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Penname: Kiansie [Contact]
Real name: Heather
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I've been writing since I first learned how to form words using a pen and a sheet of paper. My first concoctions with words were total crap. I knew that they were crap after putting them down on paper, but I also knew that I loved creating them. Hence, when I was eleven years old I decided that whatever happens in my life I will become a writer. I am working towards that dream today, and am closer now to achieving my goals than ever before.

I am always looking for ways to improve my writing. Writing fan fiction is one of those ways. I must say that fan fiction is definately not the easiest thing to write. I know the characters of Supernatural from watching them on TV, but at the same time I do not know them because I did not create them. The fact that I did not create these characters makes it more difficult to write about them than if I were to create characters of my own, if that makes any sense. But, I guess that is one reason to write fan fiction. It is a challenge that will hopefull improve my writing.


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Reviews by Kiansie
 
Summary:

Dean' s shadow, his brother, his purpose, his reason for living.  Dean's driving Sam nuts after a hunt goes bad and Sam suffers a concussion.  


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 30139
[Report This] Published: 31/08/07 Updated: 01/10/07


Reviewer: Kiansie Signed
Date: 01/06/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

When you use the word Loose, you are using the wrong form of the word. You are looking for "lose" Also, when Dean tells Sam "Tuff" that spelling is incorrect. The correct spelling in Tough.

Sorry, I always get a bit...when it comes to spelling. LOL, the Chik-fil-A commercials bug the crap out of me, even though I know that they are intentionally using the incorrect spelling for their advertisements.

Other than the spelling errors that I've caught I enjoy the story. I feel bad for Sam having to deal with such a painful concussion. Poor Dean too.

 
Summary: Sam has a vision about a dog. Has his freaky brain finally blown a fuse?

Categories: General, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3563
[Report This] Published: 06/10/07 Updated: 17/10/07


Reviewer: Kiansie Signed
Date: 01/06/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love that the ghost of a dog still found a way to help her owner.

On the end where you put FINE it is actually Fin which means End in French.

Good story.



Author's Response:

WOW...someone actually read this. 

Thank you for reading and commenting. I did not know that End was FIN and not FINE..thank you for that.

The dog in the story is patterned after my pooch Roxy who is a Plott Hound. She is still very much alive and hogging my pillow as I type this.

Thanks for the comment. This was my first ever fan fic and I've come a long way since I posted this.

 

~Arie 

 
Summary: Two deaths lead Sam and Dean to a new hunt. While trying to rid a large mansion from a spirit, Sam suddenly starts to act strangely. Things slide downhill from there. Can Dean save his brother or is it already too late? LimpSam, Hurt/ProtectiveDean.Never Give up on you banner

Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 82469
[Report This] Published: 19/07/08 Updated: 19/12/08


Reviewer: Kiansie Signed
Date: 26/05/09 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Your writing has emotion in it, that is a difficult feat to accomplish. However, there are numerous typos and grammatical errors as well as mispellings that detract from the story. I try to ignore these errors as I am reading, but they still pop out at me. Some examples are: you use loose, the correct spelling that you want to use is lose.

Other than a couple of grammatical issues I think that you did a good job with your story.



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to hear you liked it. My spelling is only as good as spell check and sometimes that lets me down. Same with grammar. Hugs, Vonnie

 
Summary:

Sam's been hunted before. But never like this. Tag to 4.04.

Spoilers: Season Four up to Metamorphosis (4.04)


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4375
[Report This] Published: 07/12/08 Updated: 07/12/08


Reviewer: Kiansie Signed
Date: 27/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Save me from this darkness

Well written.