Okay so Rowan created the Colt and he can't die? What is he? But I love the twist of him kinda being good. It really makes things ambiguous.

By the way, I adored this story! It is the best thing I have read in a long time. Can't wait to read more!

Hahahaha!!!  "Josh’s Dad and Uncle are takin a shower together, nothin’ strange there." OMG! I can just see their expressions!!

 So Dean has teamed up with Judas Iscariot, who didn't hang himself, but became an eternal vampire. Interesting.

YOu have really done a good job with the time on this series, with they way we get little pieces of background and how it flows. Works great for a series! It is seriously some of the best fanfic I have ever read. Thanks!

Okay so I just read 53 chapters in one day and it was an interesting story. You really have a good grasp on the human emotions, especially their resentment towards John. Though the fact that the government is not watching your every move is a miracle after you researched bombs, brainwahing, and cults online. :)  My only concern is where you are heading with this new arc. Cause it feels a bit like we have been here before with the first half of the story. I like the idea of Dean getting a look at what could have been. But be wary of being repetitive. I enjoyed reading it!

You are killing me with the cliffhangers!! I get all excited for new chapters and then they are cliffies!

 I am really enjoying reading your stories. Can't wait for more!

LOL! That was the funniest thing I have read in a long time! It was complete fluff, but it captures the character so perfectly. And the vision in my head of Dean dancing with the pixies is still making me crack up! Great job!

On suggestion: who sent the baskets? Was there s plan to destroy the world with pixies behind it?

Can I get a collective awwwwwwww!  That was so sweet! I especially love the part where Dean wanted his dad. It shows a vulnerability we don't get to see as an adult. I laughed so hard at the mental of image of Sammy trying to help. It sounds just like my nephew! Cute story! I really enjoyed it.

Okay, I am now remembering Why I don't like to read stories that are not finished! I get completely hooked and have to wait forever for updates! Can't wait to read the rest. Good job!

Awww! I love this! It is so sweet. Obviously, I love the relationship between Sam and Dean. But I think what I like the most is the way you have portrayed John-- as a loving, caring father. It isn't a side that is seen often. Good job!

I love the opening lines! Creative and vivid descriptions with a really good allusion. Good job!

My verdict is out on the entire story though. You are taking a much darker and harsher interpretation of John than I have ever gotten from the show. But it well written and could be very plausible.... so my verdict is out.

 Is there going to be more?

Okay, I am a major Buffy and Supernatural fan, so this story looks really interesting.

But it would be so much more readable if you double-spaced. They way it is now, the text is so dense and compact, your eyes go blurry trying to read it on the computer screen. Also, evertime a new character speak, you have to start a new paragraph. (I don't know if you actually worte it that way, and the formatting got lost when you posted, but...)

Tehehe. That was a fun pick-me-up for the afternoon blahs! I really like Dean and Jamie as a couple too. Good job!

Author's Response:

Hey

Thank you I'm glad I could brighten your day, and yeah Dean and Jamie were good together.

Cheers Mary x

Wow. I really loved this story. It has been a long time since I read a fanfic where I not only appreciated the plot and characters but the writing as well. You did an excellent job. You gave it a stream of consciousness feel, while still keeping it organized enough for readers to easily follow. Like everybody else, I liked the song choice. I am going to have to look it up. But my favorite part was the interactions between John and Sam. You gave a glimpse of the rarely seen good aspect of their relationship, of a father and son who love each other despite differences. Five stars!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you SO much! You know, to be really honest, I'm kind of sad that people are always so surprised about Sam and John actually getting along in (my) stories, there are not enough stories out there that show that, despite everything, they are still father and son who love each other. But, well, more for me to write about, huh? ;) Again, thank you so much, reviews like this one really keep me going these days, you made my day! :)