Oh, Kell, I know I've said I loved the sisters before, but.... Still does:) And I have to say; you have a talent for creating believable characters and bringing them to life. Think that's why I'm such a HUGE fan of your stories, cause they all contain great char. And now in this story there's a missing baby, looking forward to see where this is going...

A little question:  Any story in the Sara series on the way soon....? Pleeeeeeease say yes;;)

This really your first? Wow, I think you did really great. It was a really interesting and original story plot, and it contained all my favorites: The brothers of course:), a tired Dean, a long dessert road and one hot black car:)

And I know all about how hard it is to write in a foreign language. But I think you did really well!! Keep up your great work!

~Anita~ 

Wow, I don't even know where to begin, I just ... wow! You just summarized it all in this story -their lives, their very motivation for being who they are, what they are to each other. And you did it with so few words, that I'm totally amazed!

Like with this: But when it comes to a choice, between him and Sam......well....there never really was a choice, was there? So true, and it kind of summaries Dean in one sentence. 

Or: "....You are the one thing in my life that I did right. The one single thing I didn't screw up. The one thing keeping me here. As sane and grounded as I can be.  I think he really believes that, and I do believe Sammy is what keeps him grounded, in the only way a winchester can be:p

Loved your Sam POV when he realize what Dean's saying, and you hit it spot on, cause Sam's reaction to Dean's few open-up scenes; they always leaves him a little astounded.

Hehe, and I can really picture Sammy giving the 'little' speech you let him have:p But what got to me was this one single sentence: Why can't you see that I'm not Sammy, when you're not there to be my big brother?"

And of course the pilot flashback: " Yeah, well. I don't want to." Because we can all do it, we live our lives and deal with whatever it throws at us, and we do what we do to survive, cause we don't have choice--- but then there's the want to thing, it really makes the whole difference. And by making Sam say that, you also manage to combine two whole seasons! 

And my favorite, -the end. The way you put it, the  preparation for the hug (Sammy's: "Don't be scared, Dean. It's just a hug. It'll be over in no time." lol, that is so cute:). And the rest from there on, -wow! You so totally un-chicked the chick flick moment (I mean that in a good way:). GREAT!

To summarize this little review; your story is AWESOME! Thanks for sharing:)  

Wow, what a plot, I'm intrigued! I loved your other Ben story, and looking forward to follow this one. The family dynamic you've created is great, and I love the boys protectiveness towards Ben. Hehe, you've created a little-Dean, with all the follow orders stuff, except from the little Sammyness towards books and latin:p

Well, you've captured me as your reader:) Awesome first chapter! 

OMG! this was a fantastic chapter, loved every bit of it. It was filled with so much tension and action. Ben's interaction with the other kids was great, and I liked the way he handled and reacted towards each of them -all three of them stirring up different feelings in him. 

I also love the way you have one case going on  through the story, but still lets them hunt different things, much like in the actual tv-show.

Ben's and Dean's reaction to what happened with Randy in the middle of the story; Dean explaining they have to act towards what they can do something about -the werewolf and not Randy's family problem -that was a scene I liked very much.

I simply love how you make Ben and Dean react towards each other. And it's all so realistic (in the supernatural kind of way, of course:), them going through  the ups and downs -still you can see how the connects and bounds -awesome. Sam playing uncle is cute too:p 

I'm happy every time I see an update on this story and I have to admit that I always read it on ff .net first cause it comes up there first, but I wait till I can review on this site cause it's more personal -hope you don't mind.

Keep them coming!!! 

It was like ‘proper’ Dean was in there, but hidden just behind the sweet sappy Dean that was currently smiling up at him. What a great description!

And the first scene where Sam is dragging an overly enthusiastic big bro along, what a cool picture:) 

Well I have no other words left other than: I still love it. Thanks for shearing your great work!

Author's Response: Aw, honey I"m just so thrilled anyones still reading.  I know I'm so terribly behind.  Thanks for the review and the stars and I'm doing my best to get the final chapter out soon - Kel ;)

Great start. Love those stories that involves Bobby, And just gotta love the Impala too (I want that car!!!)

But really, great start - you made me curious. I want chapter two:)