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Penname: whitewave [Contact]
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Real name: Jennifer Hostler Status: Member Member Since: 26/03/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by whitewave
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Reviews by whitewave Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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 Date: 04/05/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Oh my God can you get any scarier? My mind keeps wondering if this guy is human or not. Why the cold when he is close to Dean? Or is it just Dean's 6th sense? So many questions -- so few answers. Love it, Jenny
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Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Wow, another scary chapter. They so have to find this guy and kill him. Poor Sam, that was so nasty to be sent a picture of Madison. I think Sam needs to get mad at Charlie too. Great writing as always.
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Date: 16/05/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Oh Man, you had Charlie play Sam like a fine violin. Charlie is beyond nasty -- a definitely vicious psychopath. Nice job, Jenny
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Date: 25/05/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Sorry I haven't sent a review lately - fell and smashed my knee. So felt that mallet smash Dean's hand - Yikes. You had me too when I thought the feds had Dean when Sam needed him and then pulled the bottom out when it was Charlie - both had me gasping. Ok, you aren't a psychopathic murderer -- just a psychopathic writer LOL! Want more, but know it will be more bad for a while -- now who is the sicky? Charlie or me? Great job Jenny
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Date: 15/06/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Oh man, I think I hate you right now! How could he still be alive. All right I know you just told me. Another couple of wonderful chapters. Nice idea to bring Dr Lee into it and the boys definitely need help. Summary:
During a hunt concerning missing people who actually reappear, Dean ends up being kidnapped and awakens tied to what looks like a medical table, when Sam tracks him down will that be the end of it, or is the dark force in play determined to finish what it started?
Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes Word count: 72396 [Report This] Published: 21/04/07 Updated: 25/09/07
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Date: 29/04/07 Title: Chapter 21: Stalling Can't believe I haven't told you yet how much I love the story. You have kept me on the edge of my seat through every chapter. I can't seem to find a way out for poor Dean. I keep thinking things can't get worse and they do. You just keep turning up the tension. Great job. All the things Dean said to Sam when he had the knife were just so perfect. Desperately waiting to see what happens next. Jenny
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Date: 30/04/07 Title: Chapter 22: Freud’s Theory Of course her name would be Mary, just to make Dean squirm more - nasty but appropriate. Loved the sycho Dr too.
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Date: 30/04/07 Title: Chapter 23: Frustration Yes, Dr Bill is definitely out of his league. Mary is just so much nastier. Can't wait to see what she did to Dean. Dean's heart is so big of course it is there that she would need to hurt him.
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Date: 30/04/07 Title: Chapter 24: Voices Really liked seeing the out of control Sam when it comes to Dean and Dean's safety. In the midst of all the stress loved the "feeling me up" line - funny and so Dean. If I was a writer I'd do shower scenes with Dean too. LOL Author's Response: :D Glad you approve of the shower scene! lol.
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Date: 30/04/07 Title: Chapter 25: Nex Ahhh! Now we know what Mary unleashed inside Dean. I keep wondering who Bobby is trying to convince with his line, "We will figure this out. Dean is going to be fine. You are not going to lose him." He is definitely scared. Nice way to express it. Author's Response: Thank you!
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Date: 30/04/07 Title: Chapter 26: Truths Is that a chink in the hopeless situation I hear. (Or is it just my wishful thinking) Sharing truths may have just unleashed Sam, the Geekboy extrodinaire. Can't wait to see.
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Date: 26/05/07 Title: Chapter 31: Broken Man Damn, it is hard to see Dean in so much pain. I could feel his spirit being torn apart as you wrote. Forcing him to kill Sam would kill him. Summary:
New Families Form Easily but it's hard to leave your old ones... The boys meet a friend/ hunter's family.. and the boys see their childhood repeating before their eyes except this time the siblings are girls.... And to make matters worse something is killing children around town.. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 30648 [Report This] Published: 22/04/07 Updated: 29/07/07
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Date: 29/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Meeting the "Family" Cute girls and the parallels are obvious. Looking forward to learn more about the girls.
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 Date: 29/04/07 Title: Chapter 3: Worst Fears Like the fact Sam didn't tell Dean the part where the Demon goes after him -- Maybe I see where this could go -- oooh juicy. Also like the differences between the two pairs. Want to read more. Jenny
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Date: 29/04/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Loved the fears you put into Sam's head they were right on. Been waiting for someone to use Madison and then to use Dean being tired of protecting Sam -- oh so not nice, but great.
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Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 5: Blame Surprised me with the death of Nikki, I wasn't expecting that. I thought John was bad, but Mitchel is really out of control. Don't think it will be quite so easy to overcome their fears when Sam?? or someone faces the demon. Looking forward to the next chapter - Jenny Summary:
NOW COMPLETE - Sam and Dean have always been freaks, Sam found out when he was twenty two just how much of a freak he was. It wasn’t until the boys are trapped once again by the demon that they find out Dean’s little secret that none of them knew about.
 Once a quick one shot that wouldn't leave me alone, this is now starting to expand into a story. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 65131 [Report This] Published: 23/04/07 Updated: 20/05/09
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Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Fight the Good Fight Oooh, what a nasty vision. Liked the idea of switching back and forth between the Demon and Sam.
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Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 4: Fear of the Dark "He's got much more darkness in his heart" Yikes can't wait to find out what that means. Great job of moving between the two timelines too. Liked the demon's idea of the danger of pawns.
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Date: 25/05/07 Title: Chapter 6: Frustrated Unnoticed Loved where you ended with the demon calling Dean an abomination - and that the Demon is using Sam's visions to try to drive Sam crazy with fear and loathing of himself. I'm really starting to feel the rhythm of the story - if that makes sense. Jenny Summary:
Rating: G / Gen Length: @ 700 words Spoilers: None Summary: Because everyone needs to do a Metallicar fic. Categories: General, One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 816 [Report This] Published: 23/04/07 Updated: 24/04/07
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Date: 24/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Some Kind of Wonderful Loved hearing black beauty's view of the boys. Always knew she had a soul too. Liked the rhythm of the words -- sounded like a song to me. Great job! Author's Response: Thank you *so* much! When I started writing this piece, I really did feel an odd sort of rhythm set into the words, as if the Metallicar had her own sort of accent, her own cadence of speaking, so I'm tickled all to pieces that this came through for you, too! :-) Thank you for reading and commenting. Cheers ~ Summary: Tag to Heart
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2793 [Report This] Published: 24/04/07 Updated: 25/04/07
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Date: 25/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I have read most of the after Heart stories and I wanted to let you know it was the best so far. You captured the pain and the fears so well for me. Thanks. Thanks for the great review! I haven't read the other Heart tags yet; I wanted to wait until I was done with mine. wrt the pain and fear - that's why I wrote this. After I saw the episode, all I could think was "how do you move on from something like that?" Summary:
The truth wasn't out there. It was deep inside. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 10526 [Report This] Published: 26/04/07 Updated: 13/06/07
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Date: 26/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Want Sorry you struggled to get it written -- it was worth the effort. You have me hooked already. You really expressed his panic,his need without ever really saying what has pushed him to the breaking point. It's there and I want more. Eh, it's just a case of the muse misbehaving and me being too tired from work ::glares at it:: But! I will persist! Thanks for reading and posting feedback. You feed my pen. Nutty
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Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Wish Jesus, what is wrong with Dean? You so have me mesmerized with this story. I like what you are doing by not explaining the reasons things are so messed up with Dean -- It is like we are on the journey with Sam trying to figure out what the hell happened. Great job Jenny. A lot of things. But then he let me write him, so it's all his fault :D I think I'm on that journey too :D I'm so glad you're enjoying it and thanks so much for reading and posting feedback. You feed my pen. Nutty
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Date: 07/05/07 Title: Chapter 3: Wail You continue to slowly drop hints as to what is going on with the flashbacks, yet keep your readers on the edge of their seats with the unbelievable pain that Dean is going through. Wonderful job!!!! Can't wait to see if what I think is happening is right. Love the titles of your chapters, Want, Wish, Wail, each expressing Dean's need to to get out. By the way, how did Dean get out of the room? bathroom window?? just curious. Jenny Author's Response: I am so mean to poor Dean :D And the fact I'm saying that with a grin is a worry :D The answer to that question is in the first line of the next part. Hopefully I'll have enough time to finish it and post today. Thanks so much for reading and posting feedback. You so feed my pen. Nutty
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Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 4: Where I feel like I should be greatful for every little tidbit that you pass on to me in a chapter. Now I have a name, Chrissy, and some of the reason he is running away. You keep me wanting more. |
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