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Penname: whitewave [Contact]
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Real name: Jennifer Hostler Status: Member Member Since: 26/03/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
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Reviews by whitewave Summary: Dean, Sam and Catherine learn just what it will take for them to survive the coming war.
Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Coming War Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 41119 [Report This] Published: 03/05/07 Updated: 26/05/07
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 Date: 07/05/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Poor Catherine, glad to see her overcome the drugs and voices. Like the way you switch back and forth between the POV of the different characters - well done. Jenny
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 Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Loved Sam shopping for clothes. Great way to show how much they miss Catherine with their having problems with their hunt. She is not going to be happy it took them 5 days either.
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Date: 25/05/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Sorry, I haven't reviewed in a few chapters. Been reading and loving it, of course. Dean and Cat in the car was great - how could he not want to protect her - but realizes to try too hard would be to lose her. True, yet heartbreaking. Then this chapter, wow, So many things came together. Cat trying to fulfill her promise to Dean. The pain and angst for Sam if he realizes what Dean asked of her. The possibility of her love breaking her worse than any Demon could. Deans's willingness to die or suffer anything to protect Sam and Sam watching helplessly. Even Bobby's comments and feelings were perfect. As usual you rock!! Jenny Thanks so much, Jenny I was a little lost for a while, so I took a break, It worked out for the best. The story started flowing again. thanks for the review and the appreciation. Next chapter Tomorrow or Sunday - Thanks again K
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Date: 26/05/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 No, it can't be over :( . Seriously loved the story and can't wait for the third installment. Of course Dean is the Guardian and of course he wouldn't see it or want to be the one. But it is obvious to us readers and everyone inside the story too. He is such a reluctant hero. If I was Sam I would be a little angsty about being the Chosen one who has to face and defeat the Demon in the end. I always wait for your stories - you do such a great job with the relationships, character development and the story line. What a great flow and great ending to a wonderful story. Jenny Author's Response: Thanks much Jenny, a review from you always brightens my day, don't count your chickens about Sam being the Chosen yet, I'm not promising anything. They still have many pyschics to find. - K Summary:
Who do you call when a simple salt and burn gets out of hand. The brothers get help from an unexpected source when they find they are dealing with multiple spirits in a haunted factory.
Tied with Supernaturaldh's Leaning On A Shovel, Hoping For A Hole Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 62717 [Report This] Published: 05/05/07 Updated: 08/06/07
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Date: 07/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Yes, you started out with a bang on this cliff hanger. Can't wait to see how Sam survives the fall. What I really loved was the big bad police officer friend and the brothers response to him. Very funny. Also the title's reference to Ghost busters, very cute. Jenny Author's Response: Thanks, Jenny - the Ghostbusters theme was running through my head rather frequently as I wrote this. And there are a few more cliffies coming up - sorry, can't help myself...and yes, there aren't that many people Sam has to look up at, so I thought it would be amusing to put one in there - I was inspired by the look on Sam's face in Folsom Prison Blues when he encounters his rather large cell mate - that boy has such an expressive face!
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Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Ouch is right! Poor Dean, definitely shouldn't have been flirting. Of course, Sam is immobile and Dean is hurt out in the rain. Leroy is not willing to share his girlfriend -- my guess anyway.
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Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 So this story has human bad guys and nasty spirits too. Knew that ouija board would come in handy someday LOL! Great job with Dean and his concussion. I wasn't sure who was in trouble this chapter, poor Sam's turn again yikes.
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Date: 25/05/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 I knew the SOB Leroy was not dead yet, too easy. Loved watching Sam go ballistic. Nice job with Macy and Dean and a bottle of whiskey. Feel sorry for the boys, can they at least sleep through the night before the next run in with Mr Nasty? :) Jenny Summary:
It helped. It made the days easier to get through. But when Dean get’s hurt because of Sam’s secret, Sam finally has to face the repercussions. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 18619 [Report This] Published: 06/05/07 Updated: 14/05/07
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Date: 07/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Sam addicted to pain pills is a interesting way to express the pain that would have been unbearable after the loss of Jessica. The right circumstances could lead anyone to become addicted and Sam definitely has more than his share. Great job of expressing the signs of his addiction, his covering it up, and the rationalizations to keep taking the pills. Can't wait to see what leads to dealing with all of that. Jenny
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Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Poor Dean, of course he would blame himself for Sam's addiction. Fabulous job at describing Sam's fear of facing Dean and his panic at the end of the chapter.
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Date: 13/05/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Oh man, both brothers are so in trouble. Not surprised Sam ran, but yikes Dean is not in shape for a chase. Looking forward to more, Jenny.
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Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 So glad Sam finally improved enough to see how bad Dean was. Loved the image of Dean as an angel in white jeans and white leather jacket. LOL It seems like both of the boys are best when they are concerned about the other. Another wonderful chapter. Summary: Dean and Sam take a break from their usual gig in order to visit their estranged sister, who they find out, has many secrets. But she's not the only one; apparently, one of the brothers has been keeping a secret of his own.
Categories: Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 6910 [Report This] Published: 08/05/07 Updated: 01/07/07
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Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Sam & Dean with a sister -- can't wait to meet her. Clever idea of Sam having a GPS secretly put in his computer. Looking forward to see what Dean said to make her keep the bracelet. Typical Sam and Dean: Dean impatient and Sam irritated. Summary: [ AU ] When an angel goes missing from Heaven, it's up to Aurelia to bring him home - but not before she gives him the one thing he truly needs.
Categories: One Shots, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1881 [Report This] Published: 12/05/07 Updated: 14/05/07
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Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: ...'cause i am a wayward angel... Sam as a wayward angel - cool. Even as an angel he is filled with angst and still so Sam. Curious where this will lead. Jenny Summary:
This is my fantasy for how the season should end. MAJOR spoilers for all of season 2, especially AHBL 1 and 2 and all spoilers for those episodes. Categories: AU, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1278 [Report This] Published: 12/05/07 Updated: 14/05/07
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Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ooh smart, of course Dean would make a deal with the demon to get Sam back. Heart stopped when you only gave him a year, makes sense though. Can't wait to see if your story fits the show.
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Date: 17/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Just watched Part two and wanted to ask if you were psychic? Not bad Kripke even gave him only one year too. It was a great episode and thought the acting portrayed your story so well. Summary: You don't mess around with Slim. It's just not a good idea.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2062 [Report This] Published: 13/05/07 Updated: 13/05/07
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Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Messing Around With Slim I knew when he said, "I'll take the most prescious thing you've got," it wasn't the Impala. Great job with it being told from the perspective of the "ghost". Summary: Dean and Sam go on a hunt to stop a rash of robberies.
Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 26708 [Report This] Published: 14/05/07 Updated: 22/05/07
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Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Somehow I don't think the three "nerds?" are going to be able to keep control of their mud man? Nerd is definitely the image I got of the three sitting in the basement around a kiddie pool eating Mom's cookies -- very funny!
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Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 These three geeks or nerds are just too funny. Not very nice and definitely greedy, but so stupid. Really enjoyed the Philly steak sandwich experience too.
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Date: 17/05/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Do I hear panic in the voices of Dennis and Ron? OF course the Mom and girlfriend are as loopy as the geeks, and definitely clueless - had me laughing throughout. The poor "state troopers" are so in trouble?? Jenny
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Date: 18/05/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Poor Sam, he just can't sneak up on Dean. LOL It is so much fun to read your humor: "wadage", are you cops? and Dean's response, and Dean as entertainment for a bachlorette party. I want to go to that party :) Jenny
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Date: 21/05/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Wow, I can see why Sam was pissed. These guys are so not worth saving. Loved Paul's Mom, the only one with a brain :) well sort of!! Don't think taking off the head will work, but may give them a chance to put the sheepskin in it's mouth, if they can find it. Only these losers would lose the incantation. Funny as ever, Jenny Author's Response: Glad you're diggin it Jenny. Thanks as always for the kind review. - K Summary:
Ficlet, 1600 words. Coda to “All Hell Breaks Loose, part 1,” so spoilers for that episode (none for Part 2). The final scene from Sam’s point of view. I thought I’d try and get inside Sam’s head and see how he was feeling in that moment, and this is what I came up with. Enjoy. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1642 [Report This] Published: 16/05/07 Updated: 16/05/07
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Date: 17/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Sorry Just wanted to let you know you made me cry. Right on with all Sam would think as he died. Jenny Summary: What might be going through Dean's mind at the end of AHBL1. Spoilers for that episode. Rated for language.
Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 544 [Report This] Published: 17/05/07 Updated: 17/05/07
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Date: 17/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 OK, so I am a such light weight. I cried at the end of part one and now I cried again. I feel the same as Dean, "It's not right at all." You used the perfect words, great work. Jenny Summary:
Tragedy strikes the boys once again, and it's going to take everything they have to get through the latest turn of events. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 87324 [Report This] Published: 19/05/07 Updated: 22/10/07
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Date: 25/05/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Sorry I haven't reviewed yet, been laid up, but still reading. Wow, so well done again. Don't know what was worse going through Dean without a leg or seeing him through your words after a stroke. When he sent Sam away and Sam driving the car and smashing his hand were almost overwhelming, yet I read on and crave more. Also the agony of trying to walk was great too. You have so connected the boys that sometimes it is hard to tell who is suffering more from the stroke Dean or Sam. Just wanted you to know I'm reading and loving it. Jenny |
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