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New to SPN fandom, refugee from PoTC and LOTR.  I'm supposed to be busting my ass writing original stuff, so shhhh, this is me playing hooky.  ;-)


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Reviews by ErinRua
 
Summary:

AHBL2  Sam didn’t know the particulars on his brother’s exploits, just that Dean liked sex and women liked Dean.  It was just a little sex, no big deal.  What more could there possibly be to know?

I shouldn’t begrudge him a good time, it’s just, he’s having fun and I’m the only one worrying about this?  In one year his bill comes due, how can he just roll over and die?


Categories: One Shots, Romance, Missing Scenes Characters: Dean W., Sam W.
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Series: Life, Love, Loss and other Wonders of the Universe
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 11103
[Report This] Published: 15/08/07 Updated: 15/08/07


Reviewer: ErinRua Signed
Date: 25/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You made my heart ache.  Such a bittersweet piece, and a side to Dean I've always liked to imagine was hidden just out of sight.  :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I do believe Dean is more loving and sensitive than first impression. His life is so very tragic.

Take care, B.J.

 
Reviewer: ErinRua Signed
Date: 31/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think the system ate my first attempt ....

I don't remember if I commented earlier, so I just wanted to say how lovely this ficlet is. The contrasts between Sam's private fear and anger, and Dean reaching out just to find something warm to hold ... beautiful.  The girl was so very real, too, with her own wishes and hurts and seeing something wonderful in Dean.  I loved her just for what she gave to him.  And the ending, the dance and Sam's realisations and her walking away ... just ouch.  But in a very wonderful way.  Such a touching and poignant piece, and I'm so glad you shared it with us.  Thanks for this!  :-)

Cheers ~

Erin 



Author's Response:

Thank you for being persistent and writing such a lovely review.

I love that readers responded so well to Lani; it is very risky writing a OFC with the fans so protective of Dean. I loved letting Dean have someone real for just a moment in time that did see him and love him. He deserves that and so much more.

And of course it was necessary for Sam to see another side of Dean and realize that he doesn't know his brother as well as he thinks.  I can't wait to see what Kripke and Co. have in store for us in S3. I do hope they are able to give Dean a moment similar to this.

Thanks again and take care, B.J.