thick of the hunt, they find themselves stalked and terrorized by something out of one of Sam’s worst nightmares.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 32499
[Report This] Published: 01/12/07 Updated: 04/05/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Aversion Therapy

Excellent story.  Poor Sam.  Dean making fun of him in a brotherly way was just too cute.  Love it.

supernaturaldh



Author's Response: Well, what's a good Winchester story without a bit (okay, a LOT) of brotherly teasing. Dean just gets in a groove and can't stop himself. Maybe one of these days, Sam will actually get him back.   
We've decided to see if some aversion therapy will help or hinder Sam's cure....so stay tuned....Thanks for the nice rating, DH.........     Jude & Vanessa 

 
Broken Images by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

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Who was the handsome stranger brought to the mental institution in the dead of night - and what terrible tragedy from his past had reduced him to a broken, empty shell?

People's Choice Winner

Awards 2008 Best Future fic

2008 UnGen Awards Best Sam


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 29830
[Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 11/01/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed
Date: 22/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love this story.  Can't wait to see what happened to Sam.

superanaturaldh



Author's Response: Thank you for that. I must say, I printed out your Struggling Just To Breathe, and it reduces me to tears every time I read it - such powerful stuff. Glad you love this one so much. As for Sam, well, he's not far away....Jules

 
Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Excellent.  I am wrapped up totally in this little story.  Keep it coming.

supernaturaldh



Author's Response: Thank you for that. I'm chuffed that I can entertain. And it was such an easy one to write, too - apart from the research, which gave me a headache...lol...Jules

 
Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Excellent, you leave the reader begging for more.

Author's Response: Thank you, hon. Hopefully the next chapter will have you on the edge of your seat...Jules

 
Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

Awesome story, and wonderful ending.  Thank you for a great ride!!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much. Glad you could come along for it. And thanks so much for the reviews - they are gold...Jules

 
Summary: Brotherhood AU. Something is attacking and killing the children of New Haven at Christmas. Sam is kidnapped. Dean, Caleb and John race against time to find Sam before it's too late.
Categories: One Shots, General, Action, Humor, AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 19981
[Report This] Published: 23/12/07 Updated: 23/12/07


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Deck The Halls With Bodies

Great Story.  I was just looking for a little Christmas Winchester style and I found this little gem!!  Great job. dh



Author's Response:

Thanks :) There has been some great christmas stories out there and we're glad u liked this one :)

Tara and Lisa

 
Summary:

An exorcism goes wrong and Sam is left with serious doubts as to who he really is and whether he can be trusted. S3. AU.


Categories: AU, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 48351
[Report This] Published: 26/12/07 Updated: 23/03/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start, can't wait to see what happened.  supernaturaldh

 
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What do you pray for - I pray for you...


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4478
[Report This] Published: 26/12/07 Updated: 26/12/07


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome story..I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you. And thanks for the review. The hardest part was the argument - hope I got it right...Jules

 
Summary:

 

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Sam is plagued by multiple visions of Dean burning alive, leading the brothers into a dangerous hunt that could have dire repercussions for the young psychic.

Set just before the Season 2 episode Roadkill

Awards 2008 Best Horror/Demon


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 53967
[Report This] Published: 18/01/08 Updated: 24/02/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/03/08 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

This story totally rocked.  I love love love your stuff.  From one born again writer who found her passion again after 20 years... This site has just been a great find for me.  Good job...Denise

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Denise. I'm glad you rediscovered your passion too. Your "Struggling Just to Breathe" still makes me cry every time I read it. I printed it out, and I think I've read it about a dozen times. And each time I soak the pillow.... That story actually inspired me to write Broken Images. Glad you loved this one.

 
Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/07/08 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

Just got time to read this story, had been meaning to get to it.  I loved it all, and you wrapped it up neatly at the end.  I am so into doing that.

 Great job! 



Author's Response: Thanks, Denise. I like nice, tidy endings, too - lol. Must be my bookkeeping background. Glad that you enjoyed it just as much the second time around...Jules

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

Just two weeks before the deal is due and both Winchesters are feeling the pressure, but it doesn't stop them taking on one more job...

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 56399
[Report This] Published: 04/02/08 Updated: 07/04/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The truth we cling to

Great story, can't wait for me.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and rating dh, and I'm very glad you're enjoying...X Louy

 
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An easy hunt in Arkansas goes bad. With Sam injured and totally dependent on him, Dean fights not only to help his brother, but to overcome his own personal demons as well.


Categories: General, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 189161
[Report This] Published: 03/03/08 Updated: 11/08/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This is a awesome story.  I am hooked.  The harpy hunt was great, and blind Sam.  You done good.



Author's Response: Hi. I'm glad that you decided to check this story out and that you have been enjoying it so far. Yeah blind Sam, it is going to make things rather rough for both the brothers. I'm not sure which one it will be harder for but I'll let you decide. Glad you enjoyed the harpy hunt as well. I had fun with it. Thanks for the review!

 
Storm Surge by bayre Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Following the trail south, Dean and Sam discover the demon they're tracking wants them as much as they want it.  Other hunters might want the brothers even more.....

 

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This continues where Gale Warnings left off.

Possible spoilers for Seasons 1 & 2, after WIAWSB it's AU


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: The Elements
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 46334
[Report This] Published: 20/04/08 Updated: 06/01/09


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed
Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Awesome story.  I love it.  Did I say awesome.  You  have me hook, line, and sinker.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  Hurry!!

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much!

 
Summary:

 

My first multi-chapter story! Season Two, between BUABS and Heart. 

A run of mysterious deaths in a shipping yard should be an easy one to solve for the Winchesters.  But is Sam too vulnerable after recent events for this to just prove to be routine?  Limp!Sam to follow in abundance...!

 

 


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 33770
[Report This] Published: 26/04/08 Updated: 29/06/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/04/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Awesome story, can't wait for the next chapter.  Hurry....

Author's Response:

Oooh, thanks, I'm typing as fast as my fingers can go... promise!

 

 
Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/06/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Great story, can't wait for more.

 



Author's Response: Hi, again, sorry for the late reply!  Cheers for reading, hopefully I'll have the next update up soon!

 
Summary:

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The road to recovery is more of a winding mountain road.

Post 3.16. AU when Season 4 starts. Complete.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 19239
[Report This] Published: 27/05/08 Updated: 10/08/08


Reviewer: supernaturaldh Signed
Date: 09/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: Day 19

This is awesome.  More please.

 Great job!!