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Penname: Glitterbelle [Contact]
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Real name: Gemma Status: Member Member Since: 27/03/09 Website: http://twitter.com/Gemaejesty Beta-reader: No
Reviews by Glitterbelle Summary:
The brothers are in Oregon on the hunt for an unknown beast responsible for the disappearances of 37 people in the Ochoco State Forest. When both of them are wounded by The Beast With No Name the hunt becomes a battle for survival. Categories: General, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 44459 [Report This] Published: 13/03/11 Updated: 29/04/13
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 Date: 04/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great start to the story. You've got me hooked right away. Not sure which brother is which in the beginning but I think I can guess. Sounds like their both in bad shape and I really fear for the brother who fell off the cliff and killed the beast. Mean cliffhanger(hehe!) in the middle by jumping back 3 days. Really adds suspense to the story and we need to know how they got to this point. I enjoyed this chapter. Loved Dean annoying Sam with his M'n'Ms. Hi Thanks so much for the review. I'm pleased you enjoyed the first chapter. I hope you continue to read and review.
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Date: 04/09/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I thought that the brother with the hurt leg who fell off the cliff was Dean. He used one of Dean's best words, fugly. What a gruesome chapter with chunks of flesh and claws digging into to body parts. The boys are definitely in trouble now. Even though at this point we now that Dean kills the second beast too, he's heading for a bad situation and we can't stop it. Wish I could warn him somehow lol!!! Poor Sam, I wonder how he is going to survive he's pretty beat up and Dean won't be in any shape to help. Aother great chapter. Hi again Another review. YAY! I'm very pleased you read on and are still enjoying my gory tale.
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Date: 04/09/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Nooooooo!!! You can't leave the chapter like that!! I forgot about the Ranger Tarni. I'm really glad she found Sam and hes on his way to hospital now. Brave lady looking for Dean on her own, what a relief she found him.But he really is a mess. I liked how you described Dean's thoughts of heaven, and thinking that he'd find Sam there because he must think he has failed to save Sam now and that his brother is probably dead. Keeping me on the edge of my seat. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it won't be too long a wait. ;-) If Dean only knew he was being lifted into a hellicopter and not to heaven his mind set might be a lot different. Glad you like Tarni. Thanks for another review. I will try not to keep you waiting to long for chapter 4. Thanks again. Summary:
Sam and Dean are still at odds right after their father's death. Nothing seems to be working and soon enough they both just seem to give up with trying. When they go to do a simple salt and burn the initial hunt seems to spiral into more than they ever imagined. Who is killing all these people? Who is this weird new hunter with a fixation on Dean? And how come after they did the initial salt and burn their problems only get worse? Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 23264 [Report This] Published: 20/07/11 Updated: 05/03/12
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Date: 22/07/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I have enjoyed the first 2 chapters of your story so far. The set is very intriguing. I really wanna who this guy is and how his obsession with Dean affect the boys. Please continue. I'm dying to read more.
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Date: 04/08/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 I really don't like this guy at all. What does he have planned for Sam? I hope Dean can get to him before this guy does any serious damage. Can't wait for the next chapter. I need to read more. :-) x
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Date: 04/09/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Oh no!! Evil cliffhanger. I was practically screaming at Dean not to drink that beer Kendall gave him it was just too dodgy. He's in trouble now. I wonder what Kendall has in store for him. Poor Sam having to deal with this monster and know that a girl was killed that couldn't save and hes worried sick about his brother but can't do anything to get to him. I can't feel sorry for Kendall even reading some of his experiences with his own big brother when he was a child, I can understand why hes a psycho but I can't excuse it. Please give us the next chapter soon. I'm at the edge of my seat wanting to know what is going to happen next. Summary:
6.21 Let It Bleed tag - I promised myself this wouldn’t happen, that Ben wouldn’t have the life I had, and yet, it spun out of control so fast. Before I knew it…
Banner by the amazing highvoltagerock! Thanks Dream! Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 467 [Report This] Published: 02/08/11 Updated: 02/08/11
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Date: 04/08/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This a beautiful, heartbreaking insight into Dean's thoughts for this scene. You have really captured the essence of who Dean is and why he did this for Ben and Lisa. Like the previous reviewer I could really hear Dean's voice saying these words as I read them. Very nicely written. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. :-) x Thank you, that is absolutely the best comment anyone could make on one of my stories, that I captured their voice. Jensen makes Dean so real, so defined, that it feels like he is in my head, guiding my writing and speaking thru me. I love that while I feel like I know Dean so well, he still surprises me, Show & Jensen still finds ways to reveal more layers. He is certainly never simple and while wiping their memories obviously has a lot going against it, it is WHY he did it that captivates me. Dean's intentions are always pure and unselfish. And he does break our hearts, totally and absolutely. He is a hero who deserves so much more and maybe...one day, Lisa & Ben will again know him. Who wouldn't want to know Dean Winchester? Take care, B.J. Summary:
 Sometimes silence speaks louder than words. A series of brotherly moments, wee!Chester through early Season 4. Previously published in the Blood Brothers 3 fanzine.Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, Action, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: Dean W., John W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5616 [Report This] Published: 31/08/11 Updated: 31/08/11
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Date: 01/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: More than Words Wow!!! I'm actually stuck for the right words to describe how I feel about this story. I don't think that I could do it justice but I'll try. You have written some beautifully heart-wrenching and powerful insights during these periods of silence for the boys. It really almost felt like I was intruding on their privacy, listening to their innermost thoughts that they couldn't/wouldn't give sound to. I think that this took my breath away. This is one of the best pieces I've read and definitely in my top favourites. Thank-you for sharing such an amazing piece of writing. THANK YOU for leaving such a wonderful review and rating on my new story. I appreciate it more than I can say. Hearing from readers that they were moved by something I wrote is one of the main reasons I keep writing. Your review will be cherished for a long time to come. If you liked this story, you might enjoy a couple of others I wrote: "Touched by Fire" and "Thanksgiving, Winchester Style." Both have the depth of emotion this one does, and both closely examine the things that have shaped the boys and their bond. If you check either one out, I'd love to hear what you think! Thanks again! Hope to see you around! Summary:
4.20 The Man Who Would Be King tag - He's a good angel who made a bad mistake. Drabble from Cas' POV.
One more lovely banner by highvoltagerock Categories: Drabbles, Missing Scenes Characters: Castiel Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 123 [Report This] Published: 01/09/11 Updated: 01/09/11
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Date: 02/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Like Sam, I think that Castiel was trying to do the best he could in a horribly hard situation. His intentions were good, he just went in the wrong direction. He definitely deserves redemption. He isn't bad and I believe he will make things right in the end. Nice little snippet into Castiel's thoughts. Thanks, Gem! Yes, I think Sam understands, been down that road. Dean is always a little hard to bend, more restrictive in what he sees as right and wrong. Besides Cas hurt his brother, both in his mistake in bringing him back soulless, but mainly in bringing down the wall. Dean needs to forgive him, Cas needs a friend and redemption to save him from this godlike being who isn't Cas, not the real Cas. I can't wait to see what S7 brings. It's gonna be awesome! Later, B.J. Summary:
Every 22 years something crawls from the bowels of the Earth to wreak havoc and death. This time, it is back early, and it's escalating. Bobby joins the Winchesters in this hunt. Hurt!Dean, angst, Hurt!Sam. AU Set season 6, roughly around Ep 12 This story is written as a gift, to the wonderful Tree66 for hosting this site, for making a place for us, and for giving me kick ass reviews!!!
Categories: General Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 67392 [Report This] Published: 19/11/11 Updated: 19/01/12
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Date: 22/11/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 I can tell this going to be a great story. I love your descriptions, can really imagine that I'm there in the snow with trees an white rabbit. Looking foward to reading more. I wonder whats up with Dean and why he was reluctant to go on this hunt? Thank you! I often cut back on my descriptions coz I think I've overdone it...
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Date: 22/11/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 2 Gosh!! Lots of questions to be answered at the end of this chapter. Really adding some interesting threads to explore. I like this 'Ellen-thing', sounds unusual, I don't think I've read anything else with a creature that looks different to other people. Can't wait to find out what it is. Uh oh!!! Whats happened to Dean? I feel bad foe the girls, I would be so scared if I was in their shoes too.
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Date: 22/11/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I hope those kids run fast enough from whatever is chasing them. Glad Sam and Bobby found Dean. Wonder who or what clocked him round the head and why and if its connected to the 'Ellen-thing'. Must keep reading. I'm enjoying this story and the suspense and mysteries you're building.
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Date: 23/11/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Dun, dun, duuun!! You're so devious with your cliffhangers. Loved this chapter. You have got me well and truly hooked on this story and shall savour every chapter until the very end. I wonder if you have something more up your sleeve concerning Dean. I just have a strange feeling when Bobby said he that he thinks Dean will sleep it off and be fine. Of course it might just be me overthinking it with my love of HurtDean. I have to say that your dialogue for the brothers and Bobby is spot on. I can really hear their voices as if it were the actors themselves speaking the lines in an episode. I am waiting on the edge of my seat for an update. Well, you are spot on, the creepy back ground music must've given it away...but that's all I'll say for now.... Thank you, your reviews make me mushy!!!
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Date: 29/11/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Aww!!! Poorly Dean. I love Bobby and Sam taking care of him even though he is the world's worst patient. lol!! I feel the same way as Bobby does, something isn't right.
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Date: 29/11/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 I'm excited to find out what spooked the horse-riding group, sounds pretty scary. So cool that you've added another brotherly bond besides the Winchesters to your story. I look forward to reading more about them and Sally as it progresses.
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Date: 29/11/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Good to see that the teenagers are taking the iniative and actively trying to find a way to get out of their situation. I'm particularly warming to Sherry-Anne, even though she must be scared , she's willing to get on with it.
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Date: 06/12/11 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Oh dear!! Sam you pissed your brother off. Dean definitely doesn't like the idea of being benched. lol!!!
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Date: 06/12/11 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 I'm still here enjoying your story. I loved tge way Sam and Dean explained the creature in the woods as a genetically modified animal that terrorists could use. I've not heard that one before. I think Sam needs to listen to Bobby and back off Dean a bit. We all know how stubborn he can be. Sam should just keep an eye on him quietly. Poor Sam and Bobby though, think they might have a lot on their plate soon with the creature, Dean being ill and having to get the survivors out alive. Sorry I have not responded to your reviews, believe me, it was not that they were not apprecieated!!! I do enjoy knowing you're there, along for the ride, and am grateful you take the time to tell me! Hope the next few chapters are up to standard! |
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