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Penname: Kiansie [Contact]
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Real name: Heather Status: Member Member Since: 17/05/09 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by Kiansie Summary:
Dean' s shadow, his brother, his purpose, his reason for living. Dean's driving Sam nuts after a hunt goes bad and Sam suffers a concussion. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 30139 [Report This] Published: 31/08/07 Updated: 01/10/07
Reviewer: Kiansie Signed
Date: 01/06/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 When you use the word Loose, you are using the wrong form of the word. You are looking for "lose" Also, when Dean tells Sam "Tuff" that spelling is incorrect. The correct spelling in Tough. Sorry, I always get a bit...when it comes to spelling. LOL, the Chik-fil-A commercials bug the crap out of me, even though I know that they are intentionally using the incorrect spelling for their advertisements. Other than the spelling errors that I've caught I enjoy the story. I feel bad for Sam having to deal with such a painful concussion. Poor Dean too. Summary: Sam has a vision about a dog. Has his freaky brain finally blown a fuse?
Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3563 [Report This] Published: 06/10/07 Updated: 17/10/07
Reviewer: Kiansie Signed
Date: 01/06/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I love that the ghost of a dog still found a way to help her owner. On the end where you put FINE it is actually Fin which means End in French. Good story. Author's Response: WOW...someone actually read this. Thank you for reading and commenting. I did not know that End was FIN and not FINE..thank you for that. The dog in the story is patterned after my pooch Roxy who is a Plott Hound. She is still very much alive and hogging my pillow as I type this. Thanks for the comment. This was my first ever fan fic and I've come a long way since I posted this.
~Arie Summary:
![]() Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 82469 [Report This] Published: 19/07/08 Updated: 19/12/08
Reviewer: Kiansie Signed
Date: 26/05/09 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Your writing has emotion in it, that is a difficult feat to accomplish. However, there are numerous typos and grammatical errors as well as mispellings that detract from the story. I try to ignore these errors as I am reading, but they still pop out at me. Some examples are: you use loose, the correct spelling that you want to use is lose. Other than a couple of grammatical issues I think that you did a good job with your story. Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to hear you liked it. My spelling is only as good as spell check and sometimes that lets me down. Same with grammar. Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
Sam's been hunted before. But never like this. Tag to 4.04. Spoilers: Season Four up to Metamorphosis (4.04) Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4375 [Report This] Published: 07/12/08 Updated: 07/12/08
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