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Penname: kwater [Contact]
Real name: Kelly
Status: Member
Member Since: 13/03/07
Website: http://writersguild101.bravehost.com/kwater.htm
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What a difference a year makes.  This time last year I was posting the very first chapter of my first story.  The other day I posted my eighth chapter of my 27th (I think…lol) story.  Not bad for a woman that had never written anything (other than those pesky, ‘What did you do this summer?’ essays).  I think I’ve managed to keep some of you entertained, laughing at me if not with me, and I’ve more importantly found an escape from the everyday minutia that makes up my life.  As a wife to my high school sweetheart and a stay-at-home mother to three kids that’s more important than I can say.

 

I’ve also read some of the most creative, heart wrenching and throw down cool stories ever, and this comes from a girl that keeps a book in her purse at all times just in case five minutes presents itself.  I work hard at juggling both the stories I’m reading and the stories I’m writing as both are every bit as important to me. 

 

I have been addicted to Supernatural from the very first and look forward to every season with anticipation.  Kripke and crew have proven themselves beyond doubt leaving me to simply sit back and enjoy the show.  What more could I ask for.

 

To those that I have met on this site, what can I say, you have opened up the world for me in ways I’d never imagined.  So, that’s it.  Now go get reading and stop wasting your time here ;)

 

9/27/2008 - Okay folks, so all this talk of story quality had me running through some of my older stories.  Like a lot of new authors my first stories were rough to say the least.  So, I've decided that I'm going to go through, one by one and revamp those that need the most help.  In most cases I've simply fixed the POV and punctuation mistakes and in some I've gone so far as to clean up plot points.  So for those that have read these oldies before I hope you enjoy them even more now, and to the newer readers well, I just hope you like.  Catch you all later - Kel

9/27/08  Keeping the Faith- Complete

UNGEN 2008 Win"


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Reviews by kwater
 
Summary: The witch is dead, the hunt's over, all's right with the world. Yeah, we all know how long that's gonna last...
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 16258
[Report This] Published: 11/04/07 Updated: 25/04/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 19/04/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm hunting you down and hugging you.  LOL - K

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 26/04/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

You sure you gotta hug me - LOL  Really nice story. Thanks for the read. - K

 
Summary: The imagination of a 14 year old girl can be a dangerous thing
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 13978
[Report This] Published: 11/04/07 Updated: 07/08/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 04/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice start - K

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 04/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Waiting for an update - K

Author's Response: Thanks this is my first "could be hunt" fic I'm more of a tag writer but i thought i would give it a try and thanks for reviewing

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Watcher, nice chapter.  Nice job leading us to Amelia's powers.  You may want to check your font though, it seems a bit small, makes it harder to read.. Otherwise It's coming along nicely - K

Author's Response: huh.... I don't know why its kind of small. Well I'm sorry about that I'll try and fix it if I can. But I"m glade you like it so far. thanks for reading and reviewing!


Lighthousewatcher

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh, glowing blue eyes, never a good sign.. Nice once again, just watch your editing.."Only If Choke on it first" Youre missing something there ;) Thanks for the read, hope you don't mind my two cents....

Author's Response: No I don't mind at all. I love to hear what I'm doing wrong to fix it so I can do better next time for my readers. And I'm glad you're liking it so far. thanks for reading and reviewing.


Lighthousewatcher

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 09/07/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hey this is really getting good, Watcher.  My only suggestion is to double check for grammer mistakes otherwise your story telling is really improving.  You may want to consider a beta, simply to double check on grammer and punctuation.  Nice, Nice job though.  I look forward to reading more. - K

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Watcher - If you're interested in a beta, I know a great lady that would be glad to help...supernaturaljunkiejude.. You can e-mail her.. I'm sure she'd be happy to help you out....You really are improving...Keep up the good work. - K

 
Summary: Sam was awake for some of it; he just doesn't know how much. Tag for Born Under a Bad Sign.

Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1736
[Report This] Published: 12/04/07 Updated: 12/04/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 12/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Devil You Know

Very, very nice.... Good job. KW

 
Summary:

Somewhere in Colorado, children from 3 families have gone missing, can the boys find out what’s going on before forgotten memories come back to haunt them, more specifically – Dean. Mixture of both the past and present - So partly wee!chester.

Monster in the Closet

Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 29298
[Report This] Published: 12/04/07 Updated: 28/04/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 24/04/07 Title: Chapter 10: I've got you

Great story so far, I love that Dean takes the bed between the closet and Sam - K

Author's Response: Thanks! It's one of his quirks that I see him having. :)

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 24/04/07 Title: Chapter 11: Dead boys can't talk

Nice Job, you can be proud. - K

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 02/05/07 Title: Chapter 17: Missing

loving it so far. Thanks K



Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 02/05/07 Title: Chapter 19: Stolen Innocence

Nice, Nice, Nice - K



Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 02/05/07 Title: Chapter 21: Aftermath

Thanks much, I really enjoyed.  K

Author's Response: Again, thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

 
Summary: It was a cold and snowy night when Kerri Harrison first met Dean Winchester.  An exploration into the power of a friendship. 
Categories: General, Wee!chester, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Something Lost
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 22990
[Report This] Published: 14/04/07 Updated: 16/06/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 15/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohhhhh.... Please please please continue, Kerry is one of my favorite characters on this site.  Great job

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 29/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Thanks for continuing, I really enjoyed the chapter. Nice job - K

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 15/05/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

You are killing me..... sniff, sniff..... what a great job.  I love young Dean's reasoning.  Gotta go, now I gotta hug my kids - LOL  K



Author's Response: thank you so much. i always figured that dean had to be a pretty serious little kid to be such an over-protective big brother.   i am glad you enjoyed it.  give your kids a big hug :)

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 25/05/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

God, you continue to break my heart with this story ;) Thanks - K

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 03/06/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great job as always, Love the relationship between Dean and Kerry

Author's Response: thank you so much. their relationship is one that few people in this world share and i am trying to build it slowly and carefully.  

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/06/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I like the way this chapter mirrored your last - Very nice touch - K

Author's Response: thank you so much. i like showing the difference between how john sees the world and how dean does. i have always though that john and sam were more similar. 

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/06/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm not sure what else I can say, this is yet another terrific layer to Dean and Kerri's relationship.  Thanks K

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 16/06/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ahh, sorry to see it end, it was a truly wonderful story - Thanks for the read - K

Author's Response:

i am sorry to see it end too. but it just felt right. this was only supposed to be about their first meeting.  but i think i am do a few more stories like this at different ages. not too sure yet. 

thank you for all the great reviews.  

 
Veracity by PurplePosie Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

These are fundamental truths in Sam’s life.


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3069
[Report This] Published: 18/04/07 Updated: 18/04/07


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 18/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very, very nice.

Author's Response: Thankyou!

 
Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 11/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay so in looking for nominations for the ungen 2008 awards I came across this again and I just had to tell you once more how much I love it.  Thanks (again) for the great read - Kel ;)

 

 
Summary:

One of the boys is kiddnaped but that´s only the biginning of the worst hunt ever for the Winchester.!!

This fic takes place after Devil's Trap but that´s the only thing in common with the actual season 2.

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i recently fall in love with Lou after she made me this awesome banner Thank you sweetheart!!!!!!


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 35934
[Report This] Published: 19/04/07 Updated: 14/09/08


Reviewer: kwater Signed
Date: 05/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice start looking forward to reading more  - K

Author's Response:

AWWWW thanks sweety!!

I wrote that in July and change it a bit recently..i wasn´t very sure about it....

I really aprecciate this review, thank you very much

***ps: as you surely already notice english isnt my mother tongue ..sorry