I've really really loved this story, have read the epilogue too, but saw there was no reviews on the final chapter so figured I could say some nice little words here instead;)

I think this story is awesome. The idea of Mary being still alive is not new, but your idea of how evil could still affect the family is so good. And you've captured all the characters so well. Love the tension between the brothers, the way they still love each other (cause that's what siblings do, right), but don't have the close relationship they have in the tv-show. And at the same time both crave the other's trust. I mean Dean still want to play the big brother, he just don't know how, and Sam though he is the only one knowing about the things that goes bump in the night (at least he thinks he is, obviously Mary knows something, loved the way you brought that in, by the way) he still seems a bit innocent (like the Sammy we know) and longing for big brother taking care of things. 

Like the way you give us insight in both the "normal" family life and Sam's hunting at the same time. And you even mange to bring Bobby and Jim into it, how awesome is that. And as a huge fan of the show, I have to say I'm happy that you let my favorite brothers rebuild their relationship:) It was also realistic.

And the end.... am I smelling a sequel here? Please say yes!! *giving you the puppy eye look*.

Only thing left to say is: great job, Maygin:) 

Oh my... 'bruce all mighty'... what an ending! That little scene with Bobby on the graveyard was great, and I loved this one in particular: "Well, John Winchester, now you’ve got work to do." It doesn't get better than that. 

Well, just thought I'd stop by to tell you that, so you wouldn't think I dropped out after the first chapter. Trust me, you just don't drop out of a story of this quality. Girl, you got real talent, take good care of it:)

Looking forward to read that sequel of yours when I have time. 

Anita:) 

I can hardly wait for the next chapter. This keeps getting better and better, and it was already great to begin with, so.... :)

Author's Response: Aww thanks so much for the wonderful review.  Hope you like the this next one!

Eeeeeeh!! I'm happy there's more chapters writen right now, so I don't have to wait for an update.. 

Your opening scene in the car was awesome. It was so perfectly 'Winchesters in Impala' style that for a minute there I was wondering if I was watching the show on tv.

"Collector." He’d used the lie so many times it tripped off his tongue like his best hook-up line. :-)Yup, that's my Dean! :D

This made me smile: Knowing his brother's anger was just for show, Sam didn’t hesitate to goad him on. "Come on, Dean, like you couldn’t make that back in ten minutes on the pool table." Dean paused in his tracks just long enough to realise he’d been paid a compliment, but refusing to be sidetracked, he raised one hand. "Totally not the point, Sammy. True, but totally not the point." Lol, yeah, you gotta just love siblings -what would we do without them. Specially if the siblings are two deadly handsome brothers named Winchester.... *ehem* yeah back to story...

This is a great start to something i guess is a great story!! ~A 

'Traveled by trunk' LOL, bullet, you're so cool:) The scene in the the trunk was amazing! Tell me; do you have any experience with 'traveling by trunk' yourself? (really hope not!) 

Glad to see Sammy up and running too. Thanks for another good chapter. 

Holy... that section where they 'rebuilt' that wall... *speechless*

"Yeah, I know you’re good, big brother…but I’m gonna help you anyway."  That was just beautiful!! 

You should be really glad that I don't know where you live right now..... 

But: I've loved this story from the start and I still love it. The scenes that have been played out, the characters, they all seems so real. You have done a GREAT job, Kel.  Looking forward to future story with Sara and Dean.

Ooh yeah, still like this. should be good little reviewer and tell you everything I like about this, but my mind's not working, to tired, middle of the night, should sleep (don't know why I don't, sigh), but really it's good!!! But seriously, did you  have to leave us there? So not fair:( 

Keep up the good work (ASAP) !

Oh, Sanna i really like this. And loved the flashbacks. Looking forward to your update, wondering about what happend to Sam.

hugs from the neighbour in west:)

You did not just do that?!?! Leaving us there...:(:( LOL, sorry, for my little outburst!

This was good, Sanna. That conversation with bobby... my favorite, you managed to capture  bobby's no-nonsense manner.

And poor dean, left with a 'the lights are on but nobody's home baby brother', all alone with his car, and have to be in and out of that apple pie house'. Great job 'sis'

~Anita~ 

The end...? There's gonna be a sequel right? Tell me you're gonna give us more? Sorry don't mean to be ungrateful, just sad it had to end.

This story had it all: Angels (angels are so cool!!). Hurt Dean, what can I say, he's like a puppy it's to funny to play with (well you did all the playing, I was just lucky to come along for the ride:). And Jo, when she first appeared in the show, I had my doubts about her, but I've found out she's cool. And I loved her in your story.

And what a heartbreaking ending, you trying to kill us? The little brotherly neediness was great, without being to zappy (that is a word right?)!

Well Bev, I'm looking forward to read more from you:) 

This is a really good start! And Bobby's in it:) Love to read stories involving good ol' uncle Bobby. He is such a nice addition to the show. Love the way he interacts with the boys, those guys need someone looking after them. And now in your story, the boys are gonna look after Bobby, how sweet. Go Dean Go Sam, let the bad guys pay! Looking forward to your next update. 

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