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Reviews by catchme21 Summary:
When I look at Dean Wichester, this is what I see. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 545 [Report This] Published: 30/12/06 Updated: 30/12/06
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Date: 18/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I am so not laughing after that. That was your FIRST? Holy crap woman that was good. :) I loved it. Dean Winchester has got to be my favorite character, that man is so complex, and Jensen does a wonderful job bringing him to life. You did an awesome job putting him down on paper so to speak. Great job, and I look forward to catching up on all of your other work! :) Author's Response: That's so nice of you! Hope you enjoy the rest! Summary:
banner created by Kira Reed When a hunt goes sideways, the brothers are hurt and lost in the northern Minnesota woods. They have only each other and their skills to get them out...and they aren't alone. They are being tracked by the 'perfect hunter'. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 67711 [Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06
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Date: 23/07/07 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue Wow...GS...just catching up now. Holy shit! That was awesome!! I was sitting about an inch from my monitor the whole time, and though it took me a few days to fully read the whole thing, I really enjoyed it!! I would say "I couldn't put it down" but that wouldn't make a whole lot of sense...but it was like that. :) How you pulled me down into the thoughts of all three Winchesters (I loved the epilogue) was genius!! I thought their fight was over once Abe found them, but you had to put them to hell and back. Awesome work!! I'm kind of sad its over though...hmm...will have to search out more of your work. Thank you, Kris Author's Response: *GRIN* What an amazing review! Thank you so much for that -- I am so pleased that you enjoyed the story, and to be told that you "couldn't put it down" thrilled me. This is the only site I posted the epilogue on, so I'm glad you enjoyed that as well. These characters just captivate me -- I haven't had so much fun writing as when I spend time with them. If you had fun reading, then I did a good job. :) And Abe will be back sometime... got a few other stories working their way forward, but he hasn't seen the last of the Winchesters... If you read other stories, I sincerely hope you enjoy them. Best -- GS Summary:
1876 "God made all Men, Samuel Colt made them equal." The West was inundated with vampires. It was the perfect place to kill and slaughter, cowboys died every day and no one really seemed to care, most were too concerned with staying alive themselves. Dean and Sam visit a town that seems eerily familiar; or should I say, they seem strangely familiar to the townfolk. Some spoilers for Dead Man's Blood.
Categories: Romance, AU, Action Characters: Dean W., John W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: Once Upon a Time in the West Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 38968 [Report This] Published: 28/01/07 Updated: 17/02/07
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Date: 30/07/07 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Resolution 2006 Aw yay I loved this story!! I kept it when you sent it to me and always enjoyed going back and reading it. Glad to see its getting so many stars over here. :) I still think you should write another one, I love the old western type appeal, that was awesome. Just had to bow to you again BJ. Awesomeness. :) ~Kris Author's Response: Hey thanks, Kris. You are too kind. So glad you made it back safely and you have good internet service now! I too love westerns and this was a total joy to write. I will definitely write another one at some point, but time is always a problem. I have about five stories started right now. With the S2 AHBL2 again referencing Sam Colt, the wheels are turning on how I could do another story. Always great to hear my stories are appreciated. Take Care, B.J. Summary:
A fresh start, a new life - or is it? Evil stalks them still, and all is not what it seems. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 58838 [Report This] Published: 31/03/07 Updated: 23/04/07
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Date: 27/07/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 You know, I'm just now catching up on all the stories over here. (Don't tell anyone from the sn.tv boards lol...I've been falling behind there but can't help it if I like spending a bit of time here hahahahaha...) I still love this story!! Do you hear me Jules?? I love it. If I could add sugar to it, I'd eat it...and I'd only need to add sugar cuz its a bit bloody, and well I need something to fend off the coppery taste. I love the fact that you ended it in a dream, and it totally came off as intentional. I know when a writer has backed themselves into a corner (I've done it to myself enough times) and that wasn't even close. There's a raw panic that can be felt when a writer is just trying to pass a story off, and that my friend, was not it. Ever read my first story? That was it haha. By the end of your story I was bawling and throwing a fit over the deaths of my boys...and then suddenly there they were, all pretty and harm-free, lying in bed...I kind of sat back down at my desk in an "oh...okay" fashion. You totally knocked me for a loop, and I love it when stories do that. But I left you a really really long review last time, so I won't prattle your ears off this time. Still thinkin' of doing what you asked about? I freakin' hope so!! I can't waaa-aait... No, I'm serious, I can't wait... Oh...and...the Word of the Day toilet paper...did that come from me? When? I have memory problems...and for the life of me cannot remember mentioning that...so I'm wondering if it was another Kristen from the site...lol...I hope so or I have some serious problems goin' on up here... Loves girl, and I hope work is starting to slow down a bit for you... Kris Author's Response: Actually, Kris, the Word of the Day toilet paper comment came from a review that you left in Alisa's story. It stuck in my head, and I was pleased to be able to use it in a fic. And I won't tell anyone from sn.tv, if you dont.....lol! Yes, there is a sequel planned for this one, and I will do what I spoke to you about. The first three chapters are already written, and it may be the next story up after I finish Resort Breagadoir. Thanks for the help, and the review. And yes, I did read your first fic - the one where you borrowed the idea from Alisa and had Dean accidently shoot Sam. I liked it, and of course, I love World of Confusion and Rage Against The Storm. Yes, I always planned to have Dean wake Sam up from the dream at the critical moment. I just never in a million years expected the story to blow out to the length that it did, and that was the only thing that had me worried - that I had made it too long for the original idea to work. But I re-read it just before I posted the epilogue, and crossed my fingers that it would still work. And it seemed to. I lost some readers, but a lot of people did enjoy it. And of course, it is in the final voting on the sn.tv site for Best Miscellaneous - that is a thrill, I can tell you. See you around the boards, hon...Jul Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 20/07/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Ok, I made it!!! It was tough...Charlie scares the crap out of me...but I made it!! Lol. Ok, where to begin. The way he f**ked with the brothers in the beginning was brilliant. And what fangirl wouldn't die a million deaths to trade places with a camera-wielding psychopath who has it focused on the boys? Hahahahaha...but man he played the boys. Using their need to protect each other, then posing as people attempting to help. I knew the agent was Charlie though, and if I didn't have a few people sitting around me I would have been grabbing my screen and yelling at Sam that it was a trap. And the torture scenes...OW!!! Nailing Sam up, stabbing Dean in the foot, shattering his hand, cutting then burning Sam...how the hell did you come up with all that? You watched Saw then went at it, didn't you? O.o I love how you brought in other characters. The doc from Croatoan, though the boys didn't get to use her service. The cop from US, I liked her. Wouldn't mind if they brought her back for a visit. :) Dean lying to Sam can only bring problems. This could go badly. But alas I am falling asleep at the keyboard as it is, so I will have to catch up with the sequal tomorrow. Uh...plus...too much Charlie will bring on nightmares tonight methinks hahaha. I am already killing zombies with the Winchesters and Samuel Jackson (weird dream I had the other night...), so let's not add Charlie into the mix. Awesome story Bambers. I'm sorry I didn't catch up with it sooner, but alas I am just now surfing this site for all its glory. I hope you're feeling better soon, but until then take it easy. Kris Author's Response: hey thanks for the awesome review!! sorry it took me so long to respond...yeah, Charlie is a pretty bad guy...thrilled you liked his messing with the boys minds in the beginning!! yeah, most people figured Charlie was the FBI guy, not a great twist on my part...lol!! a couple of peole said the same thing about grabbing the computer screen...yeah, pretty gruesome torture scenes...no, i never watch any horror movies at all, too vivid a sleeper and nightmares would be just horrible...did a lot of research on medieval torture for the story...so glad that you like that i brought in other characters from the show...figured the boys deserved help!! so thriilled you like the story!! thanks for reading!! bambers;) Summary: Why Dean hates rats.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1095 [Report This] Published: 08/05/07 Updated: 16/10/07
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Date: 19/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Lmao I love Dean's hatred for rats. Though I do have to admit, when I was little I used to pick up tiny mice (which I guess are better than rats) off the hay bales in our neighbor's barn. Now that I'm older lol I have to agree with you and Dean. Oh, and I am also a HUGE fan of Breaking Benjamin, they have yet to come out with a song I don't listen to repeatedly. *high five* :) Cute oneshot snjjude, looking forward to catching up on the rest of your work. :) Author's Response: thank you, Kristen.....Glad you enjoyed it... I actually wrote this as my first piece to PROVE to a fantastic writer that I could NOT write !!... Love to here your opinion of my other stuff...... That band is awesome.... even as an old person, I think they'd be fantastic in concert.. PLEASE TRY TO KEEP YOURSELF SAFE......Thank you for your selfless heroism...You and the boys have a lot in common!! Summary:
Story line: Dean and Sam finish a difficult salt and burn and then go looking for a hunt. What they encounter in a small community confuses everyone until Dean engages that wonderful, quirky memory of hisCategories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 27675 [Report This] Published: 09/06/07 Updated: 19/08/07
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Date: 21/07/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Movie Mayhem Ok, so I'm going through and reading the whole thing. But I had to comment on this chapter. The fighting scene was awesome!! I'm not that great at them, but you managed to make it look so easy. :) Thank God Sam didn't rent Devour lol... Author's Response: Thanks,kris...first one I ever tried so it was touch and go....thanks for the kudos... looking at jensen was the only good part of DEVOUR.............
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Date: 21/07/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Pulling the plug.. Oh wait...that's the last chapter? Well crap haha I could have waited to review on your fight scene. Lol I just wasn't paying attention (like usual) so I was surprised to find no 'next' link. Hmmmm... So are the DVDs demonically influenced? I love how the boys are taking turns babysitting a movie dispensing thingy. Update soon! :) Kris Author's Response: sorry...production shutdown while author had broken nose surgery....... I'm writing eight in between pain pills .........if i don't wait til they wear off it'll actually come out WORSE than Devour
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 25/08/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Having a Devil of a Time! Aw! Lucky ass cheerleaders! I'm so jealous lol. Though I probably would have cried if I'd have seen Dean after Sam had told me he was gay...and then I would have tried to "covert" him...lol...ah yes... Ok, so on with the review! Though I have to say its your fault...you send me goodies that throw me to the gutter... :) I love the thought of three big bad hunters standing around exorcising a vending machine...priceless! Awesome job Jude! Looking forward to more soon. :) Loves, Author's Response: Kris, thanks for making the time to read the last of it...glad you enjoyed it ....I know I figured they'd be surprised when the thing tried to fight back...... Hoping to have a new one up soon..... God Bless you and keep you safe ......hope you get to come home soon.... :0) hugs & prayers jude Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 16/08/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Oh this is hilarious... I love Sam as the scarecrow and Bobby as the tin man...The banter's even the same! bwahahahahahaha... You're gonna update soon, right? Hope so haha...can't wait to see Dean put on those little ruby red slippers and tap them heels three times...cuz I have a feeling you're going to make him do it... Summary: Sam Winchester must learn the hard way that growing up doesn't necessarily mean going it alone.
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Brotherhood Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 59057 [Report This] Published: 05/07/07 Updated: 12/09/07
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 28/08/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Awesome update! Poor Caleb, he couldn't say no to Sam haha and that got him in trouble. Hopefully John won't be too hard on them, it seems they're being tough enough on themselves. Loved it Ridley! Please update soon. And you know...since some of us are having difficulties getting onto fanfic right now...you should totally post "Paper Tiger" over here also! :) Just a suggestion...*wink wink* Kris
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 That was beautiful Ridley!! I loved how everyone got their own chance at a little therapy, and the end scene with the boys was awesome!! Sad to hear that its coming to an end, but I can't wait for you to update. :) Kris Summary:
The boys win a holiday at a luxury resort - but is it really the holiday of a lifetime, or the stuff of nightmares? Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 55218 [Report This] Published: 09/07/07 Updated: 25/08/07
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Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!! I thought it was Maggie...but then you said something about her being "killed" so I thought maybe it was one of her staffers. Lol I never would have guessed Trickster when this first started, but the sugar was the first thing. I'm amazed Sam didn't pick up on it sooner. ;) I love how you said "Sam always was the dangerous one." Just don't let you hear Dean say that bwahahahahaha... Great update girl!! So now Sam has gone missing, and I'm pretty sure him and Dean are the only real people at the Resort. It isn't the Trickster from the show out for revenge, is it? That means Dean...oh gross!! *shudder* Can't wait for more!! Loves, Author's Response: Hi, Kris - and yes, you are right to shudder, and so will Dean when he discovers that he did the wild thing with.....and Maggie perhaps being killed was my red herring. Ready for naked Dean, hon? He's up next, if you'll pardon the pun....and Sam would probably have picked up on it way sooner, but there were all those little distractions, all carefully planned to keep throwing the boys off their game...Jul
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 20/08/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Oh...my...sweet...Lord!! I about fell off my chair with Sam's "double beef patty" line!! That was awesome! Ok, so this trickster wants Dean for a sacrifice? And her little minions are settin' him up. HE'S NAKKIE!! As a devouted Dean girl, I thank you for giving me that...It took me about five to ten minutes to get through that part...mmmmm...but I made it hahahahahaha... Great job! Looking forward to another update very soon...eh? Loves, Author's Response: I really needed to use that line - I mean, with good old Ronald there, that line just had to make an appearance. And yes, Dean's Nakkie! We have to give ourselves the occasional treat, don't we? Can't let the Sammy girls have all the fun. Thanks, Kris - chat to you soon...Jul Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 17/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very beautifully written bambers!! I have always sort of wondered what Mary would have thought of her sons, and we didn't get enough in "Home". :) Thank you! Summary: Sam is obsessed with saving Dean from his deadly fate, but it soon appears that he may be the one who needs saving first … or else. My version of the beginning of Season Three. Now Complete. Check out part two: Bring Me to Life the third and final part: Mind Games (still in progress).
Categories: General, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 35685 [Report This] Published: 19/07/07 Updated: 28/08/07
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Date: 20/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: Reality of Nightmares Pretty good so far. I am looking forward to see how they play with the YED's warning of "are you sure what you brought back was 100% Sam?" Should be interesting. And do you have the rest of the chapters posted? It would only let me get up to 3, and the rest are showing blank pages. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Bambers...dude...you BETTER not leave it like that for too long!! I'll just be over here with crazy!Dean for a little bit... :) Awesome update though! Susan gave me the chills with her rantings, and then more ghosts are showing up. Too bad they aren't the same friendly ghosts that helped the boys out in the first episode... :) Please oh please update soon... Summary: With the help of his family, young Sam Winchester learns that having a good memory can be both blessing and curse.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 4215 [Report This] Published: 29/07/07 Updated: 29/07/07
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Date: 29/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Holy cow RcJ, that was awesome. I was giggling through out the whole thing, and I'm really glad that was nagging at you until you just had to write it. The basket Sam had was awesome, so cute, and so Sam. I don't even want to know what Caleb did to Dean's twinkie... :) Kris Summary:
Still reeling from the revelation of Dean's deal and Sam's resurrection, the brothers hunt down the Hell Gate demons. But one hunt sends them to a place where secrets kill, sins are punished, and Sam and Dean feel the impact of an ageless war. Co-written by Gaelicspirit and Sojourner84. Banner by Sojourner84 As a thank you, Sojourner has created a vid for this story, set to Breaking Benjamin's "Evil Angel." We truly hope you enjoy. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zZYyRK77dPk Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 121283 [Report This] Published: 09/08/07 Updated: 18/01/08
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Date: 18/08/07 Title: Chapter 2: Tuesday: Greed Dean isn't going to be 'lust' is he? Lol...awesome job guys! Looking forward to more soon. :) Author's Response: Honestly? Our boy Dean is probably guilty of each of the deadly sins in one way or another... but that's all I'll say. :) Thanks so much for reading and thanks VERY much for sending a review! We simply delight in these. :) Hope to see you again!! GS and SJ
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 3: Wednesday: Gluttony Wow...you guys are good! Who is messin' with the boys? *buckles seatbelt* Oh I'm on for the ride alright. :) Keep up all the awesome work!! Author's Response: Thanks! :) As for who is messin' with the boys... stay tuned. Glad to see you wearing a seatbelt, because it's gonna get a little bumpy in a couple of chapters... GS and SJ Summary:
![]() Sam and Dean are down in Arkansas investigating a haunted hotel when they encounter someone who wants what Sam has: a brother. He’ll go to any lengths to get what he wants, even if that means removing Sam from the picture…permanently.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 45535 [Report This] Published: 14/08/07 Updated: 17/10/07
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 21/08/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Ah, so the enemy comes into play here...I was beginning to wonder when the threat was going to show up. Damnit Dean why do you have to be an awesome big bro? Lol... Awesome work so far snsam! Lookin' forward to more soon! Author's Response: Thanks catch21! Yep, the enemy is coming out to play! He just wants to have a little fun and who am I to deny him that? And yes, let's blame Dean for being an awesome big brother...this is all his fault! :)
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 01/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Oh shit. Dean just saved Robbie's life, the kid's in love now. Oh great. Or maybe the spirit chasing with scare him off... I remember DJ Qualls. I haven't gotten to see Delta Farce yet, but I loved The New Guy. Awesome actor to represent Robbie, I've got a pretty good mental picture of the guy. :) Awesome work girl! Please update soon, eh? :) Kris Author's Response: Thanks Kris! I have to tell you, I saw the first two words of this review and I was laughing my ass off, so thank you for that! Yeah, Robbie is going to love the fact Dean saved him...it will only push him further. I keep seeing all these Delta Farce commercials and I have to tell you, it freaks the hell out of me. So I want you to know, I'm just as freaked with this guy as ya'll are! Another update as soon as I can...promise!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 11/10/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Wow, trying to picture Robbie sounding "ominous" just gives me the giggles. I love how he was f**king with Dean though, by taking "shots" at Sam. I figured you couldn't really shoot Sam, but then again maaaaybe. But I be thinkin' that you're thinkin' that Robbie's thinkin' there should be a sequal. I mean, you can't just have the boys leave him behind, screaming threats, and then just not do a sequal...that's just wrong. Plus I think its on page 14, paragraph 3, line 4 of the "How Not To Piss Off Your Readers" manual. Mm-hmm, I read it myself. Loved it!! Looking forward to another update...and then another...and another...well...you get the point. :) Author's Response: Thanks catchme! Believe me when I say, Robbie can sound very ominous. I actually had a different ending for this chapter, but Robbie started screaming that in my head and I had to put it in...or he would have annoyed me the entire time. As for a sequel...we'll just have to wait and see... Oh, and can I have that manual if you have an extra copy nearby? I think I always usually do something to piss off someone and it may come in handy... Last chapter is coming up soon! Summary:
This is my first attempt at writing EVER, so please be gentle. Set before the end of Season 3. Dean has three months left before his bill comes due. Thrown into the future by a demon, he is offered the chance to see "what is and what should never be." Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 4074 [Report This] Published: 16/08/07 Updated: 02/09/07
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![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 16/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Pure awesomeness for your first try! There was a lot of darkness, and it showed a path we all fear Sam might take if Dean does end up...*gulp* Lol we all know Kripke wouldn't do that to us...he couldn't... It was a bit confusing though. Did Dean come back? He was dead, and Sam knew he was dead, yet he was able to reach out and grab him, so Dean wasn't a spirit. And Sam said "I can control them all." Is he ruler of the demons now so to speak? He had a vision of Meg doing something to someone, but he's not going to do anything about it. It was really good, I think it could just use a little more filler and a bit of a plumper backstory as to how all of the characters ended up the way they did. Hope you write again soon! :) Cuz that was pretty good. Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Didn't really intend for it to be so dark it just kinda took on a life of its own. Dean was actually alive sent forward in time. The future Evil!Sam's Dean was being turtured in hell. Meg was torturing this Dean and Sam could feel it. "I can control them all" could be all Sam's powers, all the demons......you'll just have to wait and see:) Sorry it was confusing. I'll be writing more which should clear up the details. Don't think I can just leave it the way it is. Summary: The Winchester Brothers get the surprise of their lives when they investigate a water demon in Black Earth, Wisconsin.
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1908 [Report This] Published: 19/08/07 Updated: 19/08/07
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Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Surprise, Surprise Wait...the end?? Lol...I want to see them take care of the water demon bwahahahaha... Well that was a little...uh...uncomforatble for our boys hahahahaha... Great read. Kris Author's Response: I could just imagine them being so uncomfortable. I'm glad I was able to convey that and that you enjoyed reading it. |
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