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Penname: Burrito1024 [Contact]
Real name: Corina
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Summary:

This is what happens when Sam and Dean meet two female hunters going by the names of Michelle and Amber. They'll discover a life beyond hunting and that others can be just as deadlily as they are. How will they handel this new life of hunting and how much will Amber and Michelle change them? 

This takes place after Pilot! It's sort of like my own little missing episodes! :D


Categories: Romance Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 102689
[Report This] Published: 17/01/07 Updated: 03/12/08


Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstar
Date: 19/04/07 Title: Chapter 11: All is Fair in Love and War

Hey! I love your story so far! Keep up the good work and update asap please! ")

 
Summary:

He turned, expertly masking the mass of unshed tears and unspoken fears that threatened so very much to burst from his usually strong and controlled person. Expressionless in every aspect save for his eyes, his gaze met Anna Walker’s. A silent message was communicated.

He knew she was telling him first. He appreciated it.

He knew she was asking his permission to say it aloud. He gave it.

He knew he would never be grateful to anyone more than he was to her now. He silently told her so.

He knew she understood.

Their mutual gazes broke apart, and Dean continued to clean his prized guns as Anna relayed the series of events that took place that day at the hospital to Sammy.

Dean knew his younger brother would cry.


Categories: General, Romance, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Through The Dimensions
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 48131
[Report This] Published: 13/03/07 Updated: 20/07/07


Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed
Date: 21/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow!!! I luved it!! U have to HURRY UP & write some more!!!!!!

sorry it took so long for me to get up here! & U kno that i gotta be the first to read it!!! So HURRY UP!!!

Ok. Well... Have A Burritoful Day!!!!

Luv,

~Burrito~

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

haha! I luved it!!

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/03/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think that it is PURELY FANTASTIC!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/03/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hey!!! i LUVED IT!!!!! Keep going and make it really really long!!! & remember, i always get it first!!!lol !

Tu amiga favorita,

Burrito

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/04/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

haha! I luvd it!! Just like u told me!!! He is legend by China White 2, member u were telling me about the song? Keep up the good work, u are doing great!!!

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/04/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yes!! Yes i do!! I rock!! lol. I luv this chapter SO MUCH!!!! i think this one is my favorite!!! Keep up the good work and write more more more!!!!

luv ya,

Burrito1024

TE AMO TAMBIEN!!!! Lol <3

p.s: U ROCK MY SOX!!!

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/05/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yay!!! I luv it!!! I can't wait for chapter 9!! So hurry up! lol. Keep up the good work ma frien'!

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/06/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Mi Amiga!!!! I'm back! And i LUV it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: if you don't call me right now, im coming to your house and breaking down the door screaming - and i am NOT paying for the damage!!!!!

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/08/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Omg!!!! Thats so sad!!!! But i loved it! Great work!!!

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/08/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

It's so Sad!!!!!!!! Don't cry Dean! Please don't cry!!! Agh! I wanna cry!

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/08/07 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue

I luv it!!!!!! It was just the way you said it'd be!! Omg. I can't help thinking about ur brother with the spiderman in his hand!!! AHHH! I love it!

 
Summary:

John’s weary eyes widened as the realization came. Some place inside of him that he vaguely told himself should be filled with pride was instead pierced with sorrow, and flooded with dread as he registered the thought:

Dean was a murderer.


Categories: General, One Shots, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 569
[Report This] Published: 17/03/07 Updated: 18/03/07


Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey!!!! How come u did not tell me about this one!!!!! I'm gonna yell at u the next time i see u !!! I'm always supposed to be first!! But hey! I still luved it!!! Good job!!!! :)

 
Summary:

The nightmare had ended, but Sam remembered. He didn’t know why, but he knew it was true. It was real. Dean was going to shoot him. Dean was going to kill him.

All logic left Sammy’s mind as sheer panic took over.


Categories: General, One Shots, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1829
[Report This] Published: 18/03/07 Updated: 18/03/07


Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HEY!!!!! I luv it very very much!!! Keep up the good work!! I want more!!!!

Luv,

Tu amiga favorita,

Burrito ;)

 
Summary:

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He was surely dying. You could not be feeling this and not be dying. He had to be dying. Please, let me be dying! This was too much to live with, Sam wanted it to end, needed it to end. Oh god it hurt so much, so bad, oh god make it stop, make it stop, make it STOP! He couldn’t speak, couldn’t do anything but scream in total anguish, not knowing where his body began or ended, feeling, hearing, seeing nothing but the pain being afflicted on his being. It was pain beyond pain, and he welcomed unconsciousness as his body reached its limit.

NOW COMPLETED!!!


Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 16344
[Report This] Published: 26/03/07 Updated: 26/11/07


Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was PURELY AMAZING!!! Sorry it took so long to get here, i knew u were just waiting for my response. Well, here it is... I LUV IT!!!! Hurry and write more!!!

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

"He wept- because he could do nothing else"...Noooooooo!!!!!! Dean! Don't cry!...I'll make it all better... :)

I luved this chapter! It's so sad, but you can see how much Dean loves Sammy...and i Love Dean! :) Your doing great!! Keep it going!!!

Con muchisisimo Amor,

Burrito



Author's Response: Heehee! me is so glad you like! luv u too mi hermana! ;)

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/08/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Omg! To think that Dean would be the one doing that to him!? I would die if that were true!! But cheese grater!? Thats just nasty! lol

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Sam!!!! Dean!!!

 
A Bad Omen by ThePasserby Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

This is a collection of one-shots about the many times bad things happen because of good food. Dean believes that whenever he craves mexican cuisine, it's a bad omen.

And he's right.


Categories: General, One Shots, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 6177
[Report This] Published: 02/07/07 Updated: 03/07/08


Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Baja Fresh

ahahahahaha!! My friend!!! That was hilarious!!!!!! More! You've got to wite more and quickly too! I wanna know what happens!! lol.

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Baja Fresh

I like it!!

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: The Terror That Tacos Bring

Hahaha! I loved it! I cannot wait for BLAME THE BURRITO!!!!! yaya!!!! Burritos rule! ahaha. jp

 
Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 3: Blame The Burrito

FRIGGIN AWESOME!!!!!!

 

Thanks for writing me an AMAZINGERIFIC STORY!

 

LUV YA :D

 
Summary:

“What am I supposed to do Sam?!” he asked through the door.

“I DON’T CARE! FEED A SQUIRREL, PAINT A HOUSE! BUY A FRIGGIN’ BOARD GAME!”

So he did.

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Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1496
[Report This] Published: 03/07/07 Updated: 03/07/07


Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Omg!!!! I love it!!!! It made me laugh a lot!!!! I could picture Dean and Sam playing and everything!!! haha. I need more!!!!!!.....lol. :)

 
Summary:

“HELP! Someone call an ambulance!...It’s okay Sam, I’ve gotcha…SOMEBODY HELP ME, PLEASE!” he pulled his cell roughly from his pocket, dialing while Sam’s pain-induced tears mixed with the copious amounts of blood snaking down his chin and neck, “You’re alright, Sammy, I’m right here...Hello?! I’m at the Sunset Inn on Downy – something, something’s wrong with my brother...Stay with me Sam, c’mon!...I don’t know, there’s blood coming from his mouth…Hold on, Sammy, please…I-I don’t think he can breathe!...SAM!” Dropping the phone Dean grasped his brother tighter, pulling him up and close. He could still feel him trembling and hear him choking on blood.


Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 13634
[Report This] Published: 02/08/07 Updated: 04/03/09


Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG. I don't know what to say... but i loved it although it is so sad. Poor Sammy! and Dean!

 
Summary:

He looked at the passenger seat, and for a moment he didn’t understand why it was empty. Then his gaze found the huge hole in the windshield, explaining the shattered glass everywhere. He saw the ridiculously large log that his precious Impala’s front was crunched up against, crumpled and broken. He saw the empty highway the stretched for miles ahead of them.

And he saw the still form of Sam’s unmoving body lying facedown twenty feet away in an obvious puddle of blood on the paved road.


Categories: General, AU, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 12225
[Report This] Published: 15/10/07 Updated: 04/08/10


Reviewer: Burrito1024 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/01/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

It was great. :] Always has been.. Haven't I always told you that you're writting will take you somewhere?

 Happy Birthday Lanah. I may be just a little late... but all the same. I hope you had a great one.



Author's Response:

*eyes weling* thanks. thanks a ton, dear. *hugs*