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Penname: bonnie [Contact]
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Blank Slate by Tree66 Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 22]
Summary: What happens when you can't remember who you are or what you've done? Just maybe, its better that way!
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 25295
[Report This] Published: 24/12/06 Updated: 24/12/06


Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 11/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Very well captivated, and I liked it. Bett than a rated 10, more like a 20.

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dean, Sam and Valkyrie

Valkyrie, Dean and Sam (Banner by Tru_Faith_Lost) 

 

Souls sometimes travel the same path together.  Who protects the protector?

Sam is snatched by a serial killer who finds out justice according to Dean Winchester doesn't involve a court room.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: Two Souls
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 56075
[Report This] Published: 08/02/07 Updated: 29/03/07


Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14/Epilogue

A very great and wonderfull story from the start. Would be a good episode for number 3. I'd give you the rate of 20+

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I'm so happy you liked this story.

Laura

 
Summary: John and Dean are faced with the unthinkable when one bad decision threatens Sam's life - and his soul.
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 27278
[Report This] Published: 23/02/07 Updated: 09/03/07


Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 16/10/07 Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue

So, so, so, so, cool. A very smoothing finaly. You JERK! scare me like that. My husband read the story with and liked it as well. He told me to try it. so maybe you might have compition. Thanks for the good early mormimg. Rate of higher than a 10+

 
Summary: When A Winchester makes a promise, he intends to keep it especailly when it's Dean Winchester who makes it to his Sammy. Death itself can't hinder him from keeping it. There's nothing Dean wouldn't do for his little brother...his Sammy.
Categories: AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 4195
[Report This] Published: 06/03/07 Updated: 06/03/07


Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 15/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: A Promise Kept

Rating of a zillian+. I loved it will there be a sequal or what. Maybe this could by like a child dream for dean on some new episode for 3rd season.

 
Abomination by Rae666 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 426]
Summary:

NOW COMPLETE - Sam and Dean have always been freaks, Sam found out when he was twenty two just how much of a freak he was. It wasn’t until the boys are trapped once again by the demon that they find out Dean’s little secret that none of them knew about.

 

Abomination

Once a quick one shot that wouldn't leave me alone, this is now starting to expand into a story.


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 65131
[Report This] Published: 23/04/07 Updated: 20/05/09


Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 30/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Abomination

A gooe third season clip, Just need a supersized gulp and popcorn w/ extra butter and I am hooked.

Author's Response: Heya - Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 30/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Fight the Good Fight

Wow this story is makeing Freddy Cruger look like a Martha Chucky Jason Stewert. Good for a promo for 3rd season.

Author's Response: Again - thank you for reading. Lol - nice analogy. :)

 
Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 30/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Fear of the Dark

So far so good keep it coming. Np pne story is perfect, but the way it is imaged you are to perfect to go wrong for i can see it happening.

Author's Response: Thanks loads - and I agree, stories can have their faults and moments that each reader cringes at so I hope you enjoy this one and don't have too many cringing moments.

 
Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 30/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: From the Inside

Dammmmmmm u!!!!!!!!!!! Beotch, this is tramaticlly good. I LOVVVVVVVVVVVVE it, keep going. Look out next season this whould be good for it.

Author's Response: Thank you! Speaking of next season... I can't wait to watch it!

 
Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Frustrated Unnoticed

Very Very SLEEEEEEKKKKKK and well performed.

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Reviewer: bonnie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 8: Feel Bad Vibe

You are a doll, keep going it RRRRROOOOOOCCCCCKKKKKKKSSSSSSSSSSSS.

Author's Response: Lol - thank you!

 
Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 9: Father and Son

Ohhhhhhhh, that SOFAB is screwing with them. it keeps getting better and I Love It. I would have to rate this higher than a ten.

Author's Response: Thanks - means so much to have you reading,it's encouraging.

 
Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 10: Female of the Species

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH, I hate cliff hangers and this one has not reached a dooooooooozzzzzeeeyyyyy just yet.

Author's Response: Cliffhangers are evil... so I have a minor soft spot for them... unless reading, then I just get angry and demand more.

 
Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 21: Forgotten

This is A good set up for a piece of the series for the 3rd or 4th season.

Author's Response: Thanks again for reading :D

 
Summary: After a near fatal accident at the end of a hunt, Sam loses his memory of their recent hunt. Dean has to put the pieces back together for his half conscious brohter while still trying to figure it out himself.
Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Never a Winchester
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 9336
[Report This] Published: 21/05/07 Updated: 05/09/07


Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 06/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: The accident

WOW! This opening is great it tingled all my sense's. As if I where to be a witness to it.

Author's Response:

Im responding to everything here

  • there's not much info out there on Puloman unless you have The KEy of Solomon which the internet has not allowed me to possess
  • I am going between msn and this when im typing it, this confuses me alot as i ahve 2 switch between dialects
  • i have keyboard dyslexia.
  • i am glad everyone likes it
  • the latest chapter was being written during my computers class at school and i didnt have the patience to save it

Thanks for your support!!!

 
Summary:

The only way to get Dean is through Sam. The only way to hurt Sam is with Dean…..Two souls bonded together. Without one there truly is not the other….

The sequel to Bonding of Souls.

 

banner by neolani618


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: Two Souls
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 48353
[Report This] Published: 13/06/07 Updated: 27/08/07


Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Very illusive and uncalming nerves of mine. It was well preped. I think if the head director of SUPERNATURAL would simply read this as I have it could probably hit for an episode in the third season. A rate of 200++++++ I loved it .

Author's Response:

Aaww...what a kind thing to say.  Thanks so very much.

Laura

 
Summary: Episode tag for Heart--Sam is hurting and Dean only wants to help, but can he be what his brother needs?
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4011
[Report This] Published: 19/07/07 Updated: 19/07/07


Reviewer: bonnie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Gonna Help You See It Through

This is one if ever a bitter sweet symphohney. (Sorry, if I spelled it wrong) I think it would be a good project for third season. Thumbs up for a well crying story. This is a 100 + of a rating formatt.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Bonnie!

I am so happy you enjoyed this one because Heart was such a deep, moving episode and my favorite one so far. I am only happy I could add my thoughts to it and that you enjoyed it.

I hate to say that I'm glad I made you cry, but at the same time it's what I was going for on this one.

Thank you so much for your review...your words are so kind and I appreciate them.

 
One Week by Magos186 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

One week until Dean's deal comes due. One week for Sam to find out how to save his brother. One week to determine if the last remaining Winchesters live or die.


Categories: General, Romance Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 14889
[Report This] Published: 22/09/07 Updated: 19/02/08


Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 15/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Earth, Wind, and Hellhounds

Please state he is not gone. It would be unbearable. I give it a rate of 200+ I loved it. It felt like i was part of the situation. Keeep going for the finaly. Do you think this whould be good for 3rd season?

 
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Categories: Orphan Characters: None
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Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 30/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A good start for a 3rd season show.

Author's Response: awww...thanks!! hope you like what's to come in future chappies!! thanks for reading!! bambers;)

 
Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 30/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is absoulutly great. A good 3rd season show. To place the Winchesters in a position like that. Its also, great to read stories after the HONEYMOON. I would like to read on to this story.

Author's Response: awww....so glad you like the story!! hopefully you'll enjoy what's to come!! thanks so much for reading!! bambers;)

 
Summary:

 

AHBL2 tag.  A brother’s perspective.  Something big is going down.  End-of-the-world big.  Well, then let it end…  When will the world end?  When my brother dies.., that’s when my world ends.  Brotherly Love and Winchester Angst.  Not a death fic.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: Dean W., Sam W.
Challenges:
Series: Life, Love, Loss and other Wonders of the Universe
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 47
[Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 03/10/07


Reviewer: bonnie Signed
Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i love it.

Author's Response: Thanks, bonnie.  Take care, B.J.