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Sam is injured in a hunt. Will time heal this wound? Categories: Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 19090 [Report This] Published: 19/01/07 Updated: 26/01/07
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Date: 03/03/11 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue Jules, please please please send me the doc version of this story and "In dreams I walk with you' along with it's prequel. I'm bored and re-reading your old stories. I just love this one, so such hurt Sam and comforting Dean in this one. I love an amnesic Sammy.... sooo cute. Send me sooooooooon... My goodness, you're a greedy guts - lol. Bored, eh? How about you hook into the next chapters of Power Surge and Dentro Me? Poor old Dentro Me....left by the wayside after only one chapter.... This one started out much shorter - not that it was very long by the time I finished. But I padded it out a little. Was still learning back when I wrote this. Glad you loved the story for all of that. Jules Summary:
A spate of disappearances leads the boys to a small community, where they find the locals less than helpful. What is out in the woods that the townspeople are hiding? And will it take one of the Winchester boys as its next victim? Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 23898 [Report This] Published: 24/02/07 Updated: 14/03/07
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 Date: 12/02/10 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue Hi Jules, Me again and this's another coolest story Ive read just now. I read it one breathe and what all I can say..it's just mindblowing. I mean--'awe sam' actually. I started reading it at 6p.m and finished it just now. Awesome storyline, never read like that before. That thing 'Leipreachan' was actually harmless and kinda cool. I mean, it doesn't harm anyone; only grants their wishes. Oh my, Dean and his wishes really left my baby half dead. Though I can't blame Dean, he didn't know that kind old cobbler was the thing they were supposed to be hunting. But his unfortunate wishes left Sam so ill---dangerously ill indeed. Dean is a very very very good big brother, always looks after his little 'leanban' without any condition. I like those Irish words by the way, learned a lot from your story. And Sam kept fainting every five minutes---really had me worried. Dean did make the right wish or things would have been worse. I like the old landlady, she seemed very kind. In a word...this story is an A++++++++++...n story and definitely my fav one. Love it. Ritu. Author's Response: Hi, Ritu! This was a nod to my Irish ancestors. I loved delving into Celtic myths and legends, actually. I've got another one on the drawing board, but it's not a leprechaun this time. It's something way more sinister....*cue dramatic music*.... Yes, Dean had no idea his harmless, slightly wistful longing for a few simple things in his hectic life would leave his brother frantically searching for him for three days without rest or sustenance. So glad you liked this one. It's an oldie, but I'm relieved to know it's a goodie. Jules Summary:
AHBL2 Missing Scene - from hug to hug
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 9385 [Report This] Published: 08/09/07 Updated: 11/02/11
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Date: 13/02/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 OMG...now who's gonna wipe my tears away! AHBL's are my most favorite episodes ever. I like it with all my heart. Sam's death and Dean's grieve always make my heart ache. Awesome Job once again. You know what there is an youtube video, name I used to live alone...and it's amazingly coincide with this story. If you want I will mail you that song. Even the first quote is also there from HOTH. It's beautiful like your story. Another awesome piece, Ritu. Author's Response: They were pretty awesome episodes, weren't they? That little parental gesture of Dean's when he swipes the hair from Sam's eyes always gets to me. But the curious cat in me wanted to know what he did during that twenty-four hours that Sam was gone, so I got together with a friend from SN.tv and we wrote it. Unfortunately, she's not a member of this site so her two beautiful flashbacks are not part of this - only my bits. I'll email you the full version. And yes, I'd love that Youtube link if you can find it for me. That would be awesome. Thanks, hun. Jules Summary:
Who was the handsome stranger brought to the mental institution in the dead of night - and what terrible tragedy from his past had reduced him to a broken, empty shell?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 29830 [Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 11/01/08
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Date: 27/07/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 You know what, the song you've chosen for this story, is one of my favorites. I love Simon and Garfunkel's songs, especially 'Sound of Silence', 'Leaves that are green turn to brown', 'The only living in New York'. I just love those good old songs and while I was reading this chapter, I played the particular song too and believe me, I could practically see everything playing in front of my eyes that you've written. Awesome story, although I've now lost count how many times I read it before, but then again, you stories seem like evergreen to me. I never get bored and that's good for my pass time. Hey, hun! I love Simon & Garfunkel too - my favourites apart from this one are Bridge Over Troubled Water, The Boxer, Cecelia and I Am An Island. Aw, thanks, hun. I'm really thrilled that you can read this one over and over again, and it still remains fresh. Even though now you know who the patient really is - lol. hugs Jules
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Date: 30/11/10 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue And Finally... I've printed this story out yesterday along with the part one "Fractured" and from the start I knew the patient was Sam. Not that I read that story for the millionth times (and now I have this book which's really awsam), but your description about those eyes was the major clue. I mean, Dean doesn't have deep green eyes and the eye color doesn't change unlike Sam's. Then the height thing, Dean's 6'1" and the doc assumed he's near about 6'2" and the doc didn't measure his height. She just assumed and he could be more than 6'2". :) And hair, yep... his hair was the major and one final clue. That's one helluva clue. :)))) I knew it was Sam, otherwise...you know... I umm... wouldn't have.... seriously... read this one. *silly grins* You know, how many books I'm currently possessing... 1. That's what the big brothers are for 2. The L word 3. Leiprechaun 4. Fractured hearts and broken heroes 5. Fractured and Broken Images 6. The greatest one "Here At The End of All Things" and I'm in heaven :))))) You're my super writer hero :))) seee... HERO :P Love you sooo much :))) Ritu :)) Author's Response: Now tell me, did you know it was Sam because of the clues, or because you've read it a hundred times - LOL. And yes, you're right - Dean's eyes don't really change colour like Sam's do. The hair was a major clue - height was deliberately vague up till one point. Books? Stories? You're getting quite a collection there hun. Hmm, there was a lot of hard work in that little slice of work, especially for Here At. We practically sweated blood over that one. Glad you love the stories so much, sweet. hugs Jules Summary:
Sam is plagued by multiple visions of Dean burning alive, leading the brothers into a dangerous hunt that could have dire repercussions for the young psychic. Set just before the Season 2 episode Roadkill
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 53967 [Report This] Published: 18/01/08 Updated: 24/02/08
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Date: 02/05/09 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue Awesome-top to bottom just beyond awesome. Oh, from fast to last I just simply swallowed this story. Those visions just totally devastated Sam, and Dean, oh Dean, you are sucha good big brother. But this is totally Sammy story, the Geoff guy... such a freak, how he sent those burning Dean vision to Sam....really horrible. Sam was really screwed and baby was so sick! But Dean was there to take care of his sweet lil' bro, so cute. But the last chap.. oh BAAM! Geoff was fried, I liked that, he deserved that. But Elizabeth's words to Sam...not so cool. How could she tell those harsh words to Sam! Stupid girl! Anyways, just fantabulous story, I like it with all my heart.LoveRitu. Thank you so much for that , Ritu. Yes, the visions really hammered Sam into the ground this time - deliberately so, by the special child and the demon. And yep, Liz was lashing out i grief, but those words cut Sam deeply, especially coming hard on the heels of what he had just done to save Dean - and Liz, for that matter. Thanks once again for reading - I'm so glad you loved this one. Jules Summary:
Dean's time is up... Prequel to Broken Images Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8675 [Report This] Published: 13/02/08 Updated: 13/02/08
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Date: 15/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Awesome, what next? Update quickly. Sam can't die like that, he can't be mad....please....update. Hi - sorry, but this story is completed. It is, however, a prequel to Broken Images, which takes up the tale where this leaves off. Hope you enjoy it, and thank you so much for the review. Jules Summary:
Some things are just too hard to say...
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 11613 [Report This] Published: 18/04/08 Updated: 25/04/08
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Date: 01/05/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Hey, So cute story. I mean, the L word... Dean loves his baby brother so much. This story made me cry and smile both. Truly awesome story and honestly I'm literally obsessed by your writing. You're amazing. Love Ritu. Author's Response: Thank you, Ritu. And I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to get back here and reply. I'm stoked that you got so much out of the story. And yes, Dean really does love his brother like Sam was his own child. Summary:
A simple ailment hides a bigger problem Set immediately after the Season 2 episode Everybody Loves A Clown Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 12098 [Report This] Published: 10/09/08 Updated: 13/09/08
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Date: 15/03/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Oh my god, this is most beautiful story i'v ever read. Man, I love ELAC spoilers and I love Sam. He was so awesome in this episode ( he is still awesome and forever will be). But, this story made me cry when Sam told his brother, I'm sorry that I'm a lousy hunter. My poor baby, he was starving himself and Dean, didn't even notice. What a jerk! My heart stopped when Sam passed out in the store and after the hunt. He was so weak and vulnerable then and Dean thought he was nothing but a pain in the back. But the Doctor was way to cool, yeah, a great counsellor, I like his words his part everything. The whole story is a masterpiece. Love it. Ritu. Hello, Ritu. And welcome to the site. I've just sent you an email regarding your query on the other review. Yes, both boys were certainly lost in their grief in the days immediately following John's death. But to be fair to Dean, he also had the weight of that terrible secret that John told him as well as the loss of his father and its connection to his recovery. But beneath it all, he was still Sam's big brother when it counted. I see you're a huge Sammy fan. I'm a Dean girl myself, but I love Sammy almost as much, and I want to see both brothers still standing at the end of it all - and still fighting side-by-side, as they were meant to be. They're stronger together than apart. Jules Summary:
Who will be left standing at the end of it all... Set at the end of the final season and beyond - AU Spoilers for Season 4 up to 4:14, and speculation for the finale.
Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 189848 [Report This] Published: 13/03/09 Updated: 29/08/09
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Date: 14/02/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 just finished 1/3 of this chapter but couldn't stop myself to reviewing. The shirt which is Sam's favorite...is my fav too. I mean, I love this pink striped white shirt on Sam and fell in love of him once again when I'd first seen it in TKAA. That shirt was practically made for Sam..okay...babbling is over. Sam's still dead...but there are lots of chapters left. That means I can go on... See ya... Ritu. Author's Response: Oh, hun......um......it's actually the white grandpa shirt with the florally pattern on it. Sorry - my description mustn't have been clear enough. It's the other pink shirt. The one Sam wore at the end of CSPWDT, at the start of Lazarus Rising, during the confrontation with Dean in Metamorphosis, at the end of Sex & Violence, at the end of WIAWSNB, etc. He usually wears either a maroon or a white tee shirt underneath. Sorry.....*blushes*...... But I hope that you're enjoying the story anyway. And hang in there - you might be surprised...... Jules
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Date: 18/02/10 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue Part 2 okay...*takes a deep breathe* where do I start! I am practically speechless!! First, Sam unleashes extreme powers and defeats Lucifer, then Dean rescues him-but he thinks Sam's dead. When he realizes Sam's somehow alive, he calls Grace (I like the nurse since the other story) and helps his brother. Then Sam runs away and ends up in another town with a brain cancer! OMG, and those people-I like them very much. That doctor Blake, his wife Ginny, Aunt Em, Willa, Sharon, Catherine-are all major character and I like everyone. Especially Ginny. Blake is also very kind & good doc. They helped Sam when he was almost dying. And Sam's journal-practically broke my heart! Yes, we can't blame him. Everyone always orders him, but no one bothers to explain. No wonder he almost gave up his life and wished to die. But at last, Dean makes everything clear and give him the proof how much he loves his kid. Yes, Dean is practically the kid's father. And wow...Michael heals him, that's quite a surprise! That means, God still loves him. Awesome. And finally, Sam shaves. Oh Gosh, you have no idea, how long I've been waiting for this. I mean, clean shaved Sam is an example of beauty--I can't see him all beard faced, that doesn't suit him. And the finishing--awesome! Gracie and Sam, finally together. Dean's happy, Sam's happy and I am happy too. A perfect AU I have ever read. Awesome. I love it. Ritu. Author's Response: Well - what a summary. Actually, when Petra, my co-author, and I went down to Sydney for the Con last April, we got the opportunity to see Jared and Jensen, and they weren't clean-shaven. They had very short beards. And when I saw Jared on stage for the Q&A session, one of my first thoughts was - 'now I know what Sam looks like with that beard'. We'd written about five or six chapters by then - possibly seven. Can't remember, but we weren't quite halfway through the story. And it gave us just a wonderful visual - I'd always intended for Sam to have a beard when Dean found him, but seeing Jared that weekend just crystallised it in my mind - and Petra's. And I have to tell you - they both do scruffy VERY well. It actually suited Jared quite well. Didn't detract one little bit from his rugged handsomeness. It was a pretty epic journey, wasn't it? We put a lot of thought and effort into this one, not just with the journey we were taking the boys on, but also with the OC's and their impact on the story and the brothers. But it was all about restoration of the brothers, and that was always the end goal we were working towards. Thank you for sticking with this epic, especially after the end of chapter two when things looked pretty scary and hopeless. Jules & Petra
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Date: 22/08/10 Title: Chapter 19: Author's Notes Hi Jules, :))))))) I read it again and again and again and now I want to have in my book shelf. Soo...umm... can you mail me the print version of this story?? If you can, please, send me sooon... Ritu. Author's Response: I can send it very soon. And I have a little surprise for you, too. But don't start jumping up and down just yet - it's not quite finished. I'll email you and let you know when it is. hugs Jules Summary: Another hunt, an angry spirit and a brother who has to make a decision puts the boys in danger. Set in Season one by Soncnica,who wrote the awesome scene, this was written for the second round of WSS. Her request was to hurt Dean and keep it a little more Dean centered. Being a Sam girl, I did my best, but I had to hurt Sam to.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9770 [Report This] Published: 04/06/09 Updated: 04/06/09
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Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 hey didi, iv never seen this one on ff. though it's cool enough but you know what...i like the second half most. umm, what can i say---u n i are the same piece of art, i mean...Sam Girl. I like it. Bon.
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Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 hey didi, iv never seen this one on ff. though it's cool enough but you know what...i like the second half most. umm, what can i say---u n i are the same piece of art, i mean...Sam Girl. I like it. Bon.
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Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 hey didi, iv never seen this one on ff. though it's cool enough but you know what...i like the second half most. umm, what can i say---u n i are the same piece of art, i mean...Sam Girl. I like it. Bon. Summary:
Dean explains why he changed his mind. Tag to 5.04 The End, and contains spoilers for Season 5 up to and including that episode
Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2606 [Report This] Published: 16/10/09 Updated: 16/10/09
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Date: 01/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Awesome ending of 'the end'. I mean, that destruction, croatoan virus weren't completely Sam's fault. Everyone was responsible for the rising of the apocalypse. Dean broke the first seal, and Sam did the last, who knew killing Lilith would bring hell on the earth! And 'The future Dean' was unbearable, I don't like him. Our Dean is way cool. And honestly, Sam in the white suit'd left me breathless. I was drooling all over my T.V set. Those 10 minutes are just hilarious. Awesome story, love it. Ritu. Author's Response: I'm with you - it wasn't entirely Sam's fault. And I have the feeling that even if he did have all the intel about what was really going on, somehow Heaven and Hell would have manipulated him to get their desired result in the end - even conspiring would not have been beneath them. Both boys were lied to repeatedly by both sides. And I'm still waiting for it to be revealed not only that an angel and/or demon changed that phone message that drove Sam over the edge, but also that Cas was the one who let Sam out of the panic room. The future Dean was scary in his intensity and callousness, wasn't he? Definitely not like our Dean at all. I'm glad in a way that Dean got to see that - got to see that he's not human without Sam either. He had quite a few shocks during his little trip. And while it wasn't the result that slimeball Zachariah hoped for, it was definitely the outcome we were happy with - the brothers reunited. Go Team Free Will! Oh, and didn't Jared rock that performance as Lucifer? My gosh....I really hope his agent does the right thing by him - that young man has so much talent. It would be a sin to go to waste. Jules Summary: A chance meeting and a jacked hunt leaves one brother doubting and another with a choice to make
Set in Season 2, immediately after the episode What Is And What Should Never Be Happy Belated Birthday, BHoney!
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 25095 [Report This] Published: 11/12/09 Updated: 01/01/10
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Date: 14/02/10 Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue I've just finished this one too..I am proud of me :). Awesome plot once again. That Stanford dude Matt was being a really pain in the a** of bros. How could he blame Dean for Sam's situation? He doesn't know anything about their lifestyle. And poor Dean left Sam thinking that his beloved baby brother'd ditched him. Sammy could never do that to his big brother for sure. And the 'ambush' conversation between brothers just warmed my heart. They are the awesome brothers in the world. Love it. Ritu. Author's Response: LOL - you're having a busy weekend! Thank you for that, Ritu. This was a nice one to write - quite the change of pace from seasons 4 & 5. It was nice to go back and revisit not only the boys in a simpler time, but some good old-fashioned angst that didn't have anything to do with the end of the world as we know it. Yes, Matt was a real pain for the boys, in more ways than one. And it's like everyone, including Sam, says - no one hears anything good when they eavesdrop. It was the same for Dean. If only he'd hung around just a wee bit longer..... So glad you liked the ambush - er, I mean the conversation - lol. Thank you. Jules Summary:
There were dozens of different ways the scenario could have played out, and Dean relives them one by one... Tag to 5.06 I Believe The Children Are Our Future, and contains spoilers for all of Season 5 up to and including that episode
Categories: General, One Shots, Action, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7975 [Report This] Published: 29/01/10 Updated: 29/01/10
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Date: 09/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Yeah yeah, I'v enjoyed every single word of this story. Awesome indeed. I mean, yeah, Dean was being kinda irresponsible by using that freaking buzzer on his brother, but he'd regretted a lot aftermath. The nightmares about Sam dying again and again really left him breathless. They were horrible. I am so glad have you back, I love your writing--especially hurt/limp Sam stories. I don't read anyone's stories in here 'cept yours. You are the best. Love love love it... Ritu. Author's Response: Hullo, Ritu - lovely to see you back again. Aw, thank you so much! I'm honoured by your comments, and I hope that I never disappoint you. Yes, that buzzer thing irked me something chronic. It was just so unlike Dean - well, the Dean of old, anyway. I think I jumped almost as high as Sam did when I first watched the scene. And my poor Dean-loyal mind kept trying to come up with an explanation - perhaps he touched it first with a finger to make sure it was harmless, perhaps he saw something in the kid that Sam hadn't spotted, etc. Because I just couldn't reconcile that sort of reckless action with the Dean that I fell in love with during the Pilot. So this was a way for me to sort of come to grips with it - by torturing Dean with nightmare after nightmare - LOL! Thanks so much for reading, hun. Jules Summary: But what the silence will scream.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1046 [Report This] Published: 21/02/10 Updated: 21/02/10
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Date: 22/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: It's Not The Lives That You Save Okay---here you are too! hehehe, me too. You know I love this piece and reviewed it on ff site. So, here I am again. :):):):):) can't stop grinning like a stupid :):):) You know who I am, right!! :):) *grins*
Author's Response: hey you stalker! ROFL! I didn't know you were here!!!! *hugs* why you grinning? I can see your teeth all the way to here! :))) xx hugs!!! Summary:
No matter how far he roamed or how long he stayed away, he always seemed to return here - to the one place in the world he could call home. Spoilers for all seasons up to and including Season 5, and speculation for the end
Huge thanks to Chasidern for another spectacular banner Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8502 [Report This] Published: 05/03/10 Updated: 05/03/10
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Date: 06/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Okay, that was intense. I am still stunned. They way you've portrayed Sam's feeling from Pilot to finale, is awesome. I have no word to describe. Great Job. Love it. You've mentioned that you will do something special for fic 50. What about fic 49? When are you going to post it? I always look forward for your writings. Waiting for the next piece. Ritu. Author's Response: Hi, Ritu. Thank you so much. Sam's undergone some pretty major changes, hasn't he? But there has been one constant through all that - Dean as home. So glad you enjoyed it. Story 49? Um....it's not written yet. Working on it, though. Sort of.....well, the idea is in my head. I just need to get it out of there and down on paper. Fingers crossed? Jules Summary:
All they could do was cry for help...and hope that someone would hear... Tag to episode 5.14 My Bloody Valentine, and contains spoilers for Season 5 up to that point
Banner by Chasidern - awesome work, Chris, love it! Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2368 [Report This] Published: 26/03/10 Updated: 26/03/10
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Date: 26/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Yay, you are back and you've brought a wonderful gift for me!!! Yay....*happy dances* Okay, sorry about that, just got a lil bit excited. I always look forward for your stories and as soon I got the alert, I was like* woohoo...a new story * This story is just fabulous. I can't explain it in a word. That episode MBV'd really shaken me up and I really wished I would get to see some panicked Sam locked in panic room. The way you explained each and every part, it brought tears in my eyes. Aww Sammy, poor boy had suffered a lot. But Dean, I just... Dean's plea and tear just too much for me to take. Poor Dean, he loves his brother too much, he even prayed to God for his brother, he cried for his helpless sibling.... filth and stench could not make him leave his brother's side. And Sam, aww....he is so good, so good. He tried hard to control himself but failed. He admits it and that's what about him, attracts me the most. He never gets afraid showing love, feelings, affection, sorrow anything. My favorite part is, when Sammy was trying to eat his soup and failed and looked at Dean with teary sensitive eyes...that reminds me young Sam who wants his brother beside him always. I can see everything through your story and that's the reason I love all of your fics. Love it..... Ritu.
Author's Response: Am I back? *looks around in confusion*....oh, I must be... Settle, petal. Don't fall off your chair. LOL. That was a pretty powerful episode, wasn't it? I didn't know who to feel more broken-hearted for, my beloved Dean or 'darling little Sammy'. I think I went equally teary over both of them, actually. Actually, despite my definite Dean leanings, I do have a great deal of sympathy for Sam and his struggle for redemption. Dean was right - Sam isn't evil, he was just high on demon blood and being pushed in lots of subtle ways. So glad you liked the story, hun. And I think I owe you an email, don't I? Will get to that later tonight. Jules Summary:
How far can the brothers be pushed before they break - and will their bond survive the fallout?
Banner by UnGen's Best Artist 2009 - Chasidern Story idea by Supernaturalfan from UnGen, inspired by events in episode 5.10 Abandon All Hope Set after episode 5.16 Dark Side of The Moon, and contains spoilers for the season up to and including that episode, as well as speculation for beyond that point Categories: AU, Action, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 47034 [Report This] Published: 09/04/10 Updated: 14/05/10
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Date: 09/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Okay *YAY----NEW STORY* And this time-you've scored a "Half Century"..... *Screams in joy* I didn't like the last episode. It broke my heart into million pieces. How could Dean just throw the amulet on the face of his brother? How could he give up like that? Now that stupid (I hate him royally) Zachariah holds Sam as a hostage and the ransom is Dean to say 'yes' to Michael! What a jerk! A black spot on the name of the angels. Will Dean save Sam? I mean, he looks kinda hopeless right now. Does he even care for his brother anymore? Can't wait for the next chapter. I want them like yesterday. :"( Aww, Sammy!! Love love love this story, Ritu.
Author's Response: Hullo, my sweetie, Oh, yikes - do you come with a volume control? ROFL! I liked the last episode for the reveals, etc, but the final scene was so gut-wrenching it just about left me breathless. I know that Dean's just given up all hope, but it really felt like he was throwing his brother away as well. And I agree - Zachariah is a disease, a black cancer amongst the angels. And yes, it does look pretty bleak, and it's going to get darker before the dawn. Thanks hun, Jules
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Date: 21/04/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Ohhh..... *Can't breath* If I can't draw a breath, then how would I write a review, huh!! This chapter is horrible. I read it step by step cuz, my digestive system is not that strong and I can't usually take so much tension in one time. :):) Okay, that Zachariah is one of the helluva slimy angels. Man, how could he rip Sam's hair outta his scalp? What a ....arrgh!! I hate him. And, glad that Dean didn't say 'yes', I knew he wouldn't, he could not. He'll save Sammy, soon. I can put my trust in him. Can't wait for Friday. And wow, the way Sam drew the angel smoking symbol...bravo! That's why I love him so much. "Beauty with the brain"---yeppie. Love this chapter, *Hugs you tiiiight* Ritu.
Author's Response: Hun, you didn't have to delete and re-post it. I'd already read it.....mistakes happen. Don't feel bad. And please breathe - don't want you passing out on me. Oh - if you think that chapter was bad, just wait for the third one....you know, just saying.... And yep, Zachariah is mean - but I have plans for him... Beauty with the brain? LOL - but I do have to agree with you. Jules
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Date: 23/04/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 OH MY GAWD!!!! It's so overwhelming. From top to bottom, it's full of suspense, angst and every other thing. It took me nearly one hour to finish b'cos I read each and every line... 'swallowed' would be the right term more than 'read'. And it's a loooong long chapter and still you left us hanging in there. Zach is a real slimy angel and the way Lucifer treated him by calling "petty bureaucrat"...me likey. Wow, Sam's in pretty bad shape and now Lucifer is torturing him mentally and physically...horrible. Glad, Dean's got his senses back in time, now I could rely on him that he would able to save Sam. I'm very worried about Sammy. The conversation between Cas and Gabe was awesome. Now Dean and Cas off to find Sam in Detroit, c'mon...save Sam. I won't feel better until they find Sam. And you were right, it's pretty dark and I am scared. Can't wait for the next Friday. And...*silly grins* see, my lips are sealed. I won't blabber more than usual. *swears* Love it, Ritu. Author's Response: LOL - hullo, sweetie. And yes, I'm very proud of you for sealing your lips. Only a few days to go and then you can spoiler me all you want - lol. Thank you. Yes, it's a long chapter - and the next one is even longer. Oh, you liked Lucy's way of dealing with the slimy Zachariah? He reminds me of a politician. Or a dodgy used car salesman. I have plans for Zachariah - I might have to make them messy ones. And yes, your Sammy's not doing too well, is he? Lucifer's not playing nice. The troops are on their way, but will they be in time? *cue scary music* Jules
Reviewer: ritsam Signed
Date: 04/05/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 I can spoiler you!! *stares at you* I can SPOILER you??? cooool Okay, first thing first, this chapter is totally--a knock out chappy. I mean, Lucifer's torturing Sammy...eep...that damn Devil. But, my stubborn boy.. he will never say 'yes' to that hell piece of crap (prince my ahem). But but...Meg, I hate that b**** with all my heart and maan, she loves to torture Sam. Glad Dean's at least there but I'm also worried for him. Sam's hurt too bad, right!! Will he...umm... survive! And you sure, I can spoiler you??? Then tell me, are you the director of the show? I mean I saw the finale's promo pictures, and whoa!! It's like I'm seeing the whole finale through your story. Okay, here's the deal. After you finish this story, you will sit in front of me and tell me what's gonna happen in season 6, alright! And good news, finally I've printed one of your greatest stories out and the name's "That's what the big brothers are for". Now 'm the proud owner of that awesome book and oh, along with 'The L word'. Can you see my happy dents? Coz I'm grinning ear to ear. Only 2 days to go and I'm bored. Can't you post it a lil early? Naw... I know you won't...anyways... You rock....love you. Ritu. Author's Response: Well, actually.....I am posting early.....*grins*...... Author's Response: Didn't have time to respond properly, but I did want to let you know that you got one wish - I posted early last week - lol. Thank you, and yes, you can spoiler me now. I'm all up to date, and the moment I finish posting the epilogue, I'm going to watch the season 5 finale. I already have my box of tissues handy....might need more than one box...... And no, I'm not the director, or on the writing team. I really am a short, middle-aged, bespectacled bookkeeper from Brisbane, Australia who works for a jeweller. So while I could speculate about what will happen in season 6, I won't be accurate, sadly. Sorry, hun. Ah, you've been busy printing. I have the finished fics in Word format, complete with their pretty story banners at the top of each front page, if you ever want a copy. Just let me know, and I'll email one to you. As for Sam continuing to hold out against the devil...well, we'll see..... Jules |
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