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Penname: whitewave [Contact]
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Real name: Jennifer Hostler Status: Member Member Since: 26/03/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
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Reviews by whitewave Summary:
The truth wasn't out there. It was deep inside. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 10526 [Report This] Published: 26/04/07 Updated: 13/06/07
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  Date: 15/05/07 Title: Chapter 5: Will Finally, I know what is happening. Dean is possessed by the reaper wraith. Now, how will Sam save him? Waiting for more. Jenny Summary: This is the story behind the line in "Devil's Trap" where Dean says that he wasn't sure if they could come to Bobby for help, because of how he ran them off the last time.
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3149 [Report This] Published: 26/04/07 Updated: 26/04/07
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Date: 26/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Buckshot Bobby Loved the idea of Sam as John's conscience and Dean as his comfort. Great story. Summary: "On and On we go, closer and closer you come." a look over its shoulder showed the couple foolishly following
Categories: Action, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 16542 [Report This] Published: 27/04/07 Updated: 02/05/07
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Date: 29/04/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Liked how you started off with a sweet couple who reminded me of my folks (also full time RVers). Nice to have Sam attracted to the female this time too. Then of course Dean disappears which always heightens the suspense. Looking forward to more. Jenny Author's Response: Thanks much Jenny, don't get too attached to the elderly couply yet though - K
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Date: 29/04/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Smart of Sam to try to figure out what was going on rather than search without any idea what he was looking for. Oh no, not another cliff hanger -- Who do the eyes belong to? Are they alive or dead? Are they those who were taken earlier? So many questions so few answers LOL Seriously, nicely done as usual. Can't wait for the answers. Jenny Author's Response: Got to try and keep you all guessing Jenny - Thanks for the review - K
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Date: 29/04/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 OOh, nothing like being in the dark and not knowing what you are going to touch: rats, garbage, dead bodies - Yikes! OK I still like Myrtle -- the bra was great :)
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Date: 30/04/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Go it that the sheriff is part of what's going on. Another way to keep people away from those that were led away? Dean just couldn't keep from snarking could he? Loved the reference to the great and powerful Oz -- very funny, not smart on Dean's part, but funny. Yet you showed his fear so well with the repetitions of "Come on Sammy." Great job again. Jenny
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Date: 30/04/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Liked the pixie and Dean's flicking its nose to get its attention. :) What has really struck me in this story is Dean's never ending belief in his getting himself and the people trapped with him out. From the time he fell into the hole, he has taken charge. As always Dean is at his best when there are innocent people to save and you have really expressed that well. Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind review. And isn't that how we all love Dean best, saving people. - K
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Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Just wanted to send a quick note to let you know I enjoyed the story. Author's Response: Thanks much, I love hearing what people think :) Summary: The brothers go undercover once again, to destroy an evil spirit.
Categories: General, Romance, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sara's Stories Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 14075 [Report This] Published: 27/04/07 Updated: 01/05/07
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Date: 29/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Loved the way Sam took Dean's side. It is nice to see his strong side for a change. Can't wait to see more of it. Jenny Author's Response: Thanks again Jenny for reviewing both stories, I'm trying to update evenly so stay tuned for more. - K
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Date: 29/04/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Great chapter as always. Knew that Dean would be great with the kids. Sam's reaction was so funny and so right on. Giving him first graders was so naughty and the teachers reactions were perfect. (I worked in an elementary school for a time :) so I know.) Jenny
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Date: 30/04/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Wanted to let you know I like the way you have developed Deb's character in the story. She could be a non-entity, but instead she is a strong person who isn't dealing well with being out of control and lashes out at the very people who are trying to help her. Made the story more interesting that way. Making Dean do the outdoor gathering on Helmit Safety one such point. Her way to make him deal with his request -- funny. Of course Sara and Dean were great as always. Loved the scent of vanilla and Sara's only being relaxed when she's with Dean. Author's Response: thanks much you're comments mean a lot. - Hope you enjoy the rest of the story - K
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Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Only you would have an officer stop by to flirt and miss the body wrapped in the tarp -- very funny! Still love what you have done with Deb. Having her drunk and finding the body was so great. Poetic justice for all her bitching too. Loved the line about still being afraid of him even when she imagines him naked. Great chapter -- Jenny
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Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 What a great story. It was nice to read one that was a little lighter and really funny. Great job as always. Jenny Summary: Sequel to Two's A Company, But Three's A Party. When people show up torn to pieces, John and Sam are back on the road. But they may find a couple of old friends on their way.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 27340 [Report This] Published: 27/04/07 Updated: 24/12/07
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Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 4: Discovery Oops Sam couldn't control himself could he? Now the cat is out of the bag and I'm curious how he did come back can't wait to read more. Didn't realize I hadn't reviewed this before -- just wanted to let you know you did a great job with the ackwardness between Sam and John without Dean too. Author's Response: well to find out how...ur gonna have to wait and find out...thanks alot for leaving a review and a nice one at that!!! Summary:
Sam has a vision in which he kills Dean and then commits suicide. Can the brothers change the circumstances enough to change both their fates? Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 7435 [Report This] Published: 02/05/07 Updated: 06/05/07
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Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Premonition Nice premonition and what a gentle way for Sam to tell Dean - not! Now how does one fight the yellow eyed demon, not go crazy, and not kill your brother. Lead on -- I wait to see your answers. :) Jenny Summary:
The Winchesters head down to New Orleans and learn you should never piss off a dead Voodoo queen Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 33206 [Report This] Published: 02/05/07 Updated: 09/06/07
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Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Definitely a nasty voodoo queen. I can just imagine how well she and Dean will get along. LOL Looking forward to the next chapter. Jenny Thanks, Jenny! Yes, our little voodoo queen is a nasty little bitch. And not to worry...she and Dean will be meeting each other. Thanks for reading!
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Date: 07/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Always enjoy listening to the brothers grouse at each other. Fun and a great way to lead into their part of the story. I get the feeling it won't be a secret of Dean's for long as the Voodoo queen can so use the information against Dean and to try to drive a wedge between the boys. Looking forward to the next chapter, Jenny Author's Response: Thanks, Jenny! I have always loved the banter between the brothers...it always make me smile! And yes, the wish may possibly come back and bite Dean in the ass, much like everything else does in his life...
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Date: 13/05/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Very interesting, Dean can be such an ass -- and you wrote it so well. Also curious what the voodoo queen will do now that she knows they are on the hunt. Thanks, Jenny! Yes, Dean can be such an ass, but that's what we love about him! Marie is not going to be too happy with the boys...just wait and see
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Date: 26/05/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Just wanted to let you know the wedge Marie is trying to create between the boys is scary. Can see lots of pain coming for both, but their care for each other still shows. Hope Sam realizes Dean is next on list soon, and he is part of the reason for it -- ooh guilt. Maybe the voodoo witch might even fall for Sam in the end who knows?? He is delicious after all LOL. That could lead to lots of pain for Sam too if he has to destroy her. Still hooked - Jenny Author's Response: Thanks, Jenny! Yes, she is causing quite some pain between the brothers, but it's so delicious! And I just love writing it! I have a good bit more planned for our boys, so stay tuned! Summary: Multiple missing scenes from the end of Asylum through and beyond Scarecrow. A lot still went unsaid between the boys, but flying through walls has got to have consequences.
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 16631 [Report This] Published: 02/05/07 Updated: 15/06/07
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Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wonderful beginning. Of course I want more. Sometimes I think Sam is so dumb -- he needed to care for Dean, but Dean never makes that easy either. Great title -- so many different ways things can fester. Loved your insights into the episodes and their effects on Dean. Jenny
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Date: 17/05/07 Title: Chapter 3: The Actual Lancing Never Feels Good Nice job with the OOH GROSS factor. The tandem puking put it over the top. LOL Great job as usual, Jenny. Summary: Sam has a dream about a cousin he and Dean haven't seen or spoken to in eight years. They reluctantly agree they need to warn her. But is it too late to make amends? Can they put their differences aside when the dream comes true?
Categories: General, AU, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 40037 [Report This] Published: 03/05/07 Updated: 17/10/07
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Date: 07/05/07 Title: Chapter 6: I Spy Great story, looks like John isn't the only one who had a falling out with someone. Can't wait to hear the story behind the anger. Nice job developing Isabel's character. Loved Dean going through the drawers. No way he could resist and underware drawer comment. LOL Jenny Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I hate to admit this, but I wouldn't be able to resist looking through someone's drawers. I guess, I'm a snoop!
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Date: 26/05/07 Title: Chapter 12: Cops and Coffee Loved the reparte between Dean and Isabel - so funny in the midst of sharing such aweful details with her. It sounds like whatever it is is using the women as breeders - nasty. I keep wondering if it will be her boyfriend or the nice officer in charge or maybe something else entirely?? So may questions so little time. LOL Jenny Summary: Dean, Sam and Catherine learn just what it will take for them to survive the coming war.
Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Coming War Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 41119 [Report This] Published: 03/05/07 Updated: 26/05/07
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Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 It is amazing how you can take up right where you left off -- with all the concern, worry, and love they all have for each other. Great beginning. Jenny
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Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Let me guess, the one word was, "Catherine." Also Candy, the nurse, is ripe for possession right? Just guesses of course, looking forward to the next addition. Jenny |
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