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It was a demon John wasn't expecting, a hunt that he didn't count on going down exactly how it did. All he knew is that this demon got into his mind, twisted his thoughts around into a pile so dark that he couldn't even remember his own sons. This demon who somehow managed to take away everything he held dear, to make him lash out against his oldest son. It was this demon who changed his youngest son's opinion of his father forever.


Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: The Dark Horse Series
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 13027
[Report This] Published: 30/09/07 Updated: 26/11/07


Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 06/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Bull By the Horns

OMG OMG OMG!!! That was awesome!!! yet very sad!!!!  poor Sam, Dean, John!!!!  ahhhhh!!! I love this story!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

 
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 16/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Lamb to the Slaughter

wow...this is awesome!! can't wait for more!!! This chapter actually answers a lot of questions..liked the twist at the end...the demon girl wanting John's help..interesting!

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was awesome. I love twists, and I'm glad you liked it.

 
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 26/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Fall from Grace

Yay!!  A sorta happy ending....hey we have to take what we can get!!  Loved it!!  Can't wait for 'Dark Horse'!!!!  Hope it won't take tooo long!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it. TDH should be out around Christmas time hopefully. I'm currently working on another story. Thanks for reviewing.

 
Summary: Pre-series. A cursed mirror traps Dean’s soul behind its glass, while his body is hijacked by a spirit. There’s a limited amount of time to save him before the doppelganger is all that’s left but will John and Sam even notice Dean’s missing?
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 9159
[Report This] Published: 06/11/07 Updated: 24/11/07


Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow this is wonderful!!!!  You're great at describing the scene....it feels like I'm there!!  Aww poor Dean, but this is a new twist on an old idea!!!  I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm glad you think I've managed to put a new twist on this idea.  And you're in luck, the next chapter is being sent to the beta today!  It'll be updated very soon!

 
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awww...poor Dean!! SAVE HIM!! well not too quickly...then the story will be over, but...wait I'm rambling...Come on Sam!! Come on John!! Let's go, you can do it! (will encouragement work?)  This is awesome, can't wait until the next chapter...hope you don't take too long....



Author's Response: Thank you!  Encouragement may just work!  Don't worry all the little things will soon be adding up for John and Sam.  The next chapter will hopefully be up next Monday.  I can't go any quicker due to uni work.

 
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 24/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

AHHHHHHH! (you know why I did that and you're defintely doing the evil laugh right now!) John!  Save Sam and Dean! Quickly!  Ahhh!! Too much to handle...jkjk, but this is awesome!! I don't care how long it takes you, just GIVE ME MORE!!!! PLEASE!! I need it, I'm like an addict and this story is my drug! (whoa...bad analogy, but I'm not that creative!)

Author's Response: Lol, mwahahah!  Thank you!  More is coming, don't worry.  The next update hopefully will be quicker than the last.

 
Summary:

Beware!!!  No-one knows what really lurks in the dark. And No-one walks alone at night.

But what if it didn't hide in the dark? What if it was right behind you the whole time? Waiting, wanting, needing to hurt someone, to hurt you. What if that evil was part of you? Nothing but a mere shadow. Your shadow.

Watch your back!!!

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 2723
[Report This] Published: 13/11/07 Updated: 02/12/07


Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Watch your back!!!

wow this is great...for a short beginning I can tell it's going to be GREAT!  (well even more so then now)....this is kinda scary, I have to say, I remember when I was little, I would purposely jump onto my shadow and step on it for fun....I hope my shadow isn't vengeful!!  this is a great idea I hope you keep going with this and get another chapter up SOON!
-Brit

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much L4, that is sweet of you to say. I hope the next chapter does justice.

I always did that, jump on my shadow for fun. Lol

Sharky

 
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Watch your back!!!

awww....that's sooo sad!!!  Poor Simon, just imagining that scene with is father is terrifying!!!!  At least Simon will be in safe hands with the Winchesters!  but Zara still needs to find him before anything bad happens...to either of them!!!

Author's Response: Glad your enjoying it.

 
My Space by Sensue Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Dean discovers MySpace, with an unforseen consequence. Crossroad Blues Tag and BUABS. Ridley's Brotherhood Characters will make an appearance
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 23858
[Report This] Published: 27/11/07 Updated: 27/11/07


Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 28/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: My Space

Loved it!  That was so sad, you made me like Sam a little less at first, but I still love him!  Awww poor Dean, I love how you Sam had no idea what was going on with Dean until Dean finally told him.  I always wondered how the Impala got clean so quickly after they got it dirty!!  Thank God that Mac and Caleb was there to put the pieces back together again!!  I loved this story!!!!  i hope you write another soon!!!!

Author's Response:

Aww..Thanks so much. Yes, I tried to tie it into the next episode on purpose. (Which was Tall Tales...)

 So, I wanted to make the story 'finished' but let a few things stay though, considering their fighting in Tall Tales.

 
Summary: A paranormal psychologist wants to study Ghost Hunting so she asks Dean and Sam if she can come along on a few of their hunts.  While with them she begins to look into the psyche that is Dean and Sam Winchester.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 46520
[Report This] Published: 03/12/07 Updated: 07/12/07


Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 04/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

aww....leave it to Sam and Dean to potentially break up a relationship!!!  I love it!!!  Getting some of the hunts about things that go bump in the night out in the open for the public ears and eyes....awesome!!!  hehehe Dennis and Scott....I don't know, those names just make me laugh!

Author's Response: It was hilarious for me.  As I was working out the story and discussing it I kept referring to Dean and Sam as Dennis and Scott.  I was so glad to be done with that chapter.  Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 04/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

yay! ROADTRIP!!!! Go Abigail!!  Good thing she's a fighter...if not, this would be a very short story!!!  Abigail is smart, planning on using the brother card on them....sneaky!!  I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Don't take too long!!!

Author's Response:

Don't worry this story is completely finished I'm just polishing and hopefully finding the last of my errors - those drive me crazy.  I will have the next chapter up in a day or two.  Again, thanks for reading and for reviewing.

 
Summary:

 

It's like that scene from The Maltese Falcon, where the captain stumbles in and gives Sam Spade the bird. Except no one would ever dare tell Dean he looked like Effie Perine.


Categories: General, Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 6074
[Report This] Published: 30/12/07 Updated: 03/01/08


Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 30/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: from the ashes a fire

Ooh I like this story!!!  Phoenixes are always interesting!!  Hmm...I wonder who the bad guys are and what's going to happen next!!  Glad John's here to help the boys!  But I'm sensing some family drama!!  Great work!!!  Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Glad you like it! But don't be too disappointed if there's not much family drama - that was so well done in "Dead Man's Blood" I don't know if I dare try it... ;)

 
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: shall be woken

Yay!  The phoenix hatched!  And the Winchesters are not completely dead....that's always a good sign!  Hmm...I have a feeling that Donnell will be after that phoenix now that he knows what it really is!!  Can't wait for more!  Great job irnan!

Author's Response: Two things I don't think I could ever write are death fics and Wincest... thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: light shall spring

Yay!  Bad boys out for the count...Winchesters are fine...all is well, oh yea and the phoenix is free!!  Great work I liked this story!!

Author's Response: Thanks very much, glad you enjoyed it!

 
Summary: Brotherhood AU. Little explanation on how Dean got
introduced to the movie, The Godfather by Caleb. The Grandfather is an introduction to Cullen, Caleb's adopted grandfather.

Categories: General, AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4598
[Report This] Published: 18/02/08 Updated: 26/02/08


Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Godfather

Awww....that's adorable....hehehehe...."Jim, he covered my face with the blanket!"  That made me laugh!!!  Dean sounds soo young, I love Wee!chesters and how innocent he and Sam sounds.  But it's sad that Mac may like Sam better (since Caleb and Dean believe it) Hahahhaa, I hope Pastor...I mean Don Jim doesn't get Caleb in too much trouble with John...can't wait for more!  This is awesome!!!

 
Summary:

Sam and Dean come across a series of murders of supernatural causes and meet Kalley Ryan at the latest funeral. When the boys realize Kalley’s sister, Lucy, is possessed by a demon, they link her to the murders. Can they convince Kalley of the possession? Or will Lucy add Kalley to latest spur of murders? SamOC

 
Categories: Romance, General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 21988
[Report This] Published: 18/02/08 Updated: 04/04/08


Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 19/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue and Three Days Earlier

Oh, Lucy's creepy....I'm glad I don't have that kind of sister.  Yay!  Sam might actually love someone....I really want Sam to fall in love on the show......and Kalley seems like the prefect candidate!!!  hahaahaha the line: "Can't hear you, AC/DC shall not be silenced in this car!" made me laugh....Great job, off to chapter 2!

Author's Response:

:D thank u, i'm glad ur enjoying it!

 
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 19/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Kalley Explains

Oh, I really like this one.  Oh Dean, you can be soooo rude, but he's just telling the truth...just being mean while he's doing it.  Kalley!  Listen to Sam and Dean!  I swear, if two hot guys tell you something is real, IT IS!  Because believing too late is bad!!!  This is really good!  Can't wait for more!!!

 
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 3: Lucy's Revealed

Oh, cool....does that mean it's Paige?  Or Lucy?  Can't wait for the next chapter!!!  I love this story!

 
Summary:

Sam and Dean investigate child suicides in Eureka Springs, Arkansas. A guest at one of the victims' parties is not who he seems to be. Dean has nightmares that increase in severity over the duration of their stay and receives a warning that might just save their lives.

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 13606
[Report This] Published: 23/03/08 Updated: 24/01/09


Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 23/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Nightmares and Victims

Oh I like this story so far!  I'm interested how Dean's dreams of his childhood has to do with the kids suicides...I liked “Well then, let’s go get our new aliases,” Dean got up and added with a grin, “You be Bonnie, I’ll be Clyde.”  It made me laugh.  Great job!  Can't wait for more!


Author's Response: Yay! Glad you like it! =) We worked really hard on it! Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 24/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Innocent or Guilty

Oh that magician seems pretty suspicious...and so does his understudy.....I hope that the Winchesters figure out who is behind it before it's too late!  Great job!  Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks! We're working hard on finishing this =)

 
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 29/03/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Seal of the Left Hand Path

I KNEW IT WAS 'HAYWORTH'!  Awww that dream was sad!!!  I'm happy that Dean is sooo eager to stop him from stealing Sam's soul too....great job!!!  Can't wait!!!



Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! The next chapter is gonna be a short one, but I'm thinking we'll post it at the same time as the one after that which will be the final conflit mwahhaa.....Ha... =)

 
Storm Surge by bayre Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Following the trail south, Dean and Sam discover the demon they're tracking wants them as much as they want it.  Other hunters might want the brothers even more.....

 

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This continues where Gale Warnings left off.

Possible spoilers for Seasons 1 & 2, after WIAWSB it's AU


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: The Elements
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 46334
[Report This] Published: 20/04/08 Updated: 06/01/09


Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 20/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1

Awww....I always felt bad when Sam had a vision...must hurt like hell!!  Thank God Dean is always there to help him, even when he was at college....I like this so far!  Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
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Bobby calls Sam and Dean for help hunting a demon that demands human life. When Dean becomes a victim, Sam struggles to save his injured brother before Dean is lost forever. Hurt!Dean. Dark fic. Not death fic


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 53807
[Report This] Published: 03/07/08 Updated: 08/01/09


Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 16/08/08 Title: Chapter 5: I Die Through Madness

This is an amazingly awesome story!  Okay, it's dark yes, but hey, this is an idea that is extremely well written and makes me want to know MORE! 

I really hope that Sam doesn't get too....'darkside' with Dean becoming a host.  Although it might get them some answers about what really goes on. 

Eek, poor Dean, I hope he gets better and somehow this entire thing works out, although I think I'm gonna have to wait a few more chapter before that happens....or a lot of chapters.

As mentioned before, this is an awesome story!  I can't wait for more!!!!!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've been so nervous about this one, iot's dark and I'm afraid it gets a bit darker before the light. I don't think Sam will get too darkside. I love hurricane Sam but too dark Sam... I don't know about.
I'll have more very soon, promise. Hugs, Muffy

 
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 20/10/08 Title: Chapter 9: Only to lose the shadow of thy joy!

*grabs torch and pitchfork*  Hey!  Come back here!  You can't leave it like that!  I don't like these cliffies.  *frowns*  Oh, well, I guess I can wait.

I hope that Dean can help Sam figure out what that thing is and how to stop it!  I just can't wait for more...as you could probably already tell.  I love this story!!!!  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so sorry about the cliffies, my cliffie demon is acting up again. I tried to get rid of him and now he's mad, making me write just terrible cliffies all the time! More very soon!

Hugs, Muffy

 
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser Signed
Date: 29/11/08 Title: Chapter 11: A Shade to Vanish Hence

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!  You can't leave it like that!  I refuse to allow this!  Deannnnn!  He finally gets back to being semi-Dean and now, NOW he's back where he started!  And NO!  Sam, don't give up!  It's never too late!  Come on, you can save him! 

Although, now I'm gonna be awaiting your next update most impatiently, I loved this update.  It was very detailed and I'm curious to what this 'big thing' is.  And I'm trying to figure out who's the mole.  Maybe Dirk...or Ian.  I don't know.  Gah, I love this story!  Obviously, I can't wait for more!...Will bribery work?



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! I'm sorry my reply took so long! Sorry about the cliffie, it's my cliffie demon, he makes me do it! Sam can't give up, not now! I know how you feel! And who's the mole? You find out in the next chapter and it's coming very soon! Promise!

Hugs, Muffy