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Summary:

After Dean's revelation in Croatoan Sam struggles to carry on, but little does he know that his brother has a nightmare of his own that will soon prove to be even scarier than either Winchester could have known.

It's time for the Winchesters to face their demons...


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Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 34783
[Report This] Published: 22/12/06 Updated: 31/01/07


Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 03/01/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Dean got a plan, I want to see this. Captivating story so far kittsbud. What a terrific idea to pick up right after Croatoan with secrets, mothman, demon and so much angst. I'm looking forward for more. 

 

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 09/01/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

That was a suspenseful and so captivating chapter. Sam is the key to everything,  so an intriguing revelation . What a way to end that chapter, hope that the boys're ok. Amazing story so far kittsbud.

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 20/01/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

WOW!This chapter blow me away. That was amazing. Now we know why Mary said she was sorry to Sam, in Home. Brilliant, it's so brilliant, I would like that this idea about Mary wanting an another child, the gyspy who was the demon in disguise happens in the series. Another suspenseful cliffy, can't wait for more. Fantastic work so far kittsbud, you get me at the edge of my seat.

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 25/01/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

That was a very intense chapter kittsbud. Poor Sam and Dean???

Amazing story so far. Can't wait to know what'll happen next. 

 

 

 

 

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 27/01/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Noooo!!!!Dean can't die. Sam, you must try and heal your brother. That was amazing kittsbud but please update soon.

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

What an awesome conclusion. For one moment I thought we lost Dean forever. I enjoyed very much this story, it was riveting and so captivating. Thanks kittsbud for sharing it with us. 

 
Summary: Past Featured StoryNever leave a wounded predator alive! It might come back later when you least expect and rip out your heart!
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Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 20780
[Report This] Published: 25/12/06 Updated: 12/01/07


Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 02/01/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Hide and Seek

OMG!Terrific story so far. The last chapter was intense in torture. Gordon is a sick bastard. Poor Sam, poor Dean. What a cliffhanger, can't wait for more. Great work Tree.

Author's Response: Oceane - glad to see you over here! Thanks for the kind review - glad you're enjoying the story - hope that last wasnt too intense for ya!

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 08/01/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 -- Blood and Orchids

Tree, how can you leave us like this, shattering glass falling on the boys. Are they ok. The suspense is killing me. Gordon must die, die, die. I'm looking forward for your next chapter, can't wait.

Author's Response: Oceane - come on- I might like to hurt em- but you know they'll be ok in the end- almost there! Hang on!

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 20/01/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 --- Rescues and Revenge

Outstanding finale. That was very intense. I'm glad that Dean and Sam didn't kill Gordon. I enjoyed very much this story. Terrific work with this one Tree. Thumb up from my part. I'm looking forward for your next story.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much Oceane - You have been very kind. Glad you enjoyed reading it.

 

 
Summary: Dean is haunted by the flashback from a hunt that took place while Sam was at Stanford. He can't remember the details but what he can't recall can hurt him.
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Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 26504
[Report This] Published: 29/12/06 Updated: 11/02/07


Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 06/01/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Terrific story so far. I love the tension between the brothers, because Dean being Dean doesn't want to be weak in front of Sam and Sam in concerned mode, the flashbacks, poor Dean, it was a hunt from hell and what can I say I've a thing for Dean/hurt. One scene that made me smile is the I'm fine tatooed on Dean's forehead, lol. I'm looking forward for more.

Author's Response: I liied the tatto thing too. Hope you like the rest of the story.

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 15/02/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Hunt Part 2: Perception of Reality

Wow!You got me until the end, it wasn't Caleb but John who shot Dean. What a riveting and intense story you gave us Terry. You did a terrific work. 

Author's Response: I was really worried about the end. I'm so happy it worked and you enjoyed it.

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 20/01/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Stumbling To The Light

That was awesome. Love the flashbacks and the repercussion in the present time. Poor Dean is not only in lot of pain physcally but emotionally he is a wreck. Sam did the best he can but I'm glad that he finally seek for help from Caleb.

Terrific story so far Terry. I'm looking forward for more.



Author's Response: I'm glad everyone is liking the flashbacks. If I could just keep doing those then I wouldn'thave to come up with a decent ending.

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 29/01/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

O*M*G*No wonder that Dean buried deep in him that hunt he did with John and Caleb. I'm like Sam, in shock about Dean's revelation. Amazing and riveting story so far Terry.I so can't wait to know what'll happen next, I'm at the edge of my seat waiting for more.

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I'm really glad the stun factor has been so high on this chapter, I'm truly amazed. Makes having to write the first part worthwhile.

 

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 04/02/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 In A Stranger's Hands

O*M*G*Dean is bleeding to death. They're fifty miles from the nearest hospital on an icy road. The flashbacks're getting more and more gory and horrific. That was intense and I'm at the edge of my seat to know what'll happen next. Terrific work so far Terry.

Author's Response: I may have gotten a tad carried away. Then again...maybe not.

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 09/02/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 One More Time, With Feeling

Poor Sam, watching your brother bleeding to death while driving fifty miles on a icy road. Thank god, they arrived at the hospital safely. No wonder Sam collapsed. Dean brought in surgery. I hope he'll be ok. That was an intense chapter.

Terrific work Terry and so a captivating story so far.

I'm looking forward for the next chapter for the hunt story, can't wait to find out what happened.



Author's Response: It's gonna be disappointing. I'm warning everyone. But ta for the nice comments so far.

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 11/02/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Hunt Part One: Eyewitness Accounts

I'm relieved to see that Dean'll be all right. I enjoy reading the story behind that famous hunt, can't wait to know what happened next.

Please Terry, don't sacrifice any kitten, I can't wait, lol.

 



Author's Response: The kitties are safe!

 
Summary: Dean is crashing after a string of bad jobs. One last, terrible incident pushes him over the edge. He’s on a downhill slide and the Moonstar is the last place he needs to be.
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Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 50575
[Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 08/01/07


Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 04/02/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow! Dean's mental and physical torture, Sam great concerned about his brother, creepy and scary things that happened in that hotel and ghosts, mix everything together and got a terrific and riveting story. It was so intense that I read it in two nights because I wanted to know what was next. You got me captivated start to end. Great work Terry.  

Author's Response: Ta so much! I'm glad you liked it. That hotel holds a warm spot in my twisted little heart

 
Summary: A shortcut through the woods leaves the boys lost, seperated and hunted. 
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Series: Shadow Stalker
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 46418
[Report This] Published: 01/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07


Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 06/01/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I read Something Lost on Supernatural TV and enjoyed it very much and this one is no exception. Captivating and riveting story so far. Great to see John and Sam reunited and if only they could find Dean. Joshua betrayed John, that's a shock. Can't wait for more.

 
Summary:

What would seemingly pull a family together has pulled the Winchesters apart. Now, one is becoming obsessed, another disappearing into darkness, and the last trying desperately to repair the damage made by his mistakes.

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Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 8228
[Report This] Published: 03/01/07 Updated: 12/08/07


Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 05/01/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

OMG!Dean is a vampire. Please Sam answers the phone. What's going to happen next, can't wait to know. Great story so far.

 

 
Summary:

Making a deal with a Demon can be an unseemly business. Especially when you discover that the deal you've made has endangered your sons in ways you hadn't foreseen. Now they've grown up apart and unaware and things need to be set right. General AU oddness.

 

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Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 44413
[Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 07/03/07


Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 11/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow!What a start Irismay, so intriguing and captivating. I'm already hooked. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Author's Response: Really glad you're enjoying it!  Hopefully it'll all make a bit more sense when I finally get chapter 1 up!!

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 19/01/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Wow!That was a riveting and poignant chapter. I absolutely love this story, so captivating. Very moving moment when Sam recognized in the firefighter who saved his life, his lost brother Dean. Dean, a firefighter, great idea you got here irismay. Brilliant work so far, now I'm hooked and I can't wait for more. 

Author's Response: Really glad you're enjoying it!  I always figured if he hadn't been a hunter, Dean would have been a cop or a fireman, and then there was that line in Devil's Trap, so I knew I had to write him as a firefighter some day!

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 22/01/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

That was a poignant chapter. Loved the conversation between the brothers. Poor Dean, his life hasn't been very great, he was fourth when the tragedy occurred, he remembered everything, it's terrible for a child of this age, that was so sad. Marilyn saved him literally. It's not fair, they just find each other and now there're a fire and we don't know if Jess is ok or not. Arrghh!!! evil cliffhanger.

Amazing and so captivating story so far irismay. I'm looking forward for more. 



Author's Response: Yeah, I really should apologise for the meanness of that cliffie... Glad you enjoyed the rest of it!!

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 31/01/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I'm so loving this story. Poor Dean under the scrutiny of Sam's family. I so enjoy Dean's wit, he's so funny. Great idea to have Jess around. Missouri!!!What a twist. I so can't wait for more. Brilliant work so far Irismay.

 

 



Author's Response: Aw thank you, glad you're enjoying!  I made a terrible pun yesterday to someone commenting on Jess in this story of how I think she and Dean would have 'got on like a house on fire'.  Yeah, unfortunate choice of words I know, but I do think they would have!!

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 19/02/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Aarghh...irismay, the way you ended the chapter, it's worst than an evil cliffy. I feel so sad for Dean, he didn't have a great childhood, no family, he just find his brother and now Sam sounds angry at Dean, doesn't want to talk or  want to see him again . And when Sam talked about his family and Jess excluding Dean, that was heartwrenching. About John, what he was thinking when he did that deal with the demon, so shocking. That was a great and so emotional chapter. Captivating story so far, I'm so looking forward for more.

Author's Response: I apologise for the Dean-bashing going on in this chapter!  Poor boy!  Don't worry, I won't emtionally scar him any more than he already is...!  Glad you're still enjoying!

 
Reviewer: Oceane Signed
Date: 10/02/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Captivating chapter about alternate universe and what a cliffhanger, must be one of Sam's dream. Terrific story so far irismay, I so can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Glad I've not bored you to death yet...  I think that time might be near...!