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Penname: akumabarai [Contact]
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Reviews by akumabarai Summary: Post Asylum. Dean's understanding of what happened.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1029 [Report This] Published: 15/01/07 Updated: 15/01/07
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 09/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Excellent tag. This has to be one of my favorite stories. You've really captured the equivocalness (is that a word??) of the brothers' reltionship. Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm thrilled you liked it! :D Summary:
Thinking back later, Dean wasn’t sure what response he had expected. Whatever response he might have imagined, nothing could have prepared him for what happened next. Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1288 [Report This] Published: 14/03/07 Updated: 15/03/07
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 09/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This was great. Nice foreshadowing. Summary: Dean always thought he was prepared for Sam to leave him again, until it actually happened.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 80602 [Report This] Published: 03/04/07 Updated: 13/05/07
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 24/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Dude, this story is excellent! I gotta admit, it's kind of cruel giving Dean *two* Sams that he needs to watch out for. Can't wait to see how this resolves. Keep it up!
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 09/05/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Normally, I try not to read stories that aren't complete, and this is why - you're killing me, dude. Every chapter has been excellent and I can't wait to find out how this all resolves.....if it does. :D Fantastic job, as always. Summary: It was a cold and snowy night when Kerri Harrison first met Dean Winchester. An exploration into the power of a friendship.
Categories: General, Wee!chester, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Something Lost Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 22990 [Report This] Published: 14/04/07 Updated: 16/06/07
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 21/08/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 I really loved this story. You've done a fantastic job! I really love how you can see the person Dean will become in the Dean you've written. Same with Kerri. Fantastic. Summary:
Rating: G / Gen Length: @ 700 words Spoilers: None Summary: Because everyone needs to do a Metallicar fic. Categories: General, One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 816 [Report This] Published: 23/04/07 Updated: 24/04/07
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Date: 28/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Some Kind of Wonderful This was excellent! Very fun. And I love the "voice" you've given to the Impala. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had a great time creating the "voice" for the Impala, and once she started "talking" it just sort of flowed. I'd never done something like this before, so it was loads of fun, and I'm delighted it worked for you! :-) Thanks for reading. Cheers ~ Summary: Spoilers for AHBL. Dean is having nightmares.
Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2154 [Report This] Published: 20/05/07 Updated: 23/05/07
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Date: 23/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nice job! It wasn't what I expected from the title, but it was great. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 You're killing me! This story is awesome - I keep laughing out loud. I love the part with Dean and the motar and pestle, pissing off the witch. I can totally visualize it - and it's _so_ in character. :) Summary: Sometimes the most innocent of things can get you into a world of trouble.
Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Something Lost Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 32473 [Report This] Published: 17/07/07 Updated: 29/12/07
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Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow. Great story. I'm really glad you've decided to stay on the site; your stories are some of the most well-written ones here. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 09/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow. That was.....intense. Very nice. Summary:
AHBL2 Sam didn’t know the particulars on his brother’s exploits, just that Dean liked sex and women liked Dean. It was just a little sex, no big deal. What more could there possibly be to know? I shouldn’t begrudge him a good time, it’s just, he’s having fun and I’m the only one worrying about this? In one year his bill comes due, how can he just roll over and die? Categories: One Shots, Romance, Missing Scenes Characters: Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: Life, Love, Loss and other Wonders of the Universe Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 11103 [Report This] Published: 15/08/07 Updated: 15/08/07
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 15/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This was excellent. Really well done. Author's Response: Thank you. This was a stretch for me, but I love writing the Winchesters, particularly Dean. I loved exploring another side of him. Take care, B.J. Summary:
Sam finds a bomb...Dean has to take it away.
banner by Maygin Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4613 [Report This] Published: 10/09/07 Updated: 10/09/07
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Yowza...that was heart pounding. Well done! Summary:
Who was the handsome stranger brought to the mental institution in the dead of night - and what terrible tragedy from his past had reduced him to a broken, empty shell?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 29830 [Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 11/01/08
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 11/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Damn, that was awesome. Really well done. That line "you never gave him back" - just killed me. Summary:
A Very Supernatural Christmas tag. Wee!chester moments as Bobby talks with Sam about the monsters, Dean frets over how he came to own the amulet, and John regrets missing out on Christmas. Family love with a touch of angst.
Another beautiful banner by dreamalittledreamofsam Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9890 [Report This] Published: 04/01/08 Updated: 04/01/08
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 05/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow, that was great! Your story really "filled out" the episode. I really liked that Dean felt guilty about accepting the pendant. Thanks for writing and sharing! Thank you for reading and reviewing! The xmas episode was perfect, but I love when I can explore it further and I really felt as much as Dean loved and wanted the amulet, he would also feel guilty about taking what was supposed to be Dad's. I was glad to give him permission for once to be selfish and keep it. And I do believe it is one of those instances of "meant to be". Take care, B.J. Summary:
Sam Winchester's ideal Friday night out: moonlit Arizona desert, a flesh-eating monster, and Dean stuck up a tree. Categories: One Shots, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2452 [Report This] Published: 09/02/08 Updated: 09/02/08
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I loved it! Really funny, and some of the lines are priceless. Great job! Author's Response: Thanks very much! It's one of my favourites, I had such fun with it. Summary:
Older and younger brothers are the same the world over, corporeal or ethereal. Come and peak into the private postbag of the aged and wise Bellepheron, and his hip baby brother Tuffy as he adventures 'Uptop' on his gap year from Hell! Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 18711 [Report This] Published: 01/03/08 Updated: 04/04/08
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 11/03/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Caduceus and Cowboy boots This is freaking HILARIOUS. I've been laughing out loud. I love that Manolo Blahnik is a demon. :) This is sort of The Screwtape Letters meets PG Wodehouse. I love it.... Author's Response: Cool, cool Penname Hun! And PG Wodehouse, wow very flattered! Bev xx Now that IS a compliment, thanks very very much...XXX Louy Summary: Father's Day Drabble - It's June 2007. Ten months after his father sold his soul for him. Dean calls John and leaves a message.
Categories: General, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 101 [Report This] Published: 15/06/09 Updated: 15/06/09
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 19/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow. That was fantastic. I loved the line "A smile graced his face even as the tears filled his eyes..." A very true, very real moment. HI there Thank you so much. I'm glad that you enjoyed this. I liked that line too. Cheers Mary x Summary:
Father's day challenge :D
Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 16/06/09 Updated: 16/06/09
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 21/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - I'll pretend Ouch. Such a brutal moment for John, and what I imagine is a vicious cycle for him - he loves his boys, but believes he's not enough of a father, but he'll smile for them because he loves them, which would make him feel like more of a fraud, which..... Author's Response: I'm so glad you get it, it's not always easy getting a message across, esp with drabbles. lol I still believe John was the way he was because he felt like a failure. Most thought he was a jerk but I think he made mistakes like most parents. (fair enough his was big) But he still loved them and would do anything for them, including being a fake on father's day! Thanks for reviewing xx Summary:
Not everything was destroyed in the fire. Written for the Father’s Day drabble challenge.
Categories: General, One Shots, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 95 [Report This] Published: 18/06/09 Updated: 18/06/09
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 21/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Saving grace That's a lot in a hundred words. The line "Yet one thing remained" just kills me. Very well done. Hey there! Thanks so much for the review you left for my Father's Day drabble. I really appreciate it! I'm glad you liked the line you mentioned, it was one of my favorites. If you liked this, you might enjoy my story "Parenting Your Gifted Child." It's where we first see the Father's Day card mentioned. If you check it out, I'd love to hear what you think! :) Thanks again for taking the time to read and review! Summary:
It felt appropriate in a small way. It felt deserved. They’d started this, the two of them. They’d failed in every attempt to stop the inevitable tide that worked relentlessly to pull them out to sea. Dean and Sam meet Lucifer. Post Season 4. Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3393 [Report This] Published: 18/06/09 Updated: 18/06/09
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 21/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This was really good. I loved the way you wrote Lucifier's snark/menace, and how he tries to tempt Sam. Very well balanced. "Dean stubbornly refused to call out his brother’s name. It had to be Sam’s choice to get into the car. It had to be Sam’s choice to sit alongside his brother and fight." - That says it all right there. Author's Response: Thank you very much. It's how I feel the show should go when it comes to bringing these two back together, Sam has to chose to be there and has to accept that Dean's going to test him for a while. Faith in his brother, just as the brother's have to show other kinds of faith. Thanks for reading and for the review! Summary:
Sometimes the only words needed are the ones that can't be said. Set during IMTOD. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 971 [Report This] Published: 18/06/09 Updated: 18/06/09
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 19/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Tempered, Honed This was really well done. I think you captured John very well. He's honest enough with himself to know the score, and what he's done, but it didn't stop him from being the father he was. I am definitely looking forward to more fic from you! P.S. If you're interested, I have a story on this site about Dean bulls-eyeing the bottles on the fence the first time. It's called "The First Thing You Think Of" Author's Response: Thanks, akumabarai! I'm glad you got those feelings out of the story as that was exactly what I wanted him to say. I appreciate you taking the time to read and to send me feedback. Until next story! Eleri Summary: Most people choose to forget their brush with the Winchesters and the impossible. But for one survivor, it takes tracking down the past to find a course for the future.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 6713 [Report This] Published: 11/07/09 Updated: 18/07/09
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 28/09/09 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2 Yet again, I am really impressed with your writing. I love how you've captured another character and perspective so completely. The way the Winchesters are tangential, but also completely integral to the story is really well done. You've balanced it perfectly. Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for such wonderful comments. I have to admit, Gabriel is one my favorite OCs I've ever created and that includes original works in their entirety. Hearing you liked her as well, along with the interaction with the boys, has me grinning from ear to little ear. Thanks for reading! Eleri Summary: Pre Series. Sam runs away from home and Dean must find him before their father returns.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10139 [Report This] Published: 30/05/10 Updated: 30/05/10
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 31/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nice. I had been trying to imagine what this whole incident at Flagstaff would have been like, and you've captured it really well. In the episode, the way Dean talks about the aftermath of Flagstaff, it sounded very alone, so I wasn't sure how it would work in the Brotherhood universe. This was perfect. I can't wait to read your next one! Summary: Coda for 'Two minutes to midnight'. Dean dies again. Which is funny, considering that he dies with Death's ring in his pocket.
Categories: Missing Scenes, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2705 [Report This] Published: 31/05/10 Updated: 31/05/10
Reviewer: akumabarai Signed
Date: 02/06/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nicely done. I really like how you've balanced seriousness and some humor in this. I particularly like Crowley's reaction. This kind of reminded me of "The Little Prince" and what the fox tells the prince. Author's Response: Thank you! And you know... I'm kind of ashamed to confess that I've never read 'The little prince'? It's such a classic :) |
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