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Real name: Ritu Status: Member Member Since: 15/03/09 Website: Beta-reader: No
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 How far can the brothers be pushed before they break - and will their bond survive the fallout?
Banner by UnGen's Best Artist 2009 - Chasidern Story idea by Supernaturalfan from UnGen, inspired by events in episode 5.10 Abandon All Hope Set after episode 5.16 Dark Side of The Moon, and contains spoilers for the season up to and including that episode, as well as speculation for beyond that point Categories: AU, Action, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 47034 [Report This] Published: 09/04/10 Updated: 14/05/10
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Date: 09/05/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Well... You have no idea how awesome you're actually. This story is getting better and better with each progressing chapter, and maan! *whines* it's almost the end!! ahaha *cries* I want more more MORE. I'm so glad that Luci's gone now and Sammy is saved. Well, almost although he'l now have to go through a world of pain, nightmares and other injury related sickness. *eeps* can't wait for those yummy moments...ahem, sorry. And and...I love Gabe, he's one helluva angel cum trickster. I used to like him... anyways. Glad he's temporarily healed my Sammy...that poor thing, aww *hugs him tight and kisses his booboos* How, time for some nursemaid Dean, Bobby fussing over our sweetest patient. Can't wait...can't wait. You're going to the con? Cool. Don't forget to send me the photos, alright! I MEAN it. I'll be waiting for them. *taps forefinger impatiently* Love you soooo much, Ritu. Author's Response: Hi, hun, Me, awesome? Nah, I'm just me. And yep, almost over. But at least they're nice long chapters - lol. Yes, your Sammy's saved. And you're right, the nightmares won't be fun. Sam's going to have some trying times ahead. You might need to approach him very carefully before you hug him and kiss his ouchies. Just, you know....saying.... I did go to the Con, and had a wonderful time meeting Bobby, Cas, Ellen, Anna and the prophet Chuck. And I will send photos, just as soon as my friend uploads them from her camera and sends them to me. Jules
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Date: 19/05/10 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue What can I say?? I'm completely speechless like always. Dramatic epilogue, you've written everything I wanted to read. First of all, the way Gabe sent them back and Dean toppled with his brother after losing his balance, was hilarious. hehe, that's why I that that trickster/demi god/loki/archangel. And, oh, the yummy part...Dean and bobby were taking care of our Sammy...aww... how sweet. Glad Sam'd heard the real words or else he'd have done something wrong again. I mean, he thought Dean was talking about him, but then again...silly Sammy! Don't you get that? If Dean really thinks that about you, he wouldn't have rescued you the way he did. And the revealing about the manipulated phone call... awesome. And nightmares and Sam's attempt to leave and Dean finding him at his typical place, brother talking, hugging...ahhh...what more a spn girl would want! Marvelous chapter, you do deserve another award regarding this one. You're an awesome writer. And hey, can you send the 'Leprechaun' story of yours in word document? I want to print this one out too. Love this story, wish if I could fav it once again. Love you, Ritu. Author's Response: Thanks, hun. Ah, yes, you got your little Sammy fix there - lol. And yes, good thing that Sam heard most of the conversation and realised it wasn't him that Dean was railing against, but the angels. And yep, the tampered message got dealt with. Thank you - I'm really pleased that you loved the story so much. Leipreachan should be in your in-box by now. Jules Summary:
Engaged in a frantic race against time, only one thought uppermost in his head....dig, damn you - dig!
Awesome story banner by Chasidern
Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2895 [Report This] Published: 30/07/10 Updated: 30/07/10
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Date: 30/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very coooooooollll story. God, both boys were trapped but Dean still didn't loose his hold onto Sammy. Glad John found them in time. Dean's a great big brother, and Sammy...Thank god both boys are safe. And John's feeling about failing his job was heartbreaking. Love it, Ritu. Author's Response: Cool snow story, eh? LOL! Yes, both little boys were trapped. In for a penny, in for a pound, I say - lol. Why have just one when you can have both? Thanks hun - geez, you were quick off the mark. I'd only finished posting this about ten minutes before you hit the review button - the proverbial ink wouldn't have been dry yet! Glad you enjoyed it, though. Jules Summary:
Some days are just.....hell... Set in Season 4, just after episode 4.11 Family Remains
Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 25624 [Report This] Published: 21/08/10 Updated: 01/10/10
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Date: 22/08/10 Title: Chapter 1: Day One - Comfort Food Oh wow...what an original story idea!! I never ever read something like that before. Awwwweesome. Gonna be hell of an awesome story. Dean's sucking his thumb! What a hilarious image!! Never thought I'd get to see something funny yet disgusting like that. Dean-the macho-takes-no-craps-type of hunter is sucking his thumb like a baby! And he groined Sam!! Oh crap... Why Dean's acting that way? Has he been hexed or got cursed somehow? I really want to know. Now I can't wait til' next friday. Loving this hilarious chapter. Ritu. Author's Response: Hey, hun! Awww, thank you. I sort of thought it was about time I belted Dean up for a change. And yes, poor tough-as-nails hunter has suddenly developed a thumb fetish. And he nutted his brother to do it. LOL. Why is he acting this way? Well, it could be...(censored)....or it might just be...(censored)...or it could even have been the ...(censored)...from the ...(censored)... *grins evilly*..... Now you didn't really think I'd tell you just yet, did you? Patience, young Padawan - all will be revealed in the next couple of chapters. Maybe..... Jules
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Date: 04/09/10 Title: Chapter 2: Day Two - It's An Ill Wind I don't know why I didn't get the alert of this chapter and the next one?? I was beginning to think I wouldn't get to read the next chapter but didn't have idea that i was left behind. Anyways... this chapter was....umm....gassy!! LOL. never thought i'd get to read something like that in this early 7 of the morning. OMG....poor Dean, poor poor Dean! Well, good thing is that I'm gonna read the next chapter without having been delayed. I don't know, hun. Sometimes the alerts play up a little bit. You could try unticking the function, log out, log back in after about ten minutes and re-select it, see if that resets the alert function for you. Ah, well, you've caught up now, so that's good. And what a chapter to read after your little holiday - lol. Yep, poor Dean - how utterly embarrassing for him. And smelly for Sam - lol. Glad you liked it, hun. Jules
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Date: 05/09/10 Title: Chapter 3: Day Three - Summer Of Love Yay....another awesome update! Aww.. lovely! Dean was being all warm and fussy to Sammy and every other thing. hehe. And wow..you hurt Sam! kool. And overemo Dean was just grrrrrrrreat! Now I really can't wait for the next update. Please tell me when you're exactly going to post it, I don't know what's wrong with my alert system!! And I can't even favorite it!!! What's wrong? :(:( I don't like it. Anyway, I'll waiting for the next update. Awsam :-bd Ritu :)))))) Author's Response: Yes, Dean was all warm and fuzzy - like a teddy bear....but not like the one in Wishful Thinking - lol. When am I going to update? Seriously? This is me - I always update Friday nights my time, which is I think Friday morning your time. Unless my internet is down or there's a storm around, which will be likely now that we're into spring and storm season is coming soon. Not long to go now - just a few more days....like five....ROFL! Jules
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Date: 11/09/10 Title: Chapter 4: Day Four - Heroes Cry Too Well..that went well...well...almost...lol. That was another HILARIOUS chapter!! Aww..man, from where do you get those ideas, huh! I mean, seriously! A chick!Dean!!! Even I don't watch such chicky movies, let alone crying my heart out. Hehehe. And I can't certainly blame Sam for his crappy attitude toward Dean! First, he's got a nasty concussion and what! puked all over his brother!! :P:P and then Dean was busy being a cry baby! Just freaking awesome!!!! Glad Bobby got there in time and at least tried to handle the well!! crappy situation. Now I don't think that the curse's over, coz... we've still got 3 more days left, right!! Now I can't wait for Friday... I want to read it right nooooowwww... Rating! 1000/100 ROFL Love it, Rituparna :)))))))) Author's Response: Hullo, hun! Well, my head's a really strange place at the best of times, and this idea just popped in one day, and grew from there. I had a bit of trouble with the list of torture, but with the help of my beta and some advice from Tree, I got it locked down at the end. And yes, Sam's a bit fed up, isn't he? This is one weird curse. But he does have a concussion - that could be making him grouchy. Thank heavens Bobby has arrived to play referree - lol. Three more days? Well, it does say seven days in the title, so there's a bit more to go yet before I'm done torturing my Deany-babe. I'm just having so much fun! hugs Jules
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Date: 18/09/10 Title: Chapter 5: Day Five - Things That Go Bump Yikes..I knew that picture was bad news. Just tell me, it's not my Sammy's arm!! OMG..that tall tail (lol) thing what's its name again! Tailypo's taken Sam and and...Dean's still acting super clumsy!! :S :S It was another hilarious chapter! The way a clumsy Dean hit Sam by his elbow and knocked his little brother out...was totally unexpected. Now, who's gonna save Sam?? Can't wait, can't wait...I CAN NOT WAIT to read the next chapter! SAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMYY :'((( :)) Looooovee it..Ritu :) Author's Response: Okay, it's not your Sammy's arm...LOL. Yep, Tailypo's got Sam, Dean's knocking everyone out, it's gotten dark, and midnight is looming ever closer, as is a possible messy end for Sam. Who's gunna save Sam? Hopefully big brother can push past the effects of the curse long enough to find little bro before he becomes the Tailypo's next chew toy. Dun-dun-dunnnnnnnnn........ Patience, young Padawan. Jules
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Date: 27/09/10 Title: Chapter 6: Day Six - Only The Strong Whew..that was hilarious!! That thing was...*thinks hard*...awkward!! I hate cats! They suck! Thank god Sam's saved by Dean! and Bobby now! Aww.. I can imagine his weird facial expression when he asked them if he was dead or not! hihihi....aww Sammy! Now they all have seen the light, that means that means.... they're gonna break the curse, right! But I can't certainly believe you.... you won;t let those boys that easy, right!! You'll sure find another way to torture them.... X(.... and that's one of many reasons I love you so much :P Can't wait for the next chapter! And oh, the book rocks my socks... what an awesome read. Even when I go to the tuition, I take the book with me. I love love looove it. Hugs you tight, Ritu :))))))))) Author's Response: You hate cats? Awwww....I have a cat - a blue-eyed, moulting furball called Dolly. But she's not a Sammy-eater like the Tailypo. So thrilled you loved the book, hun. Oh, another way to torture the boys? Welllll.........could be, could be. The story title is Seven Days after all, and midnight's just come.....*winks*... Jules
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Date: 05/10/10 Title: Chapter 7: Day Seven - Once More With Feeling :S The story's finished!! Can't believe that there's no more to read.. aww I love this humorous piece!! Dean :P:P ... no wonder he was still pissed!! Those curses were...well.... *thinks hard for an appropriate word* ... bad! :S lol.... Awesome story so far! You're awsam :)
Happy Birthday!! Hope you'll have a blast! :D Hugs, Ritu :))) Author's Response: The story's finished. Another one bites the dust, as they say. Thank you, sweetie, I'm really thrilled you enjoyed it so much. And see - the Tailypo didn't eat your Sammy - lol. Those curses were, in a word, too freakin' weird - and therein lies the fun! Thanks - I had a pretty nice day, all things considered. Just have to remember that I'm a year older now, whenever someone asks my age - LOL. hugs Jules Summary:
He'd always had a better relationship with Dean Bobby POV - 5.22 Swan Song coda - contains spoilers for seasons five and six
Thanks of course to Chasidern for another awesome banner! Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3736 [Report This] Published: 08/10/10 Updated: 08/10/10
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Date: 08/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Yay, season 6 story!! Lovely!! I liked Uncle Bobby's POV. Bobby loves Sam way too much, the way he hugged his long lost surrogate son.. it practically brought tears in my eyes. Do you really think Sam's changed or something? I wonder what he had seen or faced down there? :((( Love this one shot. Awesome. :)))) Ritu Author's Response: Thanks, hun! Ooh, I'm struggling with season 6 at the moment. Not sure whether I'll write any more for a while - season six stuff, that is. Might have to go back to a simpler time and play in season one or two for a while. I had my doubts about Bobby's affection for Sam until Levee, when Bobby wondered whether he and Dean loved Sam too much and had protected him more than they should have. And when Bobby kept at Dean to go easy, I thought yep, he feels like Sam is just as much his son as Dean - he just has a slightly different relationship with Sammy. And yep, Sam's definitely changed. I miss Sammy..... Thanks for reading, hun. Jules Summary:
Despite the angel's promise, there was still a little repair work to be done. Missing scene to episode 5.13 The Song Remains The Same, and contains spoilers for season 5 up to that point
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Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3599 [Report This] Published: 10/12/10 Updated: 10/12/10
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Date: 10/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 You sure know how to make me happy, I'm feeling so relaxed and relieved after reading this story. You know I was so upset when I saw the latest spoiler of the upcoming episode. I don't get it, why they're doing this to Sam? WHYWHYWHY!!! This soulless thing's grating my nerves. I feel bad for Sam! I love him so much, and if something bad happens to him....I always get terribly upset. Then I got your alert... and yay, this is just what I wanted. I loved this epi, Sam's reaction was epic when he saw his beloved Mom and told his Dad that he loved him. I hate those badassedangels royally. Glad they're now roasting in hell. And yeah, I was thinking too...did Sam die and was he just gravely injured? Anyways, glad the boys talked and everything's looking good. I love this story and you're awsam. Love you, Ritu Author's Response: Aww, hullo, hun. I get where you're coming from with the soulless thing - I'm a bit over it, too. So glad you loved this little piece - I've had it in the folder for quite a while now. And yes, I didn't realise that Sam had actually died. I thought he was close to it by the time Michael got around to healing him and sending him back, but when I watched the opening clips for DSOTM and saw that one in there, that was when I found out that Anna had actually killed him. Take care, hun, and fingers crossed that I'll have something else ready to go soon. Jules Summary:
Sam's got a concussion...so how come Dean's got the headache? Set some time during Season 4, and contains spoilers for that season
Superb banner as always by Chasidern...I'm so spoilt.... Categories: General, One Shots, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8629 [Report This] Published: 07/01/11 Updated: 07/01/11
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Date: 07/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ahhhhhhh.. totally my fav kind of story. I like it from the top to bottom!! What a sweet image of my Sam.... awwww .... adowable!!!! Sammy got a concussion and he's afraid that his brain's going to leak out of his ears :P lol. Awesome!!! And I like the puking part. You know, me and one of my friends were reading it together and laughing our hearts out. And I predicted before I got to read that part... Sam will never get into a smelly car. lol. I like Dean, he's a great big bro. I can't imagine he's cleaning his brother's puke. Poor Sam and my fave line is "I need a second opinion". LOL. And the nurse was nice, I'm glad Sam didn't have to salt and burn her. hahah... hilarious. Like Cass's part too, what a douchebag!! lol. Love it, definitely my fav. Hugs, Ritu :)))))))) Hey, hun, Glad you enjoyed poor concussed and befuddled Sammy. And you liked the puking part???? *gags*....Ewwww....lol. I'm sure by the time Sam got healed, Dean really wanted to whack him upside the head, concussion or no. Oh, dear...and yes, the nurse was very nice, although she must be wondering about Sam's state of mind. Thanks hun hugs you back Jules Summary:
Every word, every gesture, was geared to keeping the wall intact. Because if it failed... For Oceane, my longest and most dedicated reviewer, and who also gave me the prompt for the story. Contains spoilers for Season Six up to and including episode 6.11 Appointment In Samarra
Banner by Chasidern - pretty spiffy, eh?
Categories: General, AU, Action, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 11177 [Report This] Published: 21/01/11 Updated: 28/01/11
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Date: 22/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Jules... missed you so much!!!!! *hugs you tight* This story's just... I don't know how to describe in one word...OUTSTANDING!!! God I wish you to be the writer of the original show, you always seem to capture the perfect plot. You know, last night when I read this story, I was discussing with a friend about this one and telling her-when we are all thinking about what would happen when the wall crumbles, but never thought what the consequence will be if the bricks of the wall start to break!! Awesome story, Sam seems so broken inside and trying to protect himself from his own memory!! Poor Dean, he also seems to be breaking apart seeing his beloved Sammy hurting like this. Love Bobby's POV though, I seriously like this old man. Awesome story once again, and as usual....one of my favorites. Glad you're doing okay, I hope everything will be back to normal soon. Take Care, Ritu. Author's Response: Awww...*hugs back* Oh, that sounds like too much hard work - fancy having to meet all those deadlines and face the wrath of all those disgruntled fans....*shudders and hides under desk*...you wouldn't wish that on me, would you hun? *puppy eyes* No, think I'll stay an amateur, it's much safer. Yep, Sam's having a bit of trouble re-adjusting at the moment. He's a bit like a child, not really understanding what's happening and why he isn't where he was before. But he's got good backup in Dean and Bobby, so....let's hope it's enough, eh? Thanks hunny - everything is slowly returning to normal. Jules
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Date: 31/01/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Yay...Sammy's getting better. But but.... that line "I just hope this itch doesn't drive me insane" is really scary!! He's going to itch, right!! You think he will....right!!! Poor Sam, he could understand, something was going on with Bobby. Dean was awesome as usual and Sam..... I just.. want to hug him to death!! My poor poor Sammy's suffered a lot!! *runs her hand through Sam's hair* Awesome ending, and now I'm eagerly waiting to read another hit fic of yours. Love it. Hullo, hun! Yes, well, we all know how curious Sam is, and how badly he needs to know all the facts. I think he may eventually scratch, or perhaps outside influences might help contribute to bringing the wall down. I don't want Sammy to end up destroyed by his memories of the cage, but Death did say it was only 75% reliable.....*chews nails*... And yeah, Sam was perceptive enough even in his addled state, to pick up on the fact that something had gone on between himself and Bobby. I'm hoping in the show that they will manage to repair that rift. Glad you liked Dean's return to big brother mode, too. And Sam needs a hug - do I see a show of hands for volunteers? LOL hugs Jules Summary:
Enharmonic Interval: two notes that differ in name only. The notes occupy the same position; for example C sharp and D flat. (Classicalworks.com - Glossary of Musical Terms) Tag to episode 6.13 Unforgiven, and contains spoilers for all seasons up to and including that episode.
Huge thanks to Chasidern for the beautiful banners For Carolyn Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4676 [Report This] Published: 17/02/11 Updated: 17/02/11
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Date: 22/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I just can't express in words how much I adore this story. Simply outstanding as usual. This is not good, Sam's scratching at the wall hard and we know.... I just know something's bad/ worse's going to happen with him soon. I was also a bit disappointed at Bobby's weird attitude. Oh come on, doesn't he know it wasn't SAM!!! It was T1000, not our soulful Sammy. He's getting older *sigh* but at least, in this story, the relationship between Bobby and Sammy's getting a little better. I love it, and my most favorite line is "Figured he needed to work off some of that nervous energy. By the time he tires himself out, I should have enough to last all winter." And did you see the latest episode? It was awesome, wasn't it? Aww, I love Sam and Dean's brotherly bond, and Dean was almost crying over his brother's body. Aww, I love it. Glad our awesome brothers are back, now Sam... *I'm evil* Start scratching at the wall.... hehehe Hugs you, Ritu Author's Response: Hullo, my sweet! I did indeed see the latest episode, and am loving the boys being brothers again. Long time coming. No, Sam's scratching, and forcing himself to remember, really wasn't in any way a good thing. All it did was cause a little bit of Hell to leak out through that wall, and pile another load of guilt onto Sam's shoulders. Strangely enough, I'm not surprised at Bobby's reaction, even though I wish it were otherwise. I can see how he would struggle with this - after all, as he said, only ten days before, soulless Sam was very willing to kill him to make a spell - and very neary did. If it hadn't been for Dean....so, yes, I don't hold it against Bobby for being upset and distant, but I hope that they can work it out before too much longer. Thanks, hun, hugs you back, Jules Summary:
Never bet against a sure thing... Set in Season 3 - immediately after the episode Ghostfacers
Another pretty banner by Chasidern Categories: General, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 37524 [Report This] Published: 25/02/11 Updated: 08/04/11
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Date: 11/04/11 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue Wow, that was an awsam journey throughout the whole story! I really loved it. Poor Sammy got daphned a couple of times and lost the bet!! Awwwwwww... bad bad Dean; red hair like Daphne never suits Sam. By the way, I liked the ghost's freaky attitude. LOL...the way she rolled her eyes when Sam was babbling that he wasn't Fred (instead he was the Daphne) hahahahaha (OMG... Fred, Daphne hihihihi.... and where's Scooby-doo Dean). It was so funny and Allie was the freakiest gosh I've ever seen. Well, virtually!!! Lovely story and definitely my favorite one.
And yay, I'm getting alerts again. Today I got one review alert, thanks to you.
Jared in ROME.... yeah.... :'(( I want to see him, touch him :'(( Have you seen the con's photos btw? They're awesome. He looks gorgeous in this pale yellow shirt!! *drools like a puppy* He's hothothot XD ^__^
Now I'll have t wait for your next new story...it's going to be hard. What are going to write next anyway? Can I have a hint please!!!!!!!! And yay, April 15th is getting closer! Yay... can't wait to see a cowboy Sam. ooooo...I'm over excited X)))
Asks politely------ what about me and Sam!!!! *puppy eyes*
Hugs you tight, Ritu. Author's Response: After the 9th of May, okay? There's just way too much happening around us to even think about it before then. Everything has to be packed up and either moved into storage or moved into my home, so there won't be time for Chris to do any artwork. Or me to do any writing. Once the move is over, there will be a bit of time between that and the house renovations, so perhaps in the gap, okay? We haven't forgotten - just way too busy. Yep, Sammy lost the bet - a few times actually. And yep, he's a redhead now, at least for a few days until Dean relents and stops making him wear it. So glad you loved Fred saving Daphne - I mean Sammy - lol. And yeah, Allie was fun to write, and a pretty gutsy ghost. If she'd been alive, and still young, I reckon Dean would have had a hard time keeping his mind on the hunt - lol. Ah, but then again, she only had eyes for Sam... Thanks, hun - will chat to you via email soon. Internet connection is playing up a bit, so it might not be a for a couple of days. But I'll let Chris know about the bio page banner as well, and she'll get to work on that after the move. Jules
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Date: 27/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Yay, season 3 plot! My third favorite timeline. I'm so happy to read something like that, aww, I've been missing their good natured brotherly banters :D Daphne!! At first, I was totally confused. What the heck was that? LOL. Then I remembered the lady from the scooby-doo who always gets caught and others have to find or protect her :D OMG, cute!!! Dean's being a very special jerk this time, what! RED WIG? Red hair wouldn't suit Sam and the motherly waitress knows that too. I'm guessing this time, it's Dean's turn. It'd be hilarious seeing him wearing such thing :P matches with his freckles :D Awesome start, can't wait for more. Hugs you, Ritu :)))) Hi, sweet! Third favourite timeline, eh? After season one and season two, perhaps? LOL. Yes, I know what you mean about the banter. I've missed it too, and was thrilled to see it return along with Sam's soul in the current season. Ah, so you get the Daphne reference now, eh? That's good. And yes, Dean's being a jerk about it, as only a big brother can. But let's see if he changes his tune once the hunt gets underway.....*nods knowingly*... hugs you back Jules
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Date: 07/03/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 OMG.... didn't expect this twist!! The all victims look kind'a like Sam!!! :S Now I'm officially scared!! Please please please, Don't make him wear the red wig.... that means, he's the next victim? OMG!!! And I love Dean's blabbering about corn puddings...he's a food junkie! LOL.... but but... although I wrote LOL but I'm not laughing, 'cuz my Sam seems to be in danger. Awesome update and for some weird reason, I didn't get the email alert. Anyway... can't wait for the next Friday, and did I tell you I hate HELLATUS!!
Author's Response: Hey, hun, Yes, I do believe you have mentioned in passing that the Hellatus isn't exactly your favourite time of year - lol. Ah, you didn't expect the twist? There will always be a twist - lol. But there might be a twist inside the main twist here.....just because the victims all resemble your sweet Sammy, doesn't mean he's next on the ghost's hit-list. Or perhaps he is... Try turning off the email alert, log completely out, wait ten minutes then log back in again and re-tick it - see if that works. But you have to log completely out, as in go up to the top menu selection and hit Logout. Sometimes the system gets a bit of a memory in it. hugs Jules
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Date: 10/03/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Oh man, you've fooled me. It's Sammy who's going to be kidnapped, right!!! I didn't realize it before, I mean... I know you'd told us that there was a hint of who's going to be daphned on your banner but I really couldn't see anything (may be I was too engrossed on drooling over the pretty banner and Sam :D) But today, when I was watching it on my cell phone, I saw what! Sam's hair's red. Oh snap... he's gonna be kidnapped!!!! Daphne Sammy :S:S nawwwwwww....... Sammeh! LOL! Well, it's only a handful of hours before the next chapter and then you'll see who will be the one to lose that bet - because one of the brothers gets Daphne'd in chapter three. And let's face it - Sam's not got a good track record when it comes to not being snatched by ghosts and beasties, eh? Poor Sammy....*grins*... Jules
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Date: 11/03/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Nawwwww Sammy!!! Dean... you should've tied a freaking bell around his freaking neck!! You lost Sam... how could you!!!!*cries out loud* BTW, the bathroom scene was awesome, I could practically see Sam's face while Dean was singing that 'rain' song. lol. Hilarious, which I don't like at all. Dean, don't sing when your highly modest brother's doing some important business. lol But but, apart from the fun, I'm really scared for Sam. The ghost... is not going to torture Sam, right!!! Dean will find his brother soon, right! I can't wait for the next Friday.... awesome chapter as always. Love it. :))) Hugs you tight, Ritu. Hey, hun, Yes, he should have, and kept Sam in sight as well instead of letting him trail behind and get nabbed. But then, hindsight is 20/20 vision - lol. But rest assured, Dean won't make that mistake again...that is, if he finds Sam before he ends up like the other three victims... Ah, the singing - lol. Trust Dean to do something completely inappropriate to diffuse the awkwardness of the situation. As for the ghost...will she torture Sammy? Hmm....well, depends on what you'd call torture. And let's not forget, the other three victims were never found...*cue scary music* *grins evilly* Jules
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Date: 20/03/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Yay, Dean found Sam. *whew* Thank God, he's doing okay. Man, I laughed out loud when a very groggy concussed Sam was blabbering about his missing legs. "Ghost bitch cut m' legs off, Dean." Aww, a concussed Sam's so much fun to read. He was thinking about modifying the Impala. LOL Awesome chapter but now again and again, I'm scared for my boys. The ghost's back.OMG, what's gonna happen now? Why am I not getting any alerts? What's wrong with this site? Waiting for the next chapter. Ritu Author's Response: Re the alerts - did you do what I told you to do? Or are you just flapping your arms? If you did what I said, and you're still having trouble with the alerts, then contact Tree through the site and let her know so she can get the techies to fix the problem. If she doesn't know it's broken, she can't fix it. And yep, Dean found Sam - and just in time, too. Poor Sammy was almost a Samsicle in that freezing water. No wonder he thought that Allie had cut off his legs - lol. The ghost is indeed back...but don't forget, Dean's still got the shotgun tucked under his arm....and he's just got his little brother back. No way is he going to let Allie get her hands on Sam if he can help it. hugs Jules
Reviewer: ritsam Signed
Date: 28/03/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 YAPPPPPIIEEEE.... Now I wanna hug you sooo tight for giving me such pleasure!!! *HUUUUGGGS* WET uhmm.... NEKKID SAAAAAMMY!!! *Dies and goes to HEAVEN* Super awesome chapter. I like the way Dean's hovering around Sammy. Speaking of hovering, the bathroom scene was hilarious once again. Hehehhe... although it was helluva scary for Sam, but still, very entertaining for me. I mean, who wouldn't want to see him like the way you left him :D The ghost is one pain in the butt; why can't she just let Sam go? Now, again she has grabbed Sam's beautiful wavy hair which I do not like at all. Leave his hair you freaking ghost... x( Can't wait for the next chapter.
And I did what you advised me to do, I mean those clicking logging stuff. Let see if I get the alerts next day otherwise, I'm going to have a long chat with you.
How're doing now? Hows aunt Chris? Is everything under control now? Hope fort he best.
Hugs you again, Ritu :) Author's Response: A long talk with me, eh? That sounds like I'm in trouble.....lol. Auntie Chris is doing okay - she's busy sorting and packing up the house. Her brother is still in hospital waiting to be assessed, so things aren't under control yet, and won't be for quite a few weeks. But we're plodding along, getting done what we can. So, naked Sammy killed you off, eh? I'm sure Allie enjoyed the sight of wet, naked Sammy as well, since she decided to pop in on his shower - lol. And yes, she's got a double hold of that lovely hair now, and she's not letting go. Unless Dean gets to her first.... I'll say one thing for her - for a dead chick, she's pretty persistent. hugs Jules
Reviewer: ritsam Signed
Date: 07/04/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 I hate it when Sam loses bets :(( Poor Sammy; always gets snatched by freaky ghosts (which is kinda entertaining for us....um..meee). I was laughing (shame on me, sheesh) when the ghost grabbed him. It was scary but nonetheless funny. I'm weird, I know. Now again... AGAIN.... Sam's down :'( what's happening!!! I'm worried for him :(( Love this one and waiting for tomorrow. What about my freaking account? Did you do those clicking flicking stuff? Do you think I'd get alerts from now on??? I missed you soooo much :(( Hugs, Ritu (P.S. I love when you call me Padawan.... heehee.. sounds aweeesam) Author's Response: Yes, I know how much of a hurt!Sam junkie you are - lol... hope you're also a fan of red-head Sam, because he's certainly lost the bet now. And yeah, it was pretty funny when Allie grabbed Sam again. However, where he ends up is a pretty scary place....*cue scary music*... You should be very worried for him. *looks serious*... I checked into your freaking account, and I tweaked the freaking thing and did the flicking-clicking stuff, so if it doesn't freaking work this time, you need to freaking email Tree and get her to fix the freaking alerts! Whew....*wipes forehead*...if it doesn't work this time, then there must be something wrong with the site, so she needs to know about it. Well, my young Padawan, only one chapter to go now, and then I'm on a bit of a hiatus until I get this family stuff sorted. And I've got that chapter of yours to beta this weekend, too. You might just have to keep emailing me, eh? lol hugs Jules Summary:
Dean is frantic, Sam is gone and Bobby is shocked. What's going on here? Spoilers up to 6.11, AU Banner by the awesome Chasidern
Categories: AU, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 33338 [Report This] Published: 26/02/11 Updated: 08/07/11
Reviewer: ritsam Signed
Date: 22/04/11 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Hi Didi!! See, I'm here now and from now on, I'm going to review you on this site. What can I say, incredibly sweet chapter it is. I mean, Sammy's slapping his grampa!!! Awww..... lucky Bobby!!! Thank God, Sam's fever's gone down, and he's kicking nope..slapping again. Loveliest baby ever. And, no... nothing wuld ever take Dean life away from Sammy; Sammy is his and will be forever. Lovely chapter, love it. Hugs you :)) Author's Response: Awe, thanks Bon, you are so incredibly sweet. I'm so happy you like it and that you are on the site now. See you soon! Love you! Hugs, Didi |
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