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Penname: badassmcgee [Contact]
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Real name: Ciara Status: Member Member Since: 27/01/09 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by badassmcgee Summary:
The vision of a dark-haired woman being bled sends Sam and Dean on a hunt for something evil enough to steal the life blood from infants and their mothers. Will they be in time to save the key to their future? Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: Second Chance Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 30636 [Report This] Published: 29/09/07 Updated: 29/10/07
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  Date: 27/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Blood Ritual Pretty good my friend. Your wording is so beautiful however I feel at times you start to slack and the story seems quite amatuer. For the most part though I love it. It has made me want to read more which is saying alot because I hate reading. Well done ol' chap! Hey bam, love the name by the way! Thanks for your review and for taking the time to read, especially since you don't like to read. Sorry about the amateur bit, I guess it's because I'm a novice at writing. Hopefully, that will improve with time.
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Date: 27/01/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: A Fated Reunion Great job....can't wait to read the next chapter. Author's Response: Thanks! So glad to see you're still on board. Peanut M&M's to you!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: The Family Secret Wow I love peanut M&Ms so I better get some. I love that you totally get the characters and you stay true to who they are. Snaps to you! Thanks bam! I'll send you a care package of peanut M&M's just in case you didn't get the virtual ones from the last review response. That was the best compliment anyone could give me. I try hard to keep Kripke's masterpieces genuine.
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 A View of Normal I love it. Can't wait to keep reading!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Confession Amazing! Love it! Yay! I'm a happy writer now. Thanks for the review!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: A Second Chance Wow INTENSE! LOVE IT! Asher Browning is kick ass! I couldn't make Asher some simpering little Molly Mormon. She had to be as large in life as Dean but with her own personality. Dean wouldn't be an easy man to forget so Asher had to be memorable as well. I love it when a girl kicks ass! We'll get to see Asher in action in later stories. Thanks for the review Bam!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Mother and Child I like it but it would have been better if Asher was alittle stronger and less girly. But the attitude was awesome! I had to make her girly enough to catch Dean's eye. He doesn't strike me as the tom-boy lover. And I wanted to make her feminine enough that people wouldn't expect her to be lethal. She can wear a twirly dress and shoot you between the eyes at the same time. Thanks for the review! Your comments are keeping me on my toes.
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: I Need a Hero LOOOVVE IT! Allie is so cute! And your words, as usual, were frickin sweet!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 Unnatural wonderful....great....good.....amazing.....now what is going to happen next?! Thrilled that you've stuck with me this long. And I'm delighted that you're enjoying it! Thanks a bunch!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Life Blood Awesome.....would write more but i got to get to the next chapter! Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Did you skip class to pull this off or is it 2:00 AM and you're talking to one person and reading this story at the same time? \:)
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Aftermath HILARIOUS!!! Got to love those mormons!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: No Escape From Normal Too Good!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Are We There Yet? Oh yea you are too right. I loved it! Glad you snuck some classic rock in there. I want my pie! Gotta have some good music in there. Kripke needs to keep pumping it into his episodes. I should use more too. Can't have enough, can you? Here ya go---a big slab of pie a la mode for all your hard work! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Summary:
"The Queen of Hell and one of her demon warriors will mate to bring forth the Destroyer of Worlds." Bobby paused, directing a thoughtful gaze at first Sam then Asher. "Ever hear of the anti-Christ?"
Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: Second Chance Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 39402 [Report This] Published: 19/01/08 Updated: 07/03/08
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: "What's Wrong, Lover?" Ah ha ha I knew it wasn't Asher! Love it! Great start!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A Desperate Connection Theres my stubborn girl! Stick it to da man! ha! Author's Response: Now you know if she's Dean's girl she's got a little stubborn in her. If Dean can't boss her around, there's no way Sammy will. Thanks for the review!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Religious Mumbo Jumbo What is going on! I love it! NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Nothing Left But Crazy Good...now next chaper. I'll just have to read this all tonight!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Hope and Disappointment ha such a funny one. I like when asher cracks jokes...keep that goin.
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Married With Children Oh boy lets keep it g-rated there's a baby in the room.ha! It was pretty good but so obviously not asher nor has it been for awhile poor Dean. How do ya think the baby got there? Hmmm...? You're a bright one! There's no foolin' you. Lets see if I can get ya toward the end. Thanks again!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Child of Darkness, Child of Light Way to capture Bobby DEAD ON!!! Sucka that wa awesome. I love that the BA Asher is comin out more!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Mrs. Dean Winchester Yea I'm sick of the porn more ass kickin time! Okay, no more porn. Too bad for Dean. He's got the Platinum Membership to the Spice channel. Asher flexes her spiritual muscles a bit. If a girl's gonna run with the big boys she's gotta show 'em her stuff. Hope you like!
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: United Forces Much better! Happy you approve. Now lets see if I can trip you up. Which hand is it in, the left or the right? Thanks for all the lovely comments and the constructive criticism!
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Date: 29/01/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Cat Fight So glad we are gettin back into the kisck ass fighting! But i was a little confused as to why neither sam nor bobby questioned Asher when she sent the demon out. maybe I just missed it.
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Date: 29/01/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Loose Ends I'm glad they finally asked about Asher altough I think the answer could have been alittle cooler but I know what you were getting at and that's probably the best way to put it! SWEET! I wanted to show that although Asher comes from a different background, she can handle the hunter life. Glad you're okay with that. Thanks for the review, Bam!
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Date: 29/01/09 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Party Dress good What?! Only three reviews today? You must have gone to your classes or talked to a cute guy all night on the phone. ;) Glad you have a life and thanks for the review! |
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