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Reviews by Oceane Summary: She said they would help with the pain. She never said they'd make it better. What a drag it is...
Categories: Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2741 [Report This] Published: 13/02/07 Updated: 13/02/07
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Date: 14/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Awww...Poor Dean, he's a mess physically and emotionally. What a great idea you get to pick up right after the end of BUABS. I'm looking forward for more. Summary:
Sam has a deadly vision of his brother. Meanwhile, Dean is keeping secrets again. Banner by Sweetie0704 Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 72116 [Report This] Published: 19/02/07 Updated: 15/12/07
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Date: 20/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Glimpse of the Future What a vision from hell. Dean killing himself. I'm sure their new gig is connected with Sam's vision. Loved the banter between the brothers at the end. Terrific start, I'm looking forward for more. Author's Response: Hi Oceane! Glad to see you around. I'm glad you liked the chapter/banter. I'm hoping to have the next chapter up tonight...see ya around! Nicole
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Date: 21/02/07 Title: Chapter 2: The Hand of Fate Dean is so broken physcially and emotionally. Knowing Dean he must feel so guilty to not have save the boy's life. Sam, taking care of him, I love it when the brothers take care of each other. What about the odd glow that Sam saw in Dean's eyes, intriguing. I'm so loving this story so far. Nicole, can't wait to know what you've in store for the brothers. Hold on to your hat, because I'm not done with Dean just yet. Of course, Sam's gonna have his part to play because what is Dean without Sammy? Ah, geez, I love the brothers. Thanks, Oceane, I appreciate the vote of confidence!
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Date: 20/03/07 Title: Chapter 3: Dark Dreams It was worth the wait. Fabulous chapter Nicole. Poor Dean and happy me, what can I say, I've a weakness for broken Dean emotionally and physically. Now, I'm at the edge of my seat waiting for the next update. Hi Oceane, I'm glad Dean and I were able to oblige! Hee. It's so nice to be able to meet like-minded people and share this bizarre obsession of breaking poor Dean down. I love that you are on the edge of your seat, too! What a nice compliment. Big thanks to for the review!
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Date: 07/04/07 Title: Chapter 4: Pushing Forward OMG!Dean is going to be the next victim. I love hurt/comfort stories. I'm very intrigued about who's behind all those deaths. Riveting and captivating so far. Can't wait for more. I love hurt/comfort, too! I always say my favorite Dean is a bloody Dean, heh, heh. But, I digress, lol. Thanks Oceane, I guess it turned out better than I thought...thank God. I'm super pleased and (shout out to Gaelic, my bud) I wish I could write fast like GS because I'm all stoked about some new ideas. If only I could get it all out of my head and onto your screens much faster, lol.
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Date: 15/04/07 Title: Chapter 5: What Waits in the Dark Poor Dean, he's getting worse and worse, physically and mentally. He can't even tell anything to Sam in fear that Sam'll die. And what's about that young girl. Riveting and so suspenseful chapter, I'm at the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. Thank you, thank you...so relieved you enjoyed it. I tried some new techniques this time around and I'm glad it didn't mess anything up. I feel bad to leave you all on another cliffie, but it was such a great place to stop. Sorry *grins*. Thanks for reading and for the lovely review:)
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Date: 27/04/07 Title: Chapter 6: Holding it Together What a poignant and emotional chapter. Thank god Sam is there for Dean. Brilliant writing so far Nicole. I so can't wait to know what'll happen next. Well, I hope I can work in something big with the next chapter (which I haven't started yet, now, now, back girl!)...I think this next "something" has to occur before we can really get into who is Hannah and what is her connection to Dean. With every chapter that seems to be liked, I get more and more nervous about writing the next, lol. Don't want to disappoint and all that jazz. But thanks bunches for your words of encouragement...if it were in physical written form, I'd totally have to go out and buy a cute keepsake box to keep them in :) . Nicole
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Date: 31/05/07 Title: Chapter 7: Coming Undone Poor Dean, how much more he'll take before he's too broken to be himself again. Now that they know with what they're dealing maybe they'll find a way to get rid of it. Loved that moment when Dean tell to Sam this memory from their childhood, very sweet. Awesome video Nicole and great choice of song. Riveting story so far, can't wait for more. Author's Response: Why, thanks! Riveting is an awesome adjective that I don't normally hear in regards to my stuff. :) Nicole
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Date: 25/06/07 Title: Chapter 8: Coming Undone Redux You've evil Nicole, the chapter ended just as Dean was going to reveal is terrible secret. What he did to think that Sam would be horrified by what Dean did and leave him alone. I love you took the same scene we got in the last chapter but this time with Dean point of view, very well done. Terrific work Nicole. Oh, well, mighty big thanks, Oceane! Actually, it was Gaelic's idea to start the chapter with a recap through Dean's eyes...I needed help getting started and she was quick to jump in. Sometimes getting started is the hardest part for me...once I get going, it just starts coming along. Gosh, you don't know how happy your kind words make me...I sometimes worry that people aren't as thrilled with this story as WUC...'cause I know I've pulled back on the emo a little. But, you and everyone here seem to okay with that. Thanks for sending me your thoughts. Nicole
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Date: 11/07/07 Title: Chapter 9: Guilty Confessions Poor Dean, he was so afraid to tell Sam what was eating at him and I'm shocked that Sam did exactly what Dean feared, be angry and telling him awful things and leaving him. And now that thing is playing with Dean and it'll have more chance to push Dean to kill himself. What a powerful and intense chapter you gave us Nicole, you did an amazing work with this one. Don't leave us too long at the edge of our seat and update soon. Yeah, I kind of figured Dean needed to be alone in order to get to that point. And, anyway, I get to play out how I wish Sam had felt and reacted after "Hunted." Thanks, Oceane, I may go ahead and start on the next chapter since I already know how I want it to start. I don't have to confer with Mady and Tidia for week to get this one started, lol. Nicole
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Date: 26/07/07 Title: Chapter 10: It's Easier to Run Evil cliffy indeed. What a very intense and powerful chapter. Awww...Poor Sammy, once the anger left him he realized what he did. Don't tell me it's too late, Sam will never forgive himself. And to have Dean so emotionally and physically broken, gutwrenching. Please, please, please, don't leave us like this too long, update soon. Oceane! Hey, girl! Yes, poor Sam, I felt bad for him realizing what happened. Now it's Sammy to the rescue as hard as he can go! Thanks, I adore your double reviews! Nicole
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Date: 09/08/07 Title: Chapter 11: Deliberate Intentions What a poignant and heartwrenching chapter. Wow!Sam saved Dean by using telekinetic power. Poor Dean and Sam, I feel so much for them. At least, when the demon'll come back for Dean, he won't be alone to face it. Amazin work Nicole, I'm looking forward for the next update. You know, this fandom has the best people to write for. I'm so grateful for all of you and thanks for your kind words. Just cannot say that enough. You put a big smile on my face :). Nicole
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Date: 26/08/07 Title: Chapter 12: Delirium in the Night Another emotional chapter. Loved it very much especially those scenes, Sam rocking with Dean in his arms, a very poignant moment. When Dean was delirious, that was heartwrenching, it was so hard for Sam to see his big brother in so much pain. Dean thinking that Bobby is his dad and Bobby mustered his courage and said to Dean that his dad is gone, awww... so sad. The beast raking his claws across the window, chilled me to the bones. I hope that Bobby's plan'll work, at least Dean is ready to fight. It was worth the wait Nicole and I'll look forward for the next chapter. You've just outlined everything I was hoping to accomplish! That's exactly what I was going for. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for reviewing. Nicole
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Date: 18/09/07 Title: Chapter 13: When Morning Comes Another poignant, powerful and so intense chapter. Loved the end of it about the safety of their small Winchester cocoon, so beautifully said. I'm so loving this story and your writing Nicole, amazing. I'm looking forward for your next update. Hello again, Oceane! Again, glad you and gaelic liked the Winchester cocoon...I'm happy it worked and didn't hinder. It so easily could've worked against me. Double hugs for the double reviews...and big thanks all around.
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Date: 21/10/07 Title: Chapter 14: Dancing with the Devil Wow!That chapter left me speechless and out of breath. Nicole, you got me at the edge of my seat while reading. That was so intense and powerful, you did a fabulous work with this chapter Claire. Can't wait for the epilogue. Sooo, Oceane, you wanna write that epilogue for me? Hmm? Epilogues are so hard for me because I know it needs to be satisfying in a way all the previous chapters weren't. It's the last thought of the story. Man, I hope it turns out good, but I can't look while I write it, I'll wait and see what you all have to say, lol. Thanks, Oceane, I really, really appreciate all of your faithful reviewing.
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Date: 17/12/07 Title: Chapter 15: Fire in the Sky The ending left me out of breath, so powerful and poignant. Sam love for his brother is showed when he took Dean to the place where Hannah died, it hurted Dean first but then he felt free of his guilt at last. Dean's memory of him and Hannah together was a sweet, lovely moment. Beautiful, to end this story with Dean dreaming of Hannah and rather to fear her, this time he welcomed her. Outstanding writing Nicole, you did an amazing work with this one. I'm very glad to know that you'll start a sequel to The Wake-Up Call in January, I'm looking forward for it. Wow! Thanks, that's just awesome. Powerful and poignant is music to my ears--see, I'm floating! Thank you for being so good to review not only here, but at SN.tv, too. I really appreciate that extra little bit of effort! I guess I'll be seeing you later...which makes me VERY happy! (((HUGS))), Nicole Summary: When Dean is injured on a hunt and loses all of his personal memories, it is up to Sam to help him through it.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34792 [Report This] Published: 19/02/07 Updated: 13/04/08
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Date: 18/03/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Great story so far. Dean got his first memory and now he took off. Where's gone. I hope that Sam and Elizabeth'll find him. Can't wait for more.
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Date: 07/06/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 It was worth the wait, I enjoyed very much this chapter. Great to know more about Liz and how things go between her and her parents. Dean remembered more and more but sounded painful. Can't wait for the next installment.
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Date: 16/06/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 OMG!What a cliffhanger. That was an intense chapter, so lot of tension between Dean and Sam. I so can't wait to know what'll happen next.
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Date: 08/07/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 NO!!!Someone, something kidnapped Elizabeth. Poor Dean, he was already struggling with nightmares and how he saw himself like a failure. He's going to feel so guilty about what happened to Liz. Terrific chapter, I so can't wait for more.
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Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 I enjoyed very much this chapter. Dean by remembering that past hunt saved Liz's life. Dean is feverish, what's wrong with him, can't wait for more. I wish you a great time.
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Date: 14/04/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Awesome update. Gotta love a sick Dean and a very worry Sam. Now Dean is delirious, so not good. Great story so far, I'm looking forward for more. Summary:
When Dean loses his leg in a terrible hunting accident the brother's are forced to reevaluate their priorities. Can Dean still hunt? And is it really still worth the risk? Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 152934 [Report This] Published: 20/02/07 Updated: 18/05/07
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Date: 08/03/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Poor Dean, what a terrible day for him and now Sam forced him to go in that diner. I understand what Sam is trying to do, it must be hard for him to do this. I'm looking forward for the the next chapter, can't wait to know how well the diner'll go. In a way, I would guess that Sam is feeling as lost as Dean. i sorta played this in the sense that Sam is used to Dean pretending things arent' happening, and then all of a sudden he's not doing this. As much as Sam is constantly trying to get Dean to open up, I think now he'd just rather have his carefree brother back. THanks for the review!
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Date: 04/03/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 What a fabulous story so far. To see Dean in so much pain physically and emotionally, it's heartwrenching. Terrific work, I'm looking forward for more.
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Date: 06/03/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 I'm so loving this story, so poignant, so intense. Look to me that Dean's recovery won't be easy and it won't be easy for Sam either. You're very good about Dean's reaction, emotional state of him losing his leg. Amazing work so far. I'm hooked, I so can't wait for more. |
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