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Penname: Primary_Feather [Contact]
Real name: Diana
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Member Since: 08/12/09
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I have ideas galore, but not a lot of time. What fics I can get written I will.  Always fun taking other peoples brain children out for a spin.


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What You Feel by bayre Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 279]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 banner by tru_faith_lost

 

 

Sam picks up on the feelings of everyone around him and Dean has...other issues. 


Categories: General, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 49812
[Report This] Published: 10/07/07 Updated: 14/10/07


Reviewer: Primary_Feather Signed
Date: 10/12/09 Title: Chapter 13: Not a hunt…More like a chance encounter…

Ok.  That rocked my socks off.  Fantastic job!



Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

 
Summary:

It was followed almost immediately by a second sound, the one Sam knew would get him help faster than any other word in the English language that actually meant 'help'.

Dean.”

Cage!fic and limp!Sam with a smattering of big!brother!Dean.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4707
[Report This] Published: 19/07/09 Updated: 22/07/09


Reviewer: Primary_Feather Signed
Date: 10/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ok. Thats it. I check two of your stories, and they're both so full of awesomesauce I can barely contain myself.  Time to bite the bullet and just work my way through the list.

Excellent job portraying everyone's favorite brothers.  Well written, bang on character, and a good flow to both their dialogue and thought processes. 

Its an absolute pleasure reading your work.



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks! *blushy*

Glad to hear it all worked! I love these boys, but I understand Hendrikson's frustration. They can be mighty hard to pin down at times. *eyeroll*

Heehee! Thanks for the AWESOME review! :D

M

 
Summary:

banner, supernatural

A promise to a friend takes Dean Winchester back to the woods of Hibbing to confront his worst nightmare...

Banner by GypsyWoman1


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 124192
[Report This] Published: 21/07/09 Updated: 14/12/09


Reviewer: Primary_Feather Signed
Date: 14/12/09 Title: Chapter 23: Just Keep Swimming

Fantastic story.  It's an honour and a pleasure to read your stuff.  Well paced, hugs the curves every time the story twists and leavened by healthy doses of both suspense and action.

Your characterizations are genius!  In depth, believable, motivations that are consistent and easy to follow, dialogue flowing naturally between them.  Overall a great story. 

I like the misdirection between the end of Woods and this one.  After the last scene with Missy, I kept waiting for her to show up in one form or another for the sequel. 

 All in all, you've done a fantastic job, and it was a wonderful read. Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Wow: I feel honored to get such a wonderful review and I sure do appreciate you reading this very long story and hanging on in there for the resolution! I take this way more seriously than I should, I guess, so this kind of review, with its little nods to my plotting, characterization and dialogue, is like the best kind of gift!

I have a new story in the works that will update the 'verse to S4, post-Hell, and it'll be a real challenge to write the brothers' fractured relationship. I have a pretty good plotbunny, though, and I really hope I can do it justice.

Thanks so much for taking the time to write! :-)

 
Lip Gloss by windscryer Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

This cannot possibly be legal.

Drabble!


Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 108
[Report This] Published: 27/07/09 Updated: 28/07/09


Reviewer: Primary_Feather Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've got nothing but bwahahahahaha!!!!



Author's Response:

:D Goal achieved then. *wins*

Thanks for the review! :D

M

 

 
Summary: Past Featured StoryEvery older brother knows that pillows are the very best defense against a pirate attack, no matter what the grown-ups say.
Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4870
[Report This] Published: 19/11/09 Updated: 19/11/09


Reviewer: Primary_Feather Signed
Date: 10/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was incredible.  Thank you for an amazing story.  Well written, fantastically paced, witty dialogue and all.

I was smiling by the third paragraph, and it just got wider and wider as the story went on until my face hurt by the end.  Fantastic!

I can just imagine a frazzled Dean trying to figure out what to do with a little girl.  Little boys, no problem, lots of practice with that one, but a little girl?  Priceless



Author's Response:

Hee! Thanks! :D

Love to hear it worked for you! Makes it a lot easier to do again the next time. :D

Aww! *blushy*

ROFL Yeah, poor Dean would be at his wit's end trying to deal with a little girl who is quite obviously NOT a pushover by any means. I'd pay good, good money to see this on Show. :D

Thanks for the AWESOME review! :D

M