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Penname: monkeymuse [Contact]
Real name: Loretta Hall
Status: Member
Member Since: 31/01/09
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I am 31 years old and a recent widow. i lost my husband just this past nov. He was my soul. Supernatural was our show and one of the last one we watched together. I have two young sons. They also love SN. They are 4 and 6 and like to pretend they are the boys on the show.


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Categories: Orphan Characters: None
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Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 02/02/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OH MY GOD this was gret. i am new to this site so many of the names I did not get but the whole Duck thing. I swear I almost woke my kids I was laughing so far. I had tears TEARS rolling down my face.

 You are a great writer I could see the boys in my head doing this. WOW!!!! Looks at bathroom ( Which is done in ducks ) and bust out laughing again. Great one keep it up.

 
Quake by ThePasserby Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Trapped in a the rundown remains of a school after a sudden earthquake, Dean races desperately to find Sam before his little brother's time runs out, but Sam may not have enough time, or blood, to spare.


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 9398
[Report This] Published: 15/10/07 Updated: 12/03/09


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 14/02/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

great so far I can not wait for more.

 
Summary: Dean's taken, but by whom? Blindfolded, tied and beaten, why won't anyone talk to him? And just what has happened to Sam? Set in season 2, so no spoilers most of us haven't seen. All chapters now reformatted.
Categories: AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 24295
[Report This] Published: 16/06/08 Updated: 16/06/08


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 08/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow this was great!! I was near to tear. Great stroy writing. WOW Gordon was great in this wow I hate him now more than ever. I rarly cheer when evil gets it but wow I was like YEAH DEAN twist the knife...  Great stroy please keep writing I will be looking for more.

 
Summary:

 

Banner made by: Silvertayl 

They were on their way to Tennessee on the trail of a werewolf; but on the way Sam gets ill and has to be hospitalized. With Sam in good hands and recovering, Dean continues on to Tennessee to hunt the werewolf, but when he fails to return, Sam now recovered sets out on a desperate hunt of his own to find his brother.


Categories: General, Action, Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 47125
[Report This] Published: 19/09/08 Updated: 26/05/09


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 06/03/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I think the second one is Gracie. I hope the boys let her eat Wade before they kill her/it. I want Sam to kick Rae Anne Butt to getr deans necklace back or wait till dean is better and let him do it. But it would be nice to see Sam stand up for Dean once in a while.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Welcome and thanks for the review, don't worry the evil pair will get their comeuppence, I'll make sure of it.

Cheers

Silvertayl

 
Summary:

Sam been injured on a hunt and Dean has to patch him up. The problem - just where his brother's injury is!!

 

SPOILERS - NONE COMPLETELY AU.

Don't own anything, Just wish I did.


Categories: One Shots, AU, Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1072
[Report This] Published: 16/10/08 Updated: 16/10/08


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 08/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i loved this so funny. WOW Akward

Author's Response: Hi there

Thanks, just a little mad humour to make you smile!

Cheers Mary x

 
Summary:

Sam gets pulled into a game. The prize? Dean. To save Dean from a fate worse than Death or Hell. Ruby comes to help but can they win before the prize is no longer worth claiming?

Spoilers - For S4.

Disclaimers - Sorry the boys are not mine but if Mr Kripke and the CW are looking for a new home for them.....


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 36901
[Report This] Published: 07/01/09 Updated: 07/03/09


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/02/09 Title: Chapter 11: Queen - Black or White?

Wow I am wow!!! Damn Ruby and I wanta kick sam right now. I hope he kills her... No let dean kill her.  Wow Great work edge  og my seat here. 

Author's Response:

Hi there

Sam trusted Ruby and it looks as if it was misplaced. Sam or Dean killing Ruby?? Hmmm?

Glad you like! Thanks Mary x

 
Summary:

Au story Mary and John Winchester couldn't have children, they want to adopt a baby, that is until they meet two beautiful and specail children. Rated for mentions of abuse, nothing to graphic


Categories: Wee!chester, AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 55221
[Report This] Published: 10/01/09 Updated: 27/03/09


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 05/03/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

great so far Bobby as a dad

 
Fire and Blood by bayre Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 76]
Summary:

South Dakota has a werwolf problem. It's not an average werewolf and it's not an average problem. Dean and Sam return to the town where Sam was kidnapped and held captive, victim of a savage serial killer. Having to face werewolves, police and their own inner monsters, both brothers discover recovery never comes easy.

Sequel to Bonding of Souls and A Safe, Secure Place, and is part of the Two Souls Verse.. Follows about six months after A Safe, Secure Place.

There are references and a character from The Game also.

No real spoilers for the show, though there maybe references to events from the show in the context they are things that happened in the brothers' lives.

Not mine, just borrowing from the CW.

Many thanks to Deej1957 who was my winning bidder in the fics4books auction.


Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None
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Series: Two Souls
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 43524
[Report This] Published: 11/01/09 Updated: 18/05/09


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 01/03/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Bayre: Great writing as always. Great twist I did not see that coming.

Oh by the way I am dateing my self here but I love the Splaninin line. I can so hear Dean in my head as I read that. Loved that show as a kid.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

As for the Splanin line...you and me both...lol

Laura

 
Summary:

Dean's past comes back to haunt him...and Sam may pay the ultimate price.

Dean was twenty-two years old when he met the girl of his dreams, or so he thought.

Set preseason, and current season.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 27756
[Report This] Published: 11/01/09 Updated: 24/04/10


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 02/02/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is great so far. I hope more is coming quickly. I can not wait. You had me on the hook with your summary. Great work.

 
Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 09/02/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

still a wonderful story. i am hooked. great job. please keep it up

 
Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15/02/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

edge of my seat here... great writing. WOW poor sammy, Porr Dean having to wonder what is happening to sam.

 
Edge by MuffyMorrigan Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 138]
Summary:

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Banner by the amazing and rocking RoweenaC

Sam and Dean begin a hunt. Of course, things are never easy with the boys, and the beginning could very well be their end.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 22167
[Report This] Published: 25/01/09 Updated: 27/10/09


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 25/02/09 Title: Chapter 29: Arf Ur Uff Uff

wow i love the cliff hangers......

 
Vampyre's Kiss by birdie Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

 

This story is part of a group of prompt stories dedicated to the wonderful, talented, generous Muffy Morrigan. We wanted to do something special to show how much her friendship means to us and how much we treasure her remarkable writing talent. She's a truly incredible person, always generous and helpful, and no matter what obstacles the universe chooses to put in her way, she just keeps writing and sharing the most amazing stories with us.

Premise for the stories: Write a story of 200-1000 words, prompt words: vampire, bloody and squinch. Check out the other stories too, participating writers are TraSan (her story's posted at fanfiction (dot)net), RoweenaC, birdie, Manavie and Abni. The beautiful banners for the stories are made by CalUK.

Vampyre's Kiss

Thank you for always being there for us, hon, and best of luck with your novels!

rated M for sauce!

As always big snogs to Kripke for providing and owning the wonderful Winchesters.

Thank you Cal for the purdy banner. x


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 421
[Report This] Published: 12/02/09 Updated: 27/04/09


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 03/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start...... please add more to this..

Author's Response:

Hey Loretta.

Thank you for your kind words and yeah...one day I may well write some more of this one.

My sympathies on your sad loss and I hope you find lots on this wonderful site to bring back happy memories of watching Supernatural with your hubby. It's a good friendly site.

Thanks for reviewing, much appreciated.

Bird xx

 
Brotherly Love by vonnie836 Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Sam and Dean have an argument that leads to trouble. Dean is 11, Sam is 7.

Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6143
[Report This] Published: 17/02/09 Updated: 17/02/09


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 17/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow sweet stroy. I like it. You kids sound like mine. Best buds one min then bitter ememeys the next. Loved the parts with John what a loving dad.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I think kids are the same no matter what. I love writing John as a good dad. Hugs, Vonnie

 
Shrapnel by ThePasserby Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Sam's blood was everywhere.  


Categories: General, One Shots, AU, Action, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 1974
[Report This] Published: 01/03/09 Updated: 27/02/11


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 01/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Shrapnel

OMG No you can not just leave this as a one shot. I started reading it and now I am falling off a cliff here!!!! Why was a Live Sharapnel bomb there. I am so biting my nails here. Please write more on this, Don't leave us hangin

Author's Response: The shrapnel grenade idea kind of just fell onto my brain - I've no idea where it came from! I was just sitting, and I thought - "hey, shrapnel grenade? Pretty painful. I should throw one at Sammy" and there it went! Lol, I'm so cruel to Sam! I just love hurtin him and making Dean all angsty....

 
Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 01/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Shrapnel

OMG No you can not just leave this as a one shot. I started reading it and now I am falling off a cliff here!!!! Why was a Live Sharapnel bomb there. I am so biting my nails here. Please write more on this, Don't leave us hangin

 
Summary:

"Demons I get, humans are just crazy" 

Leaving Nebraska, Sam and Dean run into more than righteous federal agents on their way to Baltimore. They cross paths with people who end up dragging them head first into the "real world". Kicking and screaming....

This is the sequel/second half of Tricks of the Trade.

>>No spoilers<<

Set in season 4

 


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Crossed Paths
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 35842
[Report This] Published: 17/04/09 Updated: 06/05/09


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 29/04/09 Title: Chapter 7: 7. The Rapture

WOW just found this. Out standing!!! Please update soon this was great.

Author's Response: Thank you SO much! :D If you like this story you may like the prequel as well (shameless advertizing :*) The prequel is called Tricks of the Trade, but don't worry. If you decide not to read it, it shouldn't interfere with your enjoyment of this story :) Thank you SO much for the review :D

 
Summary:

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It took a split second, the longest split second in Dean's life to understand. And once he did, he wanted to scream even louder than Sam had just seconds before. The realization pulled the floor out from under Dean's feet.

Sam thought he was dead.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 51455
[Report This] Published: 22/04/09 Updated: 19/05/09


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 27/04/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh that little...... Can we have a kill Ruby day here please. Poor Sammy. Great job with the story.

Author's Response:

A kill Ruby day sounds...interesting :D Awesome even, lol.

Glad you liked the story so far, more to come soon. Thanks for the review. 

 
Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 29/04/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Heck YEAH!!!!!! Sam knows about Ruby..... (looks around for sharp things to hand to Sam) can we go a'huntin for a ruby now. Makes my little monkey tail twich just thinking about it......So glad for the chick flick that is sam, I was gettin scared they would try and bury him.... Love bobby also. Great job up date soon.

Author's Response:

Yeah, it was ironic that it was Sam's much bemoaned emo-ness that saved Dean from *gasp* a hunter's burial or something. I just had to go there :D

Glad you liked it. As for Ruby - you'll see in the next chapter. Promise. Thanks for the review. 

 
Summary: Sam and Dean wake up one morning to find they have been transformed into women by a witch.
Categories: General, Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 4966
[Report This] Published: 22/04/09 Updated: 24/05/10


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 12/06/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

OMG I am so LMAO right now. That was great can not wait to see more. Poor Dean I think it would be fun to see him fight like a girl we can kick butt to ya know. plus  if the guys get the upper hand he can always rack him in the jewels

Author's Response:

that is very true. but he was inebriated and he's used to be male. It sucks fighting off a guy that big lol. and it isn't always so easy to get a nut shot in..

 
Summary:

What lengths will Dean go to protect Sam?

Banner for We All Fall Down by Stacy L.


Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2742
[Report This] Published: 25/04/09 Updated: 26/04/09


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 27/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very well written. Great job. I wantedd to kick John's back side. Great job. Would love to read more of this story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reviewing!

 
Summary: What would Sam do if given a choose, Dean's life.
Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 17152
[Report This] Published: 03/05/09 Updated: 18/08/09


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 27/05/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Very good job. I would love to keep reading more of this. I think Sam should tell Dean the truth! Very well written.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.  I do have some 'PLANS' for the boys next.  I am having so much fun with this one, it will be hard to end it.  Please stay tune.  :)

 
Summary: What if Sam had been able to find some demon to bargain with him and found a way to trade places with Dean in hell? How would Dean get him back? What would he do when he learned what his brother had done for him?
Categories: AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 15942
[Report This] Published: 12/06/09 Updated: 30/06/09


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 12/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

outstanding can not wait to read more very powerful

Author's Response: wow, glad to know you like it so much. yeah, definitely more coming. thank you so much. :)

 
Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 14/06/09 Title: A Deal for a Deal

nice update

 
Summary:

It was followed almost immediately by a second sound, the one Sam knew would get him help faster than any other word in the English language that actually meant 'help'.

Dean.”

Cage!fic and limp!Sam with a smattering of big!brother!Dean.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4707
[Report This] Published: 19/07/09 Updated: 22/07/09


Reviewer: monkeymuse Signed
Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this

Author's Response:

:D Thanks!

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