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Penname: kwater [Contact]
Real name: Kelly
Status: Member
Member Since: 13/03/07
Website: http://writersguild101.bravehost.com/kwater.htm
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What a difference a year makes.  This time last year I was posting the very first chapter of my first story.  The other day I posted my eighth chapter of my 27th (I think…lol) story.  Not bad for a woman that had never written anything (other than those pesky, ‘What did you do this summer?’ essays).  I think I’ve managed to keep some of you entertained, laughing at me if not with me, and I’ve more importantly found an escape from the everyday minutia that makes up my life.  As a wife to my high school sweetheart and a stay-at-home mother to three kids that’s more important than I can say.

 

I’ve also read some of the most creative, heart wrenching and throw down cool stories ever, and this comes from a girl that keeps a book in her purse at all times just in case five minutes presents itself.  I work hard at juggling both the stories I’m reading and the stories I’m writing as both are every bit as important to me. 

 

I have been addicted to Supernatural from the very first and look forward to every season with anticipation.  Kripke and crew have proven themselves beyond doubt leaving me to simply sit back and enjoy the show.  What more could I ask for.

 

To those that I have met on this site, what can I say, you have opened up the world for me in ways I’d never imagined.  So, that’s it.  Now go get reading and stop wasting your time here ;)

 

9/27/2008 - Okay folks, so all this talk of story quality had me running through some of my older stories.  Like a lot of new authors my first stories were rough to say the least.  So, I've decided that I'm going to go through, one by one and revamp those that need the most help.  In most cases I've simply fixed the POV and punctuation mistakes and in some I've gone so far as to clean up plot points.  So for those that have read these oldies before I hope you enjoy them even more now, and to the newer readers well, I just hope you like.  Catch you all later - Kel

9/27/08  Keeping the Faith- Complete

UNGEN 2008 Win"


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Reviews by kwater
 
Summary: Preseries. What happened in the days before Sam left for Stanford. It's affect on everyone as the situation spirals out of control. Complete!

Categories: Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 22141
[Report This] Published: 29/12/06 Updated: 29/12/06


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 24/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 All I can stand

Loved it - K

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 24/04/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Waiting

Really enjoying the story.  Thanks much - k

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 25/04/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 And the Rain Came Down

Absolutely lovely, I'm wiping the tears as I type.  Thanks - K

Author's Response: I didn't respond to the other reviews cause i was waiting. I'm so glad you liked it, if that's the correct term. I should include hankies with it. Ta so much!

 
Summary: Helping Dean get through the nights when it just becomes too much to handle.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2060
[Report This] Published: 30/12/06 Updated: 30/12/06


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the way you captured Dean's thoughts - Nice  - K

Author's Response:  didn't realize I hadn't respnded to this!  Ta so much!

 
Summary:

When I look at Dean Wichester, this is what I see.


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 545
[Report This] Published: 30/12/06 Updated: 30/12/06


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 12/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice Terry, really Nice. KW

Author's Response: Ta! It was my first piece and it shows, but gotta start somewhere.

 
Summary: Dean POV. Lost in the dark nothingness. Angst. Dean’s thoughts, my thoughts. Everyone else has done it so, what the hell….
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 2652
[Report This] Published: 30/12/06 Updated: 30/12/06


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 29/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved it thanks for the great read - K

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Ta so mush!

 
Summary: Post “FaithSam tries to helpDean come to terms with his guilt over Layla.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3098
[Report This] Published: 30/12/06 Updated: 30/12/06


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was great, Loved Sam's description of his brother - K

Author's Response: Man, I have got to get caught up with my reading. There are so many new writers on here I know I'm missing a lot of great stories. Ta so much for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it!

 
Summary:

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When a hunt goes sideways, the brothers are hurt and lost in the northern Minnesota woods. They have only each other and their skills to get them out...and they aren't alone. They are being tracked by the 'perfect hunter'.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 67711
[Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 26/03/07 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

Excellent story, I've listed you as one of my favorite authors.  Your a real pleasure to read.

 



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much! I'm flattered. I am pleased you enjoyed the story.

Hope to see you on a review page again someday!

GS

 
Summary: Dean is crashing after a string of bad jobs. One last, terrible incident pushes him over the edge. He’s on a downhill slide and the Moonstar is the last place he needs to be.
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 50575
[Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 08/01/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Puzzle Piece

Ahhhh,,,,, I'm loving this story but gotta take a break. Kids to feed, baths to run and books to read.  I'll catch the rest later - thanks for the great story  - K

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed starstarstar
Date: 15/05/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Trade

I'm loving the way the boys react to each other - On to the next chapter - Yeah - K

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 15/05/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Rising Storm

Loving that the good doctor is there - Great story - K

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 15/05/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

You're making me late for my kids swimming lessons - LOL well worth it ;) -k

Author's Response: Sorry about the swimming lessons. :)  I was waiting for you to finish before I responded. You're so nice, I never get to read stuff anymore, my catch up list is so long i may as well give up. I'm glad you liked it!

 
Summary:

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What happens to the Winchester's after the events of "Devil's Trap"? This was actually written right after the season finale some months ago.


Categories: AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 93391
[Report This] Published: 01/01/07 Updated: 24/02/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 30/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Not Before Everything

Nice start I look forward to reading the rest - thanks K

Author's Response:

Ooo, goody, a new review.  I thought this one had died a slow death, lol.  Well, personally, I think it gets better as it goes along.  I think you can see my growth especially toward the end.  I admit I had a lot to learn when I first started it.  I hope you enjoy the whole sordid affair and thanks for reviewing!

Nicole

 
Reflection by JessicaRae Rated: K+ starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: S2 Ep2 tag. Little by little, he was fixing it. Tossing the damaged parts aside and starting new. With every fix he made, he rebuilt another wall.
Categories: Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1857
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 14/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 of 1

Very nice, That ranks as one of my fav. Episodes and I really enjoyed your take on it - Thanks for the read - K

 
Eye Candy by Mady Bay Rated: M starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: The brothers' vacation at the beach turns into a nightmare for Dean.

Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 13842
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Eye Candy

Hey really great story -very imaginative - Thanks for the read  K

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing - and for the stars!  Glad you enjoyed the story enough to take the time to let me know.

 
Summary: A hunt goes bad. Sam needs to take care of injured Dean while they wait out the night...

Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7563
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 26/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Long Night

Nice story, loved the foogers - K

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  Glad you enjoyed the story, and the foogers, those loveable little guys...

 
School Ties by tracer Rated: T [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Dean visits Sam at Stanford. QT series.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Quality Time
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3694
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was nice thanks for the read - K

 
Hunting Nights by tracer Rated: T [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Dean's first solo hunt goes nothing like planned. QT series.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Quality Time
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3224
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks for the read - K

 
Hot Wheels by tracer Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: How Dean got his Impala. QT series.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Quality Time
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2179
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was great Love that Dean's 22 - LOL K

 
Summary:

At times, life can be a war-a struggle to surmount the obstacles in our way, to avoid the wounds that leave us dying on the battlefield. Sometimes we must fight, but there comes a time when we must surrender. Fighting is all Dean Winchester knows, but for his brother, he must learn to let go.

 


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2418
[Report This] Published: 03/01/07 Updated: 03/01/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it, really glad I came across you story- Thanks for the read - K

 
Summary: Sam's first Christmas at college away from his brother.

Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1864
[Report This] Published: 04/01/07 Updated: 04/01/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Happily Ever After

Great story liked it alot - k

 
Summary: This is a short missing scene to Everybody Loves a Clown. Sam sees his brother's pain and wants to fix it.
Categories: Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 989
[Report This] Published: 06/01/07 Updated: 06/01/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Beast of Burden

Once again, great job - thanks K

 
Circles by Will Scott Rated: T [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Dean finds it rather disconcerting that life keeps repeating, over and over and over, much like a circle.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1552
[Report This] Published: 06/01/07 Updated: 06/01/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Circles

Ahhh, poor Dean trapped - Liked the story thanks K

 
Summary:

We all have fears lurking in the dark. After a hunt goes wrong, Sam comes face to face with his biggest one...losing Dean.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 10694
[Report This] Published: 06/01/07 Updated: 06/01/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 26/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, I just loved that story, thanks for the great read - K

 
Cassie by montez Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Dean's POV of hearing from Cassie: during Route666
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 524
[Report This] Published: 06/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 14/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just came across this, very nice job.  thanks for the read - K